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Âðåìÿ: 15.03.2008 20:30 |
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charybdis अ ग ा ध 
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×òî-òî íàïèñàëîñü...ìîæíî ðàññìàòðèâàòü, êàê ïðèêâåë ê "áëàãîáðàòü v2.0" Ïîñêîëüêó ìîé áóñóðìàíñêèé ìÿãêî ãîâîðÿ íå ãóä - âåëêàì ãëóìèööî  _______ Holy books are filled with poison Rotting ages of stagnation Twisted nails of faith reversal Everlasting aberration Blessed with divine perversions Monkeys with the twisted faces They polluted skies and oceans For forthcoming anastasis There is no hope Or retribution Towards dead end Runs evolution Never is to late To annihilate All that once I loved All that I adored Never is to late To participate In the pointless grind Of mankind Glowing razors of ignorance Rearranging false decisions Cutting through the empty choices Self-corrupted politicians Galvanized corpse of science Circus of the bio\\nano Imitation of defiance Sacred flames of endorama There is no hope Or retribution Towards dead end Runs evolution Never is to late To annihilate All that once I loved All that I adored Never is to late To participate In the pointless grind Of mankind Barking whispers of salvation Beaconing the final goal Howling hymns of revelation Separates the mind from soul Angels rising from the silos Timers trembling near the zero Hail to Nuclear Messiah Thus our way becoming clear There is no hope Or retribution Towards dead end Runs evolution Never is to late To annihilate All that once I loved All that I adored Never is to late To participate In the pointless grind Of mankind |
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Çàòêíèñü è ãîðè!
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 03.04.2008 22:06 |
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Ïðî÷èòàëà - êàê áóäòî çåìëÿêà íà ÷óæáèíå âñòðåòèëà Êàê òàì Ñòîï ãîâîðèë, ... ïðîõîæåãî ñ åãî êâàäðàòíîé ôðàçèðîâêîé "áåç ïîäïèñè óçíàåøü." Òî÷íî. Ïåðåøåë íà ÷óæîé ÿçûê, íî îñòàëñÿ ñîáîé íà âñå ñòî. Íèêàêîé ïîäïèñè íå íàäî. Î÷.óçíàâàåìàÿ õëåñòêîñòü è ñìà÷íîñòü òàêèõ â ïðèíöèïå áåçâêóñíûõ íåïåñåííûõ ñëîâ, êàê, íàïðèìåð, stagnation... Ïðîõîæåñòü, îäíèì ñëîâîì)) Çà ÷òî, áåçóñëîâíî, ðåñïåêò. Òåïåðü íàñ÷åò ïîãëóìèööî... ýò ìû, äîðîãîé ïðîõîæèé, ñî âñåé íàøåé âðåäíîñòüþ çàâñåãäà ïæàëñòà... èòü åñòü íàä ÷åì  ïðèïåâå, ÿ òàê ïîíèìàþ, îäíà îïå÷àòêà ðàññûïàëàñü ìíîãîêðàòíûì ïîâòîðîì èç-çà ïðèñòðàñòèÿ ê êîïèïýéñòèíãó. ßâíî äîëæíî áûòü Never is too late. Ïðåíåáðåæåíèå ê ãëàãîëàì, ÷ðåçìåðíîå äëÿ èíãëèøà. Èç-çà ýòîãî åñòü îùóùåíèå ÷èñòÀ ðóññêîãî òåêñòà, îñîáåííî âî âòîðîì êóïëåòå. Íå õî÷ó ïîñÿãàòü íà àâòîðñêèé çàìûñåë, íî, åñëè ñêàçàòü, íàïðèìåð, Glowing razors of ignorance Cut the peanut politicians For the lot of empty choices Riding to the false decisions, òî çâó÷àòü áóäåò âïîëíå èíãëèøåâî è âðîäå íåäàëåêî îò ñàáæåâîãî ìåññèäæà)  òðåòüåì êóïëåòå òðàáëû ìîæíî óñòðàíèòü èñïðàâëåíèåì separates íà separate