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Àâòîð
Òåìà: ß îäåðæèì òîáîé (ïåðåâîä ïåñíè Ñòèíãà)
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2007 12:44 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


Íà ýòîò ðàç ïîïðîáîâàë ïåðåâåñòè Ñòèíãà. MAD ABOUT YOU. Ïåñíÿ 1991 ãîäà.

ß ÎÄÅÐÆÈÌ ÒÎÁÎÉ

Ëåòÿùèé êàìåíü èç Ñâÿòîé çåìëè,
Ïîä ëóííûì ñâåòîì – ïóòü ìîé îäèíîêèé,
Ñâîçü ìèëëèîíû çâåçä ãîðÿùèõ
ß ïîòåðÿëñÿ íà ÷óæîé ïëàíåòå,
Òîé, ÷òî ëåòèò âîêðóã ëóíû
Êðóæèò ïî äóãå èç ãðóñòè,
ß ãèáíó áåç òåáÿ,
ß ãèáíó áåç òåáÿ.
Âñå ñòðàíû ïðåâðàòèëèñü â ïðàõ,
Èñ÷åçëè áåç ñëåäà,
ß îäåðæèì òîáîé,
ß îäåðæèì òîáîé.

Òàì òüìîé îòäåëåíà äîëèíà,
Òàì çâóêè äðåâíèõ ïåñåí ãðóñòè,
Íî ìûñëè òîëüêî î òåáå,
Êàæäûé øàã – ëèøü î òåáå,
Çâåçäà – êàê çåðíûøêî â ïåñêå,
Ñëåäû ñóõîãî îêåàíà,
Òû ñêàæè ìíå, ñêîëüêî,
Ñêîëüêî æäàòü åùå?

Ñòàðèííûé ãîðîä åñòü â ãëóõèõ êðàÿõ,
Âëàäûêè äðåâíåãî êàïðèç,
Íî ãîðîä âåñü - ëåæèò â ðóèíàõ,
Òàì âåòåð âîåò, ãðèôû òàì êðè÷àò,
Âîò – òâîðåíüå ðóê,
Âîò ðåçóëüòàò ïóñòûõ àìáèöèé.
Ñòàíåò æèçíü ìîÿ òþðüìîé,
Êàê ñòàíåøü òû ÷óæîé æåíîé,
Âñå òþðüìû ðàçëåòÿòñÿ â ïûëü
È âûðâóòñÿ âðàãè,
ß îäåðæèì òîáîé
ß îäåðæèì òîáîé.

ß â æèçíè ðàíüøå - íèêîãäà
Íàñòîëüêî íå áûë îäèíîêèì,
Õîòÿ ìîé ìèð ÿ âèæó, ÿ âëàäåþ èì,
Ìíå ýòî – âñå ðàâíî,
È âûèãðûøà íåò,
Âî âñåõ áîëüøèõ äåëàõ, ãäå íåò ëþáâè…

Ëåòÿùèé êàìåíü èç Ñâÿòîé çåìëè
Ïîä ëóííûì ñâåòîì – ïóòü ìîé îäèíîêèé,
Ñâîçü ìèëëèîíû çâåçä ãîðÿùèõ
ß ïîòåðÿëñÿ íà ÷óæîé ïëàíåòå,
Òîé, ÷òî ëåòèò âîêðóã ëóíû,
Êðóæèò ïî äóãå èç ãðóñòè,
ß ãèáíó áåç òåáÿ,
ß ãèáíó áåç òåáÿ.

Òû äåðæèøü êëþ÷, îí ðàçðóøàåò
Âñå òî, ÷òî âèæó ÿ,
Âñå òþðüìû ðàçëåòÿòñÿ â ïûëü
È âûðâóòñÿ âðàãè,
Âñå ñòðàíû ïðåâðàòèëèñü â ïðàõ,
Èñ÷åçëè áåç ñëåäà,
ß îäåðæèì òîáîé,
ß îäåðæèì òîáîé.
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ß îäåðæèì òîáîé (ïåðåâîä ïåñíè Ñòèíãà)
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2007 12:46 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


Îðèãèíàë

MAD ABOUT YOU

À stone's throw from Jerusalem
I walked a lonely mile in the moonlight
And through a million stars were shining
My heart was lost on a distant planet
That whirls around the April moon
Whirling in an arc of sadness
I'm lost without you
I'm lost without you
Though all my kingdoms turn to sand
And fall into the sea
I'm mad about you
I'm mad about you

And from the dark secluded valleys
I heard the ancient songs of sadness
But every step I thought of you
Every footstep only you
And every star a grain of sand
The leavings of a dried up ocean
Tell me, how much longer?
How much longer?

