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Òåìà: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 09.09.2006 00:14 
Ìîñêâà


ÿ íå çíàþ, ïèøåò òóò êòî òàêèå òåìû, äà è ÿ â îáùåì òîëüêî ïîçàâ÷åðà ïîïðîáîâàë ÷åãî-òî íàïèñàòü, âîîáùå ÿ áàðàáàíùèê, è àíãëèéñêèé íå î÷åíü çíàþ, íî âûëîæó ïàðó íåäîäåëàííûõ îòðûâêîâ (ÿ ïîíèìàþ ÷òî ýòî ïðèìèòèâ íî âñ¸ æå)

Changing me against my will,
This eternal pain which I’ve absorbed to feel
Has replaced in me thirst of breath through my peel
And memories of unforgettable dream

Away from that times, where the night equals day
away from myself, away from delay
Through hundreds of keen words to the emptyness
that bleeding through the darkness, fills me up by misery

Inquiry holds in fear for every second
The beginning and the end were plaited into a ball
Why everyone is so indifferent to me,
The fall from the edge brings my eternity

è åù¸ êîå-÷òî,íî òóò ïðàâäà ëîìàíûé ðàçìåð...

brokens my head
opens my eyes
burning my dreams

never ending pain
through my veins

ruins my mind
diging my life
buried my heart

loud ####ing reality
incorrect is the right

NOTHING I LOVE
NOTHING I NEED
KILLING MY SOUL
SACRIFICE TO THE EMPTYNESS

è îïÿòü æå, íåçàêîíå÷åííî äî êîíöà, è ÿ äóìàþ áàíàëüíî, à òàêæå íåãðàìîòíî...

[ My Pain ]

Dust
Delirium in my
head waiting for the
one
Who's showing me
the way into eternity

Void
And every painfull choise
will broke my visions of
the truth that killing best of me
inside of me

Living the death
that concorded my breath
Stealing everything left
Taking everything right

I am beating my head
I get madness instead
I have seen it before
Seen it right before my death

Perception
Reaction
Death gains control on me
Destroing
My fractions
I'll never ever be

the same...

I'm loosing my way
I'm going insane
Soon the end of my days
Will compost my tired brain
I've strench my skin over face
But i am ####ing okay
And pull it over again
Through my heath and my veins
My pain...

âîçìîæíû ãðàììàòè÷åñêèå îøèáêè ÿ íå óâåðåí...
ìîæåò åù¸ ÷òî òî íàïèøó... âû òîæå âûêëàäûâàéòå åñëè ÷òî òî ïîäîáíîå åñòü... ìíå èíòåðåñòíî êàê êòî çàäà¸ò ïîñòðîåíèå (îñîáåííî ñ êðèâûìè ðàçìåðàìè/ïîëèðèòìèåé)

òåïåðü íàïèøåò êòîíèáóäü ÷òî-ëèáî ïî ñóùåñòâó èëè îïÿòü ÿ íå òàê íàçâàë òåìó?? ãëàçà íå ðåæåò?
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 09.09.2006 00:15 
Ãîðîä-Ãåìîððîé
Êëàçåìîáð

Äà íó òû ÷å... Àíãëèéñêèé íå ðóëèò. Äàâàé-êà íà ðóññêîì ÷å-íèòü, à òî äàæ ÷èòàòü âëîì.
Ãîïíèêîâ íåò. Âñ¸ êóëüòóðíî.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 09.09.2006 00:20 
Ìîñêâà


èçâèíè, ÿ íå ëþáëþ ðóññêèé â êà÷åñòâå ÿçûêà äëÿ ïîäîáíîé ìóçûêè.
íåâîñïðèíèìàþ ïðîñòî.

