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Òåìà: îöåíêà òåêñòîâ
Âðåìÿ: 28.08.2006 11:46 |
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Ïèøó äýòîâñêèå òåêñòû. Íóæíû ëè îíè êîìó-ëèáî èëè ÿ äåëàþ íåïðàâèëüíî? Îñòàâüòå çäåñü ñâîþ êðèòèêó, ïîæàëóéñòà, óêàæèòå ìíå ìîè îøèáêè. ß ïîçâîëþ ñåáå âûëîæèòü çäåñü ïàðî÷êó: 1. All is quit underground, No evil can be found, Only smell of burning corpse Remains the might of devil force... Time to burn! - i hear shout, Time to make 'em all knockout! Time to crash the Earth's balance, Time to dissapear transe! Soton walks the Earth again, Throwing down racid rain, Wants to rush to peoples's souls, Kill em' all - he realy wants! Only horror in his eyes, will to kill alike Titans! See it later, think it now, Look at running away crowd! 2.Bloody Souls and Heaven's Might, Killing Sins it was so right, Destroyed the power of the God, Broken ephes of the Sword... Face to face with hate and war, Willing bood and more and more, There was meeting in the past, For all of them it may was last... Red and black light in their eyes, Ready all them slice and dice, Looking deeply in the hell, Burning graves have some to tell... Doing some eclectic mess, Goddes of Hate in dirty dress, Wants devouring all at last, Killing, ripping souls fast... |
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