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Òåìà: “Never leave me so again”
Âðåìÿ: 29.11.2006 17:49 |
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You’ve gone, as silence follows rain The bad ideas in my brain I lie here waiting all the nights Not turning me away. Chorus: Don’t you know, I can't sleep at night If you know, I've lost my light Don't tell “forgive me” Every word, means to me. You could to fit me in my soul I’m never gonna let it go The arrow Amur touched my heart My soul is broken off apart. Chorus: You have give me paradise And my heart smashed into bits Never leave me so again I madly waited for your kiss Chorus: |
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Òåìà: Re: “Never leave me so again”
Âðåìÿ: 29.11.2006 18:38 |
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Êàê âàì ìîé ïåðâûé áëèí...íå ñîâñåì êîìîì? 
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Òåìà: Re: “Never leave me so again”
Âðåìÿ: 29.11.2006 18:42 |
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Ïðèâåò, ñõîæàÿ òåìà. Õîðîøî, íî åñòü ãðàììàòè÷åñêèå îøèáêè è íåïîíÿòíûå(ìíå) ìåñòà The bad ideas in my brain The bad ideas'RE in my brain(åñëè èìååòñÿ â âèäó ideas - ïîäëåæàùåå , "ïðèñóòñòâóþò" - ñêàçóåìîå) I lie here waiting all the nights Not turning me away. Íå ïîíÿë If you know, I've lost my light Êàêîå èìååòñÿ â âèäó âðåìÿ? Íàïèøè ïåðåâîä You could TO??? fit arrow Amur åñëè ñòðåëà Àìóðà, òî Amur's arrow You have give have TO give èëè have given
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Òåìà: Re: “Never leave me so again”
Âðåìÿ: 29.11.2006 18:52 |
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I lie here waiting all the nights Not turning me away. (ß æäàë òåáÿ âñå íî÷è íàïðîëåò, íå ñìåé ïðîãîíÿòü ìåíÿ) If you know, I've lost my light(Åñëè òû íå çíàåøü, â ìîåé æèçíè áîëüøå íåò ñâåòà) You could to fit me in my soul(Òû ñìîãëà çàïàñòü ìíå â äóøó) Äà, have to give áóäåò ïðàâèëüíåé, ñïàñèáî! Ñïàñèáî çà êðèòèêó, ÿ ïèøó òåêñòû íà àíãëèéñêîì âïåðâûé ðàç, ïîýòîìó ìíå íóæíû âàøè ðåöåíçèè!:) |
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Òåìà: Re: “Never leave me so again”
Âðåìÿ: 30.11.2006 07:55 |
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Äëÿ ïåðâîãî ðàçà ýòî øåäåâðàëüíî! 
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Òåìà: Re: “Never leave me so again”
Âðåìÿ: 30.11.2006 12:10 |
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ß æäàë òåáÿ âñå íî÷è íàïðîëåò, íå ñìåé ïðîãîíÿòü ìåíÿ I LAY here waiting all the nights Don't DARE in? turning me away Åñëè òû íå çíàåøü, â ìîåé æèçíè áîëüøå íåò ñâåòà If you don't know - I've lost my light Òû ñìîãëà çàïàñòü ìíå â äóøó (èç-çà could - ïîëó÷èëîñü íå ïðîø. âðåìÿ à ñîñëàãàò íàêëîíåíèå, ïðåäëîã to - âîîáùå çäåñü íå íóæåí) Ñõîäó íå ãîòîâ äàòü âàðèàíò |
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