è becoming íà is growing (ýòî ÷òîáû íå øèïåòü ...way's becoming). Ïðîáëåìêà ïîìåëü÷å, ñ ôîíåòèêîé - â îêîí÷àíèè -ed ó ãëàãîëîâ è ïðè÷àñòèé. Æèðíîâàòî áóäåò ïîñòîÿííî îòâîäèòü èì ïîëíîâåñíûé ñëîã (òàêò) äëÿ çâó÷àíèÿ. Åñëè â twisted, polluted ýòî íîðìàëüíî, òî â blessed, è îñîáåííî, â galvanized çâó÷àòü áóäåò äîâîëüíî íåðÿøëèâî, êàê êàêîé-íèáóäü ìåñòå÷êîâûé äèàëåêò. Ñîáñòâåííî, è ó íîñèòåëåé òàêîé íåðÿøëèâîñòè ïîëíî, íî, çíàÿ òâîþ ïëàíêó è õâàòêó, äóìàþ, ñòîèò øëèôàíóòü. For forthcoming anastasis - íà÷àëî ñòðîêè ÷èñòî íà ñëóõ íåñêîëüêî êîìè÷íî... "Ôî-ôî") forthcoming ïî ñóòè òî æå, ÷òî è coming, òîëüêî ÷óòü áîëåå óñòðàøàþùå)) ìîæ, ðàäè ïåñåííîñòè ñòîèò îáëåã÷èòü for the coming anastasis Âîîáùå, âñåãäà õîòåëîñü óñëûøàòü òâîè òåêñòû ñ ìóçûêîé, íî ýòîò - îñîáåííî. Åñëè ïåñíÿ ñáóäåòñÿ, óãîñòè ïðîñëóøèâàíèåì, ïëèç) |
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 03.04.2008 23:50 |
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charybdis अ ग ा ध
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Âàðèàíäî íóìåðî äóî(àëë õåéë òó Trauma ýíä Ditty) Holy books are filled with poison Rotting ages of stagnation Twisted nails of faith reversal Everlasting aberration Prayers of divine perversions Monkeys with decaying faces They polluted skies and oceans For the coming anastasis There is no hope Or retribution Dead end was reached By evolution Never is too late To annihilate All that I got loved All that I adored Never is too late To participate In the pointless grind Of mankind Glowing razors of ignorance Cut the peanut politicians For the lot of empty choices Riding to the false decisions Dancing on the corpse of science Circus of the bio\\nano Imitation of defiance Sacred flames of endorama There is no hope Or retribution Dead end was reached By evolution Never is too late To annihilate All that I got loved All that I adored Never is too late To participate In the pointless grind Of mankind Barking whispers of salvation Beaconing the final goal Howling hymns of revelation Separate the mind from soul Angels rising from the silos Timers trembling near the zero Hail to Nuclear Messiah Thus our way is growing clear There is no hope Or retribution Dead end was reached By evolution Never is too late To annihilate All that I got loved All that I adored Never is too late To participate In the pointless grind Of mankind Ditty, ïíè èøøî ðàçîê, ïëèç ìóçèêî, åñëè è áóäåò, òî âåðèáûñòðîå, ïðîïåâàööî ñêîðåå âñåãî áóäóò òîëüêî ïðèïåâû. à âîîáùå - êàã òîëüêî, òî ñðàçó
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Çàòêíèñü è ãîðè!
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 04.04.2008 11:24 |
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Êàëóãà Fender, B.Ñ.Rich 
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ßçûêà íå çíàþ, íå ïîíÿë íè áåëüìåñà. À òàê ïîíðàâèëîñü. Áóêîâêè êðàñèâûå...
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Ëþáèøü òû ïîòðàôèòü âêóñàì ñåëÿí...
