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Òåìà: Black Ice.
Âðåìÿ: 17.01.2007 10:57 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

new love song for my fans

They taught me that white is black,
Black is white, wrong is right.
I saw your not real blood
On the black ice. I cried,
‘Joanna!
It’s only ####ing game!’
Why was I afraid
Thinking lie can be true?

Joan, I can’t say, ‘I love You’,
You don’t know me, I don’t know you.
But let my delirium in sad solitude
Be full to the brim with you

You were movie star of late,
Beauty maid, smart and great.
I wanted to make a date
With you yet I just said,
‘Joanna!
It’s only ####ing game!’
Why was I constrained
Trying nothing to do?

Joan, I can’t say, ‘I love You’,
You don’t know me, I don’t know you.
But let my delirium in sad solitude
Be full to the brim with you.

I left Hollywood for long
Time has gone, doubts have flown,
But I don’t forget red tone
Of the black ice… I roar,
‘Joanna!
It was not only game!’
Today I’m in pain
Crying for wasted youth

Joan, I can’t say, ‘I love You’,
You don’t know me, I don’t know you.
But let my delirium in sad solitude
Be full to the brim with you.


…and fill sweetest dreams with you.
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: Black Ice.
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2007 10:13 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

Have you any comments?
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: Black Ice.
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2007 14:23 



Ðàç óæ õîòèòå - ïîæàëóéñòà(òîëüêî ñ òî÷êè çðåíèÿ ÿçûêà):
I saw your not real blood - your not - íå "ïî-àíãëèéñêè" çâó÷èò, íàâåðíîå ëó÷øå unreal blood
Be full to the brim with you ïðåäëîã to îïÿòü íàñòîðàæèâàåò. "íàïîëíèòñÿ äî êðà¸â" ìîæíî: brim(ãëàãîë) over with you
You were movie star of late òî æå ñàìîå, ìîæíî old movie star èëè äðóãîå ïðèëàãàòåëüíîå âìåñòî old
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Òåìà: Re: Black Ice.
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2007 15:21 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

me_and_my_baby, ñïàñèáî çà êîììåíòû!
Òîëüêî â ïîñëåäíåì ñëó÷àå ñòðîêà
You were movie star of late
îçíà÷àåò, ÷òî "òû ñòàëà êèíîçâåçäîé íåäàâíî", ÿ ïðîâåðÿë ýòîò îáîðîò.
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: Black Ice.
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2007 16:12 



åñëè ñòàëà, òî become(became), åñëè íåäàâíî, òî not long ago, íà êðàéíÿê recently, íî íå late(ïîçäíî)
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Òåìà: Re: Black Ice.
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2007 16:41 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

http://www.multitran.ru/c/m.exe?t=1500_2_1

Ïîâåðüòå, ýòî òîæå ðàñïðîñòðàíåííûé âàðèàíò.
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: Black Ice.
Âðåìÿ: 19.01.2007 16:59 



íó ëàäíî, è âàì ñïàñèáî :super:
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Òåìà: Re: Black Ice.
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2007 17:06 



The oxymoronic speech`s so nice for blues-motive... greatly pleased next line: "...But let my delirium in sad solitude..."
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Òåìà: Re: Black Ice.
Âðåìÿ: 24.01.2007 10:34 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

Áàÿíû÷, ñïàñèáî! Ìíå âîîáùå ïðèïåâ êàæåòñÿ ãåíèàëüíûì, õîòÿ ýòî è íåñêðîìíî î÷åíü.
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!