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Àâòîð
Òåìà: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 16.10.2008 23:03 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Åäèíîå öåëîå - äóøè â îáúÿòüÿõ,
 ìèðå áåçëèêèõ, áåññìûñëåííûõ ãðåç
Ñòðàñòüþ ïûëàþò íà îãíåííûõ êðûëüÿõ,
Ìåæäó çàãàäî÷íûõ êàïåëåê çâåçä,

Àòîìîâ âçðûâàìè íàñ íå ðàçíÿòü,
Íàøà ëþáîâü, ìîíîëèò âíåçåìíîé,
Èç ïðîòîïëàçìû ìîãó÷àÿ ñòàòü,
Ìû íèêîãäà íå ïûëàåì âîéíîé,


Îáüÿòèÿ ñòðàñòíûõ áëóæäàþùèõ òåë,
Öâåòîê îðõèäåè íà ìëå÷íîì ïðîñòîðå,
Ìû áóäåì åäèíû, îòðåêøèñü îò äåë,
 ëþáîâíîì êîñìè÷åñêîì ìîðå.
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 16.10.2008 23:37 
Ìîñêâà
ãèòàðà

>Åäèíîå öåëîå - äóøè â îáúÿòüÿõ,
>Â ìèðå áåçëèêèõ, áåññìûñëåííûõ ãðåç
>Ñòðàñòüþ ïûëàþò íà îãíåííûõ êðûëüÿõ,
>Ìåæäó çàãàäî÷íûõ êàïåëåê çâåçä,
>Àòîìîâ âçðûâàìè íàñ íå ðàçíÿòü,
>Íàøà ëþáîâü, ìîíîëèò âíåçåìíîé,
>Èç ïðîòîïëàçìû ìîãó÷àÿ ñòàòü,
>Ìû íèêîãäà íå ïûëàåì âîéíîé,
çà 8 ñòðî÷åê âòîðîé ðàç ïûëàåì. Äóìàþ, ìîæíî ñêàçàòü - áîëååì èëè ñòðàäàåì âîéíîé..

>
>Îáüÿòèÿ ñòðàñòíûõ áëóæäàþùèõ òåë,
>Öâåòîê îðõèäåè íà ìëå÷íîì ïðîñòîðå,
>Ìû áóäåì åäèíû, îòðåêøèñü îò äåë,
> ëþáîâíîì êîñìè÷åñêîì ìîðå.

ïðèëàãàòåëüíîå ëþáîâíûé ìåíÿ ñìóòèëî.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 16.10.2008 23:38 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

׸ðò à ìíîãèå âåäü ñïàòü ëåãëè :sleep:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 16.10.2008 23:42 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

ÃëåáÆåãëîâ, îê , ïðî ïûëàþò íåóãëÿäåë :agree:

Åäèíîå öåëîå - äóøè â îáúÿòüÿõ,
 ìèðå áåçëèêèõ, áåññìûñëåííûõ ãðåç
Ñòðàñòüþ ïûëàþò íà îãíåííûõ êðûëüÿõ,
Ìåæäó çàãàäî÷íûõ êàïåëåê çâåçä,

Àòîìîâ âçðûâàìè íàñ íå ðàçíÿòü,
Íàøà ëþáîâü, ìîíîëèò âíåçåìíîé,
Èç ïðîòîïëàçìû ìîãó÷àÿ ñòàòü,
Ìû íèêîãäà íå ñãîðàåì âîéíîé, ÒÓÒ ÿ õîòåë ïîêàçàòü, ÷òî îíè êàê áû ãîðÿò íî ýòî íå äåñòðóêòèâíûé îãîíü à êàê áû ñîçèäàþùèé, ýòî êîíå÷íî èç íàó÷íîé ôàíòàñòèêè, íî ìû íå çàãîíÿåì ñåáÿ â ðàìêè, âîò. :jap:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 11:48 



Öåëîñòíîñòü åñòü... Ìåñòàìè ìíîãî ïðèëàãàòåëüíûõ... Ïðàâèëî íîìåð ðàç: áîëüøîå êîëè÷åñòâî ïðèëàãàòåëüíûõ íàâîäèò íà ìûñëü î òîì, ÷òî àâòîð çàòûêàåò èìè äûðû... Òàêèõ ìûñëåé áûòü íå äîëæíî... :idea2:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 12:04 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Poltergeist, :agree:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 12:05 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

ÿ æå îò äóøè ïèñàë, íå ÷åðåç ñèëó, âîáùåì ïðèëàãàòåëüíûõ ìíîãî ÷èñòî ñëó÷àéíî) :unsure:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 19:07 



Êàê çàäóìêà - õîðîøî. Øëèôàíè, ˸íü, îíî òîãî ñòÎèò.

