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Òåìà: I have no money (blues).
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü  
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It is warmly & sunny. I walk on a large street. Smart shop windows are smiling, Splendid cars are like sweet. Lovely girl putting straight expensive dress But I’m running with sweat. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money, baby But-but-but I wanna live. Farmer grows potatoes, Driver rides in a car . In the Senate sits statesman, At the stage - superstar. Let a bank worker counts amount of bucks But I play my guitar. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money, baby But-but-but I wanna live. Beggars cannot be choosers. One man laugh other cry When someone’s feeling useless, He is trying to die. I’m not getting to be unhappy boy And I don’t wanna die. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money, baby But-but-but I wanna live. If I had only dollar Sure it would be great. If I had got a hundred I would make a love date. If I have heaps of millions-billions bucks, May be I’d become hate. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money, baby But-but-but I wanna live. “Easy come, easy go” – Said me often granddad. Is it worth losing hope If life seems to be bad? Everyone choose his destiny himself That’s why I am not sad. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money, baby But-but-but I wanna live. Solo I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna sing. I have no money, But-but-but I love’em all. |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã ãèòàðà 
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ðåñïåêò   ñ äåëàìè - íîðìàëüíî íà ñòàðîñòè ëåò... âîò òîëüêî.... no monew no car and no flat |
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Ãàäàëêè âðóò,
ÿ çíàþ, ÷òî óìðó ãîðàçäî ðàíüøå, äàííîãî ìíå ñðîêà. ß ñàìûì ñòðàøíûì èç ïðîêëÿòèé ïðîêëÿò - ïðèãîâîðåí ê áóìàãå è ïåðó. |
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I have no money è æèçíü ïðîõîäèò ìèìî.Èñòîðèÿ èçâåñòíàÿ,ÿ áû äàæå ñêàçàë ñòàíäàðòíàÿ.Íîðìàëüíûé ôîðìàòíûé áëþç ïîëó÷èëñÿ. | |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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Sxolast, ñïàñèáî çà ýêñïðîìò! Øóðóï, êëàññè÷åñêèé ìåäëåííî-òÿãó÷èé áëþç. |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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If I had only dollar íàïîìíèëà ïåñíþ Creedence "Who'll stop the rain": "...If I only had a dollar for every son I've sung..." Cïàñèáî çà íîñòàëüãèþ Ñàì òåêñò õîðîøèé |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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me_and_my_baby, ñïàñèáî÷êè! | |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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Òàê âñå ïðîñòî-õîðîøî-ãàðìîíè÷íî-ìåëîäè÷íî, ñïëîøíîå óäîâîëüñòâèå. Øèêàðíî! |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
