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Àâòîð Òåìà: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 12:15 



Ñèäåë, íàðûë ñòàðûå òåêñòû, êîòîðûå ïèñàë åùå â óíèâåðå, âîò ðåøèë ïî áûñòðîìó íàáðîñàòü àêóñòè÷åñêóþ âåðñèþ ñâîåé ïåñåíêè But Now. Òåêñò:

I)
F# Am Em
Looking my past years I see
F# Am Em
So many mistakes there used to be
Am Em
Every day and every night F# Em
You can watch the years go by Dsus2 Em
And your life comes alive.


F# Am Em
So many people I help
F# Am Em
But how can I help myself
Am Em
Every day and every night F# Em
There was nothing I can find
Dsus2 Em
But I will. I will try...


CH)
Cm A
But now... I can see the way Fm
Like a shining ray Gm
And I can fly away
Cm A
Up there, where the ocean brush the sky Fm
We can all together fly Gm
And I can say good bye
Cm
My friends.

II)
A Cm Gm
There was a times I was so sad
A Cm Gm
It was an experience I use to get
Cm Gm
After that I realize A Gm
There's no better advise
Fm Gm
For me, Just be yourself.

CH)
Dm H
But now... I can see the way Gm
Like a shining ray Am
And I can fly away
Dm H
Up there, where the ocean brush the sky Gm
We can all together fly Am
And I can say good bye
E
To my previous life, Dm Am
Full of sorrow and pain E
Please don't tell me now, F#m
That it was just a vain...just a vain...just a vain...

CH)
Am F#
But now... I can see the way Dm
Like a shining ray Em
And I can fly away
Am F#
Up there, where the ocean brush the sky Dm
We can all together fly Em
And I can say good bye
Am
My friends.

À âîò ÷òî ïîëó÷èëîñü :4: Íàäåþñü âàì ïîíðàâèòñÿ :4:
Çâóê êîíå÷íî àööòîé, ïðèøëîñü íà âîêàë êîìïðåññîðà íàëîæèòü ÷òîáû ñëîâà íå ïðîïàäàëè :4:

http://webfile.ru/6321406 :deal:
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 12:32 
Ìîñêâà
Hellish voice for example

Íó êîíîíè÷íî òàê ïîëó÷èëîñü. Êîëèôîðíÿ÷íàÿ òàêàÿ áàëëàäà.
Ïðèÿòíî çâó÷èò, ïî òåêñòó - õç....Ôðàçà "We can all together fly" - êàê-òî ðóáàíóëà ñëóõ, õîòÿ îíãëèéñêåé ó ìåíÿ òàê ñåáå...

Àâòîòþí âêîíöå - òîïîðíî çâó÷èò.

Âöåëîì ïðèêîëüíî.
ñåêðåòíûé ãèòàðèñò ãðóïïû Iron Maiden
--------------------------------------------------------
ñåãîäíÿ òû èãðàåø òðåø
à çàâòðà áàáó ñâîþ ñúåø!


"ýòî äàæå íå ãðîóë ýòî íèçêèé àäîâûé áóðëÿùèé ñèï èç àíàëà ñàòàíû" (c) Demoraivola
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 12:41 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

Power C.™ , äà ÿ íà ñêîðóþ ðóêó íàêèäàë íå áûëî âðåìåíè íîòû îòðàáàòûâàòü ÷åòêî :4: ðåøèë ïðîñòî ïîäòþíèòü ãäå êîñÿêè åñòü, òàì è ïðàâäà ëåñåíêà ïîëó÷èëàñü :4:
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 12:55 
Ìîñêâà
Ãîëîñèøêî, Ïåðàòðîíèêà CAB 21229, EMU 0204, SE V7, SE X1

Ãîëîñ î÷åíü õîðîøèé ó òåáÿ!! ) Îñòàëüíîå ïîïîçæå íàïèøó ) Âèáðàòî î÷ ïðèêîëüíîå ) Âîîáùåì ìíå ãîëîñ î÷ íðàâèòñÿ, çâó÷èò î÷ ïðîíèêíîâåííî, öåïëÿåò )
All we need is love...
Ìîé êàíàë íà YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@vitaly_leto