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 04.04.2008 22:08 |
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êàíåø ïíó  Âî-1õ, âòîðàÿ ïîëîâèíà âòîðîãî êóïëåòà òàê è íå îáçàâåëàñü ãëàãîëîì, à5 ñïëîøíàÿ ïåðå÷èñëÿëêà ñ íóëåâûì äåéñòâèåì. Âàðèàíò: Dancing on the corpse of science Circus of the bio\\nano Imitates the flip defiance Sacred flames of endorama ...õîòÿ ñìà÷íûé îáðàç Galvanized corpse of science ìíå òåðÿòü æàëêî) Âî-2õ, îçàäà÷èëî îòêðîâåíèå: Dead end was reached By evolution Âîò òå, áàáóøêà, è...  ïåðâîì âàðèàíòå áûëà äèíàìèêà, à òóò ÷òî - ñâåðøèâøèéñÿ êàïóò? Ñîððè, íå âåðþ. Äà è âðåìåííÀÿ ôîðìà íåóêëþæà. È ñìûñëîâàÿ íåñòûêîâêà ñ ïîñëåäóþùèì çàáîéíûì "never is too late..." - òàì æå êàêàÿ-íèêàêàÿ ïåðñïåêòèâà ïðåäïîëàãàåòñÿ. Êîðî÷å, êîíêðåòíî ñ ýòîé çàìåíîé ÿ íåñîãëàñíàÿ)) Íè÷åãî ïîêà íå ïðåäëàãàþ, óñòàìøè ÿ íîíå÷à... åñëè ñòðåëüíåò ÷0, ïîòîì ìàÿêíó. À ñàì íàéäåøü ëó÷øå  Íî ïðèïåâ õîðîø, õîðîø. Êàê ïðåäñòàâëþ, êàÃýòî ìîæåò ãðîìûõíóòü ñ âûäîõîì íà annihilate... Êðóò, ÷åðòÿêà)) |
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 04.04.2008 22:35 |
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Ìàëàõîâêà ìîçã 
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À íà õðåíà ïî àíãëèéñêè? ÿ âîò èòàëüÿíöåâ ïî ðóññêè çàñòàâèë îáùàòüñÿ... à òî ÷å, îíè â Ðîññèþ ïðèïåðëèñü ...è íè ñëîâà ïî ðóññêè..òèïà ìû çíàåì, íî àíãëèéñêèé... âîîáùå îáíàãëåëè... ÷åðåç íåäåëþ íàøëè çíàþùåãî ðóññêèé áîëåå ìåíåå... è îñòàëüíûå ïóñòü ó÷àò...
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 17.04.2008 14:27 |
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Åñëè èñïðàâèòü âñå îøèáêè, òî ñðåäíåíüêî....äëÿ íåíîñèòåëÿ ÿçûêà. Never is to late To annihilate Ïåðåäåëàé íà It is never late, to annihilate. È ðèôìà åñòü, è ïî àíãëèéñêè - ïðàâèëüíî áóäåò. Ãðàììàòèêó åù¸ íèêòî íå îòìåíÿë, à òî Àíãëè÷àíå çàñìåþò. Ñìûñë ïî÷òè â êàæäîé ôðàçå îòäåëåí, íî îáùèé ñìûñë âðîäå åñòü. Õîòÿ, ïåòü ïðî òî, êàêîé ïëîõîé ìèð è ïðî òî, ÷òî âñ¸ ÷åëîâå÷åñòâî íå ïðàâî!, õåõ, ÈÌÕÎ, ãëóïî. Ôðàçî-îáðàçû íå ÿðêèå íèêàê. Ñîððè, åñëè ÷òî. ß íå ðåêëàìèðóþ, ...íî åñëè óæ ïî àíãëèéñêè ïèøåøü - ïîñëóøàé êàêèå òåêñòû ó The Doors. Õîòÿ, ñòèëèñòèêà ó òåáÿ âðîäå ñîâñåì äðóãàÿ... òîãäà Íèðâàíó Ãëàâíîå - Ñìûñë! |
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 17.04.2008 15:35 |
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charybdis अ ग ा ध
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Çåìëÿíèí, äà ïðîñòî èíòåðåñíî ñòàëî. Chetobor, âî-ïåðâûõ òàì î÷åïÿòêî, ñëåäóåò ÷èòàòü "never is too late". Âî-âòîðûõ êîíñòðóêöèÿ êðèâîâàòàÿ, íî âïîëíå äîïóñòèìàÿ, îñîáåííî â òåêñòå. Â-òðåòüèõ àêöåíò èäåò íà never. Äàëåå...õîðîøî, ÷òî èìõî ïîñòàâèë. Èáî â ìåññèäæ òû íå âúåõàë Êàñàåìî "ôðàçî-îáðàçû íåÿðêèå íèêàê" - ïðèâåäè ïëèç ïðèìåð ÿðêèõ "ôðàçî-îáðàçîâ", íåãàòèâíî-äåñòðóêòèâíîãî õàðàêòåðà, áóäó âåñüìà ïðèçíàòåëåí.Íà àíãëèéñêîì íå ïèøó Ýòîò òåêñò - åäèíñòâåííîå èñêëþ÷åíèå. Ðåêîìåíäàöèÿ îðèåíòèðîâàööî íà òâîð÷åñòâî êóðòû êîáåéíû âåñüìà ïîçàáàâèëà.Çà îòçûâ ïàñèáû, çâèíÿé, êîëè ÷åì îáèäåë
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Çàòêíèñü è ãîðè!