Âðåìÿ: 23.11.2006 15:41 |
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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ditty, ãðàíä ìåðñè, äàæå íå îæèäàë âñòðåòèòü ñòîëüêèõ ëþáèòåëåé áëþçà. Íàä òåêñòîì ÿ ïîðàáîòàë äîáðîñîâåñòíî, äàæå âñòàâèë ïàðó àôîðèçìîâ. | |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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ß çàìåòèëà Âñå ê ìåñòó è âñå âêóñíî. È óäîâîëüñòâèå - ñïëîøíîå
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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> Splendid cars are like sweet. Ìîæåò, ëó÷øå: Splendid cars look like sweet. (...âûãëÿäÿò, êàê êîíôåòêà) > Driver rides in a car Ïî-ìîåìó, íàäî ïðîñòî Driver rides a car > May be I’d become hate. Òî åñòü, "âîçìîæíî, ÿ ñòàíó íåíàâèñòüþ"? Ìîæåò, èìååòñÿ â âèäó "ÿ ñòàíó íåíàâèäåòü"? Íå ëó÷øå ëè òîãäà ñäåëàòü ÷òî-òî âðîäå "ÿ íàó÷óñü íåíàâèäåòü" - May be I’d learn to hate à ïî ðèòìó ëó÷øå May be I would learn to hate Âîîáùå ÿ íå âåëèêèé çíàòîê àíãëèéñêîãî, õîòåëîñü áû óñëûøàòü ìíåíèå ïðîäâèíóòûõ. |
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> May be I’d become hate ×òî èìåëîñü â âèäó? |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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Igrek, ñïàñèáî, äðóæèùå, çàìå÷àíèÿ î÷åíü öåííûå. Òåêñò ðîäèëñÿ, êîãäà ÿ ñëîíÿëñÿ áåç áàáîê ïî ×èêàãî, ñàì ïîíèìàåøü, îáùåíèå ñ àôðîàìåðèêàíöàìè íå ðàñïîëàãàåò ê òîëêîâîìó èçó÷åíèþ àìåðèêàíñêîãî àíãëèéñêîãî. Splendid cars look like sweet. - ïðèíèìàþ Driver rides a car - ïðàâèëüíî, íî íå ïîïàäàåò â ðàçìåð, òîãäà óæ ëó÷øå èñïîëüçîâàòü ãåðóíäèé Farmer's growing potatoes, Driver's riding a car È íàñ÷åò ïîñëåäíåãî çàìå÷àíèÿ, âñ¸ âåðíî, âûáèëñÿ èç ñòðîêè, èìåëîñü ââèäó "òîãäà ÿ ñòàíó íåíàâèäåòü". Àìåðèêîñû èñïîëüçóþò âìåñòî become to êîíñòðóêöèþ come to: May be I’d come to hate. Âîò ýòî íàçûâàåòñÿ êîíñòðóêòèâíîé êðèòèêîé, ñïàñèáî! %) PS Æàëü, ÷òî íåò ôóíöèè ðåäàêòèðîâàíèÿ ìåññåäæà. |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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me_and_my_baby, ñîððè, îòâåòèë âûøå. | |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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Igrek, ïîïðîáîâàë ñïåòü, çâó÷èò "íåâêóñíî". Ëó÷øå òîãäà èñïîëüçîâàòü ñòðîêó ïðî íåíàâèñòü Then I would come to hate òîãäà áóäåò ïîëíîå ñîîòâåòñòâèå ìîåìó