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Òåìà: Äâå ïåñíè, ðàçíûå ïî õàðàêòåðó è ÿçûêó
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2006 18:51 |
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ONE TIME One time I found a real friend, One time I left famil’ar land, One time I had unhappy love – But only one time, yeah. One time I lost just all my mind, One time forgot about the time, One time I almost liked the wine – But it has not won, yeah. It was one time; oh it’s so bad, That was one time and I was glad, I live one time and I must use it and be strong… This time for someone is a joke, For somebody it’s just a walk, While someone went through all and hardly can go on… One time my anger broke away, I was the crowd and went my way, I had uplifts, went through decay – But only one time, yeah. One time I had to go aside, My life resembled a horse-ride, Though sometimes it was slow and out of pride for me… It was one time; oh it’s so bad, That was one time and I was glad, I live one time and I must use it and be strong… This time for someone is a joke, For somebody it’s just a walk, While someone went