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Òåìà: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 01:31 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Âîò ñîáñòâåííî, ïîäðóãà íàïèñàëà, ìíó àæ çàöåïèëî à êàê âàì ?


ß, íàâåðíîå, òâîé àíãåë, ÷òîáû áûòü âñåãäà ñ òîáîé.
ß, íàâåðíîå, òâîé àíãåë, ÷òîá íå áûòü òâîåé ñóäüáîé.
×òîá ëèøü ñóìðà÷íî êàñàÿñü, òû íå îùóùàë òåïëà.
×òîá, íàâåðíî, áåç îñòàòêà, ÿ îäíàæäû óìåðëà.
×òîáû òû ñâîåé ðóêîþ, îùóòèë òîò ñàìûé ëåä,
×òî è â ñàìîì òåïëîì ñåðäöå, êàê âîäà íå ïîïëûâåò…
ß, íàâåðíîå, òâîé àíãåë, ÷òîáû òû ìåíÿ ëþáèë.
ß, íàâåðíîå, òâîé àíãåë, ÷òîá òû ïðîñòî, ïðîñòî áûë. (ñ) Eva(Ukraine)
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 01:59 



Íåðâ åñòü.
Îí òîïèò òåõíè÷åñêèå íåäî÷¸òû...

:da:

åñëè äîðàáîòàòü, íå óòðàòèâ ýòîò íåðâ, òî âûéäåò âåñüìà ýìîöèîíàëüíàÿ âåñ÷Ú...
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 02:02 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Âîò è ÿ òîæå òàê äóìàþ... :idea2:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 02:12 



Èíòåðåñíî âîò, êñòàòè, êàêèå èìåííî ñëîâà/ñî÷åòàíèÿ/îáîðîòû ðîæäàþò ýòîò íåðâ?
:upset:

Ñòðàííîå äåëî - ñëîâà áàíàëüíû, íî èìåííî â òàêîì êîíêðåòíîì ñî÷åòàíèè ñëîâ ÈÌÕÎ...ýíåðãèÿ, áåñêîíå÷íîñòü...

"òàèíà ñèÿ åñòü âåëèêà"
- ©
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 02:13 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

:1_6: ñàì â øîêå...
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 12:38 
Ìîñêâà
äóøåëþá-äóøåâåä-ä...

ñëîâî "àíãåë" - ìóæñêîãî ðîäà
âààùåòî îíè ñóùíîñòè áåñïîëûå,
íî ìåíÿ âñåãäà ñëåãêà ñìóùàåò,
êîãäà îò èìåíè xeðóâèìîâ ïèøåò æýíø÷èíà


òû ìîé áåñ
ÿ òâîÿ àíãåëèöà
è ñ íåáåñ
ÿ ñïóñêàþñü êàê ïòèöà
ïîñêîðåé
òû ìåíÿ îáîãðåé
íå ðîáåé,
íå ðîáåé,
íå ðîáåé!
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 13:00 



Åñëè åé íå áîëüøå ïÿòíàäöàòè ëåò, âñ¸ åùå ìîæíî ñïàñòè... Åñëè åé çà âîñåìíàäöàòü, ñèòóàöèÿ àïîêàëèïòè÷íà...
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 16:04 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

åé 21 âðîäå :lol:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 16:58 



Íàìåêíè åé, ÷òî ýòî íå åå )
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 17:33 
Ìîñêâà
Ãèòàðà, êëàâèøè

> ñóìðà÷íî êàñàÿñü
Ñ ýòèì ñîïåðíè÷àòü ìîæåò òîëüêî èçîáðåòåíèå ïîñòîÿííî òóñóþùåãîñÿ íà ýêðàíå òåëàâèçîðà ñîìíèòåëüíîãî þìîðèñòà: "ðàäîñòíî ïóêàÿ".

