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Êàêîþ Òû Ñòèõèåé ïîðîæäåí? Âñå ïî îäíîé îòáðàñûâàþò òåíè, à çà òîáîþ âüåòñÿ ìèëëèîí Òâîèõ òåíåé, ïîäîáèé, îòðàæåíèé.......... Øåêñïèð. õîòü Òû è íå ïðèçíàåøü àíãëèéñêóþ ïîýçèþ |
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 08.03.2006 20:38 |
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Âèêòîð... öàðü ...ãîðû... Ýòî... ê òåáå... þíîé äåâû..ìîëüáû.... Îòçàâèñü áîãàòûðü... 
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 08.03.2006 20:40 |
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ÏÎõîæå íèêîãî áëèí íåò! äàæå íàøåãî Ãåíèÿ
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 08.03.2006 20:51 |
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Ãåíèÿ? Ýòî âîïðîñ... Êàê îí ðàçëîæèò ýòó òåìó... Åñëè âåðíî òî ãåíèé.... (çëîé ãåíèé)1994ãîä... 1200ìåòðîâ ïîä çåìë¸é óãîëüíûé çàáîé... ++++++++++++++ ß íà êðûëàòîé ðàêåòå... Áåç áàøíè....  ñòåêëå âåñüìà è âåñüìà ýñòåòíîì.... Ïåðåìåùåíèå â îïðåäåë¸ííîì ïðîñòðàíñòâå.... Òî÷íî çàïðîãðàììèðîâàíî.... Ðåêîé öèôð èçÿùíûõ.... Ãäå-òî òàì, çà ãîðèçîíòàì.... Ïëÿæ èäåàëüíûé.... Íàïîëíåííûé ìÿñîì è êðîâüþ âåíàõ.... Ñàì òèõèé â íåãî îêåàí êàìèêàäçå, âðåçàåòñÿ.... Îòñòóïàåò è ñ íîâîé ñèëîé áðîñàåòñÿ.... À ÿ íà êðûëàòîé ðàêåòå...  ñòà äâàäöàòè òÿòè ôóòàõ íàä ãèäðîñôåðîé.... ß ñàì ïîâåëèòåëü, æåñòêèõ ñþðïðèçîâ.... ß ãåíèé, çëîé ãåíèé.... Àâòîìàòèêà ëþêà ñðàáîòàëà.... Ñ âûäàþùåìñÿ ÷âàíñòâîì, òîðïåäó âûïëþíóëà..... ß íà òîðïåäå....  ãèäðîñôåðó âêëèíèëñÿ.... Âèíòû ëèøü, íåèñòîâñòâàì, æåëåçó ïðèñóùåì.... Çà ðàáîòó ïðèíÿëèñü..... Ìåãàïîëèñ ó ìîðÿ.... Íàïîëíåííûé ìÿñîì è êðîâüþ â âåíàõ.... Öåëüþ ïîñëóæèò.... Ðåêîé öèôð èçÿùíûõ, êîîðäèíàòû ñ òî÷íîñòüþ âûâåðåíû..... ß ñàì ïîâåëèòåëü, æåñòêèõ ñþðïðèçîâ... È öåëü âñåé ìîåé æèçíè.... Ñáðîñèòü Ëóíó ñêâîçü áåçäíó ñ õðóïêîé îðáèòû..... ß ãåíèé,çëîé ãåíèé... +++++  æäó òâî¸ ìíåíèå.. èëè àëüòåðíàòèâó ïî òåìå....ÌîÌà... 
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 08.03.2006 21:21 |
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ÌîÌà! Ñêðîìíàÿ ïîïûòêà ñ ìîåé ñòîðîíû ß íà áàøåííîì êðàíå Áåç êðûëåâ Âîñïàðèë Íàä êàðêàñàìè Ëþäñêèõ ìåãàïîëèñîâ Òî÷íî çàïðîãðàììèðîâàíî, Ïîòîêàìè áóêâ èçÿùíûõ Äåéñòâèå êàæäîå: Âèðà! Ìàéíà! Ïëþñ ðåêè çâó÷íûõ ýïèòåòîâ Ñîïðîâàæäàþ ïðîöåññ Êîììåíòàðèÿìè Ïî ïîâîäó è áåç ß íà áàøåííûé êðàí Áåç áàøíè Äà è áåç äîïóñêà âëåç! Ïîâåëèòåëü æåñòîêèõ ñþðïðèçîâ - ñèëüíî ñêàçàíî! |
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 08.03.2006 21:39 |
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FREZA....íåò ñëàáî.... ïðîñòè....
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
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Ëþäè, Âèêòîð ìåíÿ èãíîðèðóåò!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ß òóò ïîíèìàøü â Åãî ×åñòü òåìû ñîçäàþ, à Îí è óñîì íå âåäåò!  Âèòÿ, ß îáèæóñü íà Âàñ Ýòî áóäåò ÁåÑÑïîâîÐÐîòíî |
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 08.03.2006 21:57 |
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ß íå äóìàþ ÷òî ýòî èãíàð.... Ýòî ñêîðåå çàìåøàòåëüñòâî... Ïåðåä âåëèêîé íàòóãîé.... Âèêòîð ÿ æäó ..... Ìíå èíòåðåñíî íà ñêîëüêî âû ãåíèàëüíû.... +++++++++++++++++++ 
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 08.03.2006 22:02 |
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Âèêòîð íó èëè õîòÿ áû ñêàæèòå, ÷òî â ýòîì ñòèõå íå ãåíèàëüíî... ÌîÌà.... Ãäå çäåñü êîêàÿ ëèáî íåòî÷íîñòü...ÀÑÜ 
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
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ß çíàþ òî÷íî Åìó íå ïîíðàâèòñÿ âàøà ðèôìà.ß ýòî ÷óâñòâóþ... | |
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 09.03.2006 18:00 |
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ÌîÌà, ìíå î÷åíü ïîíðàâèëñÿ òâîé ñòèõ. | |
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 09.03.2006 20:42 |
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Âèêòîð..ýòî íå îòâåò.... Âû æå Âèêòîð ñ÷èòàåòå ÷òî âàøè....ïðåêðàñíû.... È âû âåñüìà ñèëüíû â òåîðèè ïîýçèè... ß æäó äîñòîéíûé îòâåò....èìïðîâèçèðóéòå Âèêòîð... ++++++++++++++ 
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Ïðîñòèòå ìåíÿ, çà ìîé ãíåâ â âàø àäðåñ ìíå ñåé÷àñ íå ëåãêî ÿ ïüþ...
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Ãåëëà, Âèêòîð óâèäåë â òåáå áîëåå ñèëüíîãî ïðîòèâíèêà, è áîèòñÿ ñ òîáîé ðàçãîâàðèâàòü))))) Âèâàò, Ãåëëî÷êà! | |
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Ó ìåíÿ îòíÿëè ñîëíöå..... Ó ìåíÿ îòíÿëè ÷óäî.... Ãîëîâó ðåá¸íêó ïðîòêíóëè âèëàìè... |
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 09.03.2006 21:10 |
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Ãåëëà, ìû ñ òîáîé îáÿçàòåëüíî ïîîáùàåìñÿ, ñ Âåäüìîé òîæå, ÿ òîëüêî íàéäó õîðîøóþ òåìó. | |
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Òåìà: Re: WHAT IS YOUR SUBSTANCE? WHERE OF ARE YOU MADE? ÂÈÊÒÎÐ!
Âðåìÿ: 11.03.2006 10:07 |
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ÆÄÓ Ñ ÍÅÒÅÐÏÅÍÈÅÌ. 
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