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Òåìà: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 10.09.2008 01:39 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.  
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Îáãîðåâøàÿ ïàìàòü, Ôàíòîìîâ ñïåöíàç, Õîòåë áû ðàñòàÿòü, Íî áóäòî â òîò ðàç, Íåäàâíþþ íî÷ü, Ïîæèðàåò ëóíà, Ðàññâåò å¸ äî÷ü, È çâåçäû - ãëàçà, Âãîíÿþò ñíàðÿäû, Ñêâîçü äóøè, Ñêâîçü ñëåçû, Òåðÿÿ îòðÿäû, ùåáå÷åò çàòâîð, óñûïëÿÿ íàâåê, ôàòàëüíûé ïîâòîð, èç ìèðà ïîáåã. |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 10.09.2008 01:41 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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ñðàçó ñêàæó, â êîíöîâêå ÿ íå óâåðåí, ìíå êàæåòñÿ çàêîí÷èë êàê òî áàíàëüíî ãëóïî ÷òî ëè è íå ïîíÿòíî... ïðîñòî ïîêà íè÷åãî äðóãîãî íå ëåçåò â ìîé êâàäðàòíûé ìîñê... óæ ïðîñòèòå) | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 10.09.2008 02:37 |
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Ìîñêâà ãèòàðà
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>Îáãîðåâøàÿ ïàìàòü, >Ôàíòîìîâ ñïåöíàç, âîò ýòî ãóò >èç ìèðà ïîáåã. è ýòî íè÷¸ òàê âñ¸ îñòàëüíîå íå ïðîèçâîäèò âïå÷àòëåíèÿ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 10.09.2008 09:25 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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ÃëåáÆåãëîâ, ñïàñèá:) áóäó îáäóìûâàòü, ãäå ìîæíî èñïðàâèòü, ÷òî áû ëó÷øå ïîäàòü.. | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 11.09.2008 13:56 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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Áîëüøå íèêòî íå îòïèñûâàåòñÿ, ÷òî ëè òàê âñ¸ ïëîõî? 
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 13.09.2008 00:21 |
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
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Íåìíîãî íå äîãîíÿþ ïåðåõîäû îáðàçîâ ñ íåæíî-ëèðè÷åñêîãî è äàæå äóøåâíîãî ê ôàòàëüíî-íåèçáåæíîìó.Íàäî ïðîðàáîòàòü ñòèõ ÷òîáû îí ïðèøåë ê îäíîìó ñòèëþ))) | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 13.09.2008 00:22 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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odinrim, ïåðåõîäû ÷òèëåé íå ïðèäàþò îñòðîòó íàïèñàííîìó ? | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 13.09.2008 00:27 |
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
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Ïðîñòî ìû âñå ïèøåì ïî ðàçíîìó è åñëè áû ÿ ïèñàë ÿ áû ñäåëàë èìåííî òàê | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 13.09.2008 00:29 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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odinrim, íó ïîïðîáóéòå ïðåäîñòàâèòü ñâîé âàðèàíò äàííîãî ñòèõà áóäåò èíòåðåñíî | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 13.09.2008 00:32 |
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
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Íå òàê íå ïîéäåò äàâàé òàäà ñâîé â îòâåò âûëîæó,êàê òîëüêî íàéäó(îäåâàåò òàïêè è êðÿõòÿ óõîäèò))) | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 13.09.2008 00:33 |
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
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Äâå çâåçäû ãîðåëè âûñîêî Ãîðåëè çà ÷àñ äà ãîðåëè ëåãêî Îñâåùàÿ íåáåñà Ñìîòðåëè íà íàñ, êàê áóäòî ãîâîðÿ: “Äîìîé ïîðà äîìîé Äîìîé ïîðà” À íà íåáå òó÷è âîðîíüÿ Äà çâåçäû íà íèõ óëûáàëèñü ñìîòðÿ È îò ñâåòà ýòèõ çâåçä âäðóã îòêðûëîñü îêíî È âñå âçëåòåëè ââåðõ ïîìíÿ îäíî: Ïðèïåâ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 13.09.2008 00:34 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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odinrim, æäåìñ) | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 13.09.2008 00:36 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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odinrim, ãîðåëè ãîðåëè ãîðåëè äà íåïåðåâûãîðåëè Î_î | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòèõ. Ïàìÿòü
Âðåìÿ: 13.09.2008 00:48 |
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
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Äà ñàìîãî óæå å¸ ïåòü.... | |
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