Ñðåäñòâà äëÿ êîñìåòîëîãèè https://beauty-cream.ru/ J-Cain, TKTX, Dr Numb.
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 12:57 
Ìîñêâà
Ãîëîñèøêî, Ïåðàòðîíèêà CAB 21229, EMU 0204, SE V7, SE X1

î íåò, ÷òîá òåáÿ!!))) êàê òû ìîã àâòîòüþí íàëîæèòü íà âñå ýòî ?? Ìîæåò áûòü ïåðåõâàëèë òîãäà òâîå âáèðàòî, îíî ìîæ òàêîå èç-çà èñêàæåíèé àâòîòüþíà ))))
All we need is love...
Ìîé êàíàë íà YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@vitaly_leto

Ñðåäñòâà äëÿ êîñìåòîëîãèè https://beauty-cream.ru/ J-Cain, TKTX, Dr Numb.
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 12:59 
Ìîñêâà
Ãîëîñèøêî, Ïåðàòðîíèêà CAB 21229, EMU 0204, SE V7, SE X1

Íî íàñêîëüêî ìíå íðàâèòñÿ òâîÿ ñåðåäèíà, íàñòîëüêî æå ìíå íå íðàâÿòñÿ òâîè âåðõà (( Âèäèìî ïðîñòî ìàëî ðàáîòàë íàä íèìè åùå, ñåðåäèíó îáêàòàë, à âåðõà åùå íåò )
All we need is love...
Ìîé êàíàë íà YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@vitaly_leto

Ñðåäñòâà äëÿ êîñìåòîëîãèè https://beauty-cream.ru/ J-Cain, TKTX, Dr Numb.
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 13:09 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

>íàñòîëüêî æå ìíå íå íðàâÿòñÿ òâîè âåðõà
:-(
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 13:39 
èëè òîò ñàìûé
Äåçìîíä

Äà, âåðõè ñèëüíî âûáèâàþòñÿ èç îáùåãî ôîíà. Òåáå íóæíî ïåòü â ñåðåäèíå :idea2:
Äîáðî ïîæàëîâàòü íà ìîé êàíàë: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCmKdsMhEXicMmsUlL06Hccw?view_as=subscriber
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 13:39 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


Êðàñèâî ñïåòî, íî ìíå êàæåòñÿ ãîëîñó "îáúåìà" íå õâàòàåò, ãèòàðà çâó÷èò â îäíîì ïðîñòðàíñòâå, ãîëîñ â äðóãîì. Ìîæåò ðåâåðî÷êó íå õâàòàåò, ìîæåò ìèêðîôîí òàêîé, ìîæåò êîìïðåññîð... Íó è àâòîòüþí... Òåì íå ìåíåå, â öåëîì, âïîëíå õîðîøî, ñëóøàåòñÿ ïðèÿòíî, ïðîíèêíîâåííî. Ïîíðàâèëîñü.
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Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 13:43 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

Äåçìîíä , :-( áëèí âñå çàäðàëè ñ ãîâåííûìè âåðõàìè ìîèìè. íó ÿ æå áåðó :4: ìîæåò òîãäà íèçû í áàñèòü, ÷òîáû âåðõà è íèçû èç îäíîé êàøè ñäåëàíû áûëè? :4:
:ves001:
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 14:20 
Ìîñêâà
Hellish voice for example

>íó ÿ æå áåðó


:7:
ñåêðåòíûé ãèòàðèñò ãðóïïû Iron Maiden
--------------------------------------------------------
ñåãîäíÿ òû èãðàåø òðåø
à çàâòðà áàáó ñâîþ ñúåø!


"ýòî äàæå íå ãðîóë ýòî íèçêèé àäîâûé áóðëÿùèé ñèï èç àíàëà ñàòàíû" (c) Demoraivola
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 14:31 
Äèâàííûé
âîêàëèçÄ

