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Òåìà: How I ceased to love my girl (âûêëàäûâàþ, êàê è îáåùàë)
Âðåìÿ: 28.11.2006 16:22 |
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How I ceased to love my girl verse ¹1 Oo-oo-oo-ooh I loved you, babe, Used to need your love, Now it's time for me to say: "Darling I go". Ma-aa-aa-ay be I'm not wright In relation's law. You will understand with time Why I do it so. refrain: I know how it feels, everything flows away. I leave you for better, the worst thing's to stay. verse ¹2 Li-i-i-i-ife is hard, Don't you know my friend? Every day with you apart Was a step to end. Don't wanna say any rough words, anything that hurts To-oo you-oo-oo-oo 'twas the time of passion lords, Now it's time for blue refrain bridge with solo verse ¹1 refrain bridge with solo end. |
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Òåìà: Re: How I ceased to love my girl (âûêëàäûâàþ, êàê è îáåùàë)
Âðåìÿ: 28.11.2006 16:23 |
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Æäó ãðàììàòè÷åñêèõ äèñêóññèé. P.S. Ñþæåò ïåñíè îñíîâàí íà ðåàëüíûõ ñîáûòèÿõ |
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Òåìà: Re: How I ceased to love my girl (âûêëàäûâàþ, êàê è îáåùàë)
Âðåìÿ: 29.11.2006 08:07 |
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Ïî ãðàììàòèêå, èìõî, ëó÷øå ïåðåäåëàòü ôðàçó "Don't wanna say..." õîòÿ áû òàê: Don't wanna say anything that hurts, any rough words To-oo you-oo-oo-oo à òî íà ñëóõ ïîëó÷àåòñÿ ñâÿçêà "hurts to you" - íå òîãî... À ÷òî òàêîå "the time of passion lords"? |
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Òåìà: Re: How I ceased to love my girl (âûêëàäûâàþ, êàê è îáåùàë)
Âðåìÿ: 29.11.2006 09:16 |
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü 
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Ó ìåíÿ âîîáùå ïðåòåíçèé íåò. Îðãàíè÷íûé òåêñò. hurts to you - íå íàïðÿãàåò àáñîëþòíî. |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: How I ceased to love my girl (âûêëàäûâàþ, êàê è îáåùàë)
Âðåìÿ: 29.11.2006 16:06 |
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ditty, ìåæäó ñëîâàìè "hurts" è "to you" åñòü ïàóçà ïðè èñïîëíåíèè ïåñíè(åñòü ìóçûêà ê ïåñíå), è òàê êàê ñòðî÷êà "Don't wanna say any rough words, anything that hurts" ïî¸òñÿ çà 3 ÷åòâåðòè, äàëåå ïàóçà â ÷åòâåðòü, äàëåå "to you", òî íà ñëóõ(íà ìîé) "to you" âïîëíå ëîãè÷íî ñâÿçûâàåòñÿ ñ íà÷àëîì ôðàçû "Don't wanna say..." Êîðî÷å íóæíî 1 ðàç óñëûøàòü ×èñòî ãðàììàòè÷åñêè ïî-ìîåìó ïðàâèëüíàÿ êîíñòðóêöèÿ "Don't wanna say [÷òî-òî] to you" the time of passion lords - èìåëîñü â âèäó âðåìÿ, êîãäà ìíîé âëàäåëè ñòðàñòè, ýìîöèè, â äàííîì ñëó÷àå: áîãè,ïîâåëèòåëè ñòðàñòåé Ñïàñèáî çà îòçûâû. P.S. Ïîñëå òÿæ¸ëûõ, òðàãè÷íûõ ñöåí ðàññòàâàíèÿ ñïåë åé ýòó ïåñíþ. Åé ïîíðàâèëîñü. 
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Òåìà: Re: How I ceased to love my girl (âûêëàäûâàþ, êàê è îáåùàë)
Âðåìÿ: 29.11.2006 18:13 |
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Êîãäà íàïèñàíî îò äóøè, âñåãäà êðàñèâî! Õîòåëîñü áû óñëûøàòü ìóçûêó... 
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Òåìà: Re: How I ceased to love my girl (âûêëàäûâàþ, êàê è îáåùàë)
Âðåìÿ: 29.11.2006 18:30 |
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Áóäåòå ó íàñ â Ïèòåðå, áåç ïðîáëåì. Ñïàñèáî. Ïåðâûé ðàç â æèçíè ÿ îòâàæèëñÿ ÷òî-òî ñâî¸ ïðîäåìîíñòðèðîâàòü îáùåñòâåííîñòè. Äî ýòîãî ëèøü ñ÷èòàíûå åäèíèöû áûëè îçíàêîìëåíû. Ñðåäè íèõ áûëè è ïîëíîñòüþ âñ¸ îá#####øèå, ïîýòîìó áûëî ñòðàøíîâàòî. À âîîáùå ÿ íå ïîýò è â ïðèíöèïå óæå íè÷åãî íå ñî÷èíÿþ, êàê ëåò 3-7 íàçàä. |
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