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Òåìà: TIME ECLIPSE (àíãë.)
Âðåìÿ: 10.08.2008 13:59 |
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TIME ECLIPSE (with a little help from Àðòóð Äìèòðèåâ))) (ïðîëîã) - I can stop the time... - How? It`s impossible! - Look... (ïåñíÿ) And Your dreams have turned the ice. You are tired. So Close your eyes. And your breath is slowed down. Time eclipse has just begun. You and I have stopped the time... Now You`ll See. One, Two, Three... People stand and do not walks. Nobody moves. Nobody talks. Airplane is settling down. It`s Suspended above the ground. Time`s so cold. The frozen world. You and I Are in frozen time. Bullet hasn`t reached the aim. Life and death. Eternal game. Doors are opened. Guns are locked. When the Time Is forever Stoped. Run, Time, run... I`ll turn on the sun.. Run, Time, run... Three, Two, One... |
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Òåìà: Re: TIME ECLIPSE (àíãë.)
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2008 00:01 |
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ñèíòåçàòîð “Ñîëîâóøêà” 
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Rokky, òåêñò, êàê ìíå êàæåòñÿ, ÷åðåñ÷óð ïðîñòîé. Îí, êîíå÷íî, õîðîøî ïîåòñÿ, è íàâåðíÿêà ïîðàäóåò ïëîõî çíàþùåãî àíãëèéñêèé ñëóøàòåëÿ, íî íå áîëåå - ñëîâàðü áåäíîâàò, îáîðîòû "life and death", "eternal game" etc. - óñòîÿâøèåñÿ êëèøå. Ïîõëåùå "çîëîòîé îñåíè", åñëè ïîëüçîâàòüñÿ ÿçûêîì àíàëîãèé  âîò êàê-òî òàê. |
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Òåìà: Re: TIME ECLIPSE (àíãë.)
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2008 03:08 |
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Èâàí Ìîðã, ñîãëàñåí. Ñëîâà äåéñòâèòåëüíî ïðîñòûå. Ñòàðàþñü ïèñàòü î ñëîæíîì ïðîñòî äàæå ïî àíãëèéñêè (õîòÿ ó ìåíÿ ýòî íå ñîâñåì ïîëó÷èëîñü - âñ¸ òàêè ñëîâîñî÷åòàíèå TIME ECLIPSE ñëèøêîì ìóäð¸íîå âûøëî è ïëîõî çíàþùåãî àíãëèéñêèé íàâðÿä ëè ïîðàäóåò)))). Òåì íå ìåíåå ñìûñë òåêñòà ñîâñåì íå òàê óæ ïðîñò, åñëè âû åãî ïåðåâåëè) À âåäü âû åãî ïåðåâåëè?  Ñïàñèáî çà îòçûâ. Î÷åíü èíòåðåñíûé îòçûâ.
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Òåìà: Re: TIME ECLIPSE (àíãë.)
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2008 03:09 |
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Èâàí Ìîðã, ñîãëàñåí. Ñëîâà äåéñòâèòåëüíî ïðîñòûå. Ñòàðàþñü ïèñàòü î ñëîæíîì ïðîñòî äàæå ïî àíãëèéñêè (õîòÿ ó ìåíÿ ýòî íå ñîâñåì ïîëó÷èëîñü - âñ¸ òàêè ñëîâîñî÷åòàíèå TIME ECLIPSE ñëèøêîì ìóäð¸íîå âûøëî è ïëîõî çíàþùåãî àíãëèéñêèé íàâðÿä ëè ïîðàäóåò)))). Òåì íå ìåíåå ñìûñë òåêñòà ñîâñåì íå òàê óæ ïðîñò, åñëè âû åãî ïåðåâåëè) À âåäü âû åãî ïåðåâåëè? Ñïàñèáî çà îòçûâ. Î÷åíü èíòåðåñíûé îòçûâ.
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Òåìà: Re: TIME ECLIPSE (àíãë.)
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2008 03:16 |
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äåøåâûå ãåòàðû 
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People stand and do not walks.>>> çà òàêèå îøèáêè, ìîÿ ïðåïîäøà îäåâàëà ñòðàï-îí ñ øèïàìè è ÿ íà êîëåíÿõ êëÿëñÿ ÷òî áîëüøå òàê íå áóäó è äà, âñå òàêè íàäî áû turn into the ice |
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îòåö èíäè ôîðóìà
"ÿ âîò äàæå çàìåòèë êòî âðóáàåòñÿ â ìîþ ìóçûêó, êàê ïðàâèëî, îêàçûâàåòñÿ íîðìàëüíûì àäåêâàòíûì ÷åëîâåêîì !"(ñ) Îëåãà |
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Òåìà: Re: TIME ECLIPSE (àíãë.)
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2008 03:25 |
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>People stand and do not walks.>>> > >çà òàêèå îøèáêè, ìîÿ ïðåïîäøà >îäåâàëà ñòðàï-îí ñ øèïàìè >è ÿ íà êîëåíÿõ êëÿëñÿ ÷òî áîëüøå òàê íå áóäó > > >è äà, âñå òàêè íàäî áû turn into the ice ------------ Ïàéïåð, ñïàñèáî çà ïîäñêàçêè) äëÿ òîãî è âûëîæèë, ÷òîáû ïðîñå÷ü îøèáêè)) íàäåþñü ìîÿ ïðåïîäøà íå áóäåò ñòðàùàòü ìåíÿ ñòðàï-îíîì))) åñëè åñòü åù¸ êàêèå òî ìûñëè ÷òî ãäå íå òàê ñ òî÷êè çðåíèÿ ãðàììàòèêè - ïèøèòå îáÿçàòåëüíî, áóäó ñïàñèáî) |
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Òåìà: Re: TIME ECLIPSE (àíãë.)
Âðåìÿ: 14.08.2008 23:29 |
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Airplane is settling down. It`s Suspended above the ground. åñëè òàê: Airplane is moving down. Last looking for the lucky ground. |
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Òåìà: Re: TIME ECLIPSE (àíãë.)
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2008 01:33 |
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> >Airplane is settling down. >It`s Suspended above the ground. >åñëè òàê: >Airplane is moving down. >Last looking for the lucky ground. ------- Äà, òàê âåñåëåé ïîëó÷àåòñÿ) Òîëüêî äåëî â òîì, ÷òî ìíå õîòåëîñü îïèñàòü ñàìîë¸ò êîòîðûé ø¸ë íà ïîñàäêó, è â òîò ìîìåíò êîãäà âðåìÿ îñòàíîâèëîñü, ñàìîë¸ò çàâèñ íàä çåìë¸é) çàñòûë â âîçäóõå) âàøà ñòðî÷êà õîðîøà, íî óáèâàåò ìîþ èäåþ ê ñîæàëåíèþ) À âîò íàñ÷¸ò Airplane is settling down - Airplane is moving down... Ñàìîë¸ò èä¸ò íà ïîñàäêó... ìíå âîò ïîäóìàëîñü, ÷òî ìîæåò áûòü òîãäà Airplane is landed down ëó÷øå? Ïîëþáîìó ñïàñèáî çà ó÷àñòèå)) |
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