Òû á òåêñò ïîïðîñèë ïðîâåðèòü íà êàêîì-íèáóäü çàïàäíîì ôîðóìå ïîýòîì, à òî ìàññà îøèáîê, íåñîãëàñîâàíèé âðåìåí, íåîáùåïðèíÿòûõ îáîðîòîâ.
Íó à òàê ïåñíÿ ñòàíäàðòíàÿ, íè÷åãî íîâîãî. Òàêîå óæå áûëî. Ìîæåò â àðàíæèðîâêå è âêóñíåå çâó÷àëî ëó÷øå.
 ëþáîì ñëó÷àå, ìîëîäåö, ÷òî òâîðèøü :)
https://www.youtube.com/user/IgorJugulatorZotov - ìîé ìóçûêàëüíûé êàíàë
https://www.numberonemusic.com/theperfectbalance - îôèöèàëüíàÿ ñòðàíèöà The Perfect Balance
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 14:55 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

>Òû á òåêñò ïîïðîñèë ïðîâåðèòü íà êàêîì-íèáóäü çàïàäíîì ôîðóìå ïîýòîì, à òî ìàññà îøèáîê, íåñîãëàñîâàíèé âðåìåí, íåîáùåïðèíÿòûõ îáîðîòîâ.
:oooi: äàëüøå ìîæíî íå ÷èòàòü
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 14:56 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

Jugu , òû äóìàåøü òû â àíãë ëó÷øå ìåíÿ øàðèøü? âñå òàì íîðìàëüíî âñå îáîðîòû è âðåìåíà íà ìåñòå. ïîäîáíûå ñõåìû âñòðå÷àþòñÿ âî âñåõ èíîñòðàííûõ òåêñòàõ è ðàçãîâîðàõ.
ýòî òû òàê õîòåë ìåíÿ ïîäêîâûðíóòü ÷òîëè?
:ves001:
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Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 14:57 
Äèâàííûé
âîêàëèçÄ

> äàëüøå ìîæíî íå ÷èòàòü
Òî åñòü òåáÿ è òâîè òâîðåíèÿ êðèòèêîâàòü íåëüçÿ?
https://www.youtube.com/user/IgorJugulatorZotov - ìîé ìóçûêàëüíûé êàíàë
https://www.numberonemusic.com/theperfectbalance - îôèöèàëüíàÿ ñòðàíèöà The Perfect Balance
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 14:58 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

>That it was just a vain...just a vain...just a vain...
âîò åäèíñòâåííàÿ îøèáêà, è òî ñïåë ÿ ïðàâèëüíî in vain - íàïðàñíî, òàê ïðàâèëüíåå óïîòðåáëÿòü.
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 15:03 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

Jugu ,

>Òî åñòü òåáÿ è òâîè òâîðåíèÿ êðèòèêîâàòü íåëüçÿ?
òåêñò è ìóçûêàëüíóþ êîìïîçèöèþ íå èìååò ñìûñëà êðèòèêîâàòü. ýòî àâòîðñêàÿ çàäóìêà è íå ïîäëåæèò êîëëåêòèâíîìó ïåðåèçëîãàíèþ íà ëàä "êòî êàê âèäèò ýòî ïî ñâîåìó".
Ïðî îøèáêè åùå ðàç ãîâîðþ: ãäå òàì è êàêèå? öèòàòó ìíå :moral:
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Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 15:29 
Äèâàííûé
âîêàëèçÄ

> Every day and every night There was nothing I can find
Ñàì íàéä¸øü çäåñü îøèáêó? :ulyb:
https://www.youtube.com/user/IgorJugulatorZotov - ìîé ìóçûêàëüíûé êàíàë
https://www.numberonemusic.com/theperfectbalance - îôèöèàëüíàÿ ñòðàíèöà The Perfect Balance
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Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 15:35 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

>> Every day and every night There was nothing I can find
>Ñàì íàéä¸øü çäåñü îøèáêó?
Íàìåêàåøü ÷òî äîëæíî áûòü ÷åðåç There IS nothing?
Íåò â ïðîøëîì âðåìåíè òîæå ìîæíî. Êàæäûì äíåì èëè íî÷üþ ÿ íè÷åãî íå ìîã íàéòè.
:ves001:
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Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 15:52 
Äèâàííûé
âîêàëèçÄ

There was nothing I could find òîãäà
https://www.youtube.com/user/IgorJugulatorZotov - ìîé ìóçûêàëüíûé êàíàë
https://www.numberonemusic.com/theperfectbalance - îôèöèàëüíàÿ ñòðàíèöà The Perfect Balance
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Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 16:04 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

Jugu , åùå ðàç ïîâòîðÿþ, òåïåðü óæå äëÿ òåáÿ Äæóãó,
could - ìîã áû\ ìîãëè áû - ñèòóàöèÿ óñëîâíîñòè, îäîëæåíèÿ ïðîñüáû, íàïðèìåð Could you ever stop trolling me?
à âîò CAN - ìîã â ïëàíå âîçìîæíîñòè, ñïîñîáíîñòè - èìåííî òóò è ìåñòî ÿ ñ÷èòàþ.

