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Òåìà: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 19:44 |
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Paint It Black............................................. .......×åðíàÿ ïåñíÿ I see a red door and I want it painted black......................ß âûøåë èç äîìó - óâèäåë ÷åðíûé öâåò No colors anymore I want them to turn black.......................Ìàøèíû, óëèöà, òðàìâàè - ÷åðíûé öâåò I see the girls walk by dressed in their summer clothes...........Íèãäå íå ñïðÿòàòüñÿ îò ÷åðíîãî öâåòÀ I have to turn my head until my darkness goes.....................À ìîæåò, ñïüÿíó, êòî ìíå âûêîëîë ãëàçà?! I see a line of cars and they're all painted black................È äàæå ðóêè ìîè áûëè - ÷åðíûé öâåò With flowers and my love both never to come back..................È äàæå íåáî ñ Ñîëíöåì áûëè - ÷åðíûé ñâåò I see people turn their heads and quickly look away...............Âîêðóã ñåáÿ ÿ âèæó ëèöà èç äåðüìà Like a new born baby it just happens ev'ry day....................Íî îêàçàëîñü âäðóã, ÷òî ýòî - çåðêàëà... I look inside myself and see my heart is black....................Èç ãëàç òâîèõ çåëåíûõ âûïàë ÷åðíûé ñíåã I see my red door and it has been painted black...................È ýòî çíàê, ÷òî ìíå ïîðà áû íà òîò ñâåò Maybe then I'll fade away and not have to face the facts..........Çàæèëñÿ ÿ íà ýòîì ñâåòå, âîä áåäà It's not easy facin' up when your whole world is black............È Áîãó íàäîåë, à çíà÷èò - òàê íåëüçÿ! No more will my green sea go turn a deeper blue...................À åñëè ìíå ïîêðàñèòü äóøó â ÷åðíûé öâåò? I could not foresee this thing happening to you...................À ìîæåò, ó ìåíÿ äóøè-òî âîâñå íåò..... If I look hard enough into the settin' sun........................Ãðóäíóþ êëåòêó ÿ ðóêàìè ðàçîðâó, My love will laugh with me before the mornin' comes...............Äîñòàíó ñåðäöå è òåáå åãî ïðîòÿíó. I see a red door and I want it painted black......................Òû ñêàæåøü: "ó òâîåãî ñåðäöà - ÷åðíûé öâåò" No colors anymore I want them to turn black.......................Òû ñêàæåøü: "ó òâîåãî ñåðäöà - ÷åðíûé öâåò" I see the girls walk by dressed in their summer clothes...........È áðîñèøü ïîä íîãè ïîäàðîê ÷åðíûõ ðóê. I have to turn my head until my darkness goes.....................È ñðàçó ñäåëàåòñÿ áåëûì âñå âîêðóã... |
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 19:50 |
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Îáðàòíàÿ ñâÿçü: ICQ 403948416
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 19:55 |
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Ìîñêâà ñôÿñêè 
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Ïðîñòèòå, à âîò òî ÷òî ïî ðóññêè, ýòî øî? Âåäü òî÷íî íå ïåðåâîä. Íå, íå ìîãó ÿ îöåíèâàòü àãëîÿçû÷íûå òåêñòû, òîëüêî ïîëíîñòüþ ïåñíþ  À âîò òî ÷òî ïî ðóññêè, íå ñëèøêîì ëè æåñòêî?
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Òû äàæå íå ñìîæåøü åå óâèäåòü
Òû íèêîãäà íå çàãëÿíåøü â åå ãëàçà, À äóìàåøü î òîì êàê áû åå íå îáèäåòü Íå âåðÿ â òî, ÷òî îíà äåéñòâèòåëüíî çëà |
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 19:58 |
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Äæàìèëü, ó Âàñ ðÿäîì ïåðåâîä? Ïåðâàÿ ñòðîêà äîñëîâíî: ß âèæó êðàñíóþ äâåðü è õî÷ó ïîêðàñèòü åå â ÷åðíûé. Íåò öâåòà äðóãîãî è ÿ õî÷ó âñå îáðàòèòü â ÷åðíûé. ß âèæó, äåâóøêè ãóëÿþò, îäåòûå â ëåòíèå ïëÿòüÿ. ß ïîâîðà÷èâàþ ãîëîâó ïîêà íå íàñòêïèò òåìíîòà. |
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 20:00 |
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ß âèæó ëèíèþ àâòîìîáèëåé è îíè âñå ÷åðíûå Ñ öâåòàìè è ìîåé ëþáîâüþ( êàòàôàëê?!) îáà íå âåðíóòñÿ íàçàä. .... |
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 20:19 |
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Êàçàíü áàñ-ãèòàðà
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Ïèíîêèî êðóò! ......