åñëè áû ìû òàì èãðàëè ðîê èëè òàì íó íåçíàþ, íó ïàâåð êàêîéíèòü òîãäà íàâåðíîå ÿ áû ïèñàë ïî ðóññêè, íî âî ïåðâûõ ìåíÿ íå ðàäóåò ñàì ÿçûê âî âòîðûõ ÿ õî÷ó ïîïðîáîâàòü ñäåëàòü ÷òî òî íà èíãëå

íî ýòî æå ÿ òîëüêî, ìîæåò êòîíèáóäü âûëîæèò òóò è íà ðóññêîì
ÿ èìåþ â âèäó äëÿ ñõîæåé ìóçûêè - êòî ÷òî ãîâîðèò ÷åðåç íå¸, íå òîëüêîæå êðóîå ìÿñî è êàðäàíû... ýòîæ âñ¸ òàêè íå ïîðíîãðàéíä...
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 09.09.2006 00:27 
Ãîðîä-Ãåìîððîé
Êëàçåìîáð

Ïôôô , òîæ ìíå ... Ïî-ìîåìó âñå óäà÷íûå ðîñèéñêèå ÕÀÐÄÊÎÐ êîìàíäû ïîþò êàê ðàç òàêè íà ÐÓÑÑÊÎÌ ÿçûêå , ïîòîìó ÷òî ëþäÿì â ïåðâóþ î÷åðåäü èíòåðåñíà ëèðèêà , êîòîðóþ íà ðóññêîì ÿçûêå ãîðàçäî ëåã÷êå âîñïðèíèìàòü ... È âîîáùå , íå âèæó , ÷òîá ðóññêèé ÿçûê ÷åì-òî óñòóïàë àíãëèéñêîìó â ïîäîáíîì íàïðàâëåíèè. Ìåíåå êà÷åâûé ?? Îòíþäü, ðóññêèé ÿçûê ðóëèò !
Ãîïíèêîâ íåò. Âñ¸ êóëüòóðíî.
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 09.09.2006 00:28 
Ãîðîä-Ãåìîððîé
Êëàçåìîáð

Êñòàòè, ìîæåøü âîò ïðèöåíèòü òîêà ÷òî íàïèñàë òåêñò íà ðóññêîì â ñòèëå õàðäêîð . Òîï -Íàäåæäà íàçûâàåòñÿ
Ãîïíèêîâ íåò. Âñ¸ êóëüòóðíî.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 09.09.2006 00:32 
Ìîñêâà


õîðîøî, ñåé÷àñ ïîñìîòðþ

ïî ïîâîäó ÿçûêà - ñóãóáî ëè÷íî äåëî êàæäîãî.
âîçüìè ãîðÿ÷î ìíîé ëþáèìûé ñëèïêíîò. ïåðåâåäè åãî íà ðóññêèé, ïóñòü äàæå è â ðèôìó è âñå òàêîå.
òàêîé ïîíîñ ïîëó÷èòñÿ, ÷åñòíî ñëîâ.
òåì áîëåå îò íûíåøíåé àëüòìåòàë ñöåíû ïàõíåò òàêèì ñîâêîì ðåäêèìè èñêëþ÷åíèÿìè...

òåáÿ íèêòî íå çàñòàâëÿåò ìîè âûñåðû ÷èòàòü - ïðîñòî ìíå õîòåëîñü ïîïðîáîâàòü ñäåëàòü ÷òî òî íà èíãëå âîò è âñ¸
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 09.09.2006 00:37 
Ãîðîä-Ãåìîððîé
Êëàçåìîáð

Äà íîðìàëüíûé òåêñò . Îáû÷íî ñ àíãëèéñêèìè òåêñòàìè òàê äåëà îáñòîÿò - íó ïîþò , íó è õ*ð çíàåò î ÷åì ïîþò... Íàðîä ïðåò, êà÷àåò, ïðèïåâ ïîäïîþò èëè êàêèå-òî ñàìûå äîñòóïíûå ìåñòà , è âñå ...à îáùèé ñìûñë ïåñíè óæå ìàëî êîãî âîëíóåò â òàêîì ñëó÷àå. Ò.å., ïî ñóòè , ëèðèêà ãðóïïû íèêîãî íå èíòåðåñóåò â òàêîì ñëó÷àå. À åòî óæå íå åñòü ãóò. Ñ ðóññêèì æå ÿçûêîì òàêîãî èçúÿíà íå ñëó÷èòñÿ !
Ãîïíèêîâ íåò. Âñ¸ êóëüòóðíî.
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 09.09.2006 17:11 
Ìîñêâà


