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Òåìà: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 15:04 
Èæåâñê
Ýëåêòðîãèòàðà Samick SV-41B/DLS

Ñäåëàíî çà 15 ìèí. Íå ñóäèòå ñòðîãî ïëèç) Ìíå âñåãî 13ëåò)))
Åù¸ åñòü ïàðòèÿ äëÿ ýëåêòðîãèòàðû. Åñëè òåêñò ïîíðàâèòñÿ, òî ìóçîí âûëîæó.

"Please, stop cry
You willn't die"-
People saying to you,
But this is not true.

Ïðèïåâ:
Death is here,
Death searching you
So, you don't know,
What you must do.
I can't help you.
So, you will die.
At last i can
Just say:"Godbye"

Death found you.
Don't fight with die.
Now it will kill you.
Death must satisfy.

Ïðèïåâ:
Death is here,
Death searching you
So, you don't know,
What you must do.
I can't help you.
So, you will die.
At last i can
Just say:"Godbye"
Someone calls JasTarD with broken life and soul...
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 15:07 
ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ


>Ìíå âñåãî 13ëåò)))
ïðèâåò :) òàêîé þíûé, à óæå ïèøåøü òåêñòû íà àíãëèéñêîì, ìîëîäåö.

à äÿäÿ Ãóì âîò íå ó÷èë â øêîëå àíãëèéñêèé è íå ïîíèìàåò íè÷î. äóðàê ñòàðûé
http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 15:15 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
Áàñ-ãèòàðà, ãèòàðà

>You willn't die

Ìîæåò you won't die?
Ïîìåíüøå äóìàéòå! Ó âîêàëèñòîâ íå äîëæíî áûòü ìîçãîâ, ó íèõ â ÷åðåïå ðåçîíàòîðû. (ñ)
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 15:19 
cringecore
revival

ýìî?
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 15:34 



>Ñäåëàíî çà 15 ìèí. Íå ñóäèòå ñòðîãî ïëèç) Ìíå âñåãî 13ëåò)))

×î òàê äîëãî? Òû ÷òî, ïàðàëëåëüíî íà ïëåéñòåéøíå øïèëèë?

***
>"Please, stop cry

Ïîñëå Stop íàäî òîæå çàïÿòóþ, èáî îáðàùåíèå. Íî ÿ âñå ðàâíî íå çàïëà÷ó, è íå çàêðè÷ó, íå îêëèêíó äàæå...
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 15:45 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã


>"Please, stop cry
>You willn't die"-
>People saying to you,
>But this is not true.

Please, stop crying
you won't die - (èëè åùå â ðèôìó you are not dying
...

íî stop cry îäíîçíà÷íî íåïðàâèëüíî
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 15:59 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã


õîòÿ ñìîòðÿ ÷òî õî÷åøü ñêàçàòü..
- îñòàíîâè ýòîò êðèê.. èëè
- ïåðåñòàíü.. íå ïëà÷

è åùå ïîçâîëþ ñåáå (ïîïðîáîâàòü ïîïðàâèòü.. ÿ åñëè ÷å ïðîãðàììåð.. è ÷èòàþ íà àíãëèéñêîì ìíîãî è òåõ.. è õóä.. ëèò)

Death is here, Death is here,
Death searching you Seaching for you,
So, you don't know, So you dont know [really]
What you must do. What you should do
I can't help you.
So, you will die.
At last i can at last íàêîíåö.. at least ïî êðàéíåé ìåðå
Just say:"Godbye"

Death found you.
Don't fight with die. dont fight with IT or DEATH
Now it will kill you.
Death must satisfy. must get satifsfied... èëè be satisfied

ìîæíî òàê
Death have found you
so give up the fight
now it will kill you
and get satisfied

õîòÿ ñìåðü óáèëà.. çâó÷èò êàêòî ñòðàííî :)

ÓÄÀ×È!!!
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 16:05 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã


#### ôîðìàòèðîâàíèå íå çàïèñàëîñü..

Death is here,
Seaching for you,
So you dont know [really\\..\\]
What you should do

ïðî At last i can
at last íàêîíåö..
at least ïî êðàéíåé ìåðå
òî åñòü êîãäà ãîâîðèøü at last _ ìîæíî ïîíÿòü ÷òî òû æäàë åãî ñìåðòè è íàêîíåö õî÷åøü ñêàçàòü ÏÎÊÀ :).. ìîæåò òàê è åñòü

ñàì ñäåëàë îøèáêó :)
Death HAS found you... íî óæå ÷åòî íå çâó÷èò..
so give up the fight
now it will kill you
and get satisfied
êîðî÷å êàêòî òàê.. íàäåþñü êòîíèáóäü åùå ïîìîæåò
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 16:15 



Äà êàêàÿ òàì åùå ñìåðòü... ×òî,áîëüøå íå î ÷åì ïåòü â 13 ëåò?! :)
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 16:28 
cringecore
revival

íå-íå, Òèõîí, â 13 òîëüêî ïðî ñìåðòü è àööêàâà ñîòîíó :moral:

à, èùùî ïðî íåñ÷àòíóþ ëþáîôôü
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 16:38 

ãèòàðà.âîêàë

Íîðìàëüíî, ñëîâà ïðàâäà ïî ðóññêè ðàññòàâèë, åñëè ÷å - ñðàçó ïîéìóò ÷òî ñî÷èíÿë íå àíãëîãîâîðÿùèé àâòîð...
Òåìà òîæå òðó - ïîêðàéíåé ìåðå ñïàñàåò ýçîòåðè÷åñêèé îïòèìèçì. À, ìîë, òû óìðåøü - ýòî íîðìàëüíî. ß ñêàæó òàì òå Ïîêà è óñå. Ïîíðàâèëîñü ïðî òî, ÷òî ñìåðòü äîëæíà óäîâëåòâîðèòü! Ôèëîñîôè÷íî!
Çäåñü íàäî ïîäóìàòü:
At last i can
Just say:"Godbye"
Íàïðèìåð:
At last i just
may say:"Godbye"
èëè
And in the End
I'll say goodbay!
Îïÿòü æå ÷òî á áîëåå àíãëèñêî çâó÷àëî.
Êîðî÷å, ôàíåðó äàâàé!
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 17:14 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã


>I can't help you.
>So, you will die.
>At last i can
>Just say:"Godbye"

I can't help you
and thus you will die
all I can do is
say mere "goodbye"

ïîìîãàòü âñåãäà ëåã÷å ÷åì ñàìîìó ñäåëàòü :).. âñåãäà ñîâåò÷èêîâ êó÷à à äåëàåò 1.. :)
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 22.10.2009 18:16 



êàêáý äà) ìóçîí ôñòóäèþ - èíòåðåñíî. ÿ ô13 èãðàë òîêà êàâåðà íà ñåêòð ãàçà)))
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 23.10.2009 09:44 



Êàê çäîðîâî ) ß óæå ïî íàçâàíèþ òåìû çíàë, ÷üè ïîñòû çäåñü òî÷íî áóäóò ) È äåéñòâèòåëüíî, âñå êàëåêè â îäíîì ôëàêîíå )
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 23.10.2009 10:22 
ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ


>ß óæå ïî íàçâàíèþ òåìû çíàë, ÷üè ïîñòû çäåñü òî÷íî áóäóò ) È äåéñòâèòåëüíî, âñå êàëåêè â îäíîì ôëàêîíå )
ýòî ó òÿ òàêàÿ ìàíåðà - ñî ìíîãèìè ñâûñîêà ðàçãîâàðèâàòü? :sol:
è îáÿçàòåëüíî íàäî îòïèñàòüñÿ: ÿ çíàë, è ïðèøåë, ÷òîáû ñêàçàòü, íî ðàçãîâàðèâàòü ñ âàìè íå î ÷åì, íî ñêàçàòü áûë îáÿçàí.
åùå çàáûë ñìàéë "ñèìïñîí ïðèêðûâàåò ëè÷èêî" :sol:
http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 23.10.2009 10:35 



Ïðèâåò, Ðîáèíãóä, çàùèòíåã ñëàáûõ è óãíåòåííûõ )
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 23.10.2009 10:50 



Áûë íà âîêàëèñòàõ îäèí òàêîé "êðóòîé" ñàíèòàð îáùåñòâà....
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 23.10.2009 10:51 
ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ


>Áûë íà âîêàëèñòàõ îäèí òàêîé "êðóòîé" ñàíèòàð îáùåñòâà....
÷òî ñ íèì ñäåëàëè? :-(
http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 23.10.2009 11:08 



>Áûë íà âîêàëèñòàõ îäèí òàêîé "êðóòîé" ñàíèòàð îáùåñòâà....
÷òî ñ íèì ñäåëàëè?



Íàâåðíîå,îáðåçàëè-êàê ýòî õàìüå èç èåðóñàëèìà... :)
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 23.10.2009 11:19 
Èæåâñê
Ýëåêòðîãèòàðà Samick SV-41B/DLS

Âñåì áèã ñïñ çà êîììåíòû. Òåêñò èñïðàâëþ è ïîçæå âûëîæó ìóçûêó.

Óðîäåö T.
Äà êàêàÿ òàì åùå ñìåðòü... ×òî,áîëüøå íå î ÷åì ïåòü â 13 ëåò?!


Âèäåòå ëè, ÿ ïåðåñëóøàëñî BlackSabbath, Metallica, MeagaDeath è ò.ä. :)

iveriver
à, èùùî ïðî íåñ÷àòíóþ ëþáîôôü

Óæå åñòü))) Òîêî ïîêà áåç ìóçûêè))) Íàçâàíèå "Never Let You"
:)
Someone calls JasTarD with broken life and soul...
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 23.10.2009 13:37 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã


óäà÷è ÷óâàê!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
stay brutal!
è ÷òîáû äîæèë äî 666 ëåò ïîíÿë?.. ÿ ïðîâåðþ:)
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 23.10.2009 13:42 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã


>Êàê çäîðîâî ) ß óæå ïî íàçâàíèþ òåìû çíàë, ÷üè ïîñòû çäåñü òî÷íî áóäóò ) È äåéñòâèòåëüíî, âñå êàëåêè â îäíîì ôëàêîíå )

ñêîëüêî ðàäîñòè òî!! :) äà ìû çäåñü :) çàõîäè.. íîãè òîëüêî âûòðè
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 24.10.2009 01:12 
Ìèíñê
äóäêî

>à, èùùî ïðî íåñ÷àòíóþ ëþáîôôü
>Óæå åñòü))) Òîêî ïîêà áåç ìóçûêè))) Íàçâàíèå "Never Let You"

"Never let you go"?
Áèëàí, òû?
Åñòü ëè æèçíü ïåðåä ñìåðòüþ?
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 28.10.2009 16:02 
Èæåâñê
Ýëåêòðîãèòàðà Samick SV-41B/DLS

"Never let you go"?
Íåò. Íå Never Let you go, à never let you.
Someone calls JasTarD with broken life and soul...
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Òåìà: Re: Death Is Here
Âðåìÿ: 28.10.2009 16:08 



>Áûë íà âîêàëèñòàõ îäèí òàêîé "êðóòîé" ñàíèòàð îáùåñòâà....
÷òî ñ íèì ñäåëàëè?


Âûïèë éàä è ïåðåñìîòðåë ñâî¸ îòíîøåíèå ê ñîáåñåäíèêàì ;-)
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!