>Öâåòîê îðõèäåè íà ìëå÷íîì ïðîñòîðå,
- íåîæèäàííî. È èíòåðåñíî!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 20:09 
Ìñê.
ïðèçíàííûé íåãåíèé

áóäó òîæå ãðàôôîìàíñòâîâàòü: :)

ìû ïîëåòèì
â çâåçäíóþ ïûëü
â ìëå÷íûé ïóòü, â ìîëîêî
÷òî íåáåñíûé ìîëî÷íèê ðàçëèë
îò êðàÿ çà êðàé
òóäà- äàëåêî
ãäå êàïåëåê çâåçä çàãàäî÷íûé ìèð

íàøà ëþáîâü ýòî äâèãàòåëü âå÷íûé,
ðàêåòà, ðåâóùèé òàáóí ëîøàäåé.
òîëüêî äëÿ íàñ äâîèõ âûëîæåí ìëå÷íûé,
÷òîáû íà çâåçäàõ èíûõ ìû ïëîäèëè äåòåé

ñïàñèáî ñàïñèáî.... :)
http://web.gunsnroses.com/splash.jsp
ß íå äåëàþ êóéíþ!
ß íå ïåðåäàþ êóéíþ äðóãîìó! ß íå ïðèíèìàþ êóéíþ îò äðóãîãî!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 20:29 



>ÿ æå îò äóøè ïèñàë, íå ÷åðåç ñèëó, âîáùåì ïðèëàãàòåëüíûõ ìíîãî ÷èñòî ñëó÷àéíî)
Ãðàôîìàíû òîæå îò äóøè ïèøóò... Âàæíî íå òîëüêî òî, ÷òî òû âêëàäûâàåøü â íàïèñàííîå, íî è òî, êàê îíî âîñïðèíèìàåòñÿ èçâíå... Âîëøåáíîå ñëîâî - êîíöåïöèÿ! :idea2:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 21:51 




>Âîëøåáíîå ñëîâî - êîíöåïöèÿ!

ß êàê ñëûøó ýòî ñëîâî - ñðàçó ïåðåñòàþ ñ ÷åëîâåêîì ñîòðóäíè÷àòü. :D  ïëàíå ìóçûêè, åñåññíî.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 21:59 



>ß êàê ñëûøó ýòî ñëîâî - ñðàçó ïåðåñòàþ ñ ÷åëîâåêîì ñîòðóäíè÷àòü.  ïëàíå ìóçûêè, åñåññíî.
Ýòî âñåãî ëèøü íàáîð áóêàô ) Âàæíî íå òî, êàê ÷åëîâåê íàçûâàåò ñâîå òâîð÷åñòâî, à òî, ÷òî îíî èç ñåáÿ ïðåäñòàâëÿåò )
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 18.10.2008 00:50 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Stop, âîëøåáíîå ñëîâî êîíòðàöåïöèÿ :))
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 18.10.2008 01:03 



Î! :idea2:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 18.10.2008 16:33 
Ìñê.
ïðèçíàííûé íåãåíèé

êîíöåïöèÿ êîíòðàöåïöèè
çàêëþ÷àåñÿ â òîì
÷òî â ìîìåí ýðåêöèè
íàäåâàåñÿ :)
http://web.gunsnroses.com/splash.jsp
ß íå äåëàþ êóéíþ!
ß íå ïåðåäàþ êóéíþ äðóãîìó! ß íå ïðèíèìàþ êóéíþ îò äðóãîãî!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 18.10.2008 17:30 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Roses, èìåííî ! +1 :agree:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 18.10.2008 18:00 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

ýðåêòàáåëüíàÿ êîíöåïöèÿ êîíòðàöåïöèè Î_î
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 20.10.2008 13:28 




>êîíöåïöèÿ êîíòðàöåïöèè
>çàêëþ÷àåñÿ â òîì
>÷òî â ìîìåí ýðåêöèè
>íàäåâàåñÿ

... ñëîí??? :eek:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïðî Ëþáîâü)
Âðåìÿ: 20.10.2008 23:38 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Stop, ñëîí ??!!! :spy: :spy: :spy: :spy: :but:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!