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Òåìà: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñèøêî, Ïåðàòðîíèêà CAB 21229, EMU 0204, SE V7, SE X1  
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Ïðèâåòèê âñåì!!)) Ðàññ÷èòûâàþ íà ìíåíèå è êðèòèêó íàøåé âåùè÷êè, êîòîðàÿ âëîæåíà â ðàáî÷åì âàðèàíòå)) Òåìêà ñîçäàíà â ýòîì ðàçäåëå: |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 18:36 |
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Âèé ìåðòâûå äóøè 
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Íó íè÷åãî â êîíöå, à òàê íè÷åãî îñîáåííîãî. Áàíàëüíî, òàê ñêàçàòü, ÷åì òî íà ñîâðåìåííûé ïîïðîê ïîõîæå, ìîìåíòàìè íà çâåðè. Ýòî íàâåðíîå è íå ïîíðàâèëîñü. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 18:37 |
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Íèæíåâàðòîâñê òåíîð-àðëåêèíî 
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>÷åì òî íà ñîâðåìåííûé ïîïðîê ïîõîæå Òû ÷î, ýòî æå èíäè-ðîê  
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 18:48 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñèøêî, Ïåðàòðîíèêà CAB 21229, EMU 0204, SE V7, SE X1
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21st centuryman Ñïàñèáîíüêè !) À ÷òî òû áû èçìåíèë òàì?) Èëè âñÿ êîìïîçèöèÿ ìàëîïåðñïåêòèâíàÿ? ) |
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All we need is love...
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 19:22 |
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Âèé ìåðòâûå äóøè
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Íàäî åùå ðàç ïîñëóøàòü. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 19:25 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñèøêî, Ïåðàòðîíèêà CAB 21229, EMU 0204, SE V7, SE X1
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>Íàäî åùå ðàç ïîñëóøàòü. Ñïàñèáî )) |
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All we need is love...
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 19:40 |
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Âèé ìåðòâûå äóøè
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Âîêàëü5óþ ëèíèþ ÿ áû èçìåíèë. Íó âî ïåðâûõ ãîëîñ î÷åíü òîð÷èò. È ñîâåòöþ âîêàë òîæå íåìíîãî ðàçìàçàòü ïîä ñòàòü àêêîìïàíèìåíòó. Êîíöîâêó ïåðåíåñòè â ñåðåäèíó. À â êîíöå ïðîïåâàòü âñå ñ ýòèì êîíöîâî÷íûì çâóêîì.ïî ñòðóêòóðå ïåñíÿ íàïîìèíàåò high hopes. Íî â îòëè÷èè îò íåå òâîÿ ïåñíÿ áåäíà íà ãàðìîíèþ è ìåëîäèè.  êîíöå ëö÷øå ïðîñòî óáàâëÿòü çâóê. Òåêñò íóæíî ìåíÿòü. Íèêîêàêèì ïðèâåòîì òóò è íå ïàõíåò. Ïîäîøåë áû àáñòðàêòíûé òåêñò àëÿ çåìôèðà. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 19:47 |
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Ïåâ÷åíñê•*°`*•-.,_,.-•* Âîêàë•*°`*•-.,_,....  
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>Íî â îòëè÷èè îò íåå òâîÿ ïåñíÿ áåäíà íà ãàðìîíèþ è ìåëîäèè. À òû å¸ åù¸ ñèëüíåå îáåäíÿåøü çàæèìàÿ ãîëîñ . |
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 Äèíàìè÷åñêàÿ ìåäèòàöèÿ Îøî http://rutracker.org/forum/viewtopic.php?t=3452428 Ýìîöèîíàëüíàÿ ñâîáîäà http://rutracker.org/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4566402 Ðàñïåâêè https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLmPdxTZbR80YV9O9ZJcmjcEzcfAPoBQJL  |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 19:55 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñèøêî, Ïåðàòðîíèêà CAB 21229, EMU 0204, SE V7, SE X1
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>À òû å¸ åù¸ ñèëüíåå îáåäíÿåøü çàæèìàÿ ãîëîñ . VoiceBeautiful2 äà, âîêàëüíî òóò çâó÷èò áåçòåìáðîâî, ïî÷òè ÷òî îäèí ñóáòîí ) Íó íè÷å, íà îøèáêàõ ó÷àòñÿ)) òåì áîëåå, ÷òî ÿ â ëþáîì ñëó÷àå âîêàë ïåðåïèøó è ìíå ýòà ìàíåðà íå ïîíðàâèëàñü ) 21st centuryman Âîêàë òàê òîð÷èò ïîòîìó, ÷òî ïëîõî (äàæå â ïëàíå çâóêîçàïèñè) ïðîïèñàëè âîêàë, ñëèøêîì áëèçêî ê ìèêó (Îêòàâà ÌÊ-319), îíà ãëóõîâàòà, ïðèøëîñü âûêðó÷èâàòü âåðõà ) Èíà÷å âàùå íè÷åãî íå ñëûøíî, òîíåò â ìèêñå ) Äà, ïåñåíêà ïðîñòàÿ, êîíå÷íî )) À ïî ïîâîäó òåêñòà: òóò, âèäèìî ïîòîìó, ÷òî ñëûøíî íå âñå ñëîâà, åãî ñìûñë òåðÿåòñÿ) Îí ñàðêàñòè÷åñêèé, èíîñêàçàòåëüíûé ) |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 20:14 |
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serj333 
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à ìíå ïîíðàâèëîñü, ìåñòàìè ãðàíæîâî ìåñòàìè àëüòåðíàòèâíî, êîðî÷å 
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 20:20 |
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Âèé ìåðòâûå äóøè
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À êòî ãèòàðó èãðàåò â êîíöå? | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 20:43 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñèøêî, Ïåðàòðîíèêà CAB 21229, EMU 0204, SE V7, SE X1
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Serj333 Ñïàñèáî áîëüøîå çà òåïëûå ñëîâà!!!) 21st centuryman Òàì 2 ãèòàðèñòà ) Îäèí èãðàåò òîëüêî ñîëî-ñëàéä íàâåðõó, äðóãîé âñå îñòàëüíîå (åìó è ïðèíàäëåæèò èäåÿ ýòîé âåùè!) ß èãðàþ ëèøü íà êëàâèøàõ â êîíöå è íà ñýìïëîâàííîì áàñó â êîíöå è â ôàíêîâîé ÷àñòè (+ ñèíòåçàòîð â êîíöå) |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 05.08.2013 20:45 |
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Âèé ìåðòâûå äóøè
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Ó ñîëîñëîéäèñòà åñòü âêóñ. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïðîøó îöåíèòü ïåñåíêó íàøåé ãðóïïû
Âðåìÿ: 06.08.2013 16:59 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñèøêî, Ïåðàòðîíèêà CAB 21229, EMU 0204, SE V7, SE X1
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>Ó ñîëîñëîéäèñòà åñòü âêóñ. 21st centuryman  ñìûñëå ñëàéäîâûå ñîëî ó íåãî êðàñèâûå ?) Õîòåë áû ïîïðîñèòü ïðîñëóøàòü è äàòü îöåíêó äðóãîé âîêàëüíîé ìàíåðå â äóáëå, êîòîðûé ÿ ñäåëàë â ïðîøëûé ÷åòâåðã ) Åñëè íå ñëîæíî ))  òåìå â äðóãîì ðàçäåëå íîâàÿ ññûëî÷êà!) |
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