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Òåìà: Alone in my dreams
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 14:03 



"Alone in my dreams"

I walk across the streets
And see that everybody is missed
I close my eyes and feel that I'm crying
I cry because it's hard to be alone
In world where the people like the clones!

I want to be young forever,
I want to be happy together,
I want to see the world,
I want to love a girl!
I want my dreams come true,
And this is my life truth.

The people always busy,
But make some fun so easy!
I know the truth
And want to show it for all!
But they don't understand
what i want to say!
The place where I now live so grey!

This place is our hearts
We closed them but I don't know why!
I like the life but troubles drops me down!
But I'm happy because
I know another way
I must run away to different place!

I want to be young forever,
I want to be happy together,
I want to see the world,
I want to love a girl!
I want my dreams come true,
And this is my life truth.
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Òåìà: Re: Alone in my dreams
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 14:08 



>I want to see the world,
>I want to love a girl!
:tardlol:
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Òåìà: Re: Alone in my dreams
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 14:15 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
Ãèòàðû ôåíäåð,á¸ðíè, ïåðåäàò÷èê, Ãëîòêà

"Îäèí â ìîèõ ìå÷òàõ"

ÿ èäó ïîïåðåê óëèö È âèæó,
÷òî êàæäûé ïðîïóùåí, ÿ çàêðûâàþ ìîè ãëàçà è ÷óâñòâóþ, ÷òî ÿ êðè÷ó, ÿ êðè÷ó, ïîòîìó ÷òî òðóäíî áûòü îäíèì  ìèðå ãäå ëþäè êàê êëîíû! ß õî÷ó áûòü ìîëîäûì íàâñåãäà, ÿ õî÷ó áûòü ñ÷àñòëèâûì âìåñòå, ÿ õî÷ó âèäåòü ìèð, ÿ õî÷ó ëþáèòü äåâî÷êó! ß õî÷ó ìîè ìå÷òû, îñóùåñòâëåííûå, È ýòî - ìîÿ ïðàâäà æèçíè. Ëþäè, âñåãäà çàíÿòûå, Íî äåëàþò íåêîòîðóþ çàáàâó íàñòîëüêî ëåãêîé! ß çíàþ ïðàâäó È õî÷ó ïîêàçàòü ýòî äëÿ âñåõ! Íî îíè íå ïîíèìàþò òî, ê ÷åìó ÿ õî÷ó
ÿ êàê Àëåêñàíäðîâñêèé ñòîëï
ñòîþ è íå ïàäàþ è çà ìíîé ìîé àíãåë è êðåñò
íî íåêîòîðûå äåáèëû äóìàþò òàê
èëè ñòîëáû íå âèñÿò íà ïðîâîäàõ ýòî ïðîâîäà âèñÿò íà ñòîëáàõ
http://www.realmusic.ru/that_take
bahvik@bk.ru
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Òåìà: Re: Alone in my dreams
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 14:28 



Ñëóøàé ÿ íå ïðîñòèâ êðèòèêè íî ìîæíî ïî-ëèòåðàòóðíåå êàê-íèòü ïåðåâîäèòü!
1)Íå óïóùåí à ïîòåðÿí
2)ÍÅ Êðè÷ó à ïëà÷ó
3)íå îñóùåñòâëåííûå à îñóùåñòâèëèòü : (õî÷ó ÷òîáû ìå÷òû îñóùåñòâèëèñü)
4)Ïðî çàáàâó: "Íî ñäåëàòü ñ÷àñòüå òàê ïðîñòî" âìåñòî "Íî äåëàþò íåêîòîðóþ çàáàâó íàñòîëüêî ëåãêîé"!
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Òåìà: Re: Alone in my dreams
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 14:58 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
Ãèòàðû ôåíäåð,á¸ðíè, ïåðåäàò÷èê, Ãëîòêà

ÿ íå ïåðåâîä÷èê, ÿ â ïðîìò çàñóíóë è ïîëó÷ìë ðåçóëüòàò, :)
õî÷åøü äåëàé ýòî ñàì.ïðîñòî çäåøíèå îáèòàòåëè, â îñíîâíîì ðóñêîÿçû÷íûå. :)
ÿ êàê Àëåêñàíäðîâñêèé ñòîëï
ñòîþ è íå ïàäàþ è çà ìíîé ìîé àíãåë è êðåñò
íî íåêîòîðûå äåáèëû äóìàþò òàê
èëè ñòîëáû íå âèñÿò íà ïðîâîäàõ ýòî ïðîâîäà âèñÿò íà ñòîëáàõ
http://www.realmusic.ru/that_take
bahvik@bk.ru
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Òåìà: Re: Alone in my dreams
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 15:51 



Äà, ìîæíî è íå ïåðåâîäèòü, â ïðèíöèïå, èíãëèø íà óðîâíå 7-ãî êëàññà, âñå ïîíÿòíî
Íî òîêà òåêñò òî ýòîãî íå ïåðåñòàåò áûòü íàáîðîì áåññâÿçíûõ ïðåäëîæåíèèé.
Äà, ÷åñòíî ãîâîðÿ ñàáæ è íà òåêñò-òî íå òÿíåò.
Äèêòàíò ïî àíãëèéñêîìó.
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Òåìà: Re: Alone in my dreams
Âðåìÿ: 04.06.2007 11:29 



This author often cries,
His eyes never dry.
His rhymes is rotten and not so fresh,
At last it is just trash.
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!