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Òåìà: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2008 23:19 |
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Ñ÷¸ë âîçìîæíûì âûäåëèòü ïðîèçâåäåíèå â îòäåëüíûé òîï, ïðàâäà ïîä äðóãèì áðåíäîì è ñ äîïîëíèòåëüíûìè áîíóñàìè. Ýïè÷åñêèé ìàñøòàá è êîíöåïòóàëüíûé ìåññèäæ, íàäåþñü, ñïîñîáíû îïðàâäàòü ïîòðåáë¸ííîå äîïîëíèòåëüíîå ìåñòî â íåä- ðàõ æ¸ñòêîãî äèñêà, êîòîðûé óñòàíîâëåí ïîä SCSI â êîðïóñå ñåðâåðà, êîòîðûé íàõîäèòñÿ â ïîìåùåíèè ñ ïðèíóäèòåëüíûì êîíäèöèîíèðîâàíèåì âîçäóõà â îòäåëüíîì çäàíèè DATA-öåíòðà, êîòîðîå ðàñïîëîæåíî â òîé ñàìîé ñòðàíå, íà òîì ñàìîì ìàòåðèêå. Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ" Äåéñòâóþùèå ëèöà: Ãëàç - ðîäíîé áðàò ïðàâîãî ãëàçà Âåêî - ïîäðóãà Ãëàçà Ðóêà - ïðåäñòàâèòåëü ñèëîâûõ ñòðóêòóð ×åáóðåê - ïîñòðàäàâøèé îò ïðîèçâîëà Ðóêè Àïïåíäèêñ - ëåãåíäàðíûé ïåðñîíàæ, ëèðè÷åñêèé ãåðîé Èçâèëèíû - ïðåäñòàâèòåëè Ìîñêà Ìîñê - öåíòðàëüíîå çâåíî, âîïëîùåíèå áðàõìàíà ÏÐÎËÎà Îäèí èç Ãëàç - íà ïîòîëîê, Äðóãîé ñìåíèë ðåãëàìåíò - Ðåøèâ: äîñòàòî÷íî ñ íåãî, Óñòîåâ ñðûë ôóíäàìåíò. Êðè÷àë, ÷òî: "Õâàòèò! È òåïåðü Íå ñòàíó îòêðûâàòüñÿ!"... ...Ïðèçâàòü ê îòâåòó íàãëåöà! Ñïîêîéíî, áåç ñåíñàöèé. Âîëíåíèé áóì. È ÷åðåäà Ñêàíäàëîâ ïðîêàòèëàñü. Çà äåëî ïðèíÿëèñü ñïåöû, Øîá íå óñóãóáèëîñü. Áûëà íà æåðèõà áëåñíà - Îòëè÷íûé âûáîð, âåðíûé. Áëàãîíàä¸æíà è ñìåëà, Êàê øàðèê ïîëèìåðíûé. Ïðîó÷èì áûñòðî íàãëåöà, Íå áóäåò çàäàâàòüñÿ! Ãäå ùàñ Àïïåíäèêñ? Áûë ñìóòüÿí... Äàâíî ïðèøëîñü ñúåδàòüñÿ... ÄÅÉÑÒÂÈÅ I È íî÷üþ ìèññèþ íà÷àâ... Òóò âçáåëåíèëàñü Âåêî: - Òàê ïî êàêîìó ïðàâó âû?! - À ìîæåò ÿ êàëåêà? - Òàêîãî ñòðàõà íàãíåòó, - Êóäà òàì ïåíîïëàñòó! - Íó, ïðåäúÿâèòå õîòü òàòó, - Ïðèõîäíèê, áëàíêè, êàññó! Áûâàëûé ìàëûé áûë Ðóêà Ê çàìèíêàì íå ïðèâûêøèé: - Ìîë÷è! - Ñïîêîéíî ãîâîðèò. - Îòáèëèñü òóò áåç êðûøè... Íó ÷òî ïîäåëàåøü, êîãäà Ïîïàë ïîä ïðåññ ñèñòåìû? ×óòü ïîêóðàæèøüñÿ ïîðîé, È îò òîãî ïðîáëåìû... È ïîä äàâëåíèåì ïðèøëîñü Ñäàâàòü áåç äèâèäåíäà Íåéðîíîâ ñâÿçè, ïàðîëè Ëþáèìîãî áîéôðýíäà. ÄÅÉÑÒÂÈÅ II Íî îáåùàíèé íå ñäåðæàâ, Áëåñíîé öåïëÿÿ Âåêî, Ðóêà, õîòÿ è áûë íåïðàâ, Êóñàë êàê ×åáóðåêà... Êóñàë è æàëèë, ñëîâíî ñìåð÷ü Ïîêà ÷òî áûëî ñèëû, Ïîêà íå çàâåðøèëàñü ðå÷ü, Ïîä íàòèñêîì âåðçèëû... Êðþ÷îê ñëîìàëñÿ ó áëåñíû, Íå âûäåðæàë ñòðàäàíèé, Îñòàòêè Âåêî ïðîùåíû, Çàãíóòû â ðîã áàðàíèé. ÄÅÉÑÒÂÈÅ III (Ñîâåðøåííî íåîæèäàííî, äëÿ íè÷åãî íå ïîäîçðåâàþùåãî Ãëàçà) Ðóêà (ïîáåäîíîñíî) - Òàê, òàê, ïîñìîòðèì ÷òî ó íàñ... - Âñå ÑÌÈ òðóáÿò ïðî ýòî... Ãëàç (ðàñòåðÿííî) - Äà êàê æå? ×òî æå? Îé-æå-åé!.. - Ìî¸ ïîëóðàçäåòî... - Òàê âîò, ïðèø¸ë è òâîé ÷åð¸ä - Ñêàçàë Ðóêà ñóðîâî. Ïðèöåëèëñÿ ñâîèì êðþ÷êîì - Îðóäîâàòü íå íîâî... ÝÏÈËÎÃ È Ãëàç ïîðâàëè íà ôëàæêè, Âñ¸ ïî áðèòàíñêîé ìîäå. È ãäå-òî òàì, ïîä ïîòîëêîì, Âèñåë îí äîëãî âðîäå... ============================= ============================================ Äàáû ïîäñëàñòèòü ïèëþëþ, ïðåäñòàâëÿþ àëüòåðíàòèâíóþ êîíöîâêó ïüåñû, âûçûâàþùóþ óìåðåííûé ýíòóçèàçì è ïàòðèîòèçì. ×òî ïî ìîåìó ìíåíèþ âåñüìà àêòóàëüíî â ñâåòå ïðîâåäåíèÿ îëèìïèàäû â Ñî÷è. Ðîññèÿ - ñûêòûì!... --- ÄÅÉÑÒÂÈÅ III (Ñîâåðøåííî íåîæèäàííî, äëÿ íè÷åãî íå ïîäîçðåâàþùåãî Ðóêè) Ðóêà (â ïðåäâêóøåíèè) - Òàê, òàê, ïîñìîòðèì ÷òî ó íàñ... - Âñå ÑÌÈ òðóáÿò ïðî ýòî... Ãëàç (ñòðåìèòåëüíî) - Õà-õà!! ß çíàþ, äëÿ êîãî Îðóæèå - âèíäåòòà! Äàâíî èçâåñòíû íàïåð¸ä Õàðàêòåðà ìîòèâû. Áëàãîðàçóìíî - â ñâîé ÷åð¸ä - Çàáûâ èìïåðàòèâû Óïð¸êîâ óæ íå èçáåæàòü È êîïðîìàòà æèæè: - Òàê Íà òåáå, Òóïîé Ðóêà, Áîëüøèå ïàññàòèæè! Ðóêà ñòîëü æ¸ñòêèé ïîâîðîò, Íå ìîã ïîìûñëèòü äàæå, È ïîòîìó îñòàëàñü ñêîðî Îò ïàëüöåâ òîëüêî ëàæà... Ïî÷óÿâ êðîâü, â ëèõîì ïûëó, È ïîáåäèâ óñòàëîñòü, Ðîæäàÿ õàîñ, ìóòü è ìãëó, Èçâèëèíàì äîñòàëîñü... Ñêðèïåë ìåòàë, ñòðóèëàñü êðîâü, Îò îðãàíèçìà ñòðóæêà. Ðóêà - êóëüòÿïêîé ñòàë ëåãêî,  ðóêàõ ñóäüáû èãðóøêà... ÝÏÈËÎà Êîíñåðâàòèâíûå êðóãè, Àäåïòû ýâîëþöèé Áûâàþò æåðòâàìè ïîðîé Óñïåøíûõ ðåâîëþöèé... Íó, à äåø¸âûå ïîíòû, Ñ îñêàëîì ñàòàíèíñêèì, Íå îòâå÷àþò íà âîïðîñ: "Íó êòî æ ïîéä¸ò çà êëèíñêèì?" 