ïåðâîíà÷àëüíîìó çàìûñëó |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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Âèð, íå ñòÎèò òàê ïîñïåøíî Ïåñåííûé ÿçûê - îí æå âîîáùå âîëüíûé, êàê áû íå ïåðåãíóòü ïàëêó â ñòðåìëåíèè âñå ñäåëàòü ïðàâèëüíî (åñëè íå õîòèì áûòü "ñâÿòåå ïàïû ðèìñêîãî", êîíå÷íî), òóò, èìõî, ãëàâíîå ïî ñìûñëó âïðîñàê íå ïîïàñòü, íàïðèìåð, êîãäà îò îäíîãî ïðåäëîãà ñìûñë ðåçêî ìåíÿåòñÿ. Ïåðâîå èñïðàâëåíèå ìîæíî áûëî è íå äåëàòü, òóò çàìåíà ðàâíîöåííàÿ, âî âñÿêîì ñëó÷àå, â ôèëüìàõ is like, are like çâó÷àò ÷àñòåíüêî. "Driver rides a car" - áûëî áû ïðàâèëüíî, åñëè áû âìåñòî àâòî áûëà ëîøàäü, êîãäà ride óïîòðåáëÿåòñÿ ñ òåõ.ñðåäñòâîì, â õîä èäóò ïðåäëîãè - in èëè on.  òðåòüåì ñëó÷àå become êàê ïåðåõîä â ñîñòîÿíèå òîæå áûë íè÷åãî, íî "May be I’d come to hate." ìíå êàæåòñÿ åñòåñòâåííåå. Then I would come to hate - ëó÷øå, ïîòîìó ÷òî è "ïåâó÷åå". Igrek, âîîáùå ýòî çäîðîâî, êîãäà òâîé èíãëèø âîò òàê êòî-òî ðàçáèðàåò, ìíå ýòîãî òîæå î÷åíü õîòåëîñü, êîãäà ÿ âûêëàäûâàëàñü. Åñëè ñîáåðóñü åùå ÷òî-íèáóäü âûñòàâèòü, ïîêîïàéñÿ â ìîåì òîæå, ïëèç. Áóäó î÷åíü áëàãîäàðíà. |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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ditty, ñïàñèáî, ÿ òàê è äóìàë, òîëüêî áóäó îòñòàèâàòü ride, èáî ñàì ëè÷íî ñëûøàë áåç âñÿêèõ ïðèñòàâîê. %) |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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"Baby, you can drive my car..."(Beatles) À âîò ê ëîøàäè êàê ðàç ìîæíî ïðèìåíèòü on, íî íå âñåãäà |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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me_and_my_baby, ïîääåðæèâàþ, íàïðèìåð, ó Queen åñòü ïåñíÿ I Want To Ride My Bicycle, íà Beatles ÿ íå îãëÿäûâàëñÿ, ïîòîìó ÷òî íàïèñàòü Driver's driving a car ðàâíîñèëüíî "ìàñëî ìàñëÿíîå" | |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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Óõ òû, âñå èíòåðåñíåå... Àéäàòå åùå ïîêîïàåìñÿ Ñàìûå ïðîñòûå è èñêîííî ïðàâèëüíûå ôðàçî÷êè òèïà êàðêàñû: "drive a car" è "ride a horse", òàê? Ñòàëáûòü, áèòëîâñêóþ ñòðî÷êó ñîìíåíèþ íå ïîäâåðãàåì íè â êîåì ðàçå  Ride èçíà÷àëüíî "ëîøàäèíûé" ãëàãîë - "åõàòü âåðõîì", ïîòîì óæå âñå îñòàëüíîå. me_and_my_baby: "ê ëîøàäè êàê ðàç ìîæíî ïðèìåíèòü on, íî íå âñåãäà" - èìåííî òàê, âåðõîì åäåì áåçî âñÿêîãî ïðåäëîãà, à êàê òîëüêî ïåðåñåëè â áðè÷êó, òàðàòàéêó è ò.ä., ò.