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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã ãèòàðà  
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Óæ áîëüíî ïî äóøå ïåñíÿ... âîò è ðåøèë ñâîé âàðèàíò ïåðåâîäà ïðåäëîæèòü.... Ïîêà òîëüêî ïåðâûé êóïëåò è ïðèïåâ... Íàäåþñü íà ïîìîùü ôîðóì÷àí... ìíå íèêàê íîðìàëüíî íå ïåðåâåñòè âòîðîé êóïëåò... Ïîìîãèòå - íàïèøèòå â ïðîçå äîñëîâíî î ÷åì òàì?.. à ëó÷øå ëèòåðàòóðíî.. Òîãäà è âòîðîé êóïëåò äîäåëàåì...  ïåðâóþ î÷åðåäü ê Âèð Âàðèóñó âîïðîñ? íó è ê îñòàëüíûì ëþáÿùèì ïî speak-àòü  Îïóñòîøåíüå. Êòî ñêàæåò, ÷òî íàñ æäåò? Ñâîèì ðåøåíüÿì ìû ïîòåðÿëè ñ÷åò. Âíîâü è âíîâü, êòî ìíå ñêàçàòü ãîòîâ, ÷òî èùåò çäåñü äóøà? Êòî ñòàë ãåðîåì, êòî ïðåñòóïèë çàêîí - êóëèñû ñêðîþò îò ãëàç èõ ôàðñ ëåãêî. Âíîâü è âíîâü, íåóæòî ÿ ãîòîâ âñå ýòî ïðîäîëæàòü? Ñïåêòàêëü äëèñü! Ñïåêòàêëü äëèñü! Ïóñòü ñåðäöå ðâåòñÿ â êëî÷üÿ, ñëåçàìè ãðèì èñïîð÷åí - óëûáíèñü... òâîé âûõîä! |
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Ãàäàëêè âðóò,
ÿ çíàþ, ÷òî óìðó ãîðàçäî ðàíüøå, äàííîãî ìíå ñðîêà. ß ñàìûì ñòðàøíûì èç ïðîêëÿòèé ïðîêëÿò - ïðèãîâîðåí ê áóìàãå è ïåðó. |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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ÑÏá Shure sm58
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Âñå îòëè÷íî, òîëüêî ïðèïåâ äîðàáîòàé: "Ñïåêòàêëü, äëèñü" - íå î÷åíü óäîáíî äëÿ ïåíèÿ(, è ðèôìó âñåòàêè â êîíöå íåïëîõî áûëî áû ñîáëþñòè. À òàê âñå âïîëíå ãðàìîòíî | |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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"Show must go on" - ìîæíî è âîîáùå íå ïåðåâîäèòü, ò.ê. ôðàçà-òî èçâåñòíàÿ è çíàêîâàÿ. | |
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Îáðàòíàÿ ñâÿçü: ICQ 403948416
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Ñïá
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Sxolast, óéìèñü! Sxolast, óéìèñü! Òâîé ïåðåâîä íå î÷åíü, Èñõîäíûé ñìûñë èñïîð÷åí, Íå ñòðåìèñü Çàêîí÷èòü ))) Èçâèíè, íå ñìîã óäåðæàòüñÿ ) |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã ãèòàðà
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ààà... â òîì-òî è äåëî... "òâîé âûõîä" ðåøèë îñòàâèòü íåçàðìîâàííûì ñïåöèàëüíî.. òàêîé ïîäõîä èíîãäà ñóùåñòâóåò... ìíå ïîêàçàëîñü ýòî íàèëó÷øèì âûõîäîì.. à íàñ÷åò "äëèñü"... ïîåòñÿ íå î÷åíü.. íî ñ ãëàñíûìè âîîáùå áàðäàê ïîëó÷àåòñÿ... à íóæíî åùå íà óëûáêó â êîíöå âûéòè... ïîêà íàøåë ëèøü òàêîé âûõîä... íî íå èñêëþ÷àþ äðóãèõ ðåøåíèé... |
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Ãàäàëêè âðóò,
ÿ çíàþ, ÷òî óìðó ãîðàçäî ðàíüøå, äàííîãî ìíå ñðîêà. ß ñàìûì ñòðàøíûì èç ïðîêëÿòèé ïðîêëÿò - ïðèãîâîðåí ê áóìàãå è ïåðó. |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
Âðåìÿ: 18.01.2007 16:35 |
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã ãèòàðà
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ãðèô íå ÷àñòî îò âàñ ïîëó÷àåøü òàêèå ñòèõîòâîðíûå ýêñïðîìòû... íó..åñëè ñîâñåì âñå æóòêî... òî êîíå÷íî çàêàí÷èâàòü íå áóäó ïðîñòî áûëî èíòåðåñíî óçíàòü ìíåíèå.... ýòî ñêîðåå ïåðåâîä äëÿ ñåáÿ - íå äëÿ ñöåíû... êàê-òî ìíå ëåã÷å âîñïðèíèìàòü íà ðóññêîì ÿçûêå... âîò è èùó ðåøåíèÿ... |
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Ãàäàëêè âðóò,
