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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ 
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 ñêîðî áóäåò ìóçûêà. Êàê âàì òàêàÿ ãëóïàÿ ïîïñíÿâàÿ ïåñåíêà?Ñåêüþðèòè ñíà îòìåíÿþò ñåàíñ êàìàñóòðû Ñâåðíóëà ëóíà - ïî ïðîãíîçàì íå ñêîðî âåðíåòñÿ Ïðîñíèñü, øòîðû âåê óæå ÷àñ äåãóñòèðóþò óòðî Íà þãî-âîñòîêå îò ñåðäöà ñïëåòàåòñÿ ñîëíöå Ïðèïåâ: ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ – îòìåíþ ýêñïðåññ-ìåòåëü ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ – ðàçãîíþ âñå îáëàêà ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ – ñíîâà ñòàíó íà äåíü ìóäðûì, Ðàçóêðàøó â ñ÷àñòüå óòðî Ïåðëàìóòðîì, à ïîêà ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ – ÷àøêîé êîôå â ïîñòåëü ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ – ïîöåëóåì íà ãóáàõ ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ – ñíîâà ñòàíó íà íî÷ü áëèæå Òû óçíàåøü è óâèäèøü ß – ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ Ðâàíîé íèðâàíîé ïëåíÿåò ãîðÿ÷àÿ âàííà Ðâåòñÿ íàðóæó â ìàæîðå íà âäîõ «Àëëèëóéÿ» Ïðîñíèñü, íà ïëèòå óæå ñòûíåò íåáåñíàÿ ìàííà. Íà ñåâåðî-çàïàä îò ñåðäöà ..âïåðåä… ê ïîöåëóþ |
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Ñîâñåì íå ãëóïàÿ, à î÷åíü ÷åëîâå÷åñêàÿ è õîðîøàÿ. Äàæå ñïåöèàëüíûé ñòèëèñòè÷åñêèé íàóìíÿê íå îòìåíÿåò êàêóþ-òî åñòåñòâåííóþ ïðîñòîòó, â õîðîøåì ñìûñëå. Îòäåëüíûå ìåñòà ïðîñòî î÷àðîâàëè. Áåçóñëîâíî óäà÷íûé òåêñò, î÷åíü ïåñåííûé è èñêðåííèé. Ðåñïåêò è ïðîäîëæèòåëüíûå àïïëîóçû. Ìîæåò áûòü âåñ÷. |
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Ìîñêâà äóøåëþá-äóøåâåä-ä... 
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ìíå ïîíðàâèëîñü  Àíäðåé - ìîëîäåö!â îäíîì ìåñòå ðàçóêðàøó â ñ÷àñòüå óòðî ïåðëàìóòðîì ìîæåò áûòü ñ÷àñòüå çàìåíèòü íà "íàøå" èëè íà "ýòî", íàïðèìåð, ðàçóêðàøó íàøå óòðî ïåðëàìóòðîì è ðâåòñÿ "íàðóæó" - íî "íà âäîõ"?
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà. 
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 âíà÷àëå ñëîæíîâàòî â ïëàíå îñîçíàíèÿ êàðòèíû, ïîòîì íîðì 
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Ìîñêâà äóøåëþá-äóøåâåä-ä...