They say a city in the desert lies
The vanity of an ancient king
But the city lies in broken pieces
Where the wind howls and the vultures sing
These are the works of man
This is the sum of our ambition
It would make a prison of my life
If you became another's wife
With every prison blown to dust
My enemies walk free
I'm mad about you
I'm mad about you

And I’ve never in my life
Felt more alone than I do now
Although I claim dominions over all I see
It means nothing to me
There are no vitories
In all our histories, without love

A stone's throw from Jerusalem
I walked a lonely mile in the moonlight
And through a million stars were shining
My heart was lost on a distant planet
That whirls around the April moon
Whirling in an arc of sadness
I'm lost without you
I'm lost without you

And though you hold the keys to ruin
Of everything I see
With every prison blown to dust,
My enemies walk free
Though all my kingdoms turn to sand
And fall into the sea
I'm mad about you
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ß îäåðæèì òîáîé (ïåðåâîä ïåñíè Ñòèíãà)
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2007 12:55 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


Äëÿ ñðàâíåíèÿ, âûëîæó åùå ïîäñòðî÷íèê.

Êàìåíü áðîøåí èç Èåðóñàëèìà,
ß ïðîøåë â îäèíî÷åñòâå ìèëþ ïîä ëóííûì ñâåòîì,
È ñêâîçü ìèëëèîí ñèÿþùèõ çâåçä,
Ìîå ñåðäöå çàòåðÿëîñü íà äàëåêîé ïëàíåòå.
Êîòîðàÿ âðàùàåòñÿ âîêðóã àïðåëüñêîé ëóíû
Âðàùàåòñÿ ïî äóãå ãðóñòè,
ß ïîãèáàþ áåç òåáÿ.
ß ïîãèáàþ áåç òåáÿ.
Õîòÿ âñå ìîè êîðîëåâñòâà ïðåâðàòèëèñü â ïåñîê
È óïàëè â ìîðå,
ß ñõîæó ñ óìà ïî òåáå.
ß ñõîæó ñ óìà ïî òåáå.

È èç äîëèí, îòäåëåííûõ òüìîé,
ß ñëûøàë äðåâíèå ïåñíè ãðóñòè,
Íî ñ êàæäûì øàãîì ÿ äóìàë î òåáå,
Êàæäûé øàã - òîëüêî î òåáå,
È êàæäàÿ çâåçäà - ïåñ÷èíêà,
Îñòàòêè âûñîõøåãî îêåàíà,
Ñêàæè ìíå, êàê äîëãî åùå?
Êàê äîëãî åùå?

Ãîâîðÿò, åñòü ãîðîä â ïóñòûíå,
Òùåñëàâèå äðåâíåãî êîðîëÿ,
Íî ãîðîä ëåæèò â ðàçâàëèíàõ,
Òàì çàâûâàåò âåòåð è ïîþò ñòåðâÿòíèêè,
Âîò ðàáîòà ÷åëîâåêà,
Âîò èòîã íàøåãî ÷åñòîëþáèÿ,
Ýòî ñäåëàëî áû ìîþ æèçíü òþðüìîé,
Åñëè áû òû ñòàëà æåíîé äðóãîãî.
Ñ ëþáîé òþðüìîé, ðàçíåñåííîé â ïûëü,
Ìîè âðàãè èäóò ñâîáîäíî.
ß ñõîæó ñ óìà ïî òåáå.
ß ñõîæó ñ óìà ïî òåáå.

È íèêîãäà â ìîåé æèçíè
ß íå áûë áîëåå îäèíîêèì, ÷åì ñåé÷àñ,
Õîòÿ îáúÿâëÿþ ñâîèì âëàäåíèåì âñå, ÷òî âèæó,
Ýòî íè÷åãî íå çíà÷èò äëÿ ìåíÿ.
Íåò ïîáåä
Âî âñåõ íàøèõ èñòîðèÿõ, åñëè íåò ëþáâè.

Êàìåíü áðîøåí èç Èåðóñàëèìà,
ß ïðîøåë â îäèíî÷åñòâå ìèëþ ïîä ëóííûì ñâåòîì,
È ñêâîçü ìèëëèîí ñèÿþùèõ çâåçä,
Ìîå ñåðäöå çàòåðÿëîñü íà äàëåêîé ïëàíåòå.
Êîòîðàÿ âðàùàåòñÿ âîêðóã àïðåëüñêîé ëóíû
Âðàùàåòñÿ ïî äóãå ãðóñòè,
ß ïîãèáàþ áåç òåáÿ.
ß ïîãèáàþ áåç òåáÿ.

È õîòÿ òû âëàäååøü êëþ÷îì, ÷òîáû ðàçðóøèòü
Âñå, ÷òî ÿ âèæó,
Ñ ëþáîé òþðüìîé, ðàçíåñåííîé â ïûëü,
Ìîè âðàãè èäóò ñâîáîäíî.
Õîòÿ âñå ìîè êîðîëåâñòâà ïðåâðàòèëèñü â ïåñîê,
È óïàëè â ìîðå,
ß ñõîæó ñ óìà ïî òåáå.
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ß îäåðæèì òîáîé (ïåðåâîä ïåñíè Ñòèíãà)
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2007 13:58 

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