ÿ çíàþ, ÷òî óìðó ãîðàçäî ðàíüøå, äàííîãî ìíå ñðîêà. ß ñàìûì ñòðàøíûì èç ïðîêëÿòèé ïðîêëÿò - ïðèãîâîðåí ê áóìàãå è ïåðó. |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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Åêàòåðèíáóðã
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The Show Must Go On Empty spaces What are we living for? Abandoned places I guess we know the score On and on, does anybody know what we are looking for? Another hero Another mindless crime Behind the curtain In the pantomime Hold the line, does anybody know what we are living for? CHORUS The show must go on The show must go on Inside my heart is breaking My make-up may be flaking, but my smile still stays on Whatever happens I'll leave it all to chance Another heartache Another failed romance On and on, does anybody know what we are living for? I guess I'm learning I must be warmer now I'll soon be turning round the corner now Outside the dawn is breaking but inside, in the dark I'm aching to be free CHORUS My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die I can fly, my friends The show must go on (yeah) The show must go on I'll face it with a grin I'm never giving in On with the show Ooh, I'll top the bill, I'll overkill I have to find the will to carry on (On with the show) Øîó äîëæíî ïðîäîëæàòüñÿ Áåñêîíå÷íûå ïóñòûå ïðîñòðàíñòâà - ×åãî ðàäè ìû æèâåì? Ïîêèíóòûå ìåñòà - Ìû çíàåì, íà ÷òî èäåì. Ýòî íèêîãäà íå êîí÷èòñÿ, êòî-íèáóäü çíàåò ×òî ìû èùåì? Åùå îäíîãî ãåðîÿ? Åùå îäíî áåññìûñëåííîå ïðåñòóïëåíèå? Çà êóëèñàìè?  ïàíòîìèìå? Äåðæè ñòðîé, êòî-íèáóäü çíàåò Çà÷åì ìû æèâåì? Ïðèïåâ Øîó äîëæíî ïðîäîëæàòüñÿ, Øîó äîëæíî ïðîäîëæàòüñÿ, Ìîå ñåðäöå ðâåòñÿ íà ÷àñòè, Ìàêèÿæ ðàñïëûâàåòñÿ, Íî óëûáêà íå ìåðêíåò! ×òî áû íè ñëó÷èëîñü - Äîâåðþñü ñóäüáå. Ïóñòü áóäåò åùå îäíà ðàíà íà ñåðäöå, Åùå îäíà îáìàíóâøàÿ ëþáîâü. Ýòî íèêîãäà íå êîí÷èòñÿ, êòî-íèáóäü çíàåò, Äëÿ ÷åãî ìû æèâåì? Ïîæàëóé, ÿ íà÷èíàþ ïîíèìàòü. Äîëæíî áûòü, ÿ ñòàë ìÿã÷å. Óæå ñîâñåì ñêîðî ß ïîêèíó ýòîò ìèð. Ñíàðóæè ðàçãîðàåòñÿ çàðÿ, À èç ãëóáèíû äóøè, èç êðîìåøíîé òüìû ß ðâóñü ê ñâîáîäå. Ïðèïåâ. Ìîÿ äóøà ïðåêðàñíà, êàê êðûëüÿ áàáî÷êè, Â÷åðàøíèå âîëøåáíûå ñêàçêè èçìåíÿòñÿ äî íåóçíàâàåìîñòè, íî íå óìðóò. Äðóçüÿ, ÿ ìîãó ëåòàòü! Øîó äîëæíî ïðîäîëæàòüñÿ, Øîó äîëæíî ïðîäîëæàòüñÿ. ß ïðèìó ýòî ñ óñìåøêîé, ß íèêîãäà íå ïðîâàëþ Øîó ß çàïëà÷ó âäâîå ïðîòèâ ñ÷åòà, ÿ ñäåëàþ ÷òî óãîäíî Ìíå ïðèäåòñÿ íàéòè ñèëû ïðîäîëæàòü (Øîó) |
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– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ. |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã ãèòàðà
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ñïàñèáî 7wing ïîïðîáóåì òåïåðü äîïèñàòü... è ïóñòü ãðèô ðóãàåööà 
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Ãàäàëêè âðóò,
ÿ çíàþ, ÷òî óìðó ãîðàçäî ðàíüøå, äàííîãî ìíå ñðîêà. ß ñàìûì ñòðàøíûì èç ïðîêëÿòèé ïðîêëÿò - ïðèãîâîðåí ê áóìàãå è ïåðó. |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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ÂÑÅ ÕÎÐÎØÎ, ÊÐÎÌÅ "ÑÏÅÊÒÀÊËÜ, ÄËÈÑÜ" Çäåñü ïàðó ìåñÿöåâ íàçàä êòî-òî âûêëàäûâàë ïîäîáíîå, íî ó òåáÿ â ðàçû ëó÷øå. Äóìàþ, íàäî äîïèñûâàòü
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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Ìèíñê äóäêî 
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ñïåêòàêÀëü, äëèñü? | |
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Åñòü ëè æèçíü ïåðåä ñìåðòüþ?
