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Òåìà: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:27 |
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...ÿ íàøëà âñå òàêè òåêñò êîòîðûé ïàðíÿì èç Ôèíëÿíäèè ïîêàçûâàëà êîãäà îíè ê íàì â êîëåäæ ïðèêàòûâàëè(îøèáîê íåò âñå âñå ïîíÿëè)...òåêñò ðàäè ïðèêîëà äëÿ ãðóïïû äðóãàíà íàïèñàëà))) (dark angel) The "Dark" in a forest Blood rain and part of "morris" Are you hear me? Take my hand... And I'll help you shatered faith (light angel) Don't hear... Take around and look at me Cleanest angel better low your free Ones Escape you must it's all forget You don't see reality... Killing pain it's only that you feel Endure and faith it's one way but until Whispering pray in stone walls like a spray Don't brake... Laid more!!! My lightest unicorn Or be dead so swore Lonniless in your soul (dark angel) Wake up!!! I'll showing you the dark Stay by tears no more You chosen start the war It's real...It's power I don't take lot of part I'm truely no more lower My unicorn of dark Blue eyes of unicorn so stollin It pushed he back from takin' "Holy" Lonniless,Tears and pain no more... ...Cause power needs now in the "Sacred war" Betrader taking sacred key Open cage ...Crystal lord are look at he Sold your soul...your horn covered dark Take this mind spark... Your soul in target...everyone You alive until you soul is gone Kill'em all for darkness this is deal No pain...for exemple take this and be free ...Takin' back your ####ing soul by war!!! ...Takin' back your ####ing soul by war!!! ...Takin' back your ####ing soul by war!!! ...Takin' back your ####ing soul by war!!! Faith more!!! My suffer unicorn Or be dead so swore Darkness in your soul Wake up!!! I'll showing you the dark Stay by tears no more You chosen fall the war ëàéò è äàðê àíãåë â ñêîïêàõ "ìàðêåðû"òîåñòü êîãäà ïåòü ãðîóëèíãîì à êîãäà îáû÷íûì âîêàëîì.Êñòàòè çà ðàííåå ïèøó ÷òî ïî øêàëå áëýêà îí íà òðîå÷êó íàâåðíî äà æå íå òÿíåò))))õîòÿ ðåøàòü áëýêåðàì))) |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:34 |
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"îøèáîê íåò âñå âñå ïîíÿëè" "Are you hear me?" - èçâèíè, äàëüøå ÷èòàòü íå ñòàë  Ó÷è ãðàìàòèêó
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:35 |
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ñ ìóçûêîé íàâåðíî îôèãåííî áóäåò ñëóùàòüñÿ! |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:37 |
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Masta Mela, à ÷òî òóò íåïðàâèëüíîãî: "Are you hear me?" ìîæåò òåáå ãðàììàòèêó ïîó÷èòü? 
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:40 |
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ìóçûêà íåìíîãî íà are you dead yet? ÷èëäðåíîâ ïîõîæà))) Are you hear me?ìì íó è...÷òî òóò ñ ãðàìàòèêîé??? |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:42 |
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âîò ÿ òîæ íå ïîíÿë! | |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:45 |
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áëèí ÿ ñâîáîäíî îáàëàñü è ñ íåìöàìè ...îíè åùå ïîæîùå ãîâîðÿò íàïðèìåð have ñ ëþáûì ìåñòîèìåíèåì ....èëè is âìåñòî are | |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:50 |
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äà âñ¸ ïðàâèëüíî íàïèñàíî, îí ñàì îáëàæàëñÿ è òåïåðü ìîë÷èò... | |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:51 |
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äà íå...ìîæíî ñêàçàòü do you hear me? | |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:52 |
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ïðîñòî â ñîâðåìåííîì àíãëèéñêîì êîòîðûé ïðî÷íî ïåðåñåêàåòñÿ ñî ñëýíãîì ðàçíèöû íåòó ôàêòè÷åñêè | |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:56 |
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Íàâåðíî êðóòî
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 02:57 |
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ÿ âîîáùå âñåãäà "Are you hear me?" ãîâîðþ... | |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 03:00 |
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2Âàìïèð äà êðóòî, êðóòî! 