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 20:20 |
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Òåññ, ñîãëàñèñü, ÷òî åñëè ïåðåâîäèòü äîñëîâíî - ïîëó÷èòñÿ áðåä... íó ìîæåò, íå áðåä, íî óæ òî÷íî íå ñòèõè. Èìõî, íàñòðîåíèå íå ïåðåäàòü óäàëîñü. Ñîáñòâåííî, äðóãîé çàäà÷è ÿ ïåðåä ñîáîé è íå ñòàâèë. Âîîáùå, ÷òî êàñàåòñÿ ïåðåâîäîâ, òî ó ìåíÿ íà ýòîò ñ÷åò îñîáîå ìíåíèå. Ìíå êàæåòñÿ, ÷òî ïðè ïåðåâîäå ïåñíè ( èìåííî ïåñíè, à íå ñòèõîòâîðåíèÿ) íóæíî óäåëÿòü áîëüøå âíèìàíèÿ ôîíåòè÷åñêîé òîæäåñòâåííîñòè àíãëèéñêèõ è ðóññêèõ ñëîâ. Íàïðèìåð, â îäíîé èç ïåñåí Áîóè "I don't want to go" ÿ ïåðåâîæó êàê "ðîìàíòèêà", õîòÿ ôðàçà ïåðåâîäèòñÿ êàê " ß íå õî÷ó èäòè(óõîäèòü)". Ïðè ýòîì, â îáùåì êîíòåêñòå, ýòà "ðîìàíòèêà" î÷ äàæå â êàññó - ïåñíÿ î ëþáâè. Èëè â "You are always n my mind", çàìèêñîâàííîé Pet Shop Boys , "Te-e-ell me" - ó ìåíÿ: "è ëþáâè". Èìõî, ñëóøàÿ ïåñíþ ñâîåãî(ìîåãî) äåòñòâà, ïîòðåáèòåëü ïðåäàåòñÿ ðîìàíòè÷åñêèì âîñïîìèíàíèÿì è ìîÿ çàäà÷à êàê "êîâåðíîãî" ( â ñìûñëå - ñîçäàòåëÿ êàâåð-âåðñèè ) óñèëèòü îáùèé ïîçèòèâíûé ýôôåêò. Æåðòâóÿ, ïðè ýòîì , ìîæåò áûòü, "äîñëîâíîñòüþ".... |
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 20:30 |
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Êàçàíü áàñ-ãèòàðà
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À Áóðàòèíî íå âûøåë Ïîòîìó êàê íå ïîåòñÿ,ëèáî ÷èòàòü ïîä Äåëüôèíà,ëèáî êðè÷àòü,íî íå ïåòü :)
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 20:32 |
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Ïîæàëóéñòà, âîò âàì äîñëîâíèê: ß âèæó êðàñíóþ äâåðü è õî÷ó ïîêðàñèòü å¸ â ÷åðíûé ....ëàí...1é êóïëåò óæå ïåðåâåëà Òåññ............ ß âèæó êàê ëþäè ñìîòðÿò è ñðàçó æå îòâîðà÷èâàþòñÿ. Êàê íîâîðîæäåííûé -ýò ñëó÷àåòñÿ êàæäûé äåíü ß ãëÿæó âíóòðü ñåáÿ è âèæó - ìî¸ ñåðäöå ÷åðíÎ ß âèæó ñâîþ êðàñíóþ äâåðü - åå ïîêðàñèëè â ÷åðíûé Ìîæåò, îíè óâÿíóò=èñ÷åçíóò è íå óçíàþò ïðàâäû (?) Íå òàê ëåãêî ïðèçíàòü , êîãäà âåñü òâîé ìèð - ÷åðåí. Ìîå çåëåíîå ìîðå (êàêîâî?) íå ïîñèíååò(!) áîëüøå. ß íå ìîãó ïðåäâèäåòü - ñëó÷èòñÿ ëè ýòî ñ òîáîé. Åñëè ÿ ïðèñòàëüíî ñìîòðþ íà çàõîäÿùåå ñîëíöå, Ìîÿ ëþáîâü áóäåò ñìåÿòüñÿ âìåñòå ñî ìîé ïîêà íå ðàññâåòåò. |
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 20:35 |
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Soft, ïîåòñÿ, ñîáñòíà, òîë÷îì ê íàïèñàíèþ äàííîãî îïóñà è ïîñëóæèëî íàëè÷èå âîçìîæíîñòè ñïåòü ýòî íà ðóññêîì. ß ñëóøàë â ïëååðå èñõîäíèê è ñëîâà êàê-òî ñàìè ïðèøëè êî ìíå... |
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 20:48 |
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íàñòðîåíèå íå ïåðåäàòü óäàëîñü - îïèñêà.... ñëó÷àéíàÿ ëè? |
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 06.04.2007 20:55 |
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Ìîãèëüíûé, ýòî ïðîñòî Ëàéáàõ êàêîé-òî! | |
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 07.04.2007 06:37 |
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À ÷òî òàêîå Ëàéáàõ - ýòî ðå÷êà â Ñëîâåíèè ... à ìîæåò Ìàéáàõ(( | |
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Îáðàòíàÿ ñâÿçü: ICQ 403948416
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Òåìà: Re: Áèëèíãâà - Paint it Black
Âðåìÿ: 07.04.2007 06:45 |
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Ýò ãðóïïà òàêàÿ - îíè äåëàþò êàâåðû ñòàðûõ ðîê-í-ðîëëîâ â òàêîé âîò ìðà÷íîé ýñòåòèêå, òèïà êàê òû ñäåëàë " ïýéíò áëýê". Ñîâåòóþ ïîñëóøàòü. |
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