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Äîíåöêàÿ îáë. ãåòàðêî 
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Ïîìîãèòå! Íóæåí òåêñò ñëåäóþùåãî ôîðìàòà: Êóïëåò ïðèïåâ êóïëåò ïðèïåâ èíòåðëþäèÿ ïðèïåâ 
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Äîíåöêàÿ îáë. ãåòàðêî
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Õýâè. Ç.Û. Çàáûë äîáàâèòü ÷òîáû áûëî ÷òî-íèòü ïîñåðüåçíåé è æåëàòåëüíî íåìíîãî ñ ôàíòàñòèêîé (òèïà Àðèè) |
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Åñëè òû ðóññêîÿçû÷íûé - òî âîò òóò ðîê-ïîåò õîäèò, óñëóãè ïðåäëàãàåò. Ãîâîðèò - âñå ìîæåò. Ïîñïðîøàé åãî... | |
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Êàêîâà òåìàòèêà òåêñòà è ÷òî ó âàñ çà ãðóïïà? | |
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ìîæåò íàïèñàòü òåêñò???
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Äîíåöêàÿ îáë. ãåòàðêî
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Ded_M@zdai, Ãðóïïà ëþáèòåëüñêàÿ, ñíà÷àëà íóæåí äåìî-ìàòåðèàë(èç âàøèõ òåêñòîâ è íàøåé ìóçûêè) à êîãäà íàêîïèòñÿ ïîáîëüøå ïåñåíîê, òî, äàñò Áîã, äèñê âûïóñòèì))) Òåìàòèêà ÷òî-òî âðîäå Àðèè, íåìíîãî ôàíòàñòèêè, ïîáîëüøå ñìûñëà |
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ìîæåò íàïèñàòü òåêñò???
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Åêàòåðèíáóðã
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Âîò òàêàÿ çàãîòîâêà Ìåë ñóäüáû Áëèæå, áëèæå ãðîçû è öóíàìè, È îãîíü, ñæèãàþùèé äîòëà, Çëîé ðîê – èãðàåò ñ íàìè, Ñíîâà õî÷åò âûáèòü èç ñåäëà. ÏÐÈÏÅ  ãîíêå ó÷àñòíèêîâ ìíîãî, Âñïûøêè ñ÷àñòüÿ è áåäû, Ñíîâà ðèñóåò äîðîãó Ìåë âñåìîãóùåé ñóäüáû! Åñëè åñòü èíòåðåñ, ìîæíî äîäåëàòü. |
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– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
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ñàíêò ïèòåðáóðã êîíòðàáàñ
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ÿ íåìîãó 
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Äîíåöêàÿ îáë. ãåòàðêî
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7wing, æåëàòåëüíî íå ïî ôèëüìó è ÷òîá 2 êóïëåòà | |
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü 
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À íóæíî ÷òî-íèòü ïîæåñò÷å, à òî ÿ óæå ïèøó äëÿ ãðóïïû ñ àðèéñêèìè íàêëîííîñòÿìè?.. Òèïà òàêîé òåêñòèê (äàþ îäèí êóïëåò ñ ïðèïåâîì) ׸ðíûé âîðîí, áîëüøåëîáûé, Çàñòó÷àë ïî êðûøêå ãðîáà: «Òóê-òóê-òóê, âñòàâàé, ïîêîéíèê, Áüþò â íàáàò íà êîëîêîëüíå!» Äåðåâî òðåùèò, ìóìèÿ êðè÷èò. Ïî ñûðîé çåìëå êðîâü ðó÷ü¸ì áåæèò. À íàáàò âñ¸ ãðîì÷å, ãðîì÷å, ׸ðíûé âîðîí, ãëàâíûé êîðì÷èé, Ðàñïðàâëÿåò êðûëüÿ ãðîçíî, Îãëàøàÿ êðèêîì âîçäóõ: «Ïîäûìàéñÿ, ëþä, áðîñèâ ñâîé ïðèþò, Ïðèõîäè íà ñóä, íà ïîñëåäíèé ñóä!» ̸ðòâûå âñòàþò, ì¸ðòâûå íå æäóò Òëåþò è ãíèþò, íî âïåð¸ä èäóò. À-à-à, À-à-à, À-à-à- Àïîêàëèïñèñ À-à-à, À-à-à, À-à-à- Àðìàãåääîí. |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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Åñëè ÷¸, ÿ äàæå ìåëîäèþ ïðèïåâà íàïåòü ìîãó (íàä êóïëåòàìè íóæíî ïîäóìàòü, êàê ëó÷øå àðàíæèðîâàòü) | |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Åêàòåðèíáóðã
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----æåëàòåëüíî íå ïî ôèëüìó ---- ïî êíèãå ìîæíî? |
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– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ. |
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Ìîñêâà Âîêàë
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Âèð, à ãäå òóò â òâîåì òåêñòå Àðèéñêèå íàêëîííîñòè? Â ñëîâå Àðìàãåäîí?  Ïðåäñòàâü êàê Êèïåëû÷ ïåë áû "Òóê-òóê-òóê..." Áåç îáèä, íî êàêîé òî ñìåøíîé, à íå æåñòêèé òåêñò!
