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Òåìà: " Pain"
Âðåìÿ: 15.05.2007 14:15 |
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“Pain” Fear of loneliness, Fear of darkness, Nobody will care of it And you know it. Erasing memory, Erasing a life’s story, Trying to correct it all, Trying to deceive. Shadows behind the window, Cold and terrible, It is not possible, you know. Again pierced in heart like the knife. I will be forgotten by my dream, And tomorrow all over again, I want to scream… Around only pain… |
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Òåìà: Re: " Pain"
Âðåìÿ: 15.05.2007 16:13 |
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Katy, "ß çàáóäóñü ñíîì, È çàâòðà âñ¸ ñíà÷àëà, ß õî÷ó êðè÷àòü... Âîêðóã îäíà áîëü..." ïîñëåäíèå äâå ñòðî÷êè îò ïåðâûõ äâóõ íåîòäåëèìû ... " êðè÷àòü îò áåçûñõîäíîñòè".. ýòî èìåëîñü ââèäó ...:) |
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Òåìà: Re: " Pain"
Âðåìÿ: 15.05.2007 16:17 |
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Ìîñêâà Áàðàáàíû 
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Cool but it's not enough | |
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ìû íàðîä íå çëîé >:)
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Òåìà: Re: " Pain"
Âðåìÿ: 15.05.2007 16:25 |
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ß ïðîñòî ïåðåâîæó, ÷òî âû íàïèñàëè: ß áóäó çàáûòà ñâîèì ñíîì,.. ÿ áóäó êðè÷àòü âîêðóã òîëüêî áîëè... À òî, ÷òî âû èìåëè ââèäó ÿ ïîíÿëà 
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Òåìà: Re: " Pain"
Âðåìÿ: 15.05.2007 16:41 |
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ó ìåíÿ ëè÷íî òîæå îíà íå âñåãäà ÿâíî ïðèñóòñòâóåò, íî òàê êàê ïèøó òåêñòû íà ìóçûêó, òî îêàçûâàåòñÿ íå ñòðàøíî, à ïðè ðàñïåâàíèè èíîãäà ðèôìà âîëøåáíûì îáðàçîì ïîÿâëÿåòñÿ =)) | |
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Òåìà: Re: " Pain"
Âðåìÿ: 15.05.2007 16:44 |
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Ìîñêâà Áàðàáàíû
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yulllya? Âû ðàññóæäàåòå ñ òî÷êè çðåíèÿ ðóññêîãî ñòèõîñëîæåíèÿ.  àíãëèéñêîé ïåñåííîé òðàäèöèè óäàðåíèå èíîãäà ñòàâèòñÿ íà ïîñëåäíèé ñëîã, ïîýòîìó ðèôìû çäåñü "loneliness-darkness", "memory - story" è òä è òï |
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ìû íàðîä íå çëîé >:)
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Òåìà: Re: " Pain"
Âðåìÿ: 16.05.2007 10:36 |
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ýòà íå ïåñíÿ, ïðîñòî ñòèøîê.. ïðè÷åì ïåðâûé íàïèñàííûé ìíîé íà àíãëèéñêîì, òàê ÷òî ñàìà âèæó ÷òî íàïèñàëà íåìíîãî ïðîñòîâàòî è êîíå÷íî äàëåêî íå ïðîôåññèîíàëüíî..ãã..áóäåì ó÷èòüñÿ...ñïàñèáî âñåì) | |
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