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Òåìà: I am thinking of you
Âðåìÿ: 16.12.2008 13:53 
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I am thinking of you

Again there's the night till the dawn
& me in the kitchen alone
Expressing in song my own view.
The moon is gazing with its squinting light,
And I am deprived of my sleeping at night,
'Cause I am thinking of you.
I'm enticed away by mysterious eyes
& I'm unfamiliar with most of your world,
Which I would so much love to know.
To hear your joyful laughter,
With you I'd consent to a sin for a while
With you feel asleep & awoke.

You know I am thinking of you,
Everything else now is no matter to me
You know I am thinking of you!
You know...

An alarm and a sandwich in the gloomy morning,
The metro station the subway I'm going,
The next one's the time for me to get off...
with some tea is what night consists of
My fingers on strings,my heart filled with grief
And no one is here to tell this in brief.

You know I am thinking of you,
The rest now seems a trifle to me
You know I am thinking of you!
You know...

* * *
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Òåìà: Re: I am thinking of you
Âðåìÿ: 16.12.2008 14:24 
charybdis
अ ग ा ध

Again there's the night till the dawn

î øüîðä, è ñíîâà çäåñü íîñù äî ðàññâåòà...à øî ãèäå-òî òàì áûâàåò ïî äðóãîìó?

& me in the kitchen alone

ÿ íå âåëèêèé çíàòîê àãëûöêîãî, íî òàêîå óïîòðåáëåíèå "ìå" - ýòî àíàëîã íàøåãî "ìîÿ". ò.å. è ìîÿ íà êóõíå îäíà (ñèäèò).


Expressing in song my own view.

your view on what?

îñòàëüíîå ðàçáèðàòü âëîì.

à âàùå áàíàëüíî äî óæîñà.
Çàòêíèñü è ãîðè!
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Òåìà: Re: I am thinking of you
Âðåìÿ: 16.12.2008 16:25 
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Êîíå÷íî áàíàëüíî! Íî ðàçâå "ÿ òåáÿ ëþáëþ" - íå áàíàëüíî?.. :-)
Ïðîñòî ýòî ðàííÿÿ ïåñíÿ, ïðè÷åì, êàê ìíîãèì êàæåòñÿ, óäà÷íàÿ (â ïëàíå ìóçûêè). Çâó÷èò î÷åíü äàæå íåïëîõî.

Âîò òåêñò:

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Îïÿòü íàñòóïèëà íî÷ü
È ÿ íà êóõíå îäèí -
Ïîþ ñàì ñåáå.
Ïðèùóðèâøèñü ñìîòðèò ëóíà,
ß ñíîâà îñòàëñÿ áåç ñíà -
Äóìàþ î òåáå.

Íåâåäîìîé ïðåëåñòüþ ãëàç ÿ âëåêîì,
Òâîé ìèð ìíå ïî÷òè íå çíàêîì,
À òàê áû õîòåëîñü óçíàòü;
Ñëóøàòü òâîé ðàäîñòíûé ñìåõ,
Ñ òîáîé ñîãëàøàòüñÿ íà ãðåõ,
Ñ òîáîé çàñûïàòü è âñòàâàòü...

Çíàåøü, ÿ äóìàþ î òåáå,
Âñå îñòàëüíîå ñåé÷àñ äëÿ ìåíÿ - ïóñòÿê!
Çíàåøü, ÿ äóìàþ î òåáå!
Çíàåøü...

Óòðîì - áóäèëüíèê è áóòåðáðîä,
Ìåòðî, ñòàíöèÿ, âîò ïåðåõîä,
Íà ñëåäóþùåé ìíå âûõîäèòü.
Íî÷üþ ñíîâà - ãèòàðà è ÷àé,
Íà ñòðóíàõ ïàëüöû, íà ñåðäöå ïå÷àëü
È íå ñ êåì ïîãîâîðèòü.


Çíàåøü, ÿ äóìàþ î òåáå,
Âñå îñòàëüíîå ñåé÷àñ äëÿ ìåíÿ - ïóñòÿê!
Çíàåøü, ÿ äóìàþ î òåáå!
Çíàåøü...

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Òåìà: Re: I am thinking of you
Âðåìÿ: 17.12.2008 00:51 
Èâàíîâî
ãèòàðà

Ñ÷èòàþ, ÷òî ïðàâèëüíåå áóäåò
I am thinking for you.
IbanezRG321,IolanaDiamant,KORG AX5G,ALESIS HR-16,YAMAHA DGX-200,ESI Juli@
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Òåìà: Re: I am thinking of you
Âðåìÿ: 17.12.2008 01:22 
Mindrock



È êàê äîëãî òû ìîæåøü òàê ñ÷èòàòü?. :-)
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Òåìà: Re: I am thinking of you
Âðåìÿ: 17.12.2008 02:45 
Èâàíîâî
ãèòàðà

È êàê äîëãî òû ìîæåøü òàê ñ÷èòàòü?. :)
ýòî óñòîé÷èâîå âûðàæåíèå: I am thinking for you.

èëè I am thinking about you(íî ýòî â ðèôôìó íå âïèñûâàåòñÿ, õîòÿ ïðè æåëàíèè ìîæíî âïèñàòü ÷òî óãîäíî êóäà óãîäíî)

òû æå íàïèñàë, ÷òî ýòà ôðàçà äîëæíà îçíà÷àòü "ÿ äóìàþ î òåáå".

ÈÌÕÎ
IbanezRG321,IolanaDiamant,KORG AX5G,ALESIS HR-16,YAMAHA DGX-200,ESI Juli@
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Òåìà: Re: I am thinking of you
Âðåìÿ: 17.12.2008 12:41 



>I am thinking about you

"Ëîíäîíáèò" :D
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Òåìà: Re: I am thinking of you
Âðåìÿ: 17.12.2008 18:17 
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íýâðû

2maxsharov: Ýò îíà íà ðóññêîì òàê çâó÷èò. Ê ïðèìåðó - ìû âåäü íå ãîâîðèì "óïàë â ëþáîâü", à ãîâîðèì "âëþáèëñÿ"...
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!