Âáåéòå è òîò è òîò âàðèàíò â ïîèñêîâèê è ñìîòðèòå íà áóðæóéñêîì ÿçûêå ðåçóëüòàòû òîãäà åñëè íå âåðèòå.
è ìîæåò õâàòèò ïðî òåêñò? :4: õîòåë áû ÿ ÷òî íèáóäü ïî ïîâîäó òåêñòà ïðîêîíñóëüòèðîâàòüñÿ - ïîøåë áû íà ôîðóì òåêñòîâèêîâ, à òàê êàê òàì åùå õóæå íàðîä ðàç â äâàäöàòü, êîòîðûå äîëåêè îò ýëèòíîãî òâîð÷åñòâà òî ÿ òóäà íèêîãäà íå ñóíóñü áîëüøå.
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Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 16:08 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

Íàïðèìåð:
I could find some lyrics for you. - ß áû ìîã íàéòè òåáå íåñêîëüêî òåêñòîâ. (èìååòñÿ ââèäó åñëè âû ïîïðîñèòå)
 âîïðîñå could you find\search - íå ìîãëè áû âû ïîèñêàòü
I can find - óòâåðäèòåëüíîå ÌÎÃÓ. â êîíñòðóêöèè ñ nothing îáðàçóåò îòðèöàòåëüíóþ ôîðìó. â àíãëèéñêîì òàê ïðèíÿòî â îòëè÷àå îò ðóññêîãî. íàïðèìåð I TELL YOU NOTHING - ÿ ÍÅ ñêàæó òåáå íè÷åãî (ÿ ñêàæó òåáå íè÷åãî - òàê íå ãîâîðÿò ïî ðóññêè)
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Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 16:22 
Äèâàííûé
âîêàëèçÄ

Íó ó òåáÿ æå âðåìåíà íå ñîãëàñîâàíû! Òîãäà íàäî There is nothing I can find.
https://www.youtube.com/user/IgorJugulatorZotov - ìîé ìóçûêàëüíûé êàíàë
https://www.numberonemusic.com/theperfectbalance - îôèöèàëüíàÿ ñòðàíèöà The Perfect Balance
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Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2013 16:34 
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

>There is nothing I can find.
òî÷íî, ýòî ÿ ñïëîõîâàë, èçâèíèòå.
Áëÿòü íó âû ðåàëüíî, êàê çàäðîòû òóïî ïî îøèáêàì øíûðÿåòå, à äóøè íå óâèäåëè â ïåñíå :oooi: êîðî÷å ÿ ïîøåë, íàïüþñü, áåçäàðùèíà.
Íàïèøèòå òåêñò ëó÷øå ÿ âàì ðóêó ïîæìó. à òî òóïî â ïðåçåíò ñèìïëàõ íàêèäàþò ïðèìåòèâùåíû. :oooi:
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âîêàëèçÄ

Òàê ìû æ çà ïðîãðåññ :) Òåïåðü ïåñíÿ ñòàíåò ëó÷øå, êîëëåêòèâíûìè óñèëèÿìè ;)
https://www.youtube.com/user/IgorJugulatorZotov - ìîé ìóçûêàëüíûé êàíàë
https://www.numberonemusic.com/theperfectbalance - îôèöèàëüíàÿ ñòðàíèöà The Perfect Balance
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Ìîñêâà
Hellish voice for example

Jugu , Íó â ñîâðåìåííîé ðàçãîâîðíîé ðå÷è áûâàåò è íå ñîãëàñóþò âðåìåíà ìåñòàìè...