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 03:12 |
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"áëèí ÿ ñâîáîäíî îáàëàñü è ñ íåìöàìè ..." ß äóìàë ìû ïðî àíãëèéñêèé
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 03:15 |
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Çäåñü âîçìîæíî òîëüêî "Do you hear me?" èëè óæ íà êðàéíèé ñëó÷àé "You hear me?" |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 03:16 |
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"ÿ âîîáùå âñåãäà "Are you hear me?" ãîâîðþ..." - íó, ýòî âåçêèé àðãóìåíò
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 03:22 |
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òóïîé ñïîð âàì íå êàæåòñÿ???)))) | |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 03:32 |
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Íåò, íå êàæåòñÿ. Ò.ê. "îøèáîê íåò" è "âñå âñå ïîíÿëè" ýòî ñîâåðøåííî ðàçíûå âåùè, à îøèáîê â ýòîì òåêñòå, ìÿãêî ãîâîðÿ, íåìàëî Ïðîñòî ÿ ñ÷èòàþ, ÷òî äëÿ òîãî, ÷òîáû ëþäè äðóã äðóãà ïîíÿëè, âîçìîæíî ýòîãî óðîâíÿ ãðàìîòíîñòè è äîñòàòî÷íî, íî, åñëè ýòî ïðåòåíäóåò íà òåêñò ïåñíè, êîòîðóþ ìîæåò óñëûøàòü óõî àíãëîãîâîðÿùåãî ÷åëîâåêà.... |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 06.02.2006 03:42 |
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äàê âåäü ñëûøàëè..è âîïðîñîâ íå âîçíèêëî=)))... ÷å-òî íå íðàâèòñÿ ïèøè õîòü âñå îøèáêè êîòîðûå òû âèäèøü... ïîñìîòðè òåêñòû ãðóïï èíîñòðàííûõ ..ÿ óâåðåíà òû óæü òî÷íî òàì êó÷ó îøèáîê íàéäåøü)))...õîòÿ ìíå ïîáîêó))) |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 07.02.2006 03:10 |
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òàê èõ... à òî çàçíàëèñü íàõ âñå....
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 07.02.2006 11:03 |
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Áåçãðàìîòíîñòü ýòî óæàñíî. È âîîáùå íà musicforums ïðîöâåòàåò òî, ÷òî àáñîëþòíî áåçãðàìîòíûå ëþäè óáëàæàþò ñàìîëþáèå äðóã äðóãà, âìåñòî òîãî, ÷òîáû âçãëÿíóòü ïðàâäå â ãëàçà... è ïîïûòàòüñÿ ÷òî-òî èçìåíèòü â ñåáå Òåêñò ýòîò ñîñòîèò èç îäíèõ îøèáîê,òóò ðàçáèðàòü íå÷åãî... |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 07.02.2006 12:58 |
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Êîììåíòàðèè åùå îäíîãî íàøåãî ó÷àñòíèêà Äìèòðèÿ (ïðåïîäàâàòåëü ÌÃËÓ, ëèíãâèñò): The "Dark" in a forest Blood rain and part of "morris" Are you hear me? Take my hand... And I'll help you shatered faith Òðóäíî ïîíÿòü, ÷òî òàêîå «Òåìíîòà» â ëåñó». ×òî áû òàêîå ìîãëî çíà÷èòü “morris”? Íàðîäíûé òàíåö?.. «Òû ìåíÿ ñëûøèøü?» - “Do you hear me?” (Present Simple tense) “shatered" – âèäèìî, èìåëîñü â âèäó “shattered”.  