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Òåìà: Èëüÿ (BELL) Áåëîâ - Down the spiral
Âðåìÿ: 24.03.2007 15:26 
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We search for the way in the caves of the earth,
We crawl by the cellars of silence.
And haughty sun tries to burn our souls,
And raven prepares for violence.
Forget the beginning, don't look for the end.
All our dreams are disappeared.
We all here are tired, we all are so mad.
And life goes down by the spiral.

And my way is so long,
I’m two hundred years old.
I’m so tired of life. Can you help me?

We send our words to both heaven and hell,
So tired of tries to find reason.
The dew from the forests is our only help,
But forests are our only prison.
The god and the devil create our life,
For them our eyes are the mirrors.
Another one day is another one cry.
And life goes down by the spiral

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Angel
ique - Down the spiral
Ññûëêà äëÿ ñêà÷èâàíèÿ ôàéëà: http://ifolder.ru/1468501

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:super:
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Òåìà: Re: Èëüÿ (BELL) Áåëîâ - Down the spiral
Âðåìÿ: 25.03.2007 11:38 



Ì-äà, ñóäÿ ïî êîëè÷åñòâó îòçûâîâ, òåáÿ çäåñü íå îñîáî öåíÿò...
Èì âñå Êèïåëîâà äà Ìåðêóðè ïîäàâàé :)
Êðóãîçîð ìóçûêàëüíûé ðàñøèðÿòü íàäî, ãîñïîäà :drazn:
 îáùåì, òàê. Ìóçîí äîñòàòî÷íî èíòåðåñíûé, êîíöåïòóàëüíûé òàêîé :) Òåêñò òîæå âåñüìà íåïëîõ, òîëüêî åñòü îøèáêè: All our dreams are disappeared - çäåñü are íå ïîäõîäèò, íàäî ëèáî have ñòàâèòü, ëèáî All our dreams are disappearing. So tired of tries - íå çíàþ, ìîæåò àìåðèêîñû òàê è âûðàæàþòñÿ, íî âîîáùå-òî So tired of trying.
Âîêàë âûãëÿäèò ñëàáåå âñåãî. Ãîëîñ ó òåáÿ íå ïîñòàâëåí, ñî âñåìè âûòåêàþùèìè... Ðàñùåïóõà íà ñâÿçêàõ, íî òåì íå ìåíåå ñëóøàáåëüíà. Òàê ÷òî ñðåäíåñòàòèñòè÷åñêîìó ñëóøàòåëþ íàâðÿä ëè ýòî áóäåò êîðîáèòü óõî. Íó âîò êàê áû è âñå...
֏ :super:
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Òåìà: Re: Èëüÿ (BELL) Áåëîâ - Down the spiral
Âðåìÿ: 25.03.2007 11:49 
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Ïðåêîëüíî è äàæå ñèìïàòèøíî,
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Òåìà: Re: Èëüÿ (BELL) Áåëîâ - Down the spiral
Âðåìÿ: 25.03.2007 12:17 
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Äà. Èëüþ çäåñü íå ñèëüíî ëþáÿò. Çàòî íè íà êîãî îñîáî íå ïîõîæ.
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!