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Òåìà: Êòî ðàçáèðàåòñÿ â àíãëèéñêîé ãðàììàòèêå?
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 21:01 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
êëàâèøè Roland Juno G

Ïîìîãèòå: ãðàìîòíî ëè ñîñòàâëåí òåêñò?:

The Best World

1. Show me the best world!
By shade of the pas, shade of doubt
Closing my eyes
You will compliment with his dreams.

2. I know that I am sinful
I know, it is my madness
That was - to return unreal
It is a mystery of wilderness.

3. I want to fly away in darkness,
To choir of Angels to heed an ear
I want to fly away in darkness, 2 ðàçà
That not to see a brilliant lie!

4. From the Scarlet lips, but cold, as snow
Already not to take off a kiss
I want from you to flow out
Memory requires it now, it now

5. Show me the best world!
So easily! not leave me
Fingers my was forged by led-
I - only shade itself

6. I am free, I in that my sin
Loneliness is the best medicine
You will come and will go away again
Not dreaming forever to remain
Íå âñ¸ òî ìóçûêà , ÷òî èãðàåò
http://www.ultramir.narod.ru
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ðàçáèðàåòñÿ â àíãëèéñêîé ãðàììàòèêå?
Âðåìÿ: 11.10.2009 12:15 
ìîñêâà
ãîëîñ

î-îó.. Alexeys,

äà òóò ëÿï íà ëÿïå :17:
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ðàçáèðàåòñÿ â àíãëèéñêîé ãðàììàòèêå?
Âðåìÿ: 11.10.2009 20:13 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
êëàâèøè Roland Juno G

Íàñòèø, ïîäêîððåêòèðóåòå? :)
Íå âñ¸ òî ìóçûêà , ÷òî èãðàåò
http://www.ultramir.narod.ru
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Êòî ðàçáèðàåòñÿ â àíãëèéñêîé ãðàììàòèêå?
Âðåìÿ: 11.10.2009 20:17 
ìîñêâà
ãîëîñ

ííåå.. ÿ â ýòîì íå ñèëüíà.
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ðàçáèðàåòñÿ â àíãëèéñêîé ãðàììàòèêå?
Âðåìÿ: 11.10.2009 20:46 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


À çà÷åì êîððåêòèðîâàòü?
Íàøà ïóáëèêà âñå ðàâíî íè÷åãî íå ïîéìåò. :)
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Êòî ðàçáèðàåòñÿ â àíãëèéñêîé ãðàììàòèêå?
Âðåìÿ: 11.10.2009 20:53 



Î, à ÿ ïî íåìåöêè çíàþ....êàê ýòî...Àààà âîò - äüåôôî÷êà òàôôàé)))
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ðàçáèðàåòñÿ â àíãëèéñêîé ãðàììàòèêå?
Âðåìÿ: 11.10.2009 21:00 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


>Ïîìîãèòå: ãðàìîòíî ëè ñîñòàâëåí òåêñò?:
Ëó÷øå ïîïðîñè ïåðåäåëàòü òåêñò íà ðóññêèé. :idea2:
(Êñòàòè, ãäå ìîæíî ïîñëóøàòü ïåñíþ?)
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Êòî ðàçáèðàåòñÿ â àíãëèéñêîé ãðàììàòèêå?
Âðåìÿ: 17.11.2009 02:02 



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