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Òåìà: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2009 03:44 |
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Ìîñêâà íåðâû 
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Ñîáñòâåííî, ðåøèë âûëîæèòü ñâîè íåòëåíêè) Â îñíîâíîì - òåêñòû íà ïåñíè ìîåé ãðóïïû, ...smile - íàïèñàíà íà ìóçûêó ãðàíæ-êîëëåêòèâà Fishy Daze, êîòîðûé óæå íå ñóùåñòâóåò. Äëÿ çàòðàâêè, íàèâíûé äåòñêèé ñòèøîê: For the girl... Love and kisses, sounds of ocean, Strings of fire I present you. Be my first and final option, Be my honeysweet ambrosia... May the ocean salty drops, Made for you to see your path, Shine as brightest star on sky. With no tears and crying thus... Grateful silence of my empty Dumb/numb life will soon be broken As you gracefully aproach me And therefore I'll be awoken... Îñòàëüíîå ñìîòðèì çäåñü: |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2009 13:55 |
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ìñê\õìê
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ó âàñ, ïðîñòèòå, ïî àíãåëüñêîìó êàêàÿ îöåíêà áûëà? | |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2009 19:29 |
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deWulf, à ó âàñ? ×òî çà íåñêðîìíûå âîïðîñû? Åñëè åñòü îøèáêè - ïèøèòå, ÿ êðèòèêå òîëüêî ðàä. Ñîáñòâåííî, âûëîæèë íå õâàñòàòüñÿ, à ïîñëóøàòü ìíåíèÿ. Âîò òîëüêî â÷èòûâàòüñÿ â î÷åðåäíóþ ïàòåòè÷íóþ ðå÷ü ïðî äåãðàäàöèþ îáðàçîâàíèÿ â ñîâðåìåííîé Ðîññèè ó ìåíÿ æåëàíèÿ íåò... |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2009 20:06 |
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À ÷òî ó ìåíÿ? ..Âû íàïîðîëè ñ ãðàììàòèêîé, Low_Pressure.. È äåãðàäàöèÿ îáðàçîâàíèÿ òóò ñîâåðøåííî íå ïðè ÷åì. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2009 20:27 |
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Åñëè áû âû ñóçèëè êðóã ïîèñêà äî ïðåäëîæåíèÿ, áûëî áû ãîðàçäî ïðîùå ýòè îøèáêè íàéòè è èñïðàâèòü... | |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2009 20:32 |
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ÿ íåñêðîìåí è ñêëîíåí ê ïàòåòè÷íûì ðå÷àì. Ïðåæäå âñåãî ïðîâåðüòå ïîðÿäîê ñëîâ â ïðåäëîæåíèÿõ, åñëè ýòî êîíå÷íî íå ìàãèñòðîì Éîäîé äîëæíî èñïîëíÿòüñÿ. Óäà÷è âàì. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2009 20:43 |
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Ãì, îðèåíòèðîâàëñÿ íà Ýäãàðà Ïî ñ åãî "éîäîîáðàçíûì" Âîðîíîì: Äà, äî íåãî ìíå êàê äî ëóíû, íî ÿ è íå ïðåòåíäóþ íà åãî ëàâðû. Òàê ÷òî äàííûé ïîðÿäîê ñëîâ îòíþäü íå îò íåçíàíèÿ ãðàììàòèêè. |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2009 20:46 |
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Ñïàñèáî, è âàì âñåãî íàèëó÷øåãî. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
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Òîãäà ïðèáåéòå ñåáå íà ñïèíó ïîÿñíèòåëüíóþ òàáëè÷êó, ÷òîáû íå ââîäèòü íèêîãî â çàáëóæäåíèå. Ïðîñòèòå, ÿ åäêèé ñåãîäíÿ. Õîðîøåãî âå÷åðà. |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2009 20:49 |
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Ñïàñèáî, îáÿçàòåëüíî ïðèáüþ) È âàì íå ñêó÷àòü) | |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2009 02:07 |
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Íîðìàëüíî âñ¸ ñ ïîðÿäêîì ñëîâ, îøèáêè òóò: Shine as brightest star on sky. Íàäî: Shine as _the_ brightest star _in the_ sky À âîîáùå õîðîøî 
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2009 15:21 |
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 ðèôìîøàã íå óêëàäûâàåòñÿ, à òàê - ñîãëàñåí) Íó õîòü êîìó-òî ïîíðàâèëîñü) |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2009 18:46 |
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>Love and kisses, sounds of ocean, >Strings of fire I present you. >Be my first and final option, >Be my honeysweet ambrosia... êðóòî, ìíå òóò âñå ïîíÿòíî ñ ìîèì øêîëüíûì àíãëèéñêèì ëþáîâü è ïîöåëóè, çâóêè îêåàíà Îãíåííûå ñòðèíãè, ÿ ïðåäñòàâëÿþ òåáÿ Áóäü ìîåé ïåðâîé è ïîñëåäíåé îïöèåé Áóäü ìîåé ñëàäêîìåäîâîé àìáðîçèåé. ïåðåâîäèë áåç ñëîâàðÿ, êñòàòè 
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http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2009 20:27 |
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>ïåðåâîäèë áåç ñëîâàðÿ, êñòàòè Â ñëåäóþùèé ðàç ëó÷øå èì âîñïîëüçîâàòüñÿ... |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2009 22:52 |
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>ïåðåâîäèë áåç ñëîâàðÿ, êñòàòè Ìàëàööà... 
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2009 11:58 |
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çäåñü ðîæäàþòñÿ ïåñíè |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñòû (íà àíãëèéñêîì)
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2009 22:43 |
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>> >ïåðåâîäèë áåç ñëîâàðÿ, êñòàòè Â ñëåäóþùèé ðàç ëó÷øå èì âîñïîëüçîâàòüñÿ... È âïðàâäó =))) Ñïàñèáî ïîñìåÿëàñü ñ îðèãèíàëüíîãî ïåðåâîäà=) |
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