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Àâòîð
Òåìà: Íåíàâèæó ÿ òåáÿ (êàâåð íà ïåñíþ Thoughtless)
Âðåìÿ: 01.12.2008 13:36 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


Î÷åðåäíîé ýêñïåðèìåíò.
Êàâåð íà ïåñíþ Thoughtless. Èñïîëíÿëàñü ãðóïïàìè Korn è Evanescence.
Ïîñòàðàëñÿ ïåðåâåñòè áëèçêî ê òåêñòó.

Îñíîâíîé âîïðîñ: íàñêîëüêî àäåêâàòíî óäàëîñü ïåðåäàòü ñìûñë è èíòîíàöèþ?
(Çäåñü äîëæíû áûòü äâà-òðè ÷åëîâåêà, õîðîøî çíàþùèå àíãëèéñêèé.)


Òû â ãðÿçü âòîïòàë ìîè ìå÷òû,
Íåò òåáå ïðîùåíüÿ, íèêîãäà.
Ïîäàâèòü ìåíÿ òàê õî÷åøü òû,
ß òåáÿ ñïóùó íà çåìëþ íàâñåãäà.

Çà÷åì ñìååøüñÿ ñíîâà êàê äóðíîé,
Êàêîãî ÷åðòà ïîñòóïàåøü òàê ñî ìíîé?
Çàòêíåøü òû ñêîðî ñâîé ãðÿçíûé ðîò,
Ðåøèë íàåõàòü íà ìåíÿ òû, èäèîò?

Äà, íåíàâèæó ÿ òåáÿ,
Áîëüøå äëÿ ìåíÿ
Íè÷åãî íå çíà÷èøü,
ß îïóùó òåáÿ íà äíî,
Ìíå óæ âñå ðàâíî,
Òû åùå ïîïëà÷åøü!!!


Thumbing through the pages of my fantasies
Pushing all the mercy down, down, down
wanna see you try to take a swing at me
Come on, gonna put you on the ground, ground, ground

Why are you trying to make fun of me?
You think it's funny? What the #### you think it's doing to me?
You take your turn lashing out at me
I want you crying with your dirty ass in front of me

Yeah, All of my hate cannot be bound 1:26
I will not be drowned
by your thoughtless scheming
So you can try to tear me down
Beat me to the ground
I will see you screaming
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Íåíàâèæó ÿ òåáÿ (êàâåð íà ïåñíþ Thoughtless)
Âðåìÿ: 01.12.2008 19:24 
äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò
áðÿêè, êðèêè

Êàê ïåðåâîä íîðìàëüíî. (èç ýòîãî ãîâíà êîíôåòêó ñäåëàòü òðóäíî)

â êóïëåòå "Çà÷åì ñìååøüñÿ ñíîâà êàê äóðíîé" âðîäå êàê ñëîãîâ íå õâàòàåò.
Ïîäðîáíåå:

You think it's funny? What the #### you think it's doing to me?
15 ñëîãîâ

Êàêîãî ÷åðòà ïîñòóïàåøü òàê ñî ìíîé?
11 ñëîãîâ

Çàòêíåøü òû ñêîðî ñâîé ãðÿçíûé ðîò,
êàê áû ñëîãà íå õâàòàåò ïîñëå Ñêîðî.

Ðåøèë íàåõàòü íà ìåíÿ òû, èäèîò?
òîæå íå õâàòàåò ñëîãîâ

íåõâàòêà ñëîãîâ ëîìàåò ðèòìè÷åñêèé ðèñóíîê.

Âîîáùå íå îæèäàë, ÷òî Ýâàíåññåíñ ïîåò òàêèå óáîãèå òåêñòû. Ïðîñòî êàë. Íè èäåè, íè ñîäåðæàíèÿ, íè ôîðìû.

Âîò áûëà ó íåå ïåñíÿ Wake me up inside. Òàì òåêñò êðàñèâûé.
“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is
something to be enthusiastic about.”
Einstein
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Íåíàâèæó ÿ òåáÿ (êàâåð íà ïåñíþ Thoughtless)
Âðåìÿ: 02.12.2008 11:56 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


Ñïàñèáî çà îòçûâ!

>óáîãèå òåêñòû
Ïîïîçæå îáúÿñíþ, ïî÷åìó áûëà âûáðàíà èìåííî ýòà ïåñíÿ. :)
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!