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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Èëþõà, áëèí, òû æå âóìíûé ïàðåíü! ß ðóññêèì ÿçûêîì íàïèñàë, ÷òî óæå ïèøó äëÿ ïîäîáíîé ãðóïïû! Çíà÷èò ýòî äðóãèå òåêñòû! À ýòîò ïðåäëàãàþ, ïîòîìó ÷òî îí ïîäðàçóìåâàåò áîëåå æåñòêîå èñïîëíåíèå è íà àðèéñêèé íå òÿíåò. |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ìîæåò íàïèñàòü òåêñò???
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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Èëþõà, íå îáðàùàé âíèìàíèÿ íà ïñåâäîäåòñêîñòü òåêñòà, åñëè áû òû çíàë, ÷òî ïîþò ìîè äðóãàíû èç äåò-ìåòàëëè÷åñêèõ ãðóïï, óìåð áû îò ñìåõà. | |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ìîæåò íàïèñàòü òåêñò???
Âðåìÿ: 24.11.2006 13:44 |
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Ìîñêâà Âîêàë
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Äà ïðåäñòàâëÿþ! =)))  äýäå âàùå âñå ÷òî óãîäíî ìîæíî ïåòü, õîòü " ëåñó ðîäèëàñü åëî÷êà", îäèí õðåí íè÷åãî íå ïîíÿòíî!  äýäìåòàëëå ãëàâíîå ìóçûêà!
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ìîæåò íàïèñàòü òåêñò???
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Ìîñêâà ×åøèðñêèé 
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"Â äýäìåòàëëå ãëàâíîå ìóçûêà!" Èëþõà, îõîõî! íà òÿæìåòå çà òàêîå ïî óøàì äàþò) |
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Ðàñêðîé ñâîþ ïàñòü, âîñòîðãàéñÿ, òû íà íàøåì êîíöåðòå!=)
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ìîæåò íàïèñàòü òåêñò???
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Äîíåöêàÿ îáë. ãåòàðêî
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7wing, ëó÷øå áû ÷òî íèêàêèõ ïðåäûñòîðèé ó òåêñòà íå áûëî | |
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Äîíåöêàÿ îáë. ãåòàðêî
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Âèð Âàðèóñ, ìåëîäèÿ â ñòèëå "Àíãåëüñêîé ïûëè", ïîýòîìó òåêñò äîëæåí áûòü íå òÿæåëûì äëÿ âîñïðèÿòèÿ | |
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ìîæåò íàïèñàòü òåêñò???
