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Òåìà: Ïèøó íà àíãëèéñêîì
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2006 10:52 



My dreams, they came truth.
I am flying away.
And nothing can stop me. I don`t want to stay.

The world of my wonders,
It is so unreal.
To pay for the happiness. I will pay bill.

It`s cold. It is hopeless.
To fly, to fell down.
My fate left me lonely. The lonely town.

I`ll study to breath.
I`ll be back, i`ll survive.
I will find my way. It`s my world, it`s my life.

Ïðîñüáà ïîïðàâèòü ïî íåîáõîäèìîñòè...:-)))
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Òåìà: Re: Ïèøó íà àíãëèéñêîì
Âðåìÿ: 03.06.2006 21:51 



Èíòåðåñíî... Î÷åíü ðåêîìåíäóþ îïóáëèêîâàòü íà êàêîì-íèáóäü çàïàäíîì ôîðóìå (ÿ çíàþ âîò ýòîò - èìõî ñàìûé êëàññíûé! http://www.songwriterforums.com/forums). Ïî ñâîåìó îïûòó çíàþ - òàì ñìîæåøü ôèäáýê íîðìàëüíûé íàéòè, ïðîñòî ìû ïîêà ïî-àíãëèéñêè ÷èòàåì ñëàáåíüêî... Îøèáêè åñòü, äàæå ÿ âèæó, íî òû ïðîñòî èçâèíèñü, ñêàæè, ÷òî íå àíãëè÷àíêà, îíè ïîéìóò, íå çâåðè... ìîãóò è ïîìî÷ü.
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Òåìà: Re: Ïèøó íà àíãëèéñêîì
Âðåìÿ: 04.06.2006 00:41 



Ñïàñèáî! Ïîïðîáóþ :)
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Òåìà: Re: Ïèøó íà àíãëèéñêîì
Âðåìÿ: 04.06.2006 01:49 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
Ãèòàðû ôåíäåð,á¸ðíè, ïåðåäàò÷èê, Ãëîòêà

ïðî÷èòàë, íà ñêîëüêî õâàòèëî øêîëüíîé ïðîãðàììû.
÷òî òî òèïà ÿ ñòðàäàëà.. ñòðàäàíóëà... :super:
ÿ êàê Àëåêñàíäðîâñêèé ñòîëï
ñòîþ è íå ïàäàþ è çà ìíîé ìîé àíãåë è êðåñò
íî íåêîòîðûå äåáèëû äóìàþò òàê
èëè ñòîëáû íå âèñÿò íà ïðîâîäàõ ýòî ïðîâîäà âèñÿò íà ñòîëáàõ
http://www.realmusic.ru/that_take
bahvik@bk.ru
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøó íà àíãëèéñêîì
Âðåìÿ: 26.06.2006 22:49 
ñàíêò ïèòåðáóðã
êîíòðàáàñ

BluesMachine....êàê..ýòî ñòðàäàíóëà.... :girl:
ìèðî
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøó íà àíãëèéñêîì
Âðåìÿ: 26.06.2006 22:56 
Ìîñêâà
Äîìàøíèé ãîëîñ, äèëåòàíò

My dreams, they came truth
èçìåíè íà
My dreams, they came truå
(ýòî óñòîé÷èâîå ñëîâîñî÷åòàíèå)
Äîìàøíåå ïåíèå â Ñìóëå
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøó íà àíãëèéñêîì
Âðåìÿ: 27.06.2006 12:55 
ÑÏá
Dean Brian Bromberg 5str, Yamaha BB-615, BOSS ME-50B

..ß òîæå...àíãëè÷àíèí åùå òîò....
..âîò...íî...âîçüìåì "I will pay bill". - òàê íå ãîâîðÿò...
..â äàííîì ñëó÷àå...ÈÌÕÎ...áûëî áû ïðàâèëüíåå íàïèñàòü: I'll pay the bill".
..Âîò..îïÿòü òàêè...ñëîâà "The lonely town". - ÈÌÕÎ, ïîâèñàþò â âîçäóõå
...ìîæåò áûòü åñòü ñìûñë íàïèñàòü âñþ ñòðîêó ïðèìåðíî òàê:
"My fate left me lonely in empty town"...?
Åñëè òû ñïîðèøü ñ äóðàêîì - òî äóðàêîâ óæå äâîå.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøó íà àíãëèéñêîì
Âðåìÿ: 02.07.2006 02:50 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
Ãèòàðû ôåíäåð,á¸ðíè, ïåðåäàò÷èê, Ãëîòêà

2 ìîìà â íåîáûêíîâåííîì êîíöåðòå òåàòðà îáðàçöîâà âåäóøèé îáüÿâëÿåò ïî¸ò ïåñíþ ïðî ñòüðàäàíèÿ,íî íå â ñìûñëå ÿ ñòðàäàëà ñòðàäàíóëà,à â ñìûñëå ëÿ ìóð, òóæóð, áîíæóð. :) :) :)
êñòàòè, âîïðîñ çíàòîêàì(âèñ âýé þóëë ëàéê)÷òî ýòî ìîæåò îçíà÷àòü
åñëè ýòî ãîâîðèò, áàéêåð, ñâîåé çíàêîìîé? :)
ÿ êàê Àëåêñàíäðîâñêèé ñòîëï
ñòîþ è íå ïàäàþ è çà ìíîé ìîé àíãåë è êðåñò
íî íåêîòîðûå äåáèëû äóìàþò òàê
èëè ñòîëáû íå âèñÿò íà ïðîâîäàõ ýòî ïðîâîäà âèñÿò íà ñòîëáàõ
http://www.realmusic.ru/that_take
bahvik@bk.ru
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøó íà àíãëèéñêîì
Âðåìÿ: 02.07.2006 02:58 
ñàíêò ïèòåðáóðã
êîíòðàáàñ

:da:
ìèðî
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!