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Òåìà: Power of money
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In outdoor I’m drived away Besides go out I don’t know way But you did this is over miss All decides that it is your caprice But we don’t about peace I go inside and I don’t care You know where I and I prepare If in the brothel everyday I will forget you, baby, what I may Everything I can to pray. But don’t say lie and be cunning all time I have some money and I feel so fine. Chorus: What it is dirt, what it is rule, And what a pleasant with money be fool So ####ing style and to lose control Be who you are and to unmask from all. Everywhere all things can buy, In hearts is frost, in eyes is fire I have get, what I want have I can say to you: “Be have yourself!” Behind this case I’m sound and self I’m choosing her, she doesn’t vex I’m choosing her, she likes a sex. She is a master in the bed I’m going home I’m very glad All my bills is being paid. But don’t say lie and be cunning all time I have some money and I feel so fine. Chorus: What it is dirt, what it is rule, And what a pleasant with money be fool So ####ing style and to lose control Be who you are and to unmask from all. |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 13:58 |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 14:34 |
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Ñïá òåêñò
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×òî áû ýòî ìîãëî çíà÷èòü? | |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 15:17 |
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Õîòåëîñü áû, òàê ñêàçàòü, â îáùèõ ÷åðòàõ ïîíÿòü ÷åãî âû õîòèòå? | |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 15:35 |
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>×òî áû ýòî ìîãëî çíà÷èòü? Ýòî ìîãëî áû çíà÷èòü òîëüêî îäíî... È îíî âûçûâàåò ñìåñü óæàñà ñ ðâîòíûì ýôôåêòîì... |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 15:50 |
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>Õîòåëîñü áû, òàê ñêàçàòü, â îáùèõ ÷åðòàõ ïîíÿòü ÷åãî âû õîòèòå? Íàäåþñü, ÷òî íàìåðåíèÿ ó íåãî, íå ñìîòðÿ íè íà ÷òî, äîáðûå... |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 15:50 |
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Ñïá òåêñò
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"Ýòî ìîãëî áû çíà÷èòü òîëüêî îäíî... È îíî âûçûâàåò ñìåñü óæàñà ñ ðâîòíûì ýôôåêòîì..." Î÷åíü êîíñòðóêòèâíî...èäè â òóàëåò-ïóñòü íåìíîãî ïîòîøíèò.ïðîñóøèøü øòàíû îò ýòîãî "óæàñà",à ïîòîì ìîæåøü âíÿòíî íàïèñàòü ÷òî èìåííî òåáå íå íðàâèòñÿ. |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 15:53 |
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Ñïá òåêñò
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"Õîòåëîñü áû, òàê ñêàçàòü, â îáùèõ ÷åðòàõ ïîíÿòü ÷åãî âû õîòèòå?" Èíòåðåñíî, ÷òî ÿ åùå ìîãó õîòåòü ñ òåêñòîì íà ôîðóìå òåêñòîâèêîâ?Òðèáüþòû íèêòî åùå ïî-ìîåìó íå çàïðåùàë.Çäåñü âîîáùå êòî-íèáóäü ìîæåò ïî äåëó íàïèñàòü,à íå èçâåðãàòü èç ñåáÿ ÿçâèòåëüíûå èçðå÷åíèÿ? Ýòî ôîðóì èëè îáñåðàëîâêà? |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 15:55 |
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>Ýòî ôîðóì èëè îáñåðàëîâêà? Ýòî êàãáû âñå ñðàçó ïëþñ ñàóíà. 