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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Âå÷íûé ñòðàæíèê 1  ÷àñ ïîëíîëóíüÿ íà ñòàðîì êëàäáèùå ñâåò Ñâå÷åé îçàðÿåò ïîëóðàçðóøåííûé ñêëåï.  êðóãó ïåíòàãðàììû íåâèííûé ëåæèò ÷åëîâåê, Åìó íå ïîìî÷ü óæå, íåò! Âçðîñëûå äåòè âðàòà àäà òùàòñÿ îòêðûòü  íàäåæäå áåññìåðòüÿ êëþ÷è îò ìåíÿ ïîëó÷èòü, Ïîòîì è êðîâüþ, íèêîãäà íèêîãî íå ùàäÿ, Îíè óáëàæàþò ìåíÿ. ïðèïåâ Âå÷íûé ñòðàæíèê - òàêàÿ ìîÿ ñóäüáà, Ñ ðîæäåíüÿ ìèðîâ íà ñòðàæå âñåëåíñêèõ òàéí ÿ ñòîþ, Âå÷íûé ñòðàæíèê, â ÷¸ì æå ìîÿ âèíà? Ïîðîêîâ ëþäñêèõ ÿ æàæäó, ÷òîáû ñêóêó ðàçâåÿòü ñâîþ. Ìíå âëàñòü íàä âñåì ñóùèì äàíà, ß ñàì Áîã, ÿ è ñàì Ñàòàíà! 2 Ñòàðûå ìàãè áîðìî÷óò çàêëÿòüÿ ñâîè, Ìåðçêèå òâàðè ïîëçóò èç óêðûòèé íî÷íûõ, Ñâåæåþ ïëîòüþ ïèòàþòñÿ æàäíî îíè. Íî ýòî íå äåòè ìîè! Ãëóïûå ëþäè âñåõ ñóäÿò ïî ìåðêàì ñâîèì, Âåëèêèé ìîé ðàçóì äëÿ íèõ íå âñåãäà ïîñòèæèì ß áûë, åñüì è áóäó, è äåíü, êîãäà ñãèíåò Çåìëÿ Íå òðîíåò íèñêîëüêî ìåíÿ. Âå÷íûé ñòðàæíèê - òàêàÿ ìîÿ ñóäüáà, Ñ ðîæäåíüÿ ìèðîâ íà ñòðàæå âñåëåíñêèõ òàéí ÿ ñòîþ, Âå÷íûé ñòðàæíèê, â ÷¸ì æå ìîÿ âèíà? Ïîðîêîâ ëþäñêèõ ÿ æàæäó, ÷òîáû ñêóêó ðàçâåÿòü ñâîþ. Ìíå âëàñòü íàä âñåì ñóùèì äàíà, ß ñàì Áîã, ÿ è ñàì Ñàòàíà! |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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Óïñ, ïðî àíãåëüñêóþ ïûëü ïîçäíî ïðî÷èòàë. À ìîæå ïðîùå âûëîæèòü äåìêó, ÷òîáû íå ïàðèòüñÿ?.. | |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Ìîñêâà Âîêàë
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Ìèø! Ìîæåò êîìó òî è äàþò. Íî ýòî òàê è åñòü! Ìóçûêà - âîò ñèëüíàÿ ñòîðîíà êàê äýäà òàê è áëýêà, à íèêàê íå ñëîâà!
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ìîæåò íàïèñàòü òåêñò???
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-----îäèí õðåí íè÷åãî íå ïîíÿòíî!  äýäìåòàëëå ãëàâíîå ìóçûêà! ----- Èëþõà, ïîëíîñòüþ ñîãëàñåí! Ìèõàèë, à çà ÷òî ïî óøàì äàþò? Çà òî, ÷òî íàçûâàþò äýò - ìóçûêîé? Èëè çà òî, ÷òî íåäîîöåíèâàþò ãåíèàëüíóþ ìåòàëëè÷åñêóþ ïîýçèþ? 
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– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ. |
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Òåìà: Re: Êòî ìîæåò íàïèñàòü òåêñò???
