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Òåêñòû, ïåñíè è ìåëîäèè

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Òåìà: äðóãîå Òåêñòû â ñòèëå Àðèè (Êèïåëîâà)
ãîðîä: Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã öåíà: äîã Âðåìÿ: 24.09.2009 22:57 
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Ïèøó òåêñòû â ñòèëå Ïóøêèíîé.Ñîòðóäíè÷åñòâî òîëüêî ñ ãîòîâûìè ãðóïïàìè. êîðîòêèå ñðîêè.Âîçìîæíû òåêñòû íà àíãëèéñêîì.Âñå âîïðîñû íà suseltrack@mail.ru
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû â ñòèëå Àðèè (Êèïåëîâà)
Âðåìÿ: 15.10.2009 09:49 
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Êàêàÿ êðàñîòà... ìû ïèøåì íà àíãëèéñêîì...

You look at the world from above

ÿ òàê ïîíèìàþ èìåëîñü ââèäó "òû ñìîòðèøü íà ìèð ñâûñîêà" - à ïîëó÷èëîñü "òû ñìîòðèøü íà ìèð ñâåðõó" - ýòî ïðî áýòìåíà à íå ïðî âàìïèðà


And feel that other don’t feel
íåãðàìîòíî, â äàííîì ñëó÷àå ãðàìîòíî çâó÷èò
and feel what the others don't feel

You don’t know words of love
You have been
BORN TO KILL!


ïðîìîë÷ó ïðî ñìûñë, ýòî ìåíÿ íå êàñàåòñÿ

And you always believe in a miracle
The hope to helps you to live

îêîí÷àíèå ó help íåâåðíîå to help you to live

All the same to go you for criminal
ýòî ïðîñòî àëåñ... âû ïîéìèòå - èíîñòðàíåö íèõðåíà íå ïîéìåò â òîì ÷òî âû íåñåòå â äàííîé êîíêðåòíîé ôðàçå

The beast will show the teeth.

Chorus:
When town in a dark


òàê íå ãîâîðèò íèêòî - âàùå ïðîãóãëèòå ýòó ôðàçó è ïðîâåðüòå ñàìè ÷òî ÿ òóò ãîâîðèòü áóäó )))


You have a killer-mark
You’re needly for the blood


ïîçäðàâëÿþ âû îòêðûëè íîâîå ñëîâî â àíãëèéñêîì ÿçûêå - NEEDLY - äåëî ïàõíåò Íîáåëåâñêîé ïðåìèåé

All worlds weren’t understood.

î êàê! âñå ìèðû áûëè íå ïîíÿòû? ýòî ê ÷åìó? èëè âñå-òàêè îïÿòü íåãðàìîòíîå âûðàæåíèå äðóãîé ìûñëè?


You had been living as a dream
òû æèë êàê ìå÷òà? áðåä êàêîé-òî
ïî÷èòàéòå âíèìàòåëüíî ïðî ïðèìåíåíèå âðåìåí â àíãë ÿçûêå

But one scary night all of the change
All things are seem strange
Îne man appeared him and feel


êàøà ñ âðåìåíàìè è ñî ñìûñëîì áåøåíàÿ - äàæå êîìåíòèòü íå áóäó - ñêàæó òîëüêî - ýòî ïåïåö êàê áåññìûñëåííî


äàëüøå òàæå ôèãíÿ íî åîìåíòèòü íàäîåëî

ÏÐÅÆÄÅ ×ÅÌ ÏÈÑÀÒÜ ÒÅÊÑÒÛ - Ó×ÈÑÜ ÃÐÀÌÌÀÒÈÊÅ, ÐÀÑØÈÐßÉ ËÅÊÑÈÊÎÍ è ×ÈÒÀÉ. ÷åãî òû íåñîìíåííî íå äåëàåøü, èíà÷å òàêîé ïóðãè ñìåøíîé íå áûëî áû.
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû â ñòèëå Àðèè (Êèïåëîâà)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2009 18:31 
Ïèòåð
Êëàâèøè è íåðâû

Ëîë, è ïðàâäà â ñòèëå Àðèè.
Ýòî ñîîáùåíèå ïîëíî ëþáâè è îáîæàíèÿ.
Ìîæåò áûòü, ñòîèò äîáàâèòü åùå?
http://www.musicforums.ru/piter/browse_thread.php?bn=mfor_piter&thread=1260763349
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû â ñòèëå Àðèè (Êèïåëîâà)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2009 20:26 
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Êîìàíäîâàòü êëèòîðîì áóäó ÿ :radio:
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû â ñòèëå Àðèè (Êèïåëîâà)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2009 23:20 
Ìîñêâà
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû â ñòèëå Àðèè (Êèïåëîâà)
Âðåìÿ: 19.10.2009 11:21 
Ìàðèèíêà
Ïàõîìîâíà

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"...äóøîé ÿ ñ âàìè, íà êàòîðãå â Ñèáèðè, à òåëîì ê ñîæàëåíèþ çäåñü, â Öþðèõå â ãîñòèíèöå". (ñ) Â.È. Ëåíèí

ÿ òåáÿ ïî àéêüþ ïðîáüþ, ó ìåíÿ áðàò - ìåíò. Òû çà ####à îòâåòèøü, ïîíåë?! Òû òðóï óæå! Âñ¸!! ÄÀÂÀÉ ÄÎÑÂÈÄÀÍÜß!
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû â ñòèëå Àðèè (Êèïåëîâà)
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2009 02:50 
Ïåòåðáóðã
Âîêàë è êèòàéñêàÿ ôàíåðêà.

>èíîñòðàíåö íèõðåíà íå ïîéìåò â òîì ÷òî âû íåñåòå â äàííîé êîíêðåòíîé ôðàçå

À ðàçâå àíãëèéñêèé ÿçûê ñóùåñòâóåò íå äëÿ òîãî, ÷òîáû ïèñàòü íåïîíÿòíûå òåêñòû?
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû â ñòèëå Àðèè (Êèïåëîâà)
Âðåìÿ: 18.05.2011 00:33 



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