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Òåìà: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 12.05.2007 15:50 |
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1. Thanks that you hurt me,thanks that you hurt me, That you're breaking my selfconsciousness. There's great ant hill,there's great ant hill, Anyone doesn't care for someone's business. Jeer at my self-approisal, humble and raise me,depending on your mood. Teach me to distinguish,to be all-sufficient, Constaining self-criticism, to get to the root. ïðèïåâ: You help me to build more perfect me. You help me to build more perfect world. (Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.) Thank you for all. 2. Thanks to industry, show-industry. It makes my dream so tangible. It needs only profit,it needs only money, It wants me to be more mercenery musical. Slowly accumulating energy, I erect a dome to defend. Thanks that you hurt me,thanks that you hurt me Somewhen my best enemy was the best friend. ïðèïåâ: You help me to build more perfect me You help me to build more perfect world. (Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.) Thank you for all. Tragedy becames a treasure, My revelation through the pain. I just smile and I thank you, When you say again that i'm very same. ...the same I used to be |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 12.05.2007 15:52 |
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áóäó áëàãîäàðíà , åñëè ïîäñêàæåòå îøèáêè â òåêñòå. ñïàñèáî. | |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 12.05.2007 23:14 |
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ëþäè, ñêàæèòå ÷åñòíî, òåêñò ïëîõîé èëè àíãëèéñêèé íå î÷åíü õîðîøî çíàåòå? | |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 12.05.2007 23:21 |
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ïî-àíãëèéñêè òàê âîîáùå íå ãîâîðÿò è íå ïèøóò... êðèâîé ïåðåâîä ñ ðóññêîãî... | |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 13.05.2007 22:49 |
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yulllya, "áóäó áëàãîäàðíà , åñëè ïîäñêàæåòå îøèáêè â òåêñòå. ñïàñèáî" "Anyone doesn't care for someone's business"-òàê òî÷íî íåëüçÿ ñêàçàòü-Nobody cares for anyone's business òîãäà óæ... "Thank you for all" ëèáî for IT all ëèáî "for everything"... "Somewhen"-'à ýòî íàâåðíîå àâòîðñêèé íåîëîãèçì 
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 14.05.2007 01:00 |
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Tragedy becames a treasure - Tragedy becOmes a treasure, mercenery musical - mercenAry musicIAN. À êàê ïåðåâîäèòñÿ self-approisal è Constaining? ×òî êàñàåòñÿ ñàìîãî òåêñòà â öåëîì, òåìà õîðîøàÿ, íî ñîãëàøóñü ñ ÃÐÅÊîì, òåêñò îñòàâëÿåò âïå÷àòëåíèå ïåðåâîäà ñ ðóññêîãî, íå õâàòàåò ðèòìè÷íîñòè, ëàêîíè÷íîñòè. Ìíå êàæåòñÿ òàêîé òåêñò áóäåò òðóäíî ñïåòü, òàêæå, êàê íàïèñàòü ê íåìó ìóçûêó. |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 14.05.2007 01:01 |