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 19.09.2008 17:31 |
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Çàáûë óòî÷íèòü, ÷òî ïüåñà ýòà ïñèõîäåëè÷åñêàÿ... 
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 01:13 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.  
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Îäèí èç Ãëàç - íà ïîòîëîê, Äðóãîé ñìåíèë ðåãëàìåíò - Ðåøèâ: äîñòàòî÷íî ñ íåãî, Óñòîåâ ñðûë ôóíäàìåíò. Êðè÷àë, ÷òî: "Õâàòèò! È òåïåðü Íå ñòàíó îòêðûâàòüñÿ!"... òî÷íî ïñèõîäåë, âåäü îòêðûâàþòñÿ âåêè à íå ãëàçà >Áûâàëûé ìàëûé áûë Ðóêà æåñòü  >Áëåñíîé öåïëÿÿ Âåêî, âñ¸ äàëüøå ñòðàøíî ÷èòàòü... |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 01:51 |
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Öèòàòà: Ïèðîêèíåòèê ïèøåò: òî÷íî ïñèõîäåë, âåäü îòêðûâàþòñÿ âåêè à íå ãëàçà Äûê Âåêî - ïîäðóãà Ãëàçà, èä¸ò íà ïîâîäó, òàê ñêàçàòü... Êîíå÷íî, çà÷åì åìó ñàìîìó îòêðûâàòüñÿ? Âñ¸ íà íåé... È äîñòàëîñü, ìåæäó ïðî÷èì, èìåííî Âåêå(?)... --- ÷èòàòü äî êîíöà, èíà÷å êîíöåïòóàëüíûé ìåññèäæ íå áóäåò óëîâëåí... 
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 01:57 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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Íó, à äåø¸âûå ïîíòû, Ñ îñêàëîì ñàòàíèíñêèì, Íå îòâå÷àþò íà âîïðîñ: "Íó êòî æ ïîéä¸ò çà êëèíñêèì?" ôó íå íðàâèòñÿ ìíå êëèíñêîå, ëèáî áðàòü óæå æèâîãî ëèáî áåëîãî ìèøêó... |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 02:01 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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âñ¸ âñ¸ íèìàãó, 2å äåéñòâèå óáèëî, êàòàþñü  è ðæó 
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 02:04 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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Ïî÷óÿâ êðîâü, â ëèõîì ïûëó, È ïîáåäèâ óñòàëîñòü, Ðîæäàÿ õàîñ, ìóòü è ìãëó, Èçâèëèíàì äîñòàëîñü... Ñêðèïåë ìåòàë, ñòðóèëàñü êðîâü, Îò îðãàíèçìà ñòðóæêà. Ðóêà - êóëüòÿïêîé ñòàë ëåãêî,  ðóêàõ ñóäüáû èãðóøêà... Êðîâü òóò ïîâòîðÿåòñÿ, âîáùåì ÷àñòè÷íî ïî÷òè îñèëèë)) |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 02:07 |
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×åãî âû ñìå¸òåñü? Ëó÷øå ðåøàéòå êàêîãî öâåòà (ïî ìîäíîìó ïîâåòðèþ) ïèëþëþ õàâàòü? |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 02:09 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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>×åãî âû ñìå¸òåñü? >Ëó÷øå ðåøàéòå êàêîãî öâåòà (ïî ìîäíîìó ïîâåòðèþ) ïèëþëþ õàâàòü? Áëåäíî-êðàñíî-ðîçîâàòóþ â áåëîé áàíî÷êå, êàê âñåãäà... |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 18:47 |
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ß ãëÿæó, ÷òî ïñèõîäåëèÿ íÎí÷à íå â ôàâîðå...
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 22:00 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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ìíîãà áóêàô. ñëîæíî ñóäèòü | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 22.09.2008 05:57 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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î ÷óäî, ÿ âñ¸ îñèëèë è ñðàçó è äàæå ïîíÿë ñìûñë  ìíå êàæåòñÿ ýòî ïðÿì òàêè íå ïñèõîäåëèÿ íî áðåäà òîëèêà åñòü (òîëüêî íå ïîäóìàéòå ÷òî òîëèêà ýòî èìÿ)
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïüåñà "ÒÈÕÈÉ ÏÎÍÒ"
Âðåìÿ: 24.09.2008 00:24 |
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È ÷òî æå âû ïîíÿëè èç ïðîèçâåäåíèÿ? | |
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