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Òåìà: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 08.12.2006 11:05 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

I Remember Yesterday
You were my lady-garson.
I Remember Yesterday
Drugs & vodka played my song.
If I won't get up tomorrow
Tnen my way's a little wrong.

Little wrong
Little right
Little black
A little white
All night!

I Remember Yesterday
I was ill and lost my job
I Remember Yesterday
I felt down from hill'n'top
Now I am unhappy sinner
O my God You little joke

Little joke
You serious speak
You little hallow
A little flick
I'm sick! Aaaa

I Remember Yesterday
There was sunshine till the night
I Remember Yesterday
Birds were singing till they died
If the winter ain't forever
Then my wearher's 'little fine

Little fine
Little bad
Little dry
A little wet
O, shit!
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 08.12.2006 18:48 



Âèð ! ÿ èíòåðåñóþñü ñòèõàìè äëÿ äåòåé.Íåëüçÿ ëè â èíòåðíåòå ïîñìîòðåòü îòðûâêè èç òâîèõ äåòñêèõ êíèæåê. Ñïàñèáî.
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 11.12.2006 09:50 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

Âàãàíò, ýòî, ÷åñòíî ãîâîðÿ, ñåêðåò.
Íî ñåêðåò Ïîëèøèíåëÿ äëÿ äðóçåé.

Çäåñü áîëüøå ðåöåíçèé:
http://www.stihi.ru/author.html?diko

À çäåñü âñ¸ óïîðÿäî÷åíî:
http://www.poezia.ru/user.php?uname=diko

 êà÷åñòâå êàðòèíîê âçÿòû ñêàíû ñ ðåàëüíûõ êíèæåê
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 11.12.2006 09:56 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

À íà Ðîäèíå íàøåãî ìîäåðàòîðà â îäíîì êëàññíîì äåòñêîì æóðíàëå íàïå÷àòàëè ìîþ ïðîçàè÷åñêóþ ñêàçêó. Êîíå÷íî, ñ ìîåãî ñîãëàñèÿ

http://www.posnayko.com/ru_12_4.php?PHPSESSID=0bd8fd838438dd8aa6b6b9cf4e6f4424
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 11.12.2006 14:17 



Âèð , ñïàñèáî. Òâîð÷åñòâî ïîíðàâèëîñü. Åñòü , ÷òî ïî÷åðïíóòü.
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 11.12.2006 16:06 



Âèð, ïðèâåòèùùå è îãðîìíûé ðåñïåêòèùùå!
î÷åíü çäîðîâî! òâîè áëþç-òåìû êðàñî÷íû, äèíàìè÷íû - âñ¸ ÷òî íàäî ðàñòóùåìó îðãàíèçìó! =)
õî÷ó ïîýêñïåðèìåíòèðîâàòü - òû íå ïðîòèâ? åñëè ïîëó÷èòñÿ - çàïèøó è âûøëþ. Õî÷ó ïîäóìàòü íàä "Our Grand-Engine Locomotive" è "I remember Yesterday"
ñîãëàñèòåñü - äëÿ áëþçà àíãëèéñêèé ãîðàçäî ëó÷øå ïîäõîäèò, ãèá÷å îí è óäîáíåé.  ðóññêîì íå ïîëó÷àþòñÿ ñî÷åòàíèÿ ãëàñíûõ è ñîãëàñíûõ âêóïå ñ êîðîòêîñëîæíûìè ñëîâàìè...
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 11.12.2006 16:16 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

Áàÿí, ÿ òîëüêî "çà"!
Äàâàé íà "òû", òàì â îäíîì ìåñòå

Little joke
You serious speak
You little hallow
A little flick
I'm sick! Aaaa


ïîïðîáóé óêîðîòèòü ñòðî÷êè, ÷òîáû íå âûáèâàëèñü èç îáùåãî ðÿäà, òèïà:

Little joke
Serious speak
Little hallow
A little flick
I'm sick! Yeh.
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 11.12.2006 16:30 



ÿ âîîáùå äóìàë â ýòîì ìåñòå òàêò ïðîïóñêàòü - òèïà ìóç.âñòóïëåíèå ê êàæäîé ñòðî÷êå - â òàêîì âèäå:
áààì-little joke
Serious speak
áàì-áàì Little hallow
áàì A little flick...òèøèíà
I`m a sick! è ñîëî..
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 11.12.2006 16:33 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

Íó äà, òàêò ïî¸øü, òàêò ïðîïóñêàåøü, òàê è çàäóìûâàëîñü.
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 11.12.2006 17:33 

6 ñòðóí

Ó ìåíÿ êàê-òî âûñêî÷èëî ðÿäîì ñ Åñòóäýé, åñëè íóæíà èäåÿ, áåðè.
Ïîñëå òîãî, êàê àìóð óøåë ïîïèñàòü çà óãîë, íåîáõîäèìîñòü â èãðå ó êëîóíà èñ÷åçëà..ñóõóì
áàáàëàéêà
:dyavol:
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 15.12.2006 17:16 



áëèí, ïîïðîáîâàë èãðàòü - ïîëó÷èëîñü ÷òî-òî ñðåäíåå ìåæäó Strawberry fields forever áèòëîâ è New Faces ðîëëèíã ñòîóíç...
íèôèãà íå áëþç! íàäî äóìàòü - ëèðè÷åñêàÿ íîòà ñáèâàåò...=)
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Òåìà: Re: I Remember Yesterday (blues)
Âðåìÿ: 18.12.2006 11:08 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

Áàÿí, íàäî ñîçâîíèòüñÿ, ïèøè íà ïî÷òó ìîþ
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!