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somewhen - êîãäà-òî . åñòü âî âñåõ àíëî-ðóññêèõ ñëîâàðÿõ. | |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 14.05.2007 01:21 |
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Þëÿ, òû æå âðîäå ðóññêèé ÷åëîâåê - íà õðåíà îíî òåáå íàäî? Ïîêàçàòü, êàêàÿ òû óìíàÿ? Âñ¸ ýòî îòäàåò äåøåâûì ïîçåðñòâîì. ×òîáû ïèñàòü ïîëíîöåííûå òåêñòû íà àíãëèéñêîì - íàäî òàì ðîäèòüñÿ, äóìàòü ïî-àíãëèéñêè, ÷óâñòâîâàòü àíãëîÿçû÷íóþ êóëüòóðó. Ìíå êàæåòñÿ ýòî ïðåäàòåëüñòâîì ïî îòíîøåíèþ ê ðîäíîìó ÿçûêó - â òâîåì ðàñïîðÿæåíèè - ëó÷øèå ïèñàòåëè çà âñþ èñòîðèþ ñóùåñòâîâàíèÿ ñëîâà, òû îáëàäàåøü óíèêàëüíîé âîçìîæíîñòüþ -÷èòàòü â îðèãèíàëå Äîñòîåâñêîãî, Åñåíèíà, Áðîäñêîãî è - îòâå÷àòü èì íà òîì æå ÿçûêå. Âìåñòî ýòîãî, òû ïðåäïî÷ëà ÿçûê Ðîíàëüäà Ìàêäîíàëüäà è ïåäåðàñòà Êîáýéíà. ×òî æ. . . Äåëî òâîå. . . |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 14.05.2007 01:45 |
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Katy, ìóçûêà äàâíûì äàâíî íàïèñàíà, ïèñàëàñü îäíîâðåìåííî ñ òåêñòîì. Âñ¸ âìåñòå çâó÷èò âåñüìà îðãàíè÷íî =) õîòÿ îáû÷íî ÿ ñíà÷àëà ïèøó ìóçûêó,ïîòîì ìó÷èòåëüíî ïðèäóìûâàþ òåêñòû, ïîòîìó îíè íå ÿâëÿþòñÿ ñòèõàìè, à èìåííî òåêñòàìè =) mercenÀry musical - ýòî ïðèëàãàòåëüíîå. self-apprÀisal - ñàìîîöåíêà =) ConstRaining - îãðàíè÷èâàÿ. for all - äà, êîñÿê =) ÷òî-íèòü ïðèäóìàþ Nobody cares for anyone's business - íàâåðíî òàê äåéñòâèòåëüíî ïðàâèëüíî. =) Venus, Katy, ñïàñèáî çà ïîìîùü. |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 14.05.2007 01:50 |
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Äæàìèëü, à òû âðîäå íå ðóññêèé ÷åëîâåê, òîãäà çà÷åì òåáå ìåíÿ, ðóññêîãî ÷åëîâåêà, ó÷èòü? =))) | |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 14.05.2007 01:58 |
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Ïóëåì¸ò Ìàêñèì  
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Ïîæàëóé, ñîãëàøóñü ñ Äæàìèëåì. Çà÷åì ïåòü íà àíãëèéñêîì? Òèïà - òàì íà çàïàäå òàê è æäóò ïîäîáíûõ "ãåíèàëüíûõ" èñïîëíèòåëåé... Àìáèöèè, ïîìûñëè î ìèðîâîì ãîñïîäñòâå? Íå ñòîèò ñòåñíÿòüñÿ ïåòü íà ñâåì ÿçûêå - îí ó íàñ êðàñèâûé è ìîãó÷èé. È ñëîâ â íåì ãîðàçäî áîëüøå, ÷åì â àíãëèéñêîì. È åùå ïðèìåð - íåìåöêèé ÿçûê - ñîâñåì íå ðîê-í-ðîëëüíûé, îäíàêî ðàìøòàéí çàñòàâèë åãî âåñü ìèð ñëóøàòü. Âîò ýòî ïðàâèëüíûé ïîäõîä. |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 14.05.2007 02:00 |
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Ïóëåì¸ò Ìàêñèì