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ãðèáî÷êè êîí÷èëèñü, çàòÿãèâàåìñÿ "àëëèëóåé"
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Ìîñêâà ãèòàðà
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îòëè÷íûé òåêñò))) áûâàþò òàêèå îáðàçû èç äåòñòâà, êàê åñëè áû òû ø¸ë ïî êîðèëîðó æèçíè, è çàõîäèë â íåêîòîðûå êîìíàòû, à â íåêîòîðûå íå çàõîäèë, à â äðóãèå òîëüêî çàãëÿäûâàë. Âîò ÿ ïðè ïðî÷òåíèè âñïîìíèë, êàê çàãëÿíóë ãîäó â 89 â îäíó òàêóþ êîìíàòó. áûëî êðóòî. |
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Åêàòåðèíáóðã Ãèòàðà 
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Î÷åíü õîðîøèé òåêñò, Àíäðåé, íî âîò ýòî ìåñòî >Ïðîñíèñü, øòîðû âåê óæå ÷àñ äåãóñòèðóþò óòðî ÿ áû íà ÷òî-íèáóäü ïîìåíÿë. ×èñòîé âîäû êðàñèâîñòü, å¸ äàæå ïðè ÷òåíèè ñðàçó íå äîãîíèøü, à â ïåñíå îíà, èìõî, ìåøàòüñÿ áóäåò, íåò? Ïðî "Ðâ¸òñÿ íàðóæó íà âäîõ" óæå ñêàçàëè, ìîæåò, ëó÷øå áóäåò "Ðâåòñÿ â ìàæîðå íà âûäîõ è âäîõ «Àëëèëóéÿ»"? |
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Äèíîçàâð Ñåðåáðÿíîãî Âåêà
Òåêñòû ñ ìóçûêîé: http://havin21.ru/Singing.htm |
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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Ìàñòåð, âû ìåíÿ ñ Âàöëàâîì ïóãàåòå - îòêóäà âû çíàåòå, êàê ìåíÿ çîâóò?  >ðàçóêðàøó íàøå óòðî >ïåðëàìóòðîì ñïîñèêè - ëó÷øå òàê ñïåòü >Ðâåòñÿ íàðóæó â ìàæîðå íà âäîõ «Àëëèëóéÿ òóò ÿ èìåë ââèäó âäîõ - ýòî ïîäúåì, ìàæîð - ïîäúåì, Àëëèëóéÿ - â îáùåì-òî òîæ ïîäúåì (è âñå ýòî ñâÿçàíî ñ ãîðÿ÷åé âàííîé (êîãäà â íåå ñàäèøüñÿ), óòðîì è íèðâàíîé)- íî íåñîñòûêîâî÷êà ñ "íàðóæó" åñòü íî ó ìåíÿ òîëüêî "ðâåòñÿ" >âíà÷àëå ñëîæíîâàòî â ïëàíå îñîçíàíèÿ êàðòèíû, ïîòîì íîðì äààà, ñðàçó íå âðóáèøüñÿ, êóïëåòû ïåðåêðó÷åíû - à ïðèïåâ óïðîùåí |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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Èíòåðåñíî ãäå îíà òàêàÿ ïðîäà¸òñÿ, ïðóùàÿ "Àëèëëóéÿ" 
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Ìîñêâà äóøåëþá-äóøåâåä-ä...
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gumgurush ó òåáÿ æå â ïîäïèñè ññûëêà íà òâîþ ñòðàíè÷êó íà ðåàëìüþçèê à òàì åñòü èíôà ïðî òåáÿ ïðîôåññèîíàëüíàÿ ïðèâû÷êà - ñîáèðàòü àíàìíåç íà âñåõ ïàöèåíòîâ... |
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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>>Ïðîñíèñü, øòîðû âåê óæå ÷àñ äåãóñòèðóþò óòðî >ÿ áû íà ÷òî-íèáóäü ïîìåíÿë. ×èñòîé âîäû êðàñèâîñòü, å¸ äàæå ïðè ÷òåíèè ñðàçó íå äîãîíèøü, à â ïåñíå îíà, èìõî, ìåøàòüñÿ áóäåò, íåò? à åñëè íàïèñàòü "Ïðîñíèñü, â ñòâîðêè âåê óæå ÷àñ ïðîáèâàåòñÿ óòðî" - ýòî íå áóäåò êðàñèâîñòüþ? >Ïðî "Ðâ¸òñÿ íàðóæó íà âäîõ" óæå ñêàçàëè, ìîæåò, ëó÷øå áóäåò >"Ðâåòñÿ â ìàæîðå íà âûäîõ è âäîõ «Àëëèëóéÿ»"? äà òàê íåïëîõî. ñïîñèêè |
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http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Ìîñêâà äóøåëþá-äóøåâåä-ä...
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>>Ïðîñíèñü, øòîðû âåê óæå ÷àñ äåãóñòèðóþò óòðî íå ìåíÿé - êë¸âî ñïî¸òñÿ
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Åêàòåðèíáóðã Ãèòàðà
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Ìíå êàæåòñÿ, >Ïðîñíèñü, â ñòâîðêè âåê óæå ÷àñ ïðîáèâàåòñÿ óòðî íå ïî¸áåëüíî... Ñëèøêîì ìíîãî ñîãëàñíûõ. À âîò òàê, ìîæåò - Ñåêüþðèòè ñíà îòìåíÿþò ñåàíñ êàìàñóòðû Ñâåðíóëà ëóíà - ïî ïðîãíîçàì íå ñêîðî âåðíåòñÿ Ê íîãå òâîåé ãîëîé ïðèæàëîñü áåññîâåñòíî óòðî Íà þãî-âîñòîêå îò ñåðäöà ñïëåòàåòñÿ ñîëíöå |
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Äèíîçàâð Ñåðåáðÿíîãî Âåêà
Òåêñòû ñ ìóçûêîé: http://havin21.ru/Singing.htm |
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Ìîñêâà ãèòàðà
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ÌÀÑÒÅÐ, âû, ñëó÷àéíî, íå íàðêîëîã? ïðîñòèòå çà îôôòîï. ïðî øòîðû âåê äåãóñòèðóþò óòðî - ïðàâäà ñëèøêîì ïðèòîðíî è êó÷åðÿâî. |
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Ìîñêâà äóøåëþá-äóøåâåä-ä...
