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Ôîðóì òåêñòîâèêîâ

Çàäàòü íîâóþ òåìó
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 29.11.2006 16:42 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


Äëÿ äîëãîãî è ìàêñèìàëüíî ïëîäîòâîðíîãî ñîòðóäíè÷åñòâà =))
Ñòèëèñòèêà - íüþ éîðê õàðä-êîð, äýòêîð. (Ôèëîñîôñêî)-àãðåññèâíûé âçãëÿä íà æèçíü. Íóæíû ÷åñòíûå ïðîáèâíûå òåêñòû. Ðóññêèé èëè àíãëèéñêèé ÿçûê.

Êîíòàêò:
soulscream@bk.ru
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 02.12.2006 11:38 
ñàíêò ïèòåðáóðã
êîíòðàáàñ

Ùÿ âñ¸ áóäåò, ïàöàíû îòâå÷àþ....
:drazn:
ìèðî
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 03.12.2006 10:08 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


Íå, ÿ íå â ýòîì ñìûñëå, áåç ïàöàíñêèõ ïîíÿòèé =)))

Åù¸ çàáûë ñêàçàòü, ÷òî òåêñòû â äóõå Àðèè è ðóññêîãî ðîêà íàì íå ïîäõîäÿò. Ýòî õàðäêîð.
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 06.12.2006 02:56 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


Òèïà àï!
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 07.12.2006 13:34 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


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e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 09.12.2006 20:52 



SoulFuñkår, ïèøèòå íà sound_studio@mail.ru
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 13.12.2006 07:11 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


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e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 13.12.2006 15:48 



Íó è øî? Ãäå ïîýòû? Âñå çàêîíòðàêòîâàíû äî êîíöà ñòîëåòèÿ?
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 13.12.2006 21:09 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


Âñå ïîýòû èñïóãàëèñü ôèëîñîôñêî-àãðåññèâíîãî õàðäêîðà.
Êñòàòè, êòî ó íàñ ñàìûé ôèëîñîôñêè-àãðåññèâíûé?

Ðåøèë ïîñìîòðåòü ñâîè çàïàñíèêè, âîò ýòî ïîõîæå íà ôèëîñîôñêóþ àãðåññèþ?

You never never never run, you must crawl
Someone's knocking at the door in you head
You can see the strange words, on the wall
And these words these words say you are mad

You can feel the near edge, sharpened blade
Someone gets his teeth inside in your brain
And your soul your soul soul, in the shade,
You will pave your way ahead in the rain

They catch your life your life life, tie your hands
Hit your head your head head to the ground,
They may break you, break break, they may kill
But the spirit of the god you have found!
You're defeating in the sky over death
In your mind mind mind you are glad
It's sufficient to exult having less
And I know I know know you are mad
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 14.12.2006 15:50 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


Íà ñåãîäíÿøíèé äåíü, ëó÷øå íèêòî íè÷åãî íå ïðåäëàãàë. Spirit of the god ìåíÿ î÷åíü ñìóòèë. Äà è âñ¸ ðàâíî õîòåëîñü áû ïîæåñò÷å, ïîáðóàëüíåé, æèçíåííåé.

(Ôèëîñîôñêî) - áûëî è åñòü â ñêîáî÷êàõ, ò.å. íåîáÿçàòåëüíî.
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 14.12.2006 17:01 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


Æèçíåííî ïèñàòü íà àíãëèéñêîì ïðîáëåìíî...
À Spirit of the god ìîæíî ëåãêî çàìåíèòü.

Êñòàòè, ìîæåòå ïðèâåñòè ïðèìåðû óäà÷íûõ òåêñòîâ íà ðóññêîì ÿçûêå â "ñòèëèñòèêå íüþ éîðê õàðä-êîð, äýòêîð".
Ïðîñòî èíòåðåñíî.
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 18.12.2006 03:00 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


Ññûëî÷êó èñêàòü íåìíîãî âëîìîâî. Ïðèìåðû àíãëèéñêîãî ìîæíî ïîèñêàòü ó ãðóïï Napalm Death è Hatebreed. Ïðèìåðû ðóññêèõ ïðèåìëèìûõ òåêñòîâ åñòü ó ãðóïïû "5 Óãëîâ", õîòÿ ýòî ñòðèòêîð.
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 18.12.2006 09:08 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


Òåêñòû 5 óãëîâ íå íàøåë, ïîõîæå, îíè â èíåò íå âûëîæåíû.

Åùå ïîðûëñÿ ó ñåáÿ, âîò òàêîå òâîðåíèå îòêîïàë.

ÁÅËÛÉ ÔËÀÃ

Ïî÷åìó ïîïàë ÿ â ýòîò âîäîåì,
È ìîé êîðàáëü - íàäóâíîé...
 òåìíîì ïåðåóëêå áóäåì ìû âäâîåì,
Îòìåíÿåòñÿ áîé!

