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Òåìà: LINDA: "LET ME GO"
Âðåìÿ: 11.05.2006 15:01 |
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Ëþäè è íåëþäè,ïðåäëàãàþ âàì ïåðåâîä "Îòïóñòè ìåíÿ" (Ëèíäà).Ïîëåëèòåñü ìíåíèÿìè è äðóãèìè ïåðåâîäàìè (åñëè êòî óâëåêàåòñÿ)... Someone forgot to close the window, so i'm feeling so cold. "Not alone here"- that's what i heard from my shadows on the wall... Spreading my arms, i'm flying away- Not gonna leave you, but i will not stay. -CHORUS: Let me go away, look into my heart- Birds are flying there, they're terring me apart! I will not return, i will break the bounds. Let me go, cause i will never turn around... Don't close your eyes.Let's ceep the silence and don't do something wrong. Don't wanna know, what happend to ourselves and you're not alone... Spreading my arms, i'm flying away- Not gonna leave you, but i will not stay. -CHORUS. |
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Òåìà: Re: LINDA: "LET ME GO"
Âðåìÿ: 12.05.2006 02:53 |
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 àíãëèöêîì íå ñèëüíà, ïîýòîìó îöåíèòü ñìûñëîâóþ òî÷íîñòü íå ñìîãó  Ïåñíþ ïîìíþ ïëîõî, òî÷íî - òîëüêî ïðèïåâ. È âîò â ïðèïåâå-òî è âîçíèêàåò çàìèíêà: 2 è 4 ñòðîêà. Ñàìà äåëàþ ïåðåâîäû, òîëüêî íà ðóññêèé. È âñåãäà ñòàðàþñü ñîõðàíèòü êîëè÷åñòâî ñëîãîâ. Ó Âàñ æå ïîëó÷àþòñÿ äàííûå ñòðî÷êè äëèííåå...  èòîãå ïîëó÷àþòñÿ íåêòîðûå ðàñõîæäåíèÿ ñ ìåëîäè÷åñêèì îðèãèíàëîì. Âîîáùå, ëþáîïûòíî. Òàê ëè íàäî ñîõðàíÿòü ýòó òî÷íîñòü? Êòî åùå ïåðåâîäàìè óâëåêàåòñÿ - ïîäåëèòåñü îïûòîì
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Òåìà: Re: LINDA: "LET ME GO"
Âðåìÿ: 12.05.2006 04:57 |
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Let's ceep the silence âìåñòî "ñååð" íàäî "êååð" | |
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Òåìà: Re: LINDA: "LET ME GO"
Âðåìÿ: 12.05.2006 08:03 |
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ß áû âñå ( íó èëè áîëüøèíñòâî) will îïóñòèëà... Âîò íàïðèìåð, âìåñòî i will not stay, I won't stay. À òî óæ áîëüíî ìíå ñëóõ ðåæåò. Ñåé÷àñ æå òàê ïî÷òè íå ãîâîðÿò è íå ïîþò will, shall... òî÷íî òàê æå, êàê íå ãîâîðÿò you are, à ãîâîðÿò you're.
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Òåìà: Re: LINDA: "LET ME GO"
Âðåìÿ: 12.05.2006 08:06 |
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Äà âðîäå íîðì... Òîæå ïëîõî ïîìíþ îðèãèíàë, â àãëèöêîé ãðàììàòèêå ñîâñåì íå ñèëüíà... À íà íåìåöêèé ìîã¸øü? 
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Òåìà: Re: LINDA: "LET ME GO"
Âðåìÿ: 12.05.2006 12:43 |
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ditty, ñîëíûøêî, èäè òóò ðàçðóëè - ÷òî è êàê íàäî ïåðåâîäèòü Êñòàòè, ditty, ïûòàëèñü îçâó÷èòü íà ñòóäèè òâîé ïåðåâîä "Ïåðåâåðòíÿ"... íî ïîêà îòëîæèëè, ñ ïðîèçíîøåíèåì ó ìåíÿ íå àõòè  Íó, òî åñòü ïðîèçíîñèòü - ïðîèçíîøó, íî ôîíåòèêà-òî ïîìåíÿëàñü, òàê êàê ðàíüøå ïåòü óæå íåëüçÿ, íàäî ê íîâûì àêöåíòàì ïðèâûêàòü. Ëàæîâàòî ïîëó÷èëîñü. Ðåøèëè ïåðåïåâàòü.Äà è ñ áóìàæêè ïåòü - ýòî íå òî, ñîâñåì íå òî... Òàê ÷òî ñèæó, ó÷ó òåêñò... Ñïîþ îáÿçàòåëüíî.
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Òåìà: Re: LINDA: "LET ME GO"
Âðåìÿ: 12.05.2006 18:38 |
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Stop, íó òû íàøåë ðóëèëêó Èñõîäíèê ïîìíþ ñìóòíî, íî òàê íåïëîõîé ïåðåâîä, èìõî. Lady Gella, +1. Õîòÿ - ñìîòðÿ íà êîãî íàðâåøüñÿ, íåäàâíî âîò ïåðåïðàâëÿëà â îäíîì ìåòàëë-òåêñòå âñå you're íà you are è çâó÷àòü îò ýòîãî õóæå íå ñòàëî. Marabella, "ñîõðàíÿòü ýòó òî÷íîñòü", ïî-ìîåìó, æåëàòåëüíî. Äðóãîå äåëî, ÷òî áåç ìóçûêè ïî îäíîìó òîëüêî òåêñòó åå ÷àñòåíüêî íå ñîáëþñòè, ðèòì â èñõîäíèêàõ áûâàåò îé êàêîé ïåðåìåííûé. Ñëóøàåì ìóçûêó, â íåé âñå îòâåòû
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