ðàäóåò áîëüøîå êîëëè÷åñòâî îòçûâîâ
íàâåðíîå çäåñü áîëüøå áëþç/ïàâåð è ò.ä. ìóçûêàíòîâ, äà?
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 09.09.2006 17:31 
Ãîðîä-Ãåìîððîé
Êëàçåìîáð

Ïî âûõîäíûì òóò âñåãäà ìåðòâÿê :) Äà è îáñóæäàþò òóò â îñíîâíîì òåõíè÷åñêóþ ÷àñòü ëèðèêè , à íå òåìó , íà êîòîðþ ìû ñïîðèì. Ïðèçíàþñü, åò ÿ íåìíîãî â îôô òîï âëåç , ãûãûêñ :drazn:
Ãîïíèêîâ íåò. Âñ¸ êóëüòóðíî.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 10.09.2006 12:15 
Ñïá


ß, â îáùåì-òî, ôüþíåðàë èãðàþ, íî àíãëèéñêèé òîëüêî ñî ñëîâàðåì ))) Òàê ÷òî, íå ìîãó îöåíèòü ... Âîîáùå, â íþ-ìåòàëëå äåéñòâòåëüíî ìîæíî áû áûëî ðóññêé òåêñò ïîïðîáîâàòü, ÷àé, íå áðóòàë äåò ...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Sun
Âðåìÿ: 10.09.2006 19:29 
Ìîñêâà


ïðèâåò âñåì îïÿòü...
ÿ åù¸ îäèí íàáðîñîê ñäåëàë, è ÷òîáû íå çàáûòü êàê îí äîëæåí
çâó÷òü... òîêà íå ñìåéòåñü, ÿ íå âîêàëèñò... íà óðîäñêèé ìèêðîôîí â ñàóíäôîðäæå çàïèñàë...

âîò òåêñò:

[ Sun ]

When everyone has a price,
You may shoot without warning
This sick world dies so slowly
Decaying in a mud full of political slugs

Forlorn hope is cruicified
And endless war for resources
Generates unstopping violence
And cry of those, who was accepted as a virus

They marching in a line
Refusing my voiceless screams
Bury me underneath my dreams
They will reach they goal, they will gain their peace

My eyes catch the sun
Which is flying through the clouds last time
And I am falling down
Blown up by this, destroyed by this
My eyes snatch the sun
Which is flying through the clouds one more time
(And) I am falling down
Blown up by this, destroyed peace

Your peacemaking ####ing shit
Destroys reality,
We have mortality
Your peacemaking ####ing shit
YOU'RE NASTY ####ING POLITICAL WHORES

*âîçìîæíû ãðàììàòè÷åñêèå/ñèíò. îøèáêè*
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 10.09.2006 19:34 
Ìîñêâà


destroyed BY peace - îïå÷àòêà
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 10.09.2006 20:07 
Ãîðîä-Ãåìîððîé
Êëàçåìîáð

åòà...à ìóçûêà òà õäå ?
Ãîïíèêîâ íåò. Âñ¸ êóëüòóðíî.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 11.09.2006 01:41 
Ìîñêâà


íó òû øòî
êàêàÿ ìóçûêà
îòêóäà ÿ å¸ òåáå âîçüìó))
ÿ æå ïèñàë äîìà ïðîñòî â ñàóíä ôîðäæå, è ÿ áàðàáàíåð, ÿ íå óìåþ ìóçûêó ïèñàòü...
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 12.09.2006 00:25 
Ìîñêâà


íåóæåëè íèêîãî áîëüøå íåòó?!
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 12.09.2006 14:03 
Ãîðîä-Ãåìîððîé
Êëàçåìîáð

Íó è ÷å ... ÿ òîæ áàðàáàíåð , îäíàêî ìóçû÷êó òîêà â ïóòü ïèøó ;)
Ãîïíèêîâ íåò. Âñ¸ êóëüòóðíî.
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 14.09.2006 00:50 
Ìîñêâà


äà íå, ÿ íå ïðîòèâ, òîêà âîò òîëüêî òû îäèí îòâåòèë

âèäèìî íèêîãî áîëüøå íå áóäåò...
íàâåðíîå ñòîèò ïîä êàæäûé òåêñò îòäåëüíóþ òåìó äåëàòü...
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 14.09.2006 01:21 
ñàíêò ïèòåðáóðã
êîíòðàáàñ