Ïîçàòàñêàííûé äî äûð, íà ãðîò-ìà÷òå áåëûé ôëàã,
È ñíîâà ìíå ïðèäåòñÿ îòñòóïàòü â ñóõóþ ñòåïü,
Íå óõîäè, ìîé ëó÷øèé âðàã,
ß ïîðâó çëàòóþ öåïü!

Ïðèïåâ:
Ìîé áåëûé ôëàã, íà òåáå ïÿòíà ãðÿçè è êðîâü,
Ïîæåëòåâøèå ëàâðû áåñïîëåçíûõ ïîáåä,
Ìîé áåëûé ôëàã, ÿ ãîòîâ, ÿ óæå ãîòîâ,
Òåáÿ ÿ ïîêðàøó â ÷åðíûé òðàóðíûé öâåò!

Ôëàã ÿ ïîäíèìó,
ïóñòü âüåòñÿ íà âåòðó
Ñ êîñòüþ ëó÷åâîé,
êîñòüþ ëîêòåâîé,
È ãëàçà ïóñòû, è çóáàñòûé çëîé îñêàë,
Êàêîé ïðåëåñòíûé ïåéçàæ!
Òðåïåùèòå âû
ñ íîã äî ãîëîâû,
Ñðåäè æàðêèõ äíåé
çàëïû âñå ñèëüíåé,
Ýòî âàì íå êàðíàâàë -
Íà àáîðäàæ!

Ïðèïåâ.

Íàâñåãäà òåïåðü áóäü ãîòîâ,
Òû æå âîæäü ãîëîäíûõ êîòîâ,
×òîá èäòè äîðîãîé ïðÿìîé
Äî ïðåäåëà!
Ê ãîðèçîíòó ïóòü,
Âñåõ â äóãó ñîãíóòü,
Òû óæå çàáóäü -
Ôëàã ñâîé áåëûé!
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 18.12.2006 17:31 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


Íå, ýòî íå ñåðü¸çíî.... êîðàáëèêè-ãîëîäíûå êîòû-ôëàæêè... Ñëèøêîì ìíîãî ïåðåíîñíîãî ñìûñëà, êðàñèâûõ ñëîâ...


Ïîèùó, âûëîæó...
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 18.12.2006 18:02 

ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü

Hell Can Wait.

1
Dark
In your eyes.
Dark
In your soul.
So you ain’t hero from last station
But you are of lost generation.
Dark
And cold.

You tired of the sex & drugs
And do not wanna look at bucks
In fact behind the closed door
You always dream of New World War.

War
New World War.
War
Neither more.
You like its force in hating life
But you’re so weak & taking knife.
War
In your soul.

In spite of fear of painful death
You wanna drow your deep last breath
Still of your knife ain’t yet the end
It is hell gates, you understand&

Refrain

Hell can wait
Hell can wait
Hell can wait
A while.
Hell can wait
Hell can wait
It’s easy & absurd
To die!

2
Lie
In your heart
Lie
Ain’t so bad
To be the honest you do lie
And mount is critically high
Lie
And hard.

And likely Angel of the Dark
You fall & feel you can’t stand up
Well, that is why you cut the vein
You try to get to hell again?

Refrain

3
Hell
Seize the brain
Hell
Rise again
The nature die because it chokes
There ‘round resound with screams of hawks.
Hell
And grey.

You tired of the sex & drugs
And do not wanna look at bucks
Death train is due & over due
And may be Heaven wait for you!
Ha – ha – ha!

Hell can wait
Hell can wait
Hell can wait
A while.
Hell can wait
Hell can wait
It’s easy & absurd
To die!

Too die …
ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 21.12.2006 05:50 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


Ðàé, àä, àíãåë òåìíîòû, íîâàÿ ìèðîâàÿ....íå ïîêàòèò. Ïàôîñà ìíîãî - òîëêó ìàëî, ê òîìó æå âèäíî, ÷òî ðóññêèé ïèñàë =)))
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 21.12.2006 06:11 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
Ãèáñàí

Ñêîëüêî?
Gibson Les Paul Studio '94
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 21.12.2006 12:47 



Òûñìàòðè! Ýòî - íå ñåðüåçíî, ýòî - íå ïîêàòèò... ýñòåò, àäíàêà...

SoulFuñkår, òû áû ìóçû÷êó âûëîæèë. Ìîæ òàì è ïèñàòü íå íà ÷òî. Êàê Ãðèô ãîâîðèò: ëÿ-ôà-ñîëü èëè ìè-äî-ðå - áåç ðàçíèöû.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 25.12.2006 10:49 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


Ìèäè óñòðîÿò?

àï!
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 25.12.2006 12:13 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
Ãèáñàí

SoulFuñkår, äàâàé , âûêëàäûâàé. Èëè ïî ïî÷òå.
Gibson Les Paul Studio '94
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 27.12.2006 10:50 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


Æèâüåì âñå çâó÷èò ãîðàçäî ïðèÿòíåé.
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 27.12.2006 11:04 



Íå âïå÷àòëèëî.
Îáðàòíàÿ ñâÿçü: ICQ 403948416
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 28.12.2006 13:40 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


ß ýòè ìèäÿøêè íå äëÿ âïå÷àòëåíèé âûëîæèë, à äëÿ òîãî, ÷òîáû ñòàëî õîòü ÷óòü ïîíÿòíî, êàêîãî ïëàíà íóæåí íàñòðîé è ñîäåðæàíèå.

Ìíå óæå ïðîñòî èíòåðåñíî ñòàëî, ñïîñîáåí ëè êòî â ïðèíöèïå ïèñàòü õàðäêîðîâûå òåêñòû. ß ïîíèìàþ, ÷òî áîëüøèíñòâî ëþäåé çäåñü óâëå÷åíî ëèðèêîé ñåðåáðÿíîãî âåêà, "àðèåé", ðóññêèì ðîêîì è ò.ï. Íî âñ¸ æå?

Êòî-íèáóäü ñëûøàë Hatebreed è Napalm Death?
Õîòü êòî-òî ÷èòàë èõ òåêñòû?
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 28.12.2006 13:48 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã


Òû áû õîòü ïðèìåðû íà ðóññêîì ïðèâîäèë. Âîò 7 ðàñà - ýòî áëèçêî ê õàðäêîðó?
Ñóäÿ ïî âñåìó, ãîòîâûõ òåêñòîâ çäåñü íå äîæäåøüñÿ.

Åñëè åñòü áîëüøàÿ çàèíòåðåñîâàííîñòü, ïîäóìàé î òàêîì âàðèàíòå: òû êðàòêî îïèñûâàåøü, î ÷åì õî÷åøü ñïåòü, à òåêñòîâèê ðàçâèâàåò òåìó â ñòèõàõ.
– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 28.12.2006 16:54 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
Ãèáñàí

7wing, 7ðàñà ýòî ãàëèìîå ýìî...

SoulFuñkår, ïðèâåò. À êàêîâà öåíà âîïðîñà? Íó, ÿ çíàêîì ñ õàðäêîðîì... òîëüêî Hatebreed, íàñêîëüêî ÿ çíàþ, ýòî íàöû, ÿ ëè÷íî òåêñòû â òàêîì äóõå ïèñàòü íå áóäó.
Òèïà Slayer ìîæíî ïîïðîáîâàòü.
Gibson Les Paul Studio '94
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 29.12.2006 03:35 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


7wing

Ðóññêèõ õðåí íàéä¸øü. Øèôðóþòñÿ.
Çàéíòåðåñîâàííîñòü, ñàì ïîíèìàåøü, åñòü.
Âîò, äîïóñòèì, äâå òåìû:
1. Àäðåíàëèí - ñîîòâåòñòâåííî, âîçìîæíî ðàçèòü â:
à.Îñòðóþ ïîòðåáíîñòü, íåõâàòêó è ñïîñîá óäîâëåòâîðåíèÿ ñ áîëüøèì êîëè÷åñòâîì íàñèëèÿ =))
á.Íåïîíèìàíèå ëþäåé, åãî íå ëþáÿùèõ
â.Ïðåñòóïëåíèå ðàäè äîçû àäðåíàëèíà

2. Ïîä äàâëåíèåì(ïðåññîì)
à. Äîñòàâøàÿ, äàâÿùàÿ ïîâñåäíåâíàÿ ðóòèíà, ïîèñê âûõîäà
á. Î ïîñòóïêå, ñîâåðøåííîì ïîä äàâëåíèåì, ïîñëåäñòâèÿõ
â. Îòêàç ïîä÷èíÿòñÿ, íå ñìîòðÿ íà îêàçûâàåìîå äàâëåíèå èëè ÷åãî ïîõóæå.

 îáùåì, â òàêîì äóõå...


Taake
Ïðèâåò. Òû, íàñêîëüêî çíàåøü, òåêñòà ñíà÷àëà ïîïåðåâîäè, ïðåæäå ÷åì ãîâîðèòü. Ïî ïîâîäó öåíû âîïðîñà áóäåì ãîâîðèòü ïðè íàëè÷èè ïîäõîäÿùåãî ãîòîâîãî òåêñòà.
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 31.12.2006 04:44 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


up!
e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 09.01.2007 03:47 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


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e-mail íå ïðîâåðÿþ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà â ãðóïïó.(Ïèòåð)
Âðåìÿ: 30.01.2007 17:26 
ñàíêò-ïåòåðáóðã


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 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!