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 15:56 |
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>"Ýòî ìîãëî áû çíà÷èòü òîëüêî îäíî... È îíî âûçûâàåò ñìåñü óæàñà ñ ðâîòíûì ýôôåêòîì..." > >Î÷åíü êîíñòðóêòèâíî...èäè â òóàëåò-ïóñòü íåìíîãî ïîòîøíèò.ïðîñóøèøü øòàíû îò ýòîãî "óæàñà",à ïîòîì ìîæåøü âíÿòíî íàïèñàòü ÷òî èìåííî òåáå íå íðàâèòñÿ. Âî èíòóðèñò äà¸ò)) |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 15:58 |
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Ñïá òåêñò
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"Ýòî êàãáû âñå ñðàçó ïëþñ ñàóíà" Îíî è âèäíî!Ñëîâî ïåñíÿ è òâîð÷åñòâî çäåñü óïîòðåáëÿòü íåêîððåêòíî. Çàòî "ô òîïêó","êðàñàâ÷åã" ýòî âåðõ âàøåãî ìàñòåðñòâà? |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
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>Íàäåþñü, ÷òî íàìåðåíèÿ ó íåãî, íå ñìîòðÿ íè íà ÷òî, äîáðûå... Êåìñêóþ âîëîñòü íå òðåáóåò?)) |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 16:06 |
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>Îíî è âèäíî!Ñëîâî ïåñíÿ è òâîð÷åñòâî çäåñü óïîòðåáëÿòü íåêîððåêòíî. >Çàòî "ô òîïêó","êðàñàâ÷åã" ýòî âåðõ âàøåãî ìàñòåðñòâà? Ñêàæè ÷åñòíî, òåáÿ Äàðåÿ Íîâåêîâà ïðèñëàëà? |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 16:09 |
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>>Íàäåþñü, ÷òî íàìåðåíèÿ ó íåãî, íå ñìîòðÿ íè íà ÷òî, äîáðûå... >Êåìñêóþ âîëîñòü íå òðåáóåò?)) Ïîêà, âðîäå, íåò... íî îëèðóïü ñíà÷àëà òîæå íè÷åãî íå òðåáîâàë, êðîìå ëþáâè... |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 16:12 |
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Ñïá òåêñò
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Âû,êîíå÷íî,èçâèíèòå,íî ÿ äóìàë îá ýòîì ôîðóìå êóäà áîëåå ëó÷øå, ÷åì îí åñòü íà ñàìîì äåë###ûäëî çäåñü îòìåííîå!Íàïîìèíàåò çàìûçãàííûé ÷àò îòìîðîçêîâ è ìàëîëåòîê.íè÷åãî êðîìå æåë÷è è ñîðòèðíîãî þìîðà ñî ñòîðîíû òàê íàçûâàåìûõ êðèòèêîâ íà ôîðóìå íåò.Æåëàþ óñïåõîâ Âàì â âàøåì íåëåãêîì äåëå. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 16:14 |
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ñèíòåçàòîð “Ñîëîâóøêà” 
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ïîïóñòèñü, áðàòþíü | |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