Hybrid..ïðîñíèñü...ìîé ìàëü÷èã :idea2:

Òû+ÍÅ..íà+UPITERE! :)
ìèðî
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 14.09.2006 01:38 
Ìîñêâà


éîïò, ÿ òåáå íå ìàëü÷èê, îêå?
see ya
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 14.09.2006 01:46 
ñàíêò ïèòåðáóðã
êîíòðàáàñ

õì...îòâàæíàÿ âûõîäêà...
íî..áåçóñïåøíàÿ :)
ìèðî
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 14.09.2006 15:47 
Ìîñêâà
âîêàë

Ïîíåñëàààààààààñü! :super:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 14.09.2006 15:50 
Ãîðîä-Ãåìîððîé
Êëàçåìîáð

Õàõà :) Íå ñòîèò
Ãîïíèêîâ íåò. Âñ¸ êóëüòóðíî.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 15.09.2006 21:05 



Ïðèâåò, Hybrid, óâèäåëà â íàçâàíèè òîïà çíàêîìûå ñëîâà, ðåøèëà çàãëÿíóòü :))
Ñìîòðþ, òîæå áåç êîìïàíèè ìàåøüñÿ, ïðîáëåìû îáñóäèòü íå ñ êåì... ÿ, êîíå÷íî, íå çíàòîê æàíðà, íåäàâíî òîëüêî íà÷àëà êîíòà÷èòü ñ ïàðîé nu-metal ãðóïï, ïåðåâîæó è ïèøó òåêñòû...
Íàñ÷åò "êàê êòî çàäà¸ò ïîñòðîåíèå" - ìíå òîæå èíòåðåñíî, ìîæåò, çíàåøü, ãäå ÷åãî ìîæíî ïî÷èòàòü? Ñâîè òåêñòû äåëàëà ïîä ãîòîâóþ ìóçûêó, âîò îäèí äëÿ ïðèìåðà. Åñëè èíòåðåñíî, çäåñü
http://www.musicforums.ru/lirics/browse_thread.php?bn=mfor_lirics&thread=1156925037&replies=42
âûêëàäûâàëà äëÿ îáñóæäåíèÿ åãî ðóññêèé âàðèàíò. Êàêîé ïðîçâó÷èò ëó÷øå, êàêîé õóæå - íå çíàþ, çàïèñåé ïîêà íåò.
Ïî ãðàìîòíîñòè - âîïðîñ ñêîëüçêèé... íó, âèæó ÿ êîå-êàêèå òâîè îøèáêè, òû, âîçìîæíî, óâèäèøü ìîè... À, ìîæåò, ýòî íå îøèáêà, à çàäóìêà òàêàÿ - è âïîðó îáñóæäàòü åå óìåñòíîñòü :)) Èëè îáîðîò íåçíàêîìûé... À, ìîæåò, ïðîñòî îïå÷àòêà, êàê âîò çäåñü, íàïðèìåð: "Through my heath and my veins" - äóìàþ, òû èìåë
âñå-òàêè â âèäó ñåðäöå (heart), à íå ïóñòîøü(heath), õîòÿ... :))
Âî âñÿêîì ñëó÷àå, ìûñëè, â îñíîâíîì, ïîíÿòíû, ÷òî óæå íåìàëî.
Çàõî÷åøü ïîãîâîðèòü ïîäðîáíåå - ïðîäîëæèì ðàçãîâîð...
Òîëüêî âîò òàêîé åùå íàèâíûé âîïðîñ äèëåòàíòêè: ñìîòðþ, òâîè òåêñòà ðåøåòêàìè ïåñòðÿò, òàê "####ing shit" - ýòî îáÿçàëîâêà äëÿ nu-metal? ×åãî-òî ó ìåíÿ òåêñòû âñå áåç ýòîãî óõîäèëè... ß âñå äåëàëà íå òàê?

