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Òåìà: Torero
Âðåìÿ: 08.10.2009 00:15 |
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Ñïá òåêñò 
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TORERO Hey, torero a life like instant The trumpet call is being rung again Hey, torero, you’re have talent Your fear is a very small You’re keeping by God You’re spearing by Death. C: White shawl of sky You are mustn’t be shy Cry by desperate- bull it’s alive object While there is stand howl You’re winning it all Let so nobody knows that in your soul correct Hey, torero you are widow’s son Your dress is red it is sadly sward Hey, torero you will be killed By the song of watch it’s no too bad. You’re keeping by God You’re keeping by Death. C: White shawl of sky You are mustn’t be shy Cry by desperate- bull it’s alive object Since there is howl You’re winning it all Let so nobody knows that in your soul correct |
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Òåìà: Re: Torero
Âðåìÿ: 08.10.2009 00:34 |
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Ñïá òåêñò
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Âîçìîæíî ïîëó÷èëîñü ñëèøêîì...äîñëîâíî?ìîæåò íå ëèòåðàòóðíî? | |
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Òåìà: Re: Torero
Âðåìÿ: 08.10.2009 21:31 |
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ñèíòåçàòîð “Ñîëîâóøêà” 
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âû ïåðâûé ÷åëîâåê íà ìîåé ïàìÿòè, ïåðåâîäÿùèé àðèþ. ðåñïåêòóëè, ÷î. |
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Òåìà: Re: Torero
Âðåìÿ: 08.10.2009 23:27 |
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Ñïá òåêñò
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Ñïàñèáî,íî íà ñàìîì äåëå óæå ñóùåñòâóþò ïàðó òðèáüþòîâ:
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Òåìà: Re: Torero
Âðåìÿ: 08.10.2009 23:37 |
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Ñïá òåêñò
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èçâèíÿéòå âîò çäåñü åñòü îäèí: |
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Òåìà: Re: Torero
Âðåìÿ: 08.10.2009 23:40 |
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ñèíòåçàòîð “Ñîëîâóøêà”
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îáÿçàòåëüíî ïîñëóøàþ. ðàäóåò, ÷òî êòî-òî åùå ñëóøàåò êëàññè÷åñêèé ìåòàë, à íå ðåï ñ ïîïñîé. |
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Òåìà: Re: Torero
Âðåìÿ: 08.10.2009 23:50 |
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Ñïá òåêñò
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ß ïåðåâåë â äîñòàòî÷íîì êîëè÷åñòâå òåêñòîâ,è òåïåðü íå çíàþ ÷òî ñ íèìè äåëàòü,íàéòè áû ãðóïïó êîòîðàÿ ñìîãëà ñïåòü,áûëî áû íåïëîõî.Òåì áîëåå ÷òî ìóçûêó ïèñàòü íå íàäî. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Torero
Âðåìÿ: 09.10.2009 06:07 |
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ììì... Àâòîð, âèäèòå ëè, ïîêà Âû óïîòðåáëÿåòå çàìûñëîâàòûå êîíñòðóêöèè òèïà "’re have" èëè "are mustn’t be", î ëèòåðàòóðíîñòè ãîâîðèòü ðàíîâàòî. Òóò áû ãðàìîòíîñòü ïðîêà÷àòü, ñ îñîáûì óïîðîì íà ãëàãîëû. Èñêðåííå æåëàþ óñïåõîâ. | |
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