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Ìîñêâà ×åøèðñêèé
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Ãåíèàëüíî, íå ãåíèàëüíî.. íî êàê âû ñåáå ïðåäñòàâëÿåòå äýò áóç îðãàíèçàöèè âîêàëà? Íó ÿñåí ïåíü ÷èòàÿ äåòóõà -ïî ñóòè íå ìåëîäè÷íà, òàê êàê ïî âàùåìó âûñòðàèâàòü ïàðòèþ âîêàëà, êðîìå êàê íå íà ðèòìèêå? Åñòåñòâåííî òåêñò -îñíîâîïîëàãàþùàÿ äëÿ ðèñóíêà. Âîîáùåì åñëè âû ñëûøèòå òîëüêî íåïîíÿòíûé âàì ðûê, ýòî â ïåðâóþ î÷åðåäü çíà÷èò ÷òî ÂÛ ñëûøèòå ðûê, äëÿ âàñ íåàñíûé, ëþäè èñêóø¸ííûå ïîíèìàþò ÷òî ñòîèò çà ýòèì) Òàê ñêàçàòü -ýòà êîíñåðâàòèâíîñòü è åñòü îñíîâíàÿ ÷åðòà äýòà. À ìåëîäèê äåò, êàê òóò áåç îñòðûõ ÿðêèõ òåêñòîâ? Î ÷¸ì âû. Ïðî áëýê òîæå àáñóðäíîå çàÿâëåíèå -íó êàê ìîæåò èãðàòü ïîñëåäíþþ ðîëü òåêñò, åñëè áëýê ÿâëåíèå ñóãóáî òåìàòè÷åñêîå. Èìåþùåå ñâîè êàíîíû è âñ¸ ÿâëåíèå áëýêà -ïî ñóòè âîïðîñû è îòâåòû îïðåäåë¸ííîé ñîö-ðåëèãèîçíîé ñàáêóëüòóðû? ×òîá íå áûòü ãîëîñëîâíûì, íà ìîé âçãëÿä ïðåêðàñíåéøèå òåêñòà: Ìåëîäèê-Äåò The more i see, the less i believe. The more i hear, the less i care. This world we've created has left me carved. This world is sedated, dying is seen. I feel nothing (i feel nothing) See a prison in a thousand faces, This i truly feel. See a dragon in a thousand places. Instinct, what is fear? The more i see, the less i believe. The more i hear, the less i care. We used to be the chosen ones, Succumb to numb. Left with what we've become, I laugh after these cares.....for life. I feel nothing (i feel nothing) See a prison in a thousand faces, This i truly feel. See a dragon in a thousand places. Instinct, what is fear? I can feel nothing, nothing at all, Except for the pain, that hits me again. I can feel nothing, nothing at all, Except for the pain, that hits me again. I feel nothing (i feel nothing) See a prison in a thousand faces, This i truly feel. See a dragon in a thousand places, Instinct, what is fear? Áëýê Foul snake despair Where once you darkened gardens Another coils there Where twice you sliced all hope from me And left these present scars An insane love now burns above The weft of incandescent stars Hilt your dripping fangs that range Skywards to rend apart I might have sang of wings unchained But long before I locked my heart For Gabrielle A fit and perfect stitch of foreign parts Whose beauty fostered poets Whose laugh like silver belts Thawed your bitter winter from my path Gabrielle Foul snake despair Where once you peddled secrets Another spoils there With speech that sweetens drowning In deep lagoons of eyes And legs that begged apologies For lengths that mesmerised Spare your hissing sentiments For her fee welts more than thine Though no malice she weans