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Òåìà: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 03.03.2008 11:28 |
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åñëè åñòü îøèáêè, òî ïðîñüáà ñîîáùèòü..òê ÿ íå òàê óæ ñâîáîäíî çíàþ èíãëèø  HER EYES Her eyes, milky with age Her eyes, opened wide in horror Her eyes, milky and strange Opened wide in horror As she looked from the rocky riverbank Into the swirling waters below Her eyes like a garden rank With weeds And her bitter tears sheded slow She felt the need of help She started crying softly Resigned to his command He only Kissed her on the cheek What you really wanted, baby? Never was and never will be Finding devotion With one forceful motion He pushed you into the water He vanquished you But he gave you the fire
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Òåìà: Re: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 03.03.2008 11:35 |
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Moscow guitar,bass and voice
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íè÷î òàê. íîðìàëüíî. | |
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shake your moneymaker
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Òåìà: Re: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 03.03.2008 11:41 |
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ÑÏá Dean Brian Bromberg 5str, Yamaha BB-615, BOSS ME-50B 
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What you really wanted, baby? ...Òàê íå ãîâîðÿò...à åñëè è ãîâîðÿò..òî òîëüêî àôðîàìåðèêàíöû èç ãëóáèí Ãàðëåìà...ãðóáàÿ àøèïêà, âîùåì... ïðàâèëüíî áûëî áû: What did you really want,baby? |
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Åñëè òû ñïîðèøü ñ äóðàêîì - òî äóðàêîâ óæå äâîå.
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Òåìà: Re: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 03.03.2008 13:20 |
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äà êñòàòè, åñòü òàêàÿ ãðàììàòè÷åñêàÿ îøèáêà. | |
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shake your moneymaker
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Òåìà: Re: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 03.03.2008 15:55 |
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>Never was and never will be You don't know how you betrayed me òàêîå óæå ó Amy Lee áûëî... íå åþ, ñëó÷àåì, íàâåÿíî? À âîîáùå - ìîëîäåö! Ðåñïåêò òåáå - òóò àíãëèéñêîãî ìà-à-àëî... À òû, ñ÷èòàé, ïåðâîïðîõîäåö! 
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Òåìà: Re: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 03.03.2008 15:58 |
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>Never was and never will be You don't know how you betrayed me òàêîå óæå ó Amy Lee áûëî... íå åþ, ñëó÷àåì, íàâåÿíî? À âîîáùå - ìîëîäåö! Ðåñïåêò òåáå - òóò àíãëèéñêî |
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Òåìà: Re: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 03.03.2008 17:39 |
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What you really wanted, baby? âïðèíöèïå ýòà ñòðî÷êà òîæå âçÿòà èç îäíîé ïåñíè..åñëè òà4 ñïåëè..çíà÷èò ÿ äóìàþ, ñîéäåò 
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Òåìà: Re: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 03.03.2008 17:44 |
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ÑÏá Dean Brian Bromberg 5str, Yamaha BB-615, BOSS ME-50B
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Æåì÷óæèíà...íó òû äàåøü...))) ...Çà÷åì òèðàæèðîâàòü áåçãðàìîòíîñòü?..)) ..Íó...òîëüêî åñëè â êà÷åñòâå êóëüòóðíîé äèâåðñèè....ñóïðîòèâ àãëèöêîãî ÿçûêó...))) |
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Åñëè òû ñïîðèøü ñ äóðàêîì - òî äóðàêîâ óæå äâîå.
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Òåìà: Re: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 03.03.2008 17:58 |
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åñòü êîñÿêè. ñêàëèñòûé áåðåã ðåêè - ýòî ñòðàííî. need of help - íåâåðíî. äîëæíî áûòü need for/ è áåç àðòèêëÿ. Ïî ïîâîäó "÷åãî æå òû õî÷åøü, äåòêà" - ìîæíî è òàê îñòàâèòü, áåç âîïðîñèòåëüíîé èíâåðñèè â ïîðÿäêå ñëîâ. À âîïðîñ îáîçíà÷èòü òîëüêî èíòîíàöèåé. Ýòî íå îøèáêà, à âïîëíå äîïóñòèìàÿ ëèíãâèñòè÷åñêàÿ âîëüíîñòü, Ïðî ãîðüêèå ñëåçû - ïðàâèëüíî íå slow, a slowly. Âñå âöåëîì ïðîèçâîäèò âïå÷àòëåíèå î÷åíü áåçãðàìîòíîãî òåêñòà. | |
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Òåìà: Re: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 03.03.2008 20:37 |
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Õî÷åòöà ñêàçàòü: âñÿ ýñòðàäà â öåëîì ïðîèçâîäèò âïå÷àòëåíèå î÷åíü áåçãðàìîòíîãî òåêñòà. . .çäåñü íå íóæýí ïðàâèëüíûé êîðåíîé èíãëèø, à ñïðàøèâàþ, êàê áóèò íàðìàëüíî çâó÷àòü â ðàìêàõ äîïóñòèìîãî?. .è íå ïóòàéòå ðàçãîâîðíûé è äåëîâîé àíãë.ñ àíãë.ïåñíÿìè äâå ðàçíûå âåùè. .ÿ ìàãó âçÿòü è ïî ðóññêè ñïåòü íà àáðûãàíñêîì,ýòî áóèò íåãðàìàòíî, íî ìíîãèì ïàíðàâèòñÿ, òàê øå èñõîäÿÈÇýòîãî ïðîøóÑóäèòü
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Òåìà: Re: îöåíèòå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò
Âðåìÿ: 13.03.2008 01:39 |
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íå ïîíèìàþ ÷åãî ìîæåò áûòü òðàííîãî â ñêàëèñòîì áåðåãó ðåêè...))) | |
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