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>ÌÀÑÒÅÐ, âû, ñëó÷àéíî, íå íàðêîëîã? íó, åñëè åñòü òàêàÿ íåîáõîäèìîñòü... íî âîîáùå, êàæäûé õîçÿèí ñâîåé ñóäüáû ìîæíî è íóæíî ïîìîãàòü - òîëüêî åñëè çàõîòåë ÑÀÌ |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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ÿ ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ ïðîñòî íå î÷åíü, íå íàêðàñèëàñü íå ïîäâåëà ñâîè î÷è, ðàñòðåïàëàñü êàê øòîðà ïî âåòðó ïðè÷åñêà, ïîòåðÿëàñü â ÷åðíîé äûðå-ñóìêå ðàñ÷åñêà) ÷òî òî íàâåÿëè äâå òåìêè ðÿäîì ñòîÿùèå òàêèå ñòðî÷êè))) |
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I know nobody knows
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Ìîñêâà ãèòàðà
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ÌÀÑÒÅÐ, ÿ ñîâåðøåííî ñåðü¸çíî ñïðîñèë. | |
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Ìîñêâà äóøåëþá-äóøåâåä-ä...
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ÃëåáÆåãëîâ, åñëè ñåðü¸çíî - íàïèøè íà ìûëî | |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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ÃëåáÆåãëîâ, íàïèøè åìó íà ìûëî è òåáÿ âûëå÷àò 
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I know nobody knows
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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ÃëåáÆåãëîâ, íàïèøè åìó íà ìûëî è òåáÿ âûëå÷àò
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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îé, ïðîñòèòå, èíåò ãëþ÷èò... | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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charybdis अ ग ा ध
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Gumgurush, ÷òî è òðåáîâàëîñü äîêàçàòü - ãðèáî÷êè=çëî. òåêåñò âåñüìà. |
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Çàòêíèñü è ãîðè!
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Ìîñêâà Ãèòàðà, êëàâèøè
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>Ïðîñíèñü, øòîðû âåê óæå ÷àñ äåãóñòèðóþò óòðî Ñëîâî "âåê" óïîðíî âîñïðèíèìàåòñÿ êàê "ñòîëåòèå". Ñïî¸òñÿ ëåãêî, à âîò ïîéì¸òñÿ ëè? Åñëè ÷åñòíî, ñîâñåì íå ïîíðàâèëîñü. Íàáîð ýìîöèé ïîíÿòåí, íî ñ ðóññêèì ñëîæíåå. Ìîæåò, ïîåñòü ãðèáî÷êîâ? |
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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>Ê íîãå òâîåé ãîëîé ïðèæàëîñü áåññîâåñòíî óòðî Äÿäÿ Âàäÿ - ìîæåò è òàê. Ìîæåò, ìîæåò, âñå ìîæåò áûòü - ìîæåò áûòü ìèëëèîí âàðèàíòîâ - ýòî æ ÿçûê))) ñïîñèêè (æàëêî ñèììåòðè÷íîå "ïðîñíèñü" òåðÿòü) ÊÄÌ - ýýýì. îñåíü óæå) íàïðÿã ñ ãðèáî÷êàìè) òî ÷òî íå ïîíðàâèëîñü - ïîëíîå ïîíèìý, ìíå òîæå ìàëî ÷òî íðàâèòñÿ - ó ñåáÿ, ó äðóãèõ - òàê êðèòè÷åí, ÷òî ïðîñòî æóòü. ñïîñèêè çà ìíåíèå - âñåãäà æäó. êîãäà òû ñêàæåøü íóíàêîíåöòîïëèàòü 
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http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Ìèíñê
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Âû äåëàåòå óñïåõè..:))))))))))))))) Áðàâî!
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Ïðîäàþñü. Äîðîãî.