Íî âñå æå â äàííîì ñëó÷àå ïîääåðæó Äæóãó. Òåêñò äîëæåí áûòü íàïèñàí êóëüòóðíî.
ñåêðåòíûé ãèòàðèñò ãðóïïû Iron Maiden
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ñåãîäíÿ òû èãðàåø òðåø
à çàâòðà áàáó ñâîþ ñúåø!


"ýòî äàæå íå ãðîóë ýòî íèçêèé àäîâûé áóðëÿùèé ñèï èç àíàëà ñàòàíû" (c) Demoraivola
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Ìîñêâà
Ãîëîñèøêî, Ïåðàòðîíèêà CAB 21229, EMU 0204, SE V7, SE X1

Îëåã
Ó ìåíÿ ïðåäëîæåíèå:
Ïîäêëþ÷è ê âåðõàì ðàñùåïóõó, áóäåò íàìíîãî êðó÷å )  ñàìîì êîíöå íà âåðõóøêå ó òåáÿ ïðîìåëüêíóëà ëåãêàÿ ðàñùåïóõà - óæå ñèëüíî êðó÷å íîòêà ïðîçâó÷àëà ) Ïîïðîáóé ;)
All we need is love...
Ìîé êàíàë íà YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@vitaly_leto

Ñðåäñòâà äëÿ êîñìåòîëîãèè https://beauty-cream.ru/ J-Cain, TKTX, Dr Numb.
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

Jugu , äà ïîõîæå âû òîëüêî ñåáå ýêñïèðèåíñ íàáèâàåòå :4:
ëàäíî, ÄÀÂÀÉÒÅ ÍÅ ÁÓÄÅÌ ÏÐÎ ÒÅÑÒ ÁÎËÜØÅ ÕÎÐÎØÎ?
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Ìîñêâà
Hellish voice for example

Oleg BachTeen , Òåáå ïîìîãàþò ëþäè ðåàëüíî, à òû îáèæàåøüñÿ.

Íó îáû÷íóþ ïåñíþ íàïèñàë, îáû÷íî ñïåë. Ñëåäóþùàÿ áóäåò ëó÷øå.
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ñåãîäíÿ òû èãðàåø òðåø
à çàâòðà áàáó ñâîþ ñúåø!


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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

Power C.™ , îíà íå îáû÷íàÿ ýòî ëèðè÷åñêàÿ ïåñíÿ äóøåâíàÿ.
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âîêàëèçÄ

>Power C.™ , îíà íå îáû÷íàÿ ýòî ëèðè÷åñêàÿ ïåñíÿ äóøåâíàÿ.
Îëåã, ýòî ïðàâèëüíî, ÷òî òû çàùèùàåøü ñâî¸ òâîðåíèå. Íî ñòàðàéñÿ êîíñòðóêòèâíûå ìûñëè âñ¸ æå ó÷èòûâàòü.
Ìîè ïåñíè âîí òîæå ïîðÿäî÷íî ïîíîñÿò, íî ÿ êîíñòðóêòèâ ó÷èòûâàþ, à øåëóõó îòñåêàþ.
https://www.youtube.com/user/IgorJugulatorZotov - ìîé ìóçûêàëüíûé êàíàë
https://www.numberonemusic.com/theperfectbalance - îôèöèàëüíàÿ ñòðàíèöà The Perfect Balance
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

Jugu , õîðîøî. èçâèíèòå.
íî âîò òàê âîò òîæå êàêáå íå íàäî :deal:
>Òû á òåêñò ïîïðîñèë ïðîâåðèòü íà êàêîì-íèáóäü çàïàäíîì ôîðóìå ïîýòîì, à òî ìàññà îøèáîê,
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Ìîñêâà
Hellish voice for example

Oleg BachTeen , Ïðîñòè çà òî, ÷òî ÿ ðåçêîâàò. Íî è òû òîæå çàùèùàåøüñÿ äîñòàòî÷íî ðüÿíî.\
À ïî ïîâîäó âñåé âõîäÿùåé â òåáÿ èôîðìàöèè ïî ïîâîäó ñàáæà, Äæóãó ïðàâ àáñîëþòíî. Òû æå âçðîñëûé äÿäÿ. Áóäü äèïëîìàòè÷íåå. Òåáå æ äîáðà õîòÿò.
ñåêðåòíûé ãèòàðèñò ãðóïïû Iron Maiden
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ñåãîäíÿ òû èãðàåø òðåø
à çàâòðà áàáó ñâîþ ñúåø!