***

Always on the run
heading forward
Catch as can your sun
play up road
Speeding up the wheels
sometimes bleeding
Passing through the mill
never give in

Trying to forget,
Hope to forgive.
Cut your bygones dead,
Fling aside and leave.

Trump fortune's ace
Going through your
facing

Do hit the pace,
Mere enjoy
racing

Joy in racing...

Speed to amuse
Asphalt to fuse
Flying to get
Pain to forget

Way to deny commotion's flurry
Way to get free of all worry
Trying in no wise weaken
Keeping on your hope's beacon

Speed to amuse
Asphalt to fuse
Driving full split
Crazy a bit
Trump fortune's ace
Go own gates
Flying-begone
Soar on the run

Wind won't catch up you driving
Strongless in chase of your flying.
Speed makes you almost weightless,
Free in your soaring madness.
Soaring above love and hatred
Free to eliminate it
Rising up to high-speeding
You're wingy

Speed to amuse
Asphalt to fuse
Race

Crazy a bit
Open to hit
pace

Go own gate
trumping the fate's
ace

Flying-begone
Soar on the run
Race
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 16.09.2006 22:11 



Àéäà íàðîä ÷¸¸ íèòü íà ðóññêîì!!!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 17.09.2006 23:30 



Äèò... èçìåíÿåøü? ;) :D :D :D

***
2Òîïèêñòàðòåð: õì... ïîâåçëî òåáå, ðàç óæ Äèòòè îòîçâàëàñü. Êàæåöî, íå íàïðàñíî òû òóò òîï ïîâåñèë...
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2006 11:47 



Ñòîï... óëûáàåøü? :))
À Òîïèêñòàðòåðà-òî è íåòó... Êàæåöî, íàïðàñíî ÿ òóòà âëåçëî...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 21.09.2006 11:15 
Ìîñêâà


òàê, ñòîï) ÿ ùàñ îòâå÷ó)
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 21.09.2006 11:38 
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íàñ÷¸ò òâîåãî - ìíå ïîíðàâèëñÿ î÷åíü àíãëîÿçû÷íûé âàðèàíò, ðóññêèé íàïèñàí î÷åíü õîðîøî, æèâî (òàì âñ¸ ñêàçàëè êàæåòñÿ â êîììåíòàõ) ïðîñòî ìíå áîëüøå òàêèå àíòèñîöèàëüíî/ìèçàíòðîïè÷åñêè/àíòèóòîïè÷åñêèå òåìû áëèçêè, à ýòà âåùü íåçíàþ óæ ïî÷åìó, íî ÷åì òî íàïîìèíàåò ïåñåíêó òàêîé ñòàðîé âñåìè çàáûòîé ãðóïïû Àðèè...

Òû óõîäèøü îò ïîãîíü
Ñêâîçü êîðäîíû, ñêâîçü îãîíü
Ñâåò â ãëàçà, ðû÷àã â ëàäîíü
Hî öåëü òâîÿ - õèìåðà

íàñ÷¸ò ìîåãî, äà, òàì î÷åïÿòêà, òàì heart åñòåñòâåííî...
íàñ÷¸ò ####ing shit, äà, â îáùåì âèäèìî ïðîñòî ìåíÿ ïîðòèò çàðóáåæíàÿ ìóçûêà, íî âûðàçèòü âñþ çëîáó è íåíàâèñòü â îäíîì ìàòåðíîì ñëîâå - è â ïîâñåäíåâíîé æèçí òàê ÷àñòî âñå äåëàþò, òàê ÷òî òóò ìíå êàæåòñÿ âïîëíå óìåñòíûì èñïîëüçîâàòü ìàò (ÿ ïîêà íå äîïèñàë òåêñòû ïîýòîìó èìåííî ýòî âûðàæåíèå â äâóõ ðàçíûõ ïåñíÿõ îäèíàêîâûì íå áóäåò)