å. ñëåçëè ñ ëîøàäè è ñòàëè ïàññàæèðîì òðàíñïîðòíîãî ñðåäñòâà, - ñòàâèì on. Queen-îâñêóþ ñòðî÷êó òîæ ïîíèìàåì íîðìàëüíî, ìû æ è ïî-ðóññêè ìîæåì íå ïðîñòî "ïîåõàòü íà", íî è "îñåäëàòü ìîòîöèêë" êàê êîíÿ, òàê âåäü? À âîò, ïåðåñåâ íà àâòîìîáèëü, äàâàéòå ïðèêèíåì: ýòî îíî, òî, ÷òî íàì (Âàì, Âèð) íàäî? Ìîæíî, êîíå÷íî, èçîùðèòüñÿ è íàôàíòàçèðîâàòü êðó÷åíûé îáðàç "îñåäëàííîãî àâòîìîáèëÿ", íî íå ñëèøêîì ýêçîòè÷íî ýòî áóäåò? Êîíå÷íî, Âû ñëûøàëè ýòî è òàê è ñÿê, òîëüêî ÷òî òóò "îòñòàèâàòü", åñëè â èñõîäíîì âèäå ó Âàñ è áûë ñàìûé òàêîé "áåçîïàñíûé" âàðèàíò? ÑòÎèò ëè ìåíÿòü åãî íà áîëåå ñïîðíûé - Âàì ðåøàòü. À âîîáùå, êàê ðåçóëüòàò òàêîãî öåííîãî îïûòà æèâîãî îáùåíèÿ ñ àôðîàìåðèêàíöàìè, Âû æ, íàâåðíîå, íàáðàëè ñåáå êîïèëî÷êó æèâûõ ðàçãîâîðíûõ ôèøåê? Ââîäèòå èõ â òåêñòû, äåëèòåñü, ïîñìàêóåì
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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hi,all! You discuss not on the theme, in my opinion... I see a perfect blues, lets discuss a musical constituent - it is more important then lexical investigations...=) Ditty, Var Varius and other: best regerds in advance! |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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> Ditty, Var Varius and other: best regArds in advance! Àé áåã ¸ð ïàðäîí, ìèñòåð Zloy! Âîîáùå ïðîùå âñåãî ïðèâëå÷ü íîñèòåëÿ ÿçûêà - ìàëî ëè èõ òåïåðü íà ðîññèéñêèõ ïðîñòîðàõ. Äà è ïî Ñåòè ìîæíî ñâÿçàòüñÿ. ß àíãëèéñêèé çíàþ ïðèìåðíî â øêîëüíîì îáúåìå. Òàê ÷òî, Ditty, I'm not the very person to judge your verse. À áëþç ìíå ïîíðàâèëñÿ ñâîåé ëåãêîñòüþ. PS Ìîæíî íå â òåìó?  ïåñíå TACO "PUTTIN' ON THE RITZ" óïîìÿíóòû cutaway coats. Ýòî ïàëüòî ñäåëàííûå ïî âûêðîéêàì? (Cutaway - ýòî è âûðåçêà èç êíèãè, è âèçèòêà, è, íàâåðíîå, êðîé). È êòî òàêîé million dollar trouper? Òîò, êòî âõîäèò â êîìïàíèþ ìèëëèîíåðîâ? Ýêñêüþç ìè ôîð îôôòîï. |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
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Äîðîãîé Çëîé, ÷òî blues - perfect, ìû îòìåòèëè, êàê ìîãëè:) Áûëà á åùå è ìóçûêà - áîëüøå á íàñëàäèëèñü è ìóçûêàëüíîé ñîñòàâëÿþùåé. Íî ìû æ íà òåêñòîâèêàõ èëè ãäå? äàâàé óæ òåêñò çàäâèãàòü íå áóäåì, îí æå âîí êàê õîðîø! Off: à ÷åãî òû òîëüêî ðàçîê ñâîþ ìóçûêó âûëîæèë è óñïîêîèëñÿ? Ìíå íå õâàòèëî. Igrek, äà very, very Íîñèòåëÿ ìîæíî ïðèâëå÷ü íà òîò èëè èíîé âîïðîñ (òîëüêî íàñ÷åò "ïðîùå âñåãî" - ýò óæ ãäå êàê), íî âåñü òåêñò-òî òû ñ íèì ýäàê âîò íå îáñóäèøü.Çàìåòèò îí, íàïðèìåð, ïåðåïàä ðèòìà, êàê çàìåòèë òû? À "øêîëüíûé îáúåì" - ýòî íå îãðàíè÷åíèå, êîãäà èíòåðåñ åñòü. Âîò èìåííî ñâåæèì ãëàçîì âûõâàòèòü ñïîðíûå-ñîìíèòåëüíûå-íåïîíÿòíûå-ñëèøêîìçàóìíûå-êîð ÿâîçâó÷àùèå-èïðî÷. ìîìåíòû â òåêñòå è ïîêîïàòü-äîêîïàòüñÿ, òî ýòî èëè íå òî - âïîëíå ðåàëüíî. "íå â òåìó": cutaway coat - òèïà ôðàê, êîðîòêèé ñïåðåäè, ñçàäè - äëèííûé ñ äèàãîíàëüíûì ðàçðåçîì îò ïîÿñà ê êîëåíÿì, ò.å. ñ ôàëäàìè, ïðîùå ãîâîðÿ. million dollar trouper - àêòåð ñ ìèëëèîííûìè ãîíîðàðàìè. |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
Âðåìÿ: 24.11.2006 09:23 |
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Ñýíê þ ñî ìà÷. À puttin' on the ritz - ýòî òèïà "îäåâøèñü ñ èãîëî÷êè"? È ñ ÷åãî "umbrelas" äàíî â êàâû÷êàõ? ( òåêñòå - áîãàòûé íàðîä õîäèò, çàæàâ â êóëàêè çàêîâûå÷åííûå "àìáðåëû"). |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
Âðåìÿ: 24.11.2006 10:08 |
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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ditty, ñïàñèáî, íî íåãðû ðåàëüíî ãîâîðèëè ride a car , ó íèõ âîîáùå ñëîâî ride èíîãäà îçíà÷àåò "òà÷êà", ñàì ñëûøàë. Áàÿíû÷, ïðîíèêñÿ òâîèì òåêñòîì, ñïàñèáî, äðóæèùå! Òàòóøåê - â æ.ïó!  ñìûñëå, äëÿ íèõ òîæå ïèøóò ðóññêîÿçû÷íûå àâòîðû. Ïîýòîìó ïðîáëåìû ñ àäàïòàöèåì òåêñòîâ áóäóò âñåãäà. %) |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
Âðåìÿ: 24.11.2006 14:46 |
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Âèð, excuse me, îòâå÷ó Igrekó åùå ðàçîê è îôôòîïèòü áîëüøå íå áó... îê? Igrek, êëþíóëà è ïðî÷èòàëà ñ òâîåé ïîäà÷è âåñü òåêñò (puttin' on the ritz ) - è ÷åãî ðàíüøå ïðîõîäèëà ìèìî? Ïðèêîëüíûé òåêñò ïîä êëåâûé ðèòì, ïàñèá. Åñòü ñ ÷åì ïîáàëîâàòüñÿ À puttin' on the ritz - ýòî òèïà "îäåâøèñü ñ èãîëî÷êè"? - ïî÷òè. Ýòî ðîñêîøü, îñëåïèòåëüíàÿ, îñëåïëÿþùàÿ, âûñòàâëåííàÿ íàïîêàç è òûäû. È ñ ÷åãî "umbrelas" äàíî â êàâû÷êàõ? - âîò òóò ïðèêîëüíî, íå ñðàçó âúåõàëà. Ïî èäåå òàì âñå áåç çàìîðî÷åê, ïðîñòî áîãà÷è ñ òðîñòî÷êàìè è çîíòèêàìè, à ñîïîñòàâèøü ñ ðèòìîì - çîíòû ïðèòÿíóòû ðàäè ðèôìû ê "Ðîêôåëëåðàì" è ïîä ýòî äåëî ðàñòÿíóòû íà ñëîã: "umberellas", òàê ÷òî êàâû÷êè îòðàæàþò, âèäèìî, ñîçíàòåëüíîå êîâåðêàíèå ñëîâà, íó è äî êó÷è, âïîëíå âîçìîæíî, ýäàêîå âàëüÿæíîå ïðîèçíîøåíèå. Âñå, õàðîø ôëóäèòü, à òî ïåðåä Âèðîì íåóäîáíî. Çàõî÷åøü åùå ÷å-íèòü ïðèêîëüíîå îáñóäèòü - îòêðûâàé òîï èëè ïîæàëòå â ëè÷êó
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
Âðåìÿ: 24.11.2006 17:57 |
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ïðèâåò. Äèòòè! ñîãëàñåí - ôîðóì òåêñòîâèêîâ, íî íàïèñàë ïîñò, ïîòîìó ÷òî îáñóæäåíèå òåêñòîâîé ñîñòàâëÿþùåé ñîøëî íà íåò ê òîìó âðåìåíè, äîáàâèòü áûëî íå÷åãî (à êòî ñ òîáîé ñðàâíèòñÿ â ðåöåíçèÿõ, îñîáåííî ê àíãëîÿçû÷íûì ñòèõàì?) à âîò áëþç ïîíðàâèëñÿ, ïîòîìó è ñïðîñèë êàê Âèð âèäèò ïåñíþ - ýòî íå ìåíåå âàæíûé àñïåêò â ñî÷èíèòåëüñòâå, ÷åì òåêñò.Ðàçâå ìåíåå èíòåðåñíî îáñóæäàòü "ïåñåííûå" ñîñòàâëÿþùèå, åñëè òåêñò ÿâëÿåòñÿ ïåñíåé? ìíå ýòî î÷åíü èíòåðåñíî, ê ïðèìåðó - âèäåíèå àâòîðîì ìóçûêè ê ñâîåìó ïðîèçâåäåíèþ - ýòî êëàññíî - èìåííî òàê ìîæíî ïðèìåðíî îñîçíàòü ãàììó ÷óâñòâ è îáðàçû, êîòîðûå ñïîñîáñòâîâàëè ñîçäàíèþ... äà ÿ íå òàê ÷àñòî è ôëóæó íà ôîðóìå - òîëüêî â òåìàõ, äåéñòâèòåëüíî ìåíÿ ïîðàäîâàâøèõ èëè çàöåïèâøèõ, è êîãäà ìíå åñòü ÷òî ñêàçàòü... |
