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äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò
áðÿêè, êðèêè

íå ïîìíþ ïîñòèë ëè ñþäà, â âîêàëèñòîâ ïîñòèë. íî ðàç ïîøëà òàêàÿ ðóäà, òî âîò íåäàâíèé ïåðåâîä Ðàäèîõýäà 2+2=5

ñïåë òóò http://www.realmusic.ru/songs/521386/

òåêñò

Òû òàêîé ìå÷òàòåëü
Âåñü ìèð õîòåë ïîíÿòü
ß âå÷íî â äîìå
Ãäå äâà ïëþñ äâà âñåãäà âûõîäèò ïÿòü

ß â êîëåþ çàñóíó
Òèõîíüêî ìåøîê ïåñêà
 ÿíâàðå äîæäè êàê â èþíå
È äâà ïëþñ äâà âñåãäà âûõîäèò ïÿòü

Ýòî ïóòü àäñêèõ òåíåò
Îòòóäà âûõîäà íåò
Òû ìîæåøü îðàòü è êðè÷àòü
Íî ñëèøêîì ïîçäíî ñåé÷àñ

Ïîòîìó ÷òî
Òû âñåãäà áûë
íå âíèìàòåëü...
íå âíèìàòåëü...
íå âíèìàòåëü...
íå âíèìàòåëü...
Òû âñåãäà áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
íå âíèìàòåëü...
íå âíèìàòåëü...
íå âíèìàòåëü...
Òû âñåãäà áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
Òû âñåãäà áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
íå âíèìàòåëü...
íå âíèìàòåëü...
íå âíèìàòåëü...ÍÛÉ!

ß ïûòàëñÿ ïåòü îäèí
Íî ÿ ñëîâ íå íàõîäèë
Âåäü ÿ íå
Âåäü ÿ íå

ß èõ øëåïàë ñëîâíî ìóõ
Íî êàê ìóõè îíè âäðóã
Âñå êî ìíå
Âåäü ÿ íå

Âñå ïðèâåòñòâóþò âîæäÿ
Âñå ïðèâåòñòâóþò âîæäÿ
À ÿ íåò
À ÿ íåò
À ÿ íåò
À ÿ íåò

Íå ñìåé ñî ìíîþ ñïîðèòü
Íå ñàäè ìåíÿ â êîðîáêó
Âåäü ÿ íå
Âåäü ÿ íå

Î, äîëîæèòå êîðîëþ
Íåáî ïàäàåò ê íóëþ
Êîãäà íåò
Îíî íåò
Ìîæåò íåò
Ìîæåò íåò

http://www.stihi.ru/poems/2008/10/23/3476.html
“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is
something to be enthusiastic about.”
Einstein
Àâòîð
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Ìîñêâà
ãèòàðà

>ß â êîëåþ çàñóíó
>Òèõîíüêî ìåøîê ïåñêà

>Òû âñåãäà áûë
>íå âíèìàòåëü...
>íå âíèìàòåëü...
>íå âíèìàòåëü...
>íå âíèìàòåëü...
>Òû âñåãäà áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
>íå âíèìàòåëü...
>íå âíèìàòåëü...
>íå âíèìàòåëü...
>Òû âñåãäà áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
>áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
>áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
>áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
>Òû âñåãäà áûë íå âíèìàòåëü...
>íå âíèìàòåëü...
>íå âíèìàòåëü...
>íå âíèìàòåëü...ÍÛÉ!

>Âñå ïðèâåòñòâóþò âîæäÿ
>Âñå ïðèâåòñòâóþò âîæäÿ
>À ÿ íåò
>À ÿ íåò
>À ÿ íåò
>À ÿ íåò

>Íå ñàäè ìåíÿ â êîðîáêó
>Âåäü ÿ íå
>Âåäü ÿ íå

âîêàë íå ñëûøàë, íî âîò ýòè ìîìåíòû ÿ ìîãó ïðåäñòàâèòü ïîä ìóçûêó ðàäèîõåä, à âñ¸ îñòàëüíîå íåäîïóñòèìûì îáðàçîì âûïàäàåò èç èõ ñòèëèñòèêè.
Àâòîð
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äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò
áðÿêè, êðèêè

âîêàë íå ñëûøàë, òåêñò íå çíàþ, ìîãó ïðåäñòàâèòü...
âñ¸ îñòàëüíîå íåäîïóñòèìûì îáðàçîì âûïàäàåò èç èõ ñòèëèñòèêè.

