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Òåìà: Evidence Of The Unfinished Game (death)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2007 14:59 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

1
Tacit. Field of battle.
Morning dew shines on
Empty eye–sockit of sculls cracked.
Grass grows through helmets
Slain by bullits at the fureful blood attack.

Somewhen in theese places
Worriers rush on an
Armour, scattering their brains.
Ribs caught cool bayonets
Earth cried out. Stones like bones can be in pain.

Refrain:

White bones
Black stones
Combination
Is like dusty draughtboard.
Dead gone
Can’t mourne.
So what?
So what?!..
Did their bones
Stop the war?
Did ever stones
Fully score?
White bones
Black stones
Evidence Of The Unfinished Game.

2
After great massacre
They looked small who were
Dying in the craters of big bombs.
Night hides dead heros.
And nobody come to bury their bare bones.

White bones
Black stones
Combination
Is like dusty draughtboard.
Dead gone
Can’t mourne.
So what?
So what?!..
Did their bones
Stop the war?
Did ever stones
Fully score?
White bones
Black stones
Evidence Of The Unfinished Game.
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: Evidence Of The Unfinished Game (death)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2007 15:09 



Ñàëàì, ñåí èíãëèø òèëè áèëàñàí, ìàí áèëìèìàí, õàðûï ìàí õå-õå-õå, óðóñ÷à òîæ áèëìèìàí. Ñåí Ðîññèÿäà ÿøàÿïñàí, íèìà ó÷óí èíãëèç òèëèäà åçàñàí? Ñåí õàì õàðûï? Õå-õå-õå
Ïîíÿòíî ÷òî íèáóäü?
Âîò ìíå òîæå íèôèãà íå ïîíÿòíî, à æàëü, ïåñíÿ òî íàâåðíî õîðîøà, ïåðåâîä ÷òîëè ðÿäîì êèíü, õîòü çíàòü áóäó ïðî ÷òî
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Òåìà: Re: Evidence Of The Unfinished Game (death)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2007 15:13 



1 Ìîë÷àëèâûé. Îáëàñòü ñðàæåíèÿ. Óòðåííèå ñèÿíèÿ ðîñû íà Ïóñòîì ãëàçó-sockit âåñåë ðàñêàëûâàëèñü. Òðàâà ðàñòåò ÷åðåç øëåìû, Óáèòûå bullits ïðè fureful íàïàäåíèè êðîâè. Somewhen â theese ïîìåùàåò ïîðûâ Worriers â Áðîíþ, ðàññåèâàÿ èõ óìñòâåííûå ñïîñîáíîñòè. Ðåáðà ïîéìàëè ïðîõëàäíóþ âûêðèêíóâøóþ Çåìëþ øòûêîâ. Êàìíè êàê êîñòè ìîãóò áûòü â áîëè. Âîçäåðæèòåñü: Áåëàÿ Êîìáèíàöèÿ êàìíåé ææåíûõ êîñòåé Ïîõîäèò íà ïûëüíóþ øàøå÷íóþ äîñêó. Ìåðòâûé óâåäåííûé Íå ìîæåò mourne. Òàê êàêîé? Òàê êàêîé?!.. Èõ êîñòè Îñòàíàâëèâàë âîéíó? Êîãäà-ëèáî êàìíè Ïîëíîñòüþ âûèãðûâàþò? Áåëîå Ñâèäåòåëüñòâî êàìíåé ææåíûõ êîñòåé Íåçàêîí÷åííîé Èãðû. 2 Ïîñëå áîëüøîé ðåçíè Îíè âûãëÿäåëè ìàëåíüêèìè, êòî óìèðàë â êðàòåðàõ áîëüøèõ áîìá. Íî÷ü ñêðûâàåò ìåðòâûé heros. È íèêòî íå ïðèåçæàåò, ÷òîáû ïîõîðîíèòü èõ ñêåëåò. Áåëàÿ Êîìáèíàöèÿ êàìíåé ææåíûõ êîñòåé Ïîõîäèò íà ïûëüíóþ øàøå÷íóþ äîñêó. Ìåðòâûé óâåäåííûé Íå ìîæåò mourne. Òàê êàêîé? Òàê êàêîé?!.. Èõ êîñòè Îñòàíàâëèâàë âîéíó? Êîãäà-ëèáî êàìíè Ïîëíîñòüþ âûèãðûâàþò? Áåëîå Ñâèäåòåëüñòâî êàìíåé ææåíûõ êîñòåé Íåçàêîí÷åííîé Èãðû.
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Òåìà: Re: Evidence Of The Unfinished Game (death)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2007 15:15 



ýòî òàê ìàøèííûé ïåðåâîä :)
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Òåìà: Re: Evidence Of The Unfinished Game (death)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2007 15:23 



Âàó, òàêîå íàâåðíîå íà àíãëèöêîì íåïëîõî çâó÷èò, à âñå ðàâíî çà ïåðåâîä ñïàñèáî, ñòðàííûå ìåòàôîðû è àññîöèàöèè, ïðèêîëüíî
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Òåìà: Re: Evidence Of The Unfinished Game (death)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2007 15:47 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

$olo-Vey, áðàòèøêà, êàëà êàëàé?..
ß âîîáùå-òî â Øèðèíå ðîäèëñÿ, ïîìîòàëñÿ ïî Àçèè, áóäü çäîðîâ, ïîýòîìó òâî¸ ïîñò îóõåòü êàê ïîíÿë.
Íó, çíàþ ÿ ìàë¸ê àíãëèéñêèé, ÷òî â ýòîì ïëîõîãî?..

Àëåêñ äàë ôèãîâûé ïåðåâîä, â ðåàëüíîñòè âñ¸ çâó÷èò æ¸ñò÷å è ïðîçðà÷íåé.

ñ óâ.
Âèð
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: Evidence Of The Unfinished Game (death)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2007 16:01 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
ãèòàðà

ìäà....
ýíòî íå Âàøè áëþçû...
òóòà âñå æåñò÷å.. :)

íî ìíå ïîíðàâèëîñü :)
âîò... ÷èòàþ âàøè òåêñòû è íà÷èíàþ ëþáèòü ïåñíè íà àíãëèéñêîì...
Ãàäàëêè âðóò,
ÿ çíàþ, ÷òî óìðó
ãîðàçäî ðàíüøå, äàííîãî ìíå ñðîêà.
ß ñàìûì ñòðàøíûì èç ïðîêëÿòèé ïðîêëÿò -
ïðèãîâîðåí ê áóìàãå è ïåðó.
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Òåìà: Re: Evidence Of The Unfinished Game (death)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2007 16:15 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

Sxolast, ñïàñèáî, ÿ â àíãëèéñêîì íå äîêà, ïîýòîìó ïðîêîëû òîæå ñëó÷àþòñÿ. Ðàä, ÷òî êîìó-òî ýòî èíòåðåñíî.

Ñ óâ.
Âèð
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: Evidence Of The Unfinished Game (death)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2007 19:11 



oh man.... this is destroyin my brain, i mean pretty f***n divine :super:
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Òåìà: Re: Evidence Of The Unfinished Game (death)
Âðåìÿ: 12.01.2007 09:39 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

SHINJITSU, really thanxxx!
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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