ëåñó ñòîèò «Òåìíîòà» Êðîâàâûé äîæäü, ÷àñòü «ìîððèñà» Òû ìîé ñëûøàòü? Áåðè ðóêà… Òâîåé ïîáèòîé âåðå ïîìîãó. (light angel) Don't hear... Take around and look at me Cleanest angel better low your free Ones Escape you must it's all forget You don't see reality... “Don’t hear” – Õì… Ýòî è íå «Íå ñëóøàé!» (Don’t listen), è íå «Íå ñëûøèò» (Doesn’t / Can’t hear (me)). “Take around” – ÷òî ýòî çíà÷èò? Äàëüøå èäåò íàáîð ñëîâ. Present Simple àâòîðó ñíîâà íå óäàåòñÿ: “it’s” = “it is”, òîãäà ê ÷åìó îòíîñèòñÿ “forget”? (àíãåë ñâåòëîãî öâåòà) Íå ñëûøü… Âîçüìè âîêðóã è ïîñìîòðè íà ìåíÿ ×èñòåéøèé àíãåë ëó÷øå íèçêèé òâîé ñâîáîäíûé è ò. ä. Killing pain it's only that you feel Endure and faith it's one way but until Whispering pray in stone walls like a spray Don't brake... Îïÿòü-òàêè æå: “it’s” – ýòî äâà ðàçíûõ ñëîâà è äâå ðàçíûå ÷àñòè ðå÷è. Áûâàåò, ÷òî “it” è “is” âñòðå÷àþòñÿ ïî îòäåëüíîñòè. Çäåñü, íàâåðíîå: “Killing pain is the only thing you feel” (ãðàììàòè÷åñêè âåðíî, íî ïî÷òè àõèíåÿ). Endure and faith – ðàçíûå ÷àñòè ðå÷è. Åñëè èìååòñÿ â âèäó: «ìîëèòüñÿ øåïîòîì â êàìåííûõ ñòåíàõ», òî ýòî ÷òî-òî âðîäå “pray in a whisper behind stone walls”. Ñðàâíåíèå ýòîãî ïðîöåññà ñ áðûçãàìè (âåòî÷êàìè?) (spray) ïîâåðãàåò ìåíÿ â íåäîóìåíèå. Ñíÿòü áîëü òû òîëüêî ÷óâñòâóåøü Òåðïåòü è âåðà ìîæíî òàê ïîêà Ìîëèòâà òèõî â êàìåííîé ñòåíå êàê áðûçãè Íå òîðìîçè… Ðîì, èçâèíè, äàëüøå íå ìîãó: ìåíÿ ñòîøíèò ïðÿìî íà êëàâèàòóðó. Êîãäà ñòàëêèâàåøüñÿ ñ òàêèì ÷óäîâèùíûì íåâåæåñòâîì â ñî÷åòàíèè ñ òàêîé êîëîññàëüíîé ïðåòåíçèåé, õî÷åòñÿ îòîéòè â ñòîðîíêó è âûìûòü ðóêè. Îáúÿñíÿòü áåñïîëåçíî. Òóò âåäü ñëîâåñà êàêèå - âñå «áîëü» äà «àíãåë», «åäèíîðîã» äà «âîéíà»! Ýòî, ñòàëî áûòü, îòêðûë ÷åëîâåê âïåðâûå â æèçíè ðóññêî-àíãëèéñêèé ñëîâàðü è ó÷åáíèê Áîíê è òóò æå ñåë áàëëàäó ïèñàòü î íåñïðàâåäëèâîñòè ìèðà. Ïî-ìîåìó, àâòîð íåèçëå÷èì. Íå ñïîðü ñ íèì è ñ òåìè, êòî ïèøåò, ÷òî «îøèáîê íåò». Ýòî ëèáî ëþäè ñ òÿæêèìè ïîðàæåíèÿìè ìîçãà, ëèáî (÷òî âðÿä ëè) ìèñòèôèêàòîðû. Ñîâðåìåííûå êîçüìû ïðóòêîâû. Åñëè òàê, òî ïàðîäèþ îíè íàïèñàëè çðÿ: òàêîãî è áåç ïàðîäèé ìíîãî õîäèò ïî Èíòåðíåòó. Laid more!!! My lightest unicorn Or be dead so swore Lonniless in your soul (dark angel) Wake up!!! I'll showing you the dark Stay by tears no more You chosen start the war It's real...It's power I don't take lot of part I'm truely no more lower My unicorn of dark Blue eyes of unicorn so stollin It pushed he back from takin' "Holy" Lonniless,Tears and pain no more... ...Cause power needs now in the "Sacred war" Betrader taking sacred key Open cage ...Crystal lord are look at he Sold your soul...your horn covered dark Take this mind spark... Your soul in target...everyone You alive until you soul is gone Kill'em all for darkness this is deal No pain...for exemple take this and be free ...Takin' back your ####ing soul by war!!! ...Takin' back your ####ing soul by war!!! ...Takin' back your ####ing soul by war!!! ...Takin' back your ####ing soul by war!!! Faith more!!! My suffer unicorn Or be dead so swore Darkness in your soul Wake up!!! I'll showing you the dark Stay by tears no more You chosen fall the war |
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Òåìà: Re: In Death Comes=)))
Âðåìÿ: 11.02.2006 00:53 |
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