"ýòî äàæå íå ãðîóë ýòî íèçêèé àäîâûé áóðëÿùèé ñèï èç àíàëà ñàòàíû" (c) Demoraivola
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⃤ ◀&


ó ìåíÿ ïëîõî ñ àíãëèéñêèì, ïîýòîìó òåêñò çàöåíèòü òðóäíî ò_Ò åñòü ëè ïåðåâîä?
à ñ ìóçûêàëüíîé ñòîðîíû ìíå íðàâèòñÿ, òîëüêî òàì ãäå ïîâûøå ïîåøü, õîòåëîñü áû ìåíüøå íàïðÿæåíèÿ :flower:
:cat:
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

>òîëüêî òàì ãäå ïîâûøå ïîåøü, õîòåëîñü áû ìåíüøå íàïðÿæåíèÿ
ÿ ìîãó ñïåòü âñå ïåäîãîëîñîì :4: ñëóøàåòñÿ ñëèòíåå è ëåã÷å, íî òåìáð ãîìîñÿ÷èé áóäåò :4: âñå æàëóþòñÿ ÷òî îáúåìó íå õâàòàå
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Åêàòåðèíáóðã


ß òîæå çà ðàñùåï :super:
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

>ß òîæå çà ðàñùåï
îîîîé ýòî íåå :oooi: òÿæêî òÿæêî..
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⃤ ◀&


>ÿ ìîãó ñïåòü âñå ïåäîãîëîñîì ñëóøàåòñÿ ñëèòíåå è ëåã÷å, íî òåìáð ãîìîñÿ÷èé áóäåò âñå æàëóþòñÿ ÷òî îáúåìó íå õâàòàå
ÿ òåáÿ ïîíèìàþ((
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

>ÿ òåáÿ ïîíèìàþ((
äà íàâðÿäëè :4: ó òåáÿ òî ïåäîãîëîñ ïîñòàâëåí ëó÷øå, à ó ìåíÿ áàðèòîí-àëüòèíî :4:
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ó ìåíÿ àëüòåðíàòèâû íåò(
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Äåçìîíä

>>òîëüêî òàì ãäå ïîâûøå ïîåøü, õîòåëîñü áû ìåíüøå íàïðÿæåíèÿ
>ÿ ìîãó ñïåòü âñå ïåäîãîëîñîì ñëóøàåòñÿ ñëèòíåå è ëåã÷å, íî òåìáð ãîìîñÿ÷èé áóäåò âñå æàëóþòñÿ ÷òî îáúåìó íå õâàòàå

ß, êîãäà-òî, äóìàë, ÷òî òîíêèé âûñîêèé ãîëîñ - ýòî òâîé ãîëîñ. Íî êîãäà ïîñëóøàë òâîþ ñåðåäèíå è Íåñóí Äîðìó, òî ñòàë ñîìíåâàòüñÿ â òâîåé òåíîðîâîñòè. Ó òåáÿ õîðîøàÿ, ïëîòíàÿ ñåðåäèíà. Íàõðåíà òåáå âåðõà ïèùàòü?
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Ãîëîñ

Ñëóøàé, à î÷åíü êðàñèâî! Ìíå ïîíðàâèëîñü è äóøåâíî ê ñëîâó! Òû ïðîñòî îáÿçàí äîäåëàòü å¸. Çàïèøè âñ¸ õîðîøî è ñïîé óæå ïî ôèðìå) Òîêà íåíàäî òàê ïëîòíèòü ãîëîñ. Íåæíåå äàâàé.)) :idea2:
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âîêàëèçÄ

Äà, ñ õîðîøåé àðàíæèðîâêîé åù¸ áûëî áû èíòåðåñíî ïîñëóøàòü.
https://www.youtube.com/user/IgorJugulatorZotov - ìîé ìóçûêàëüíûé êàíàë
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I am the Law (c)