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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Sxolast, à ïîïðîáóé ñïåòü òî, ÷òî òû íàïåðåâîäèë | |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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Åêàòåðèíáóðã
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Ïîíÿòíî, ÷òî "ñïåêòàêëü, äëèñü" òðóäíî ïåòü. Ïðåäëàãàéòå äðóãèå âàðèàíòû. |
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– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ. |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2007 10:10 |
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü 
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Ðåàëüíî, êëàññíî. Ïðåäëàãàþ íå çàöèêëèâàòüñÿ íà áóêâàëüíîì ïåðåâîäå, à ïåðåôðàçèðîâàòü ñìûñë, íàïðèìåð, ÷òîáû ïîïàñòü â ïðåäëîæåííóþ òîáîé ðèôìó: Íà ñöåíó ðâèñü! Íà ñöåíó ðâèñü! Ïóñòü ñåðäöå ðâåòñÿ â êëî÷üÿ, ñëåçàìè ãðèì èñïîð÷åí - óëûáíèñü... òâîé âûõîä! |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã ãèòàðà
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îê.... òîãäà äîðàáîòàþ âòîðîé êóïëåò è ïðèïåâ è âûñòàâëþ.... ñïàñèáî çà ïîìîùü!!! |
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Ãàäàëêè âðóò,
ÿ çíàþ, ÷òî óìðó ãîðàçäî ðàíüøå, äàííîãî ìíå ñðîêà. ß ñàìûì ñòðàøíûì èç ïðîêëÿòèé ïðîêëÿò - ïðèãîâîðåí ê áóìàãå è ïåðó. |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2007 16:50 |
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Ìîñêâà piano, melodica
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ñïåêòàêëüäëèñü - íåôîíåòè÷íî è î÷åíü çâó÷èò ïî-êîìñîìîëüñêè, â îáùåì, ñîâñåì ïëîõàÿ ñòðîêà, Ñõîëàñò óäèâèë. íàñöåíóðâèñü - òóäà æå. êóïëåòû ìíå ïîíðàâèëèñü, ÿ á èõ íå òðîãàë êàê âàðèàíò øîó ìàñò ãîîí ìîæíî îñòàâèòü íà àíãëèéñêîì 2 Âèð íà áóêâàëüíîì-òî íå íàäî, íî Øîó ìàñò ãîó îí - ìàãèñòðàëüíàÿ ôðàçà. à íàñöåíóðâèñü - ýòî ïðî ïèîíåðñêèé øêîëüíûé òåàòð õîòÿ âîò ïî÷èòàë îðèãèíàë è ïîäñòðî÷íèê, ÷òî çàïîñòèë(-à?) 7wing, ïåðåâîä ñ íèìè ïî ýíåðãåòèêå äàæå íå ñðàâíèòü. |
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http://www.vk.com/kenazmusic
http://www.vk.com/koshelpv http://yatalant.music1.ru/#/albums/360484.html |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã ãèòàðà
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ïðî ñïåêòàêëü äëèñü... óæå âñå ïîíÿëè... íî è àíãëèéñêèé ñ ðóññêèì â îäíîì òåêñòå íå âñåãäà óæèâàþòñÿ, ïóñòü è òàêàÿ áåññìåðòíàÿ ôðàçà.. êîðî÷å.. äóìàåì... íàäåþñü íàéäó îïòèìàëüíûé âàðèàíò... |
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Ãàäàëêè âðóò,
ÿ çíàþ, ÷òî óìðó ãîðàçäî ðàíüøå, äàííîãî ìíå ñðîêà. ß ñàìûì ñòðàøíûì èç ïðîêëÿòèé ïðîêëÿò - ïðèãîâîðåí ê áóìàãå è ïåðó. |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2007 17:57 |
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Ìîñêâà piano, melodica
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>ïðî ñïåêòàêëü äëèñü... óæå âñå ïîíÿëè... íó äà))) ïðîñòî âñå ãîâîðèëè ïðî ôîíåòè÷åñêóþ ñîñòàâëÿþùóþ |
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http://www.vk.com/kenazmusic
http://www.vk.com/koshelpv http://yatalant.music1.ru/#/albums/360484.html |
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã Ãèáñàí 
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ó ìåíÿ òîëüêî îäèí âîïðîñ.... íà###? | |
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Gibson Les Paul Studio '94
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Òåìà: Re: ïåðåâîä ïåñíè queen "Show must go on"
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2007 07:36 |
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Åêàòåðèíáóðã
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Òààêå, äëÿ òîãî æå, äëÿ ÷åãî ïèøóòñÿ âñå îñòàëüíûå ñòèõè íà ýòîì ôîðóìå. | |
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– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ. |
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