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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âîò ïåñåíêà. Ãðóïïå Êîðíè âïîëíå áû ïîäîøëî. |
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http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Òåìà: Re: ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ
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Êîìàðîâî ôèáðû, ÷àêðû, ëÿðâû 
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gumgurush, òåêñò èíòåðåñíûé è ìóçûêà ïîäõîäèò (êà÷åñòâî çàïèñè ïðàäâà íèçêîâàòî)...è ýêñïðåññèè, ýêñïðåññèè ïîáîëüøå! |
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Æèçíü íàäî ïðîæèòü...
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Òåìà: Re: ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ
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äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò áðÿêè, êðèêè 
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>Ðâàíîé íèðâàíîé ïëåíÿåò ãîðÿ÷àÿ âàííà Ðâåòñÿ íàðóæó â ìàæîðå íà âäîõ «Àëëèëóéÿ» Ïðîñíèñü, íà ïëèòå óæå ñòûíåò íåáåñíàÿ ìàííà. Íà ñåâåðî-çàïàä îò ñåðäöà ..âïåðåä… ê ïîöåëóþ Ðâàíîé íèðâàíîé ãîðÿ÷àÿ Ðâåòñÿ íàðóæó â ìàæîðå Ïðîñíèñü Íà ñåâåðî ñåðäöà ..âïåðåä Ìíîãî ÐÐÐÐ. Ýòî òàê è çàäóìàíî? ÁîäÐÐÐÿùèé óòÐÐÐåííèííèé ïÐÐÐèçûâ? Ïî ñìûñëó ãîðÿ÷àÿ âàííà äîëæíà ðàññëàáëÿòü à íå áîäðèòü. êàê-òî îíî ìíå... êàê-òî íå òàê... À âîîáùå êëàññíî. |
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“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is something to be enthusiastic about.” Einstein |
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Òåìà: Re: ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ
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äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò áðÿêè, êðèêè
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ìåëîäèéêà ïðîñòîâàòà.  êóïëåòå åùå íè÷å, à â ïðèïåâå ñèëúíî óæ ïîïñîâî-êàðàìåëüíî, íà ìîé âêóñ. íî âîîáùå ó íàñ òóò ôîðóì òåêñòîâèêîâ, à íå ìåëîäèñòîâ-ãàðìîíèñòîâ... òàê øòî íå ïðèìè çà ïðåòåíçèþ. |
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“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is something to be enthusiastic about.” Einstein |
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Òåìà: Re: ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ
Âðåìÿ: 17.10.2008 22:37 |
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Ìîñêâà piano, melodica
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òåêñò îòëè÷íûé, àôòàð ïÿòü!))) à âîò ìóçûêà âàùå íå âïå÷àòëèëà íå õî÷ó âëåçàòü â ÷óæîé êðåàòèâ, îäíàêî àâòîð ïîçèöèîíèðóåò äàííîå ïðîèçâåäåíèå êàê íåñåðüåçíîå ÿ áû ñäåëàë â ìàæîðå, ìÿã÷å è ñâåòëåå, è òîãäà ìîãëà áû ïîëó÷èòüñÿ îôèãåííàÿ âåùü, ñîâñåì íå ïîïñîâàÿ è íå òóïàÿ |
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http://www.vk.com/kenazmusic
http://www.vk.com/koshelpv http://yatalant.music1.ru/#/albums/360484.html |
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Òåìà: Re: ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ
Âðåìÿ: 18.10.2008 00:23 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãèòàðà, êëàâèøè
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gumgurush, íå ïîâåðèøü, ñåé÷àñ ïðî÷èòàë âñþ òåìó êàê íîâóþ è î÷åíü óäèâë¸í áûë, îáíàðóæèâ ñâîé ñîáñòâåííûé êîììåíòàðèé ìåñÿ÷íîé äàâíîñòè. À ÷èòàë òâîé òåêñò, áóäòî â ïåðâûé ðàç - ìåíÿ ýòî óäèâèëî, îáû÷íî òàêîãî ïîëíîãî çàáâåíèÿ íå ïðîèñõîäèò. Íî áîëüøå âñåãî ìåíÿ óäèâèëî, ÷òî ñ ïåðâîãî ðàçà ïîíÿë ïðî øòîðû âåê - âèäíî çàïîìíèëîñü íà ïîäñîçíàòåëüíîì óðîâíå. Êîììåíòàðèé ïðî÷èòàë, ìîçãè íàïðÿã - è âñïîìíèë!  ïðîøëûé ðàç ñîîáðàçèë, ÷òî ê ÷åìó òîëüêî ïîñëå òîãî, êàê ïðî÷èòàë òðèæäû. Íå ìîãó ñêàçàòü, ÷òî íà ýòîò ðàç ñèëüíî ïîíðàâèëîñü, íî ïðî øòîðû âåê, êîòîðûå äåãóñòèðóþò óòðî, íà ýòîò ðàç ïîíðàâèëîñü - âîçìîæíî, ýòî è êðàñèâîñòü, íî ýòî äåéñòâèòåëüíî êðàñèâî è î÷åíü îáðàçíî. Íå íàäî ìåíÿòü ýòî ìåñòî: åñëè êòî "âúåäåò" ñ òðåòüåãî ðàçà, êàê ÿ, òî íà ÷åòâ¸ðòûé ðàç åìó ïîíðàâèòñÿ. À âîò ìóçûêà - ïðèìåðíî òàêóþ è îæèäàë, èñõîäÿ èç "êîíñòðóêòèâíûõ îñîáåííîñòåé" òåêñòà, â ÷àñòíîñòè ðàçíèöà íà îäèí ñëîã â ïåðâûõ ñòðîêàõ ïåðâîãî è âòîðîãî êóïëåòîâ íàêëàäûâàåò íà ìåëîäèþ íåêîòîðûå îãðàíè÷åíèÿ, êîòîðûå "ïîäòàëêèâàþò" èìåííî ê òàêîìó ðèòìè÷åñêîìó ðèñóíêó. Òîæå ñàìîå ñ íåêîòîðûìè îòëè÷èÿìè ðèòìà â ïåðâîé è âòîðîé ïîëîâèíàõ ïðèïåâà. Ñ L`etranger-îì ñîãëàñåí ïîëíîñòüþ ïî ïîâîäó òîãî, ÷òî íå ñòîèò ðàññìàòðèâàòü ýòó âåùü êàê íåñåðü¸çíóþ. |
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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>ìåëîäèéêà ïðîñòîâàòà.  êóïëåòå åùå íè÷å, à â ïðèïåâå ñèëúíî óæ ïîïñîâî-êàðàìåëüíî, íà ìîé âêóñ. íè÷åãî íå èìåþ ïðîòèâ ïîïñû))) åñëè áû ìíå íðàâèëñÿ äðóãîé ñòèëü, ÿ áû íàâåðíîå è äåëàë áû â äðóãîì, íå íàõîäèøü? >ÿ áû ñäåëàë â ìàæîðå, ìÿã÷å è ñâåòëåå, è òîãäà ìîãëà áû ïîëó÷èòüñÿ îôèãåííàÿ âåùü, ñîâñåì íå ïîïñîâàÿ è íå òóïàÿ îõ óæ ýòè "ÿ áû" äà "ñäåëàë áû" äà "îôèãåííàÿ áû" ÿ áåðó è äåëàþ. |
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http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Ìîñêâà piano, melodica
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ò.å. àôòîðó ëàñêîâûé ìàé èìïîíèðóåò?) >îõ óæ ýòè "ÿ áû" äà "ñäåëàë áû" äà "îôèãåííàÿ áû" >ÿ áåðó è äåëàþ. gumgurush, äàâàé íà ñïîð, áåç "áû") îòëè÷íûé òåêñò ïðîïàäåò æå îäíîçíà÷íî, èáî ìóçûêà åãî íå òî, ÷òîáû âûãîäíî íå ïîä÷åðêèâàåò, íî è âîîáùå âñå óñèëèÿ àâòîðà êàê ïîýòà ñâîäèò ïî÷òè íà íîëü êàê òóò ó êîãî-òî áûëî â ïîäïèñè - åñëè ñìåøàòü 3 êã âàðåíüÿ è 1 êã ãîâíà, â ðåçóëüòàòå âñå ðàâíî ïîëó÷èòñÿ 4 êã ãîâíà, êàê íè êðóòè |
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http://www.vk.com/kenazmusic
http://www.vk.com/koshelpv http://yatalant.music1.ru/#/albums/360484.html |
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Òåìà: Re: ß ñåãîäíÿ äëÿ òåáÿ
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Ìñê. ïðèçíàííûé íåãåíèé 
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à ìíå ïðèïåô íðàâèöà à êóïëåòû êàêîé òî ãðóç |
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ß íå äåëàþ êóéíþ! ß íå ïåðåäàþ êóéíþ äðóãîìó! ß íå ïðèíèìàþ êóéíþ îò äðóãîãî! |
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