Òîâàðèù Æåãëîâ, çà÷åì ãàäàòü, ïðåäñòàâëÿòü, ìîæíî æå ïðîñòî èõ ïîñëóøàòü, ïî÷èòàòü èõ òåêñòû, ÷òîá ïîíÿòü èõ ñòèëèñòèêó.
:)
“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is
something to be enthusiastic about.”
Einstein
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: åùå Ðàäèîõýäà. 2+2=5
Âðåìÿ: 04.11.2008 22:04 
Ìîñêâà
ãèòàðà

ÿ èìåë ââèäó, ÷òî òâîé âîêàë íå ñëûøàë. Ó ìåíÿ íà èíòåðíåòíîì êîìïå çâóê íå ðàáîòàåò. À ðàäèîõåä îäíî âðåìÿ ñëóøàë î÷åíü âíèìàòåëüíî, è òåêñòû äëÿ ëè÷íûõ íóæä ïåðåâîäèë.
Àâòîð
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äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò
áðÿêè, êðèêè

ààà, çíà÷èò ÿ òåáÿ íå ïîíÿë

>à âñ¸ îñòàëüíîå íåäîïóñòèìûì îáðàçîì âûïàäàåò èç èõ ñòèëèñòèêè.

òîãäà èíòåðåñíî, ÷òî òàêîå "âñ¸ îñòàëüíîå" è êàê îíî âûïàäàåò, åñëè ýòî ïî÷òè äîñëîâíûé ïåðåâîä.
“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is
something to be enthusiastic about.”
Einstein
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: åùå Ðàäèîõýäà. 2+2=5
Âðåìÿ: 04.11.2008 23:24 
Ìîñêâà
ãèòàðà

ïîìíþ ïåðåâîä êèíî "ìîðòàë êîìáàò".  îðèãèíàëå áûëà ôðàçà "ÿ ñäåëàþ äëÿ òåáÿ ýòî, Ëþ Êýíã!" À ïåðåâîä÷èê ãóíäîñÿ ñêàçàë: "ß ñäåëàþ òåáå åãî, Ëóêåíü!"

äðóãîé ïðèìåð. Ñíÿëè íàøè ïîëíîìåòðàæíûé ìóëüò "êíÿçü Âëàäèìèð", íî òàì âåñü ðèñóíîê, âñÿ ìèìèêà ïåðñîíàæåé è âñå ôðàçû ãëóáîêî àìåðèêàíñêèå.

èëè åù¸ âèäåë ÿ êîìèêñ "Èëüÿ Ìóðîìåö", ãäå ñîëîâåé ðàçáîéíèê ãîâîðèò ôðàçó "ÿ óíè÷òîæó òåáÿ!"

òî åñòü íà àíãëèéñêîì îíî íîðìàëüíî, à ïî-ðóññêè ïîëó÷àåòñÿ íå÷òî äàë¸êîå ïî äóõó. õîòÿ îïÿòü òàêè ýòî ñëèøêîì ñóáúåêòèâíî.
Àâòîð
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Âðåìÿ: 04.11.2008 23:38 
äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò
áðÿêè, êðèêè

íè÷åãî èç ïðèâåäåííîãî òîáîé ÿ íå âèäåë è íå ÷èòàë.
íî òâîþ ìûñëü ïîíÿë.
òîëüêî íå ïîíÿë ãäå ó ìåíÿ ïîäîáíûå ëÿïñóñû.

âîîáùå ÿ ñîãëàñåí, ðàäè ñîáëþäåíèÿ ðàçìåðà è ôîíåòè÷åñêîãî ðèñóíêà, òàê ýòî íå ïðîçà à ïåñíÿ, ÷àñòî ïðèõîäèòñÿ èäòè íà æåðòâû.
âñåãäà ìîãóò ñêàçàòü - òû ïåðåâåë íå òàê.
íó ÷òî-æ. :4:
õó, êàê ãîâîðèòñÿ, êåðç.
“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is
something to be enthusiastic about.”
Einstein
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: åùå Ðàäèîõýäà. 2+2=5
Âðåìÿ: 05.11.2008 00:04 
Ñåâåðîóðàëüñê
ïðèïîëÿðíàÿ ïÿòèíîãàÿ ãèåíà

>òîëüêî íå ïîíÿë ãäå ó ìåíÿ ïîäîáíûå ëÿïñóñû.

î ÷¸ì òîãäà ãîâîðèòü?(((
Ëåòî ñòåêëîì òðåñíåò
Ñîëíöå äûðîé ñêîð÷èòñÿ
Ñêîëüêî íè ïåòü ïåñåí -
Âñå òèøèíîé êîí÷àòñÿ...
Àâòîð
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Âðåìÿ: 05.11.2008 01:27 
äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò
áðÿêè, êðèêè

Íå î ÷åì. :7:
“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is
something to be enthusiastic about.”
Einstein
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!