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Äæàìèëü, òû ïóòàåøüò - ïåäåðàñò áûë Ôðåääè Ìåðêóðè, à Êîáåéí - íàðêîìàí. Íî ñóòü íå ìåíÿåò... | |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 14.05.2007 02:13 |
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òîâàðèùè, ÿ íå ñîáèðàþñü çàâî¸âûâàòü íè Çàïàä íè Âîñòîê, êèøêà òîíêà =) ÿ ïðîñòî àíãëèéñêèé òàêèì ñïîñîáîì ó÷ó =) ÷òî-òî çàãîíû ó âàñ, ïûòàåòåñü óâèäåòü òî, ÷åãî íåò =)))) |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 14.05.2007 15:34 |
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"Çà÷åì ïåòü íà àíãëèéñêîì?" -ÿ òîëüêî ïî-àíãëèéñêè íàïðèìåð,ò ê â Àìåðèêå 5 ëåò ïðîæèëà- åãî ïðîñòî âñå âåçäå ïîíèìàþò à ðóññêèé íåò...è ê òîìó æå íåêîòîðûå âåùè áóäóò çâó÷àòü êðàñèâî òîëüêî ïî-àíãëèéñêè... | |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 15.05.2007 11:40 |
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Yulllya "mercenÀry musical - ýòî ïðèëàãàòåëüíîå" Òîãäà ïîëó÷àåòñÿ- "Îíî õî÷åò, ÷òîá ÿ áûëà áîëåå íà¸ìíûì ìóçûêàëüíûì"  À ÷òî êàñàåòñÿ àíãëèéñêîãî, â áîëüøèíñòâå ñëó÷àåâ, ýòî äåéñòâèòåëüíî îòäà¸ò "äåø¸âûì ïîç¸ðñòâîì". Íî íå ñòîèò àíãëèéñêèé ðàñöåíèâàòü, êàê ïðåäàòåëüñòâî, åñòü ìóç. íàïðàâëåíèÿ, êîòîðûì ýòîò ÿçûê èä¸ò ãîðàçäî áîëüøå. yulllya, âîçìîæíî ýòî õîðîøèé ñïîñîá âûó÷èòü ÿçûê, íî íà âàøåì òâîð÷åñòâå ýòî îòðàçèòñÿ íå ëó÷øèì îáðàçîì. Óäà÷è! |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 15.05.2007 15:43 |
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Íå âàæíî, ñóòü îäíà: "Îíî õî÷åò, ÷òîá ÿ áûëà áîëåå êîðûñòíûì ìóçûêàëüíûì" ß ïðî musical, èñõîäÿ èç ëîãè÷åñêèõ ñîîáðàæåíèé ìíå ïîêàçàëîñü, ÷òî âû õîòåëè ñêàçàòü "êîðûñòíûì (íà¸ìíûì) ìóçûêàíòîì" |
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 15.05.2007 16:19 |
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Ìîñêâà Áàðàáàíû
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yulllya? Òåêñò î÷åíü ïîíðàâèëñÿ. Ó÷èòûâàÿ, ÷òî ó íàñ íà ôîðóìå ìàëî àâòîðîâ, âûêëàäûâàþùèõ òåêñòû íà àíãëèéñêîì, õî÷ó Âàñ ïîääåðæàòü. |
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ìû íàðîä íå çëîé >:)
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Òåìà: Re: thank you
Âðåìÿ: 15.05.2007 16:22 |
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Katy, íà ñàìîì äåëå â íåêîòîðûõ ìîìåíòàõ ÿ ñïåöèàëüíî ñòàðàëàñü, ÷òîáû áûëî êàê-òî íåîáû÷íî íàïèñàíî. Åñòü æå íàïðèìåð ó ÄÄÒ òàêèå ïåñíè, ãäå íå îñîáî ïîíÿòíî îá ÷¸ì, çàòî ñîçäà¸òñÿ êàêàÿ-òî àòìîñôåðà òîëè çàãàäî÷íîñòè, òîëè õç ÷åãî. Êîíå÷íî íå ñïîðþ, ÷òî â ìî¸ì òåêñòå ìíîãî êîñÿêîâ,è íèñêîëüêî íå îïðàâäûâàþ ñåáÿ, ÷òî ýòî ÿ âñ¸ ñïåöèàëüíî è âû íå ïîíÿëè òîíêóþ äóøåâíóþ îãðàíèçàöèþ àâòîðà =)))) |
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