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                                         Òåìà: È åùå îäèí ðàññêàçèê...............
                                        
                                         Âðåìÿ: 26.05.2006 11:08  | 
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                                    íàçûâàåòñÿ "Ôóôëî" ìîæåòå çäåñü ïî÷èòàòü: http://webfile.ru/963429 | |
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                                         Òåìà: Re: È åùå îäèí ðàññêàçèê...............
                                        
                                         Âðåìÿ: 26.05.2006 13:06  | 
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                                            Ìîñêâà Ãèòàðà  | 
                                    
                                        
Îëåãà, òåáå òî÷íî ïðÿìàÿ äîðîãà íà ôîðóì òåêñòîâèêîâ.  Ïîïðîáóé, òåáå ïîíðàâèòñÿ  | 
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                                         Òåìà: Re: È åùå îäèí ðàññêàçèê...............
                                        
                                         Âðåìÿ: 26.05.2006 13:31  | 
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                                    ëàäíî ïîïðîáóþ. ìîæ ïîíðàâèòñÿ. | |
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                                         Òåìà: Re: È åùå îäèí ðàññêàçèê...............
                                        
                                         Âðåìÿ: 26.05.2006 13:55  | 
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                                            Tchad À/H2N3  | 
                                    Îëåãà, ÷îò äèíàìèêè ìàëîâàòî â ðàññêàçå. Òîëüêî â÷èòûâàòüñÿ íà÷èíàåøü, à ðàññêàç êîí÷àåòñÿ. | |
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 "How do you sleep at night, with the borrowed dreams from a broken past?" 
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                                         Òåìà: Re: È åùå îäèí ðàññêàçèê...............
                                        
                                         Âðåìÿ: 26.05.2006 13:58  | 
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                                    Áàê, íó âåäü ýòî òàêîé êîðîòêèé ðàññêàçèê òî. | |
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                                         Òåìà: Re: È åùå îäèí ðàññêàçèê...............
                                        
                                         Âðåìÿ: 26.05.2006 14:03  | 
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                                            Tchad À/H2N3  | 
                                    Ïðåäûäóùèé ìíå áîëåå ïîíðàâèëñÿ. | |
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 "How do you sleep at night, with the borrowed dreams from a broken past?" 
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                                         Òåìà: Re: È åùå îäèí ðàññêàçèê...............
                                        
                                         Âðåìÿ: 26.05.2006 14:15  | 
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"æåëåçîõóéâðîòáåòîííàÿ  ñòåíà" - ìîùíî ñêàçàíî  | 
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