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Àâòîð
Òåìà: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 16:42 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Ìîòèâû ðàíåíîé äóøè,
 ïîë¸òå çâóêîâ ðâàíîé ñêðèïêè,
È ñåðäöå ãóëêîå â òèøè,
Óêóòàíîå â êîêîí ëèïêèé,

Çàïåëè òèõî-òèõî ñâå÷è,
Êîïòÿ óíûëóþ ñòðîêó,
È ïîäïåâàþò ñòàðûå âåùè,
Çàáðîøåííûå â óãîëêó,

ïðèïåâ (2 ðàçà)
Çèìà, çèìà ïðèøëà â äîìà,
Øîïîòîì ïûëè äûøèò îíà,
Íàñûùàÿ ñïîðàìè çëà,
(òóò çàóíûëî òÿíåì)Àààà òû ñèäèøü ó îêíà,

È æäåøü ìåíÿ, æäåøü ìåíÿ,
Íî óæå íå âåðíóñü íèêîãäà,
Òû âñåãäà ñìîòðåëà ëþáÿ,
Íåíàâèäåë ÿ òåáÿ (è òóò çàóíûëî òÿíåì à ïîòîì øåïîòîì : âñåãäà)

ïðèïåâ
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 16:44 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

÷òî òàêîå ìèíîðíîå íàïèñàëîñü ïîä àêêîðäû ñ ýëåìåíòàìè óíûíèÿ, òî ëè ãîòèêà òî ëè ÷òî òî íåïîíÿòíîå) âûñêàçûâàéòåñü)
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 16:53 



Òû âñåãäà ñìîòðåëà ëþáÿ,
Íåíàâèäåë ÿ òåáÿ


Ãèòàðà,ýëåêòðîãèòàðà, ýòî îáèäíî.(

:-(
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 16:55 



Ñêîðåé ÷òî-òî íåïîíÿòíîå... ×òî çà "óãîëêó" è "øîïîòîì" - ýòî íà óêðàèíñêîì "÷òî ïîòîì?"?
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 16:55 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Roksana, õû òûêàé â ñëîâî àâòîð) è òîãëà ìîé íèê áóäåò ïîÿâëÿòñÿ â ñòðîêå )))
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 16:59 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Poltergeist, óãîëêó ýòî òàêîå ñîñòîÿíèå äóøè)))
øîïîòîì ýòî êàê íàäî ïåòü ýòî ñëîâî) íó ìîæíî êàê ó ïÿòíèöû, ÷òî ïîòîì, øîïîòîì : çèìà )
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 17:03 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Whispering and Moaning: âñåãäà
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 17:06 



Íàñûùàÿ ñïîðàìè çëà,
à ýòî êàê???

Çèìà, çèìà ïðèøëà â äîìà,
Øîïîòîì ïûëè äûøèò îíà,
âîçäóõîì ïîëíûì çëà****(ìîæò òàê?)
(òóò çàóíûëî òÿíåì)Àààà òû ñèäèøü ó îêíà,

È æäåøü ìåíÿ, æäåøü ìåíÿ,
Íî óæå íå âåðíóñü íèêîãäà,
Òû âñåãäà ñìîòðåëà ëþáÿ,
Íåíàâèäåë ÿ òåáÿ (è òóò çàóíûëî òÿíåì à ïîòîì øåïîòîì : âñåãäà

à ìíå òàê ìíå î÷åíü ïîíðàâèëîñü!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ìëäö!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 19:47 
ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ


>(è òóò çàóíûëî òÿíåì à ïîòîì øåïîòîì : âñåãäà)
:lol:
çà÷åì òû ïîðâàë ñêðèïêó?
http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 19:53 
Ìñê.
ïðèçíàííûé íåãåíèé

ãðàôôîìàíñòâî- ÷èñòåéøåé ïðîáû

Ç.û. âåùè â óãîëêå à íå óãîëêó
http://web.gunsnroses.com/splash.jsp
ß íå äåëàþ êóéíþ!
ß íå ïåðåäàþ êóéíþ äðóãîìó! ß íå ïðèíèìàþ êóéíþ îò äðóãîãî!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 18.10.2008 00:52 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

gumgurush, ÷åñòíî íå õîòåë ñêðèïêó ðâàòü ( âîò ÿ ÷óäîâèùå :insane:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 18.10.2008 18:01 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Roses, ÷òî çíà÷èò ãðàôôîìàíñòâî ? Î_Î
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 18.10.2008 18:02 
Ìñê.
ïðèçíàííûé íåãåíèé

>Roses, ÷òî çíà÷èò ãðàôôîìàíñòâî ? Î_Î
íó ïîðñòî ñëîâà ðèôìóåøü à ñìûñë - èùèòå ñàìè åñëè íàéäåòå..èëè íàîáîðîò ñìûñë ïðÿìîé à ðèôìà è ðèòì î÷åíü ñèëüíî ñòðàäàåò
http://web.gunsnroses.com/splash.jsp
ß íå äåëàþ êóéíþ!
ß íå ïåðåäàþ êóéíþ äðóãîìó! ß íå ïðèíèìàþ êóéíþ îò äðóãîãî!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Àíòè-ëþáîâü
Âðåìÿ: 18.10.2008 19:46 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

íó äûê ïðîñòî ÿ :mad:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!