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Òåìà: I walk with you...
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 14:02 



I walk with you,
The best day ever!
You talk all time,
What can be better?!
The best girl I have ever seen,
But you don't want to be with me.
Why do you think it is the end,
And we will be the ONLY friends?

I think of you when day is coming,
I think of you when I'm crying,
I think of you day after day,
And this is truth..What can i say!!!!

You play with me
like with the toy!
But I'm alive,
I'm real boy!
I understand that it's not the end,
That I will find another girlfriend!
But why i must to say "okay"!!!
There is must be some other way!!!

I think of you when day is coming,
I think of you when I'm crying,
I think of you day after day,
And this is truth..What can i say!!!

I never thought
about life so clear!
And this is because
You was so near!
Why my mind always play with me?
It always shows me what can be:
If you and me will be together,
And i will be happy more than ever!

I think of you when day is coming,
I think of you when I'm crying,
I think of you day after day,
And this is truth..What can i say!!!!
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Òåìà: Re: I walk with you...
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 14:11 
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ïðîìòîì ïåðåâ¸ë... :)

ß èäó ñ Âàìè,
ëó÷øèé äåíü êîãäà-ëèáî!
Âû ãîâîðèòå âñå âðåìÿ,
×òî ìîæåò áûòü ëó÷øå?!
Âîçëþáëåííàÿ, êîòîðóþ ÿ êîãäà-ëèáî âèäåë,
Íî Âû íå õîòèòå áûòü ñî ìíîé.
Ïî÷åìó Âû äóìàåòå, ÷òî ýòî - êîíåö,
È ìû áóäåì ÅÄÈÍÑÒÂÅÍÍÛÌÈ äðóçüÿìè?
ß äóìàþ î Âàñ, êîãäà äåíü ïðèáûâàåò,
ÿ äóìàþ î Âàñ, êîãäà ÿ êðè÷ó,
ÿ äóìàþ î Âàñ äåíü çà äíåì,
È ýòî - ïðàâäà.. ×òî ìîæåò ÿ ãîâîðèòü!!!!
Âû èãðàåòå ñî ìíîé êàê ñ èãðóøêîé!
Íî ÿ æèâ, ÿ - ðåàëüíûé ìàëü÷èê!
ß ïîíèìàþ, ÷òî ýòî íå êîíåö,
×òî ÿ íàéäó äðóãóþ ïîäðóãó!
Íî ïî÷åìó ÿ äîëæåí ê :)
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Òåìà: Re: I walk with you...
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 14:21 



Íó â ïðèíöèïå ïðàâèëüíî åñëè íå ñ÷èòàòü:
1)òàì íå "ÂÛ" à "Òû"
2)Íå "Åäèíñòâåííûìè" à "Òîëüêî"
3)Crying - "ïëà÷ó" à íå "êðè÷ó"
4)Íå æèâ à æèâîé!

Âîò :drazn:
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Òåìà: Re: I walk with you...
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 15:14 
Ìîñêâà
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Spon.. :drazn: ...Íà ðóññêîì ÿçûêå..æåëàòåëüíî ïèñàòü!
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Òåìà: Re: I walk with you...
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 15:45 



[mAd]Slon©, äà ïóùàé ïèøåò íà êàêîì õî÷åò, âîò òîêà êòî ýòî áóäåò ÷èòàòü?
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Òåìà: Re: I walk with you...
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 16:01 



Ìîé ñîâåò: áîëüøå ðàáîòàéòå íàä ãðàììàòèêîé,åñëè ïëàíèðóåòå áîëåå ñåðüåçíóþ ðåàëèçàöèþ âàøåãî òâîð÷åñòâà,íåæåëè îáíàðîäîâàíèå íà ôîðóìå...
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Òåìà: Re: I walk with you...
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2007 16:25 



Àíãëîÿçû÷íûì òåêñòîì òðóäíî âîîáùå âîñõèøàòüñÿ áåç ìóçûêè, ò.ê. ó ìåíÿ, íàïðèìåð, óõî, ò.å. ìîçõ âñå-òêè "íàñòðîåí" íà ðóññêèé ÿçûê, . À òóò òàêîé êâåñò -
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!