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 17.04.2008 15:43 |
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>ïðèâåäè ïëèç ïðèìåð ÿðêèõ "ôðàçî-îáðàçîâ", íåãàòèâíî-äåñòðóêòèâíîãî õàðàêòåðà, áóäó âåñüìà ïðèçíàòåëåí. "Æîïó ñ òðåñêîì ðàçîðâàë" 
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 17.04.2008 15:59 |
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charybdis अ ग ा ध
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Stop, ýòî áëèæå ê äýòõó èëè ãðàéíäó, íåæåëè ê áëýêó, õîòÿ, êîíå÷íî êîíöåïòóàëüíî è ôèçèîëîãè÷íî 
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Çàòêíèñü è ãîðè!
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 17.04.2008 16:40 |
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Õåõ, ...òû áû òîãäà ñðàçó â çàãîëîâêå íàïèñàë, ÷òî ïåñíÿ â ñòèëå Metal(Death Metal, Grind Metal èëè êàêîé òàì ó òåáÿ ñòèëü) - íåãàòèâíî-äåñòðóêòèâíîãî õàðàêòåðà. Òîãäà äà, òàêîé ïîäõîä ê íàïèñàíèþ òåêñòîâ îïðàâäàí. Âñ¸ ðàâíî íèêòî íå óñëûøèò, ÷åãî òû òàì â ìèêðîôîí êðè÷èøü. Ëó÷øå òåêñòà íå ñûñêàòü. ß çíàþ, ÷òî ïåñíè, íàïèñàííûå íà àíãëèéñêîì - "íå ïåðåâîäÿòñÿ"(ýòî ôàêò, èáî ëþáîé ïåðåâîä áóäåò áðåäîì)(ß äèïëîìèðîâàííûé ïðîôåññèîíàëüíûé ïåðåâîä÷èê, åñëè ÷òî). Íî òâîþ êàê ðàç ïåðåâåñòè ìîæíî! Ïåðåâåäè êàæäóþ ñòðî÷êó íà ðóññêèé, è ïî÷èòàé. Ñìûñë ïðèêîëüíûé À ïî ïîâîäó, ïðèâåäè ïðèìåð, òî âîò: This is the end, Beautiful friend This is the end, My only friend, the end Of our elaborate plans, the end Of everything that stands, the end No safety or surprise, the end I'll never look into your eyes...again Can you picture what will be, So limitless and free Desperately in need...of some...stranger's hand In a...desperate land Lost in a Roman...wilderness of pain And all the children are insane, All the children are insane Waiting for the summer rain, yeah There's danger on the edge of town Ride the King's highway, baby Weird scenes inside the gold mine Ride the highway west, baby Ride the snake, ride the snake To the lake, the ancient lake, baby The snake is long, seven miles Ride the snake...he's old, and his skin is cold The west is the best, The west is the best Get here, and we'll do the rest The blue bus is callin' us, The blue bus is callin' us Driver, where you taken' us The killer awoke before dawn, he put his boots on He took a face from the ancient gallery And he walked on down the hall He went into the room where his sister lived, and...then he Paid a visit to his brother, and then he He walked on down the hall, and And he came to a door...and he looked inside Father, yes son, I want to kill you Mother...I want to...#### you C'mon baby, take a chance with us X3 And meet me at the back of the blue bus Doin' a blue rock, On a blue bus Doin' a blue rock, C'mon, yeah Kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill This is the end, Beautiful friend This is the end, My only friend, the end It hurts to set you free But you'll never follow me The end of laughter and soft lies The end of nights we tried to die This is the end |
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 17.04.2008 16:50 |
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charybdis अ ग ा ध
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Chetobor, íàëèöî ïðåäâçÿòîå îòíîøåíèå ê ýêñòðåìàëüíûì ìóçûêàëüíûì íàïðàâëå èÿì. Õì... íåñìîòðÿ íà ñâîþ íåäèïëîìèðîâàííîñòü è íåïðîôåññèîíàëüíîñòü âñòðå÷àë âïîëíå îñìûñëÿåìûå è ïåðåâîäèìûå íàòèâíûå àíãëèöêûå ïåñåííûå òåêåñòû... ïðèìåð íå âïå÷àòëèë àáñîëþòíî. |
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Çàòêíèñü è ãîðè!
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Òåìà: Re: Snapshot
Âðåìÿ: 17.04.2008 16:52 |
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Äà, ìû ïðîñòî èç ðàçíûõ ñòèëåé. Ïðîñòè ìåíÿ, çà äóðàöêèå âûïàäû. Âñ¸ ó òåáÿ íîðì. |
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