ññûëîê ÷åñòíî ãîâîðÿ âîîáùå íèêàêèõ ïîëåçíûõ ïîäîáíîãî ðîäà íå çíàþ... ÿ ñëóøàþ ïðîñòî Mudvayne î÷åíü òùàòåëüíî, ñìîòðþ êàê òàì ïîñòðîåíî ÷òî (íàïðèìåð ïåñíè âðîäå death blooms, (per)version of a truth, nothing to gain (!), all that you are, fall into sleep, not falling, silenced, under my skin), åù¸ ó Cradle Of Filth ìíå íðàâèòñÿ êàê ïåñíè ïîñòðîåíû (îñîáåííî èç ïîçäíåãî èõ òâîð÷åñòâà, ñ àëüáîìîâ Damnation And A Day, Nymphetamine). Íåêîòîðûå ïåñíè ñëèïêíîòà, â îñíîâíîì ïåðâûõ äâóõ àëüáîìîâ èíòåðåñòíû â ïëàíå ñîâìåùåíèÿ ðå÷åòàòèâà ñ æ¸ñòêèìè ãîëîñîâûìè çàðóáàìè (sic, surfacing, purity, spit it out, eyeless, people = shit). âîîáùå, ÿ íå çíàþ, åñëè ó ìåíÿ áóäåò âðåìÿ (åãî ïî÷åìó òî î÷åíü ìàëî ñåé÷àñ) ÿ ïîñòàðàþñü ïîèñêàòü êàêèå-òî èñòî÷íèêè íà ýòó òåìó...

âñåì ñïàñèáî áîëüøîå çà îòâåòû
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2006 01:05 
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2006 10:09 
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Ëþäè ãîâîðÿò - òåíîð

Ðóññêèÿ ÿçûê ðóëèò........âûêëàäûâàéòå íà ðóññêîì...
Êñòàòè, àâòîð, íå çàáóäü ïðî øàéòàí-êíîïêó "Ïîèñê" â ïðàâîì âåðõíåì óãëó.© Ôåíäåð
ß ðàñùåïëþ âàñ ñâîèì ëàçåðîì!

ØåôÚ Ñëóæáû Áåçîïàñíîñòè(×ëåí ñîâåòà äèðåêòîðîâ) ÎÎÎ"Ãëóáîíèçàöèÿ"
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Òåìà: Re: Metalcore / Nu-Metal òåêñòû
Âðåìÿ: 29.09.2006 02:12 
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íó âîò íà ðóññêîì...õç, ìîæåò âàñ íå ïîïð¸ò...
ïåñíÿ ïðî ñóèöèä äâóõ âëþáë¸ííûõ
õç ìîæåò è äåðüìî, íî ìíå õîòåëîñü íàïèñàòü..
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"4 Ñëîìàííûõ Êðûëà"

Óïàâ â ìîè
ëàäîíè ñîëíöå
ÄÎ ÊÎÍÖÀ ÈÑÒËÅÅÒ
Òû âûñîêî
Ìíå íå äîñòàòü
ÒÂÎÈÕ ÏÐÅÊÐÀÑÍÛÕ ÃËÀÇ
Åù¸ òâîÿ
Ðóêà â ìîåé
ÍÎ ÑÊÎÐÎ ÂѨ ÈÑ×ÅÇÍÅÒ
ß íå õî÷ó
Òåáÿ òåðÿòü!

Äûøè,
Òû ìíå åù¸ íóæíà,
ÄÛØÈ!
(Ñ òîáîé) ìû âìåñòå ñìîæåì
Ïðîéòè ñêâîçü õîëîä, òüìó è áîëü
Ôåâðàëüñêèõ äíåé çèìû
Âåäü òîëüêî åñëè òû ñî ìíîé
Òî áü¸òñÿ ïóëüñ ïîä êîæåé
ß ÍÀÂÑÅÃÄÀ
Ñ ÒÎÁÎÉ
ÒÛ ÑËÛØÈØÜ?
ÍÀÂÑÅÃÄÀ
ÄÛØÈ!

ß òîæå áóäó
 ñîòûé ðàç
Âñêðûâàòü ïóñòûå âåíû
ß òîæå áóäó
Óìèðàòü
Çàëèâ ñîáîé âåñü ïîë
Óïàâ íà çåìëþ
Ïîëîìàâ
Ñâîè áîëüøèå êðûëüÿ
Ìû çäåñü îñòàíåìñÿ âäâî¸ì...

Ìû çäåñü îñòàíåìñÿ.... âäâî¸ì....

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