Õîòü áû ðåâåðà íåìíîãî äîáàâèë ÷òî-ëè...
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Íàñ÷¸ò òåêñòà, ÿ ñ÷èòàþ, ÷òî ëó÷øå íå íàäî ñî÷èíÿòü íà èíîñòðàííîì, åñëè òû íå âëàäååøü èì â ñîâåðøåíñòâå. :-) Ýòî çäðàâûé ñìûñë. Ïîòîìó ÷òî, åñëè ïåðåâåñòè, ïîíÿòíî, ÷òî ýòî áóäåò òîò åù¸ áðåä. :crazy: Ïðèõîäèò íà óì ëèðèêà ãðóïïû Ñêîðïèîíñ, ÷åì-òî ïîäîáíûì îòäà¸ò. Ïèøè íà ðóññêîì! :yes:
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âîêàëèçÄ

>Ïðèõîäèò íà óì ëèðèêà ãðóïïû Ñêîðïèîíñ, ÷åì-òî ïîäîáíûì îòäà¸ò.
Ëó÷øå áûòü íà óðîâíå Ñêîðïîâ è ïðè ýòîì ïèñàòü íå ñîâñåì "ãëàäêèå" ïî ìåðêàì íîñèòåëåé òåêñòû :-)
https://www.youtube.com/user/IgorJugulatorZotov - ìîé ìóçûêàëüíûé êàíàë
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Äåçìîíä

Íå íóæíî ðåâåðà!
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

>ñ÷¸ò òåêñòà, ÿ ñ÷èòàþ, ÷òî ëó÷øå íå íàäî ñî÷èíÿòü íà èíîñòðàííîì, åñëè òû íå âëàäååøü èì â ñîâåðøåíñòâå. Ýòî çäðàâûé ñìûñë.
ÿ åùå ðàç ñêàçàë, ïî ïîâîäó òåêñòà íå óêàçûâàéòå ìíå.
åñëè ñìûñë íå ïîíèìàåòå, íå îðèòå ÷òî ãîâíî, ýòî îñêîðáëåíèå, ïåðåâîäèòå ëó÷øå äðóãèå òåêñòû àíãëîÿçû÷íûõ èñïîëíèòåëåé. àõ äà, ÿ æå çàáûë ÿ ÍÅÈÇÂÅÑÒÅÍ! à ïîñåìó ìîè òåêñòû ìîæíî ãîâíèòü? êîðî÷å ÿ ñêàçàë ïî ïîâîäó òåêñòà íå íàäî òûêàòü. ÿ âàì ìîãó ñòîëüêî "áðåäà" ïîíàïèõàòü â ïðèìåðû, äà íå õî÷ó íà ýòî âðåìÿ òðàòèòü :oooi: .
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Ìîñêâà
Ãèòàðà, áàðàáàí, ÿãîäèöû

Ïîçèöèÿ: "Ìîÿ ïåñíÿ - îôèãåííàÿ, äà åù¸ è ëèðè÷åñêàÿ, âåðõà êðóòû (áåðó æå), àâòîòþí, ýòî òàê íàäî :idea2: , à òåêñò! ÒÅÊÑÒ âîîáùå íåîáñóæäàåì." Òàê ÷òî ñëóøàéòå, ëóçåðû, è íå ñìåéòå êðèòèêîâàòü.
Òàêîå âïå÷àòëåíèå îò òâîèõ ïîñòîâ îñòàëîñü.
P.S. Êîãäà òâîþ ïåñíþ ïî ðàäèî óñëûøèì? À òî òàêîé òàëàíò â áåçâåñòíîñòè ïðîïàäàåò.
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Áîëüøîé Ìàêàðîííûé Ïðîâàéäåð

Âñå ñëèëèñü?
Òîïèê ïðîøó çàêðûòü.
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Ìîñêâà
Hellish voice for example

Oleg BachTeen , ß âîò áóäó æäàòü â àðàíæèðîâêå è õîòÿ áû äèâàííîé çàïèñè ïåñíè. Èíòåðåñíî ÷òî ïîëó÷èòñÿ. Íà óðîâíå íàáðîñêà ïîêà íåïîíÿòíî, Îëåã.
ñåêðåòíûé ãèòàðèñò ãðóïïû Iron Maiden
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Òåìà: Re: Ñïåë ñâîþ ïåñíþ But Now (Àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ âåðñèÿ)
Âðåìÿ: 25.01.2013 05:26 



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