>×òîá, íàâåðíî, áåç îñòàòêà, ÿ îäíàæäû óìåðëà.
ß æèëà ñ íèì áåç îñàäêà,
Ñëåãêà áåðåìåííà áûëà,
Àíãåëîì ÷óòü-÷óòü, íî ñòàëà,
È áåç îñòàòêà óìåðëà.

Íà ïñåâäîðóññêîì ÿçûêå
ß ïèøó ïðî÷òî óãîäíî,
Âûðàæàòü ìûñëþ â ñòèõå
 íàøå âðåìÿ î÷åíü ìîäíî.

Ïèðîêèíåòèê, ýòî ÿ ïðî ñòèõè ðóãàþñü, à íå ïðî ïîäðóãó, êîòîðóþ òåáå ñòîèò ïîõâàëèòü è ïîöåëîâàòü.
Äîðîãîé Òîâàðèù

http://www.stihi.ru/author.html?rehjd
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 22:10 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

ïîäðóãà â äðóãîé ñòðàíå :) ê ñîæàëåíèþ å¸ ìîæåò òîëüêî ñòîï ïîöåëîâàòü :) åñëè äî îäåññû äîáåðåòñÿ :)
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 23:33 
Ìîñêâà
äóøåëþá-äóøåâåä-ä...

Ïèðîêèíåòèê,
òàêè æ è ÿ òóäà çàâñåãäà ìîãó äîáðàòüñÿ ðàäè òàêîãî äåëà :)
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 21.09.2008 00:52 



Âîèñòèíó äóøåãóá )
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 21.09.2008 01:00 



ýìî? :7:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 21.09.2008 13:03 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

ãäå ýìî? :7:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 21.09.2008 19:17 




>òû ìîé áåñ
>ÿ òâîÿ àíãåëèöà

Àíãåëèäçå - â ýòîì åñòü ÷òî-=òî êàâêàçñêîå...

Íàçâàíèå òîïèêà ïîòðÿñëî, ïîýòîìó òåêñò ÷èòàë íåâíèìàòåëüíî.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 22.09.2008 01:39 



Ìíå á êòî ïîñâÿòèë ñòèõè, ÷òîá ñ àíãåëàìè è ïðî÷èìè êðàñèâîñÿìè:)
Íåâàæíî, ÷òî íàïèñàíî êîðÿâî - çàòî: îò ÷èñòîãî ñåðäöà.
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 22.09.2008 11:47 



>×òîá, íàâåðíî, áåç îñòàòêà, ÿ îäíàæäû óìåðëà.
Çà÷åì áåç îñòàòêà, ãîðàçäî îðèãèíàëüíåå áûëî áû óìåðåòü ñ îñòàòêîì! Ìíå âîò äàæå èíòåðåñíî, êàê òàêîå ìîæíî ïðîâåðíóòü. :drazn:

>êàê âîäà íå ïîïëûâåò
ïëûâó÷àÿ âîäà ïðàêòè÷åñêè òàê æå êðóòà, êàê è ñìåðòü ñ îñòàòêîì.

Ìäà. Òåõíè÷åñêè íèêàê è òåìà áàíàëüíàÿ äîíåëüçÿ...
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 22.09.2008 22:27 



À Ó ìåíÿ ÷åðåïàõà íåäàâíî çà äèâàíîì çàøåâåëèëàñü è àæ ñåðäöå çàõîëîíóëî :fear:
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 22.09.2008 22:38 



>À Ó ìåíÿ ÷åðåïàõà íåäàâíî çà äèâàíîì çàøåâåëèëàñü è àæ ñåðäöå çàõîëîíóëî
:lol:
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Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 22.09.2008 22:59 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

÷åðåïàõà ææîò :lol:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ×óâñâòâà...
Âðåìÿ: 22.09.2008 23:27 



ß á ñî ñâîåé èìïóëüñèâíîñòüþ çàâàëèë áû ãíèäó è åùå ïîëêâàðòèðû ðàçíåñ, ïðåæäå ÷åì ïîíÿë áû, ÷òî ïðîèçîøëî... Ïîâåçëî åé ñ õîçÿèíîì! :lol:
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!