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
Âðåìÿ: 24.11.2006 18:09 |
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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ditty, Áàÿí, äà ÿ íå ïðîòèâ äèñêóññèè! Ýòè ìîìåíòû ìíå ñàìîìó èíòåðåñíû, ìû æå íå ïðè÷åñêè èëè àâòî îáñóæäàåì. Ìíå îñîáåííî ïðèÿòíî, ÷òî òàêàÿ ïîëåìèêà âîçíèêëà îòíîñèòåëüíî èíîÿçû÷íûõ òåêñòîâ, ÷òî ñâèäåòåëüñòâóåò î ìíîãîãðàííîñòè àâòîðîâ íàøåãî ôîðóìà.
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
Âðåìÿ: 27.11.2006 11:44 |
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ñîáà÷üè íîñû, êîøà÷üè õâîñòû è ÷åðåïàøèé ïàíöèðü
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Ïîñëå ïðàâêè It is warmly & sunny. I walk on a large street. Smart shop windows are smiling, Splendid cars are like sweet. Lovely girl's putting straight expensive dress But I’m running with sweat. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money, baby, But-but-but I wanna live. Farmer's growing potatoes, Driver's riding a car . In the Senate is statesman, At the stage - superstar. Let a bank worker counts amount of bucks But I play my guitar. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money, baby, But-but-but I wanna live. Beggars cannot be choosers. Some men laugh others cry When someone’s feeling useless, He is trying to die. I’m not getting to be unhappy boy And I don’t wanna die. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money, baby, But-but-but I wanna live. If I had only dollar Sure it would be great. If I had got a hundred I would make a love date. If I have heaps of millions-billions bucks, Then I would come to hate. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money, baby, But-but-but I wanna live. “Easy come, easy go” – Said me often granddad. Is it worth losing hope If life seems to be bad? Everyone choose his destiny himself That’s why I am not sad. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna live. I have no money, baby. But-but-but I wanna live. Solo I have no money I wanna live. I have no money I wanna sing. I have no money, But-but-but I love’em all. |
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ñàáîðäåí Ordo Creatus è ìàãèñòð Ordo Planetarum Ëîêàëüíîé Ãðóïïû, âêëþ÷àÿ Áîëüøîå è Ìàëîå Ìàãåëëàíîâû Îáëàêà è Òóìàííîñòü Àíäðîìåäû.
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Òåìà: Re: I have no money (blues).
Âðåìÿ: 27.11.2006 12:05 |
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ditty : ñîãëàñåí ñ àäðåñîâàíûì ìíå ïîñòîì, íî ìû ñëåãêà îòêëîíèëèñü îò òåìû, à àâòîð èìåë â âèäó "âåñòè ìàøèíó", ò.å. èìåííî drive [áåç ïðåäëîãà] a car | |
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