Just a palace of dreams Where windswept chambers pine For Gabrielle Whose hair-spun onyx is run with gold Her rouge lips smack of dark blood Her name in whisper rolls Forever on my tongue Lest her memory dissolve Gabrielle Oh, Gabrielle Once crucified I would have died A thousand more times Just to feel her breath On my neck as a fervent lover To drown her sighs In floods of tears so well refined And blind from spying her In the arms of others Gabrielle Gabrielle Buried inside Where she’s all but mine Save for those that dine Oh her, on her perfect carcass Gabrielle Gabrielle Foul snake despair Where once you wreaked my misery Another toils there For long lost Gabrielle Whose nightly spreading grin Persists in other faces By whom I’m slowly taken in |
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Ðàñêðîé ñâîþ ïàñòü, âîñòîðãàéñÿ, òû íà íàøåì êîíöåðòå!=)
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Ãàáðèýëëà Îõ, êîòîðóþ Ãàáðèýëëà Îäíàæäû çàìó÷èëà, ÿ óìðó åùå òûñÿ÷à ðàç Òîëüêî, ÷òîáû ÷óâñòâîâàòü åå äûõàíèå Íà ìîåé øåå êàê ïûëêèé ëþáèòåëü, ×òîáû òîïèòü åå âçäîõè  íàâîäíåíèÿõ ñëåç, òàê õîðîøî î÷èùåííûõ È ñëåïûõ îò øïèîíàæà åå  îðóæèè äðóãèõ Ãàáðèýëëû Ãàáðèýëëû Áåðèä âíóòðè, Ãäå îíà ïî÷òè ìîÿ Åñëè áû íå òå, êîòîðûå îáåäàþò Î åå, íà åå ïðåêðàñíîì êîðïóñå, Ãàáðèýëëà Ãàáðèýëëà Çàãðÿçíÿåò îò÷àÿíèå çìåè, Ãäå, êàê òîëüêî Âû äàâàëè âûõîä ìîåìó ñòðàäàíèþ Äðóãîé ñåòü òàì Äëÿ äëèííîé ïîòåðÿííîé Ãàáðèýëëû, ×åé íî÷üþ ðàñïðîñòðàíèâøàÿñÿ óñìåøêà Ñîõðàíÿåòñÿ â äðóãèõ ëèöàõ, êåì ÿ ìåäëåííî ïðèíèìàþñü | |
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Áëýê Çàãðÿçíÿþò îò÷àÿíèå çìåè, Ãäå, êàê òîëüêî Âû çàòåìíÿëè ñàäû, Äðóãîé íàìàòûâàåò òàì, Ãäå äâàæäû Âû íàðåçàëè âñþ íàäåæäó îò ìåíÿ È îñòàâèëè ýòè ñóùåñòâóþùèå øðàìû, áåçóìíàÿ ëþáîâü òåïåðü ææåò âûøå óòêà ñâåðêàþùåé Ðóêîÿòêè çâåçä âàøè êàïàþùèå êëûêè, êîòîðûå ðàñïîëàãàþòñÿ Ââûñü, ÷òîáû ðàçîðâàòü îáîñîáëåííî, ÿ ìîã áû èìåòü, ïåë èç îñâîáîæäåííûõ êðûëüåâ, Íî ïðåæäå, ÷åì ÿ çàõâàòèë ìîå ñåðäöå Äëÿ Ãàáðèýëëû À ôèò è ïðåêðàñíîãî ñòåæêà ÷óæèõ êðàåâ, êðàñîòà Êîòîðûõ ñïîñîáñòâîâàëà ïîýòàì, ñìåõ Êîòîðûõ êàê ñåðåáðÿíûå ïîÿñà Òàÿë âàøà ãîðüêàÿ çèìà îò ìîåé äîðîæêè | |
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×åì áîëüøå ÿ âèæó, òåì ìåíüøå ÿ âåðþ. ×åì áîëüøå ÿ ñëûøó, òåì ìåíüøå ÿ çàáî÷óñü. Ýòîò ìèð, êîòîðûé ìû ñîçäàëè, îñòàâèë ìåíÿ âûðåçàííûì. Ýòîò ìèð - sedated, ñìåðòü çàìå÷åíà. ß íå ÷óâñòâóþ íè÷òî (ÿ ÷óâñòâóþ, íè÷òî) Íå âèäÿò òþðüìó â òûñÿ÷å ëèö, Ýòî ÿ äåéñòâèòåëüíî ÷óâñòâóþ. Ñì. äðàêîíà â òûñÿ÷å ìåñò. Èíñòèíêò, ÷òî ÿâëÿåòñÿ îïàñåíèåì? ×åì áîëüøå ÿ âèæó, òåì ìåíüøå ÿ âåðþ. ×åì áîëüøå ÿ ñëûøó, òåì ìåíüøå ÿ çàáî÷óñü. Ìû èìåëè îáûêíîâåíèå áûòü âûáðàííûìè, Óñòóïàòü îöåïåíåëîìó. Îñòàâëåííûé ñ òåì, ÷åì ìû ñòàëè, ÿ ñìåþñü ïîñëå ýòèõ çàáîò ..... äëÿ æèçíè. ß íå ÷óâñòâóþ íè÷òî (ÿ ÷óâñòâóþ, íè÷òî) Íå âèäÿò òþðüìó â òûñÿ÷å ëèö, Ýòî ÿ äåéñòâèòåëüíî ÷óâñòâóþ. Ñì. äðàêîíà â òûñÿ÷å ìåñò. Èíñòèíêò, ÷òî ÿâëÿåòñÿ îïàñåíèåì? ß íå ìîãó ÷óâñòâîâàòü íè÷òî, íè÷òî âîîáùå, Çà èñêëþ÷åíèåì áîëè, êîòîðàÿ ïîðàæàåò ìåíÿ ñíîâà. ß íå ìîãó ÷óâñòâîâàòü íè÷òî, íè÷òî âîîáùå, Çà èñêëþ÷åíèåì áîëè, êîòîðàÿ ïîðàæàåò ìåíÿ ñíîâà. ß íå ÷óâñòâóþ íè÷òî (ÿ ÷óâñòâóþ, íè÷òî) Íå âèäÿò òþðüìó â òûñÿ÷å ëèö, Ýòî ÿ äåéñòâèòåëüíî ÷óâñòâóþ. Ñì. äðàêîíà â òûñÿ÷å ìåñò, Èíñòèíêòå, ÷òî ÿâëÿåòñÿ îïàñåíèåì? | |
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Ìîñêâà ×åøèðñêèé
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ìäÿ .. è ðàäîñòè îò òàêîãî ïåðåâîä÷èêà? | |
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Ðàñêðîé ñâîþ ïàñòü, âîñòîðãàéñÿ, òû íà íàøåì êîíöåðòå!=)
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Åêàòåðèíáóðã
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Óâàæàåìûé ïðîôåññîð, ïðîøó äàòü îöåíêó âîò òàêîìó òåêñòó, è êëàññèôèöèðîâàòü åãî (äýò,áëýê,äóì èëè ÷òî òàì åùå...) TONIGHT The evening died away and left the world in dark, The slightest breathe of wind and little orange spark... When round moon invites to fly the souls lost, Look back and you will sight the broken ancient cross. A cricket stopped his chirr, mosquitoes fold the wings, Be ready when you are convulsed from sudden wince. The silence is complete, and bushes don't crunch, Your skin can feel at once a sticky faint touch. Rf. Ah-ah, tonight, evil spirits come for jolly feast, Ah-ah, tonight, don't go astray in smoky mist. Ah-ah, tonight, you can see the bottom of the well, Ah-ah, tonight, forest will enjoy the voice of hell! And there's heard a splash and gnashing of the steel, The day is right, he can fulfill ominious will! When soil in the grave begins a little move, His traces flash with red, and liquid fills the groove... |
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– Õîòèòå, ÿ ñêàæó âàì ïðàâäó?
– Ñïàñèáî, ó ìåíÿ ñâîÿ. |
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ñàíòîñ! äàé ñâîé å-ìåéë. ÿ òåáå îòïðàâëþ êîìïàêòíûé , ¸ìêèé òåêñò â ñòèëå "Àðèè" ? | |
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ñàíêò ïèòåðáóðã êîíòðàáàñ
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ÿ íå ìàãó
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ìèðî
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Äîíåöêàÿ îáë. ãåòàðêî
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vagant, santos@i.ua | |
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Äîíåöêàÿ îáë. ãåòàðêî
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Âèð Âàðèóñ, Áàçû äëÿ çàïèñè íåòó, ïîýòîìó ïåñíÿ ñîñòàâëåíà íà ïðîãå "Guitar Pro" | |
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ÑÅÃÎÄÍß ÂÅ×ÅÐÎÌ âå÷åð çàìèðàë è îñòàâèë ìèðîâóþ òåìíîòó âíóòðè, ìàëåéøèå äûøàò èç âåòðà è íåáîëüøîé îðàíæåâîé èñêðû... Êîãäà êðóãëàÿ ëóíà ïðèãëàøàåò, ÷òîáû ëåòåòü ïîòåðÿííûå äóøè, Âçãëÿä íàçàä, è Âû óâèäèòå ñëîìàííûé äðåâíèé êðåñò. Êðèêåò îñòàíîâèë åãî òðåñêîòíþ, ìîñêèòû ñâîðà÷èâàþò êðûëüÿ, ãîòîâû, êîãäà Âû ïîòðÿñåíû îò âíåçàïíîãî, âçäðàãèâàþò. Òèøèíà ïîëíà, è êóñòàðíèêè íå õðóñòÿò, Âàøà êîæà ìîæåò ÷óâñòâîâàòü ñðàçó ëèïêèé ñëàáûé êîíòàêò. Rf. Àõ àõ, ñåãîäíÿ âå÷åðîì, çëîé àëêîãîëü ïðèáûâàåò äëÿ âåñåëîãî áàíêåòà, Àõ àõ, ñåãîäíÿ âå÷åðîì, íå ïîòåðÿéòåñü â äûìíîì òóìàíå. Àõ àõ, ñåãîäíÿ âå÷åðîì, Âû ìîæåòå âèäåòü îñíîâàíèå õîðîøî, Àõ àõ, ñåãîäíÿ âå÷åðîì, ëåñ áóäåò îáëàäàòü ãîëîñîì àäà! È òàì óñëûøàë âñïëåñê è ñêðåæåòàíèå ñòàëè, äåíü ïðàâèëåí, îí ìîæåò âûïîëíèòü ominious, áóäåò! Êîãäà ïî÷âà â ìîãèëå íà÷èíàåò íåáîëüøîå äâèæåíèå, Åãî âñïûøêà ñëåäîâ ñ êðàñíûì, è æèäêîñòü çàïîëíÿåò óãëóáëåíèå... | |
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Âèð Âàðèóñ ìäà... ÷åò âàøå òîòî âñå êðîìå òîãî ÷òî ïðî äåò-ìåàë ÿ íå ïåðåâàðèâàþ. óæå äàæ ÿ ïîíÿë ÷òî äàæå ãîâîðèòü :"íó òïà ÷òîòî òèïà àðèè.." ïî êðàéíåé ìåðå íå ìîäíî. äà è êîñèòü ïîä êîãòî òîæå. íàäà ñâîå ÷åò äåëàòü, à íå òî ÷òî òû õîòåë áû óñëûøàòü â íîâîì àëüáîìå àðèè. à ïðî òåêñòû òî ÿ äóìàþ ÷òî îòî âñå êðîìå, îïÿòü æå êðîìå äåò ìåòàëà, ÿ íå ñèëüíî äîãàíÿþ. äëÿ õåâè-ïàóåð íó èëè ìåëîäèê íàäà ïèñàòü òàêîå ñ ãëóáîêèìè îáðàçàìè êàê ó äåò - ìåòàëà íî ñî ñìûñëîì êîòîðûé ëóòøå âèäíî ÷åì â äåò- ìåòàëå, è òàêæå áåç àãðåñèè è äåïðèñèâà. õåâè íåñåò ñèëó äóõà, à íå òüìó äëÿ ñåðöà.èçâèíè ÿ ïîíèìàþ àâòàðñàå ìèðîâîçðåíèå, íî ÿ äóìàþ ÷òî îòî âñå íåìîíîãî áîíàëüíî. |
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õîõîë ! íàó÷èñü ïèñàòü ïî ðóññêè! Èëè íàø ÿçûê ñîâñåì ó âàñ çàãíàëè â ïîäâàë ? ( øó÷ó , íå îáèæàéñÿ.)
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã Ãèáñàí 
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ß ïîñò Onixa ïðî÷èòàë ÷åñòíûõ 5-òü ðàç, íî òàê è íå ïîíÿë, ÷òî îí õîòåë ñêàçàòü... Ýòî ïîñëîæíåå ðàñøèôðîâêè åãèïåòñêèõ ïåðãàìåíòîâ. |
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Äîíåöêàÿ îáë. ãåòàðêî
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Taake, ãû... ææîø! ÿ òîæ íå ñðàçó óëîâèë 
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Äîíåöêàÿ îáë. ãåòàðêî
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onix, ÿ ïèøó íå òî, ÷òî ÿ õî÷ó óñëûøàòü â ñëåäóþùåì àëüáîìå, à â ÑÒÈËÅ Àðèè - õýâè-ìåòàë! Æåñòêèé êóïëåò, ìåëîäè÷íûé ïðèïåâ è ñîëî | |
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