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Êàê òû òàì äóìàë - ýòî òâîå ëè÷íîå äåëî. Çäåñü íèêòî íå îáÿçàí òåáÿ èíôîðìàöèîííî îáñëóæèâàòü. Åñëè ìåñòíûé êîíòèíãåíò çàáèë áîëò íà òâîé òåêñò - òàê ÷òî æ ïîäåëàòü... íó íå õî÷åò îí îáñóæäàòü ðàáîòó ñòàéëóñà. Íàäîåëî åìó.  ïðèíöèïå, ìîçãîâ äîëæíî áûëî áû õâàòèòü ïîíÿòü, ÷òî íà ðóññêîÿçû÷íîì ôîðóìå àóäèòîðèÿ ó àíãëèéñêîãî òåêñòà ìèíèìàëüíà. Íî åñëè ìîçãîâ íå õâàòàåò - òîæå òâîå äåëî, íèêòî íå â îáèäå, íîðìû íå óñòàíîâëåíû.  äîáðûé ïóòü, ñêàòåðòüþ ïî æîïå. Ïîïðîáóé âûëîæèòü òåêñò íà ñàéòå ëþáèòåëåé ìàêðàìå. |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 16:23 |
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Ñïá òåêñò
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Óâàæàåìûå ìîäåðàòîðû.Óäàëèòå òîãäà ìîé àêêàóíò è âñå îòêðûòûå òåìû,ñïàñèáî! | |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
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>Çàòî "ô òîïêó","êðàñàâ÷åã" ýòî âåðõ âàøåãî ìàñòåðñòâà? Êàê ÷åëîâåê ïî íàòóðå íå çëîáëèâûé è èíîãäà ñëîâîîõîòëèâûé âûðàæó ñâî¸ ìíåíèå. ×òîáû îöåíèòü òåêñò íàïèñàííûé íîñèòåëåì êîòîðîãî îöåíùèê íå ÿâëÿåòñÿ, ìàëî ïðîñòî çíàòü, ïóñòü äàæå õîðîøî, ÿçûê. Åãî íàäî ÷óâñòâîâàòü. Çíàòü âñå íþàíñû è îáîðîòû, ÷òîáû îïðåäåëèòü ïîýòè÷åñêóþ öåííîñòü. Íó íàïðèìåð, ÷èòàÿ Øåêñïèðà íà ðóññêîì, ìû ÷èòàåì óæå íå Øåêñïèðà, à Ïàñòåðíàêà, êîòîðûé åãî ïåðåâ¸ë. Çàìåòü, ñäåëàë íå äîñëîâíûé ïåðåâîä, à ïîýòè÷åñêèé. Ëè÷íî ÿ ñïîñîáåí îöåíèòü, ñäåëàâ ïåðåâîä, ëèøü òåìó. Ïîýòè÷åñêóþ æå ïðàâèëüíîñòü èçëîæåíèÿ, óâû... È ìíå êàæåòñÿ, ÷òî íà ýòîì ôîðóìå î÷åíü íåìíîãî ñïåöîâ èìåþùèõ æåëàíèå îöåíèâàòü ýòîò òåêñò ïî ýòîìó êðèòåðèþ. À ïî òåìå ÿ ñêàæó. Ïî-ìîåìó íè÷åãî èíòåðåñíîãî...äàæå ÿ áû ñêàçàë - õðåíü. |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
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>Óâàæàåìûå ìîäåðàòîðû.Óäàëèòå òîãäà ìîé àêêàóíò è âñå îòêðûòûå òåìû,ñïàñèáî! Óâàæàåìûé ïîëüçîâàòåëü. Àêêàóíòû ïîëüçîâàòåëåé íå óäàëÿþòñÿ. Åñëè âû íå áóäåòå çàõîäèòü íà ôîðóì íà ïðîòÿæåíèè ïîëóãîäà, âàø àêêàóíò àâòîìàòè÷åñêè çàêðîåòñÿ. Íèêòî ñïåöèàëüíî åáàòüñÿ íàä ýòèì íå áóäåò. Ùàñëèâàâà âàì ïóòè. Ñïàñèáî. Óâàæàåìûé ìîäåðàòîð. |
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
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>Ýòî ôîðóì èëè îáñåðàëîâêà? Ïîñëå íåîäíîêðàòíûõ ïðåäóïðåæäåíèé ìîäåðàòîðà ëåíòÿþ, ÷òîáû íå äîïóñêàë íåêîððåêòíûõ âûñêàçûâàíèé, íåãàòèâíî îòðàæàþùèõ óìñòâåííûå ñïîñîáíîñòè è ïëîäû òðóäà íåîôèòîâ, ýòî ïðåäåëüíî êîððåêòíûé, óòîí÷åííûé è âîçâûøåííûé ôîðóì ïîýòîâ-ïåñåííèêîâ. Èäè íà### îòñþäà. |
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Ïîñëå òîãî, êàê àìóð óøåë ïîïèñàòü çà óãîë, íåîáõîäèìîñòü â èãðå ó êëîóíà èñ÷åçëà..ñóõóì
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Òåìà: Re: Power of money
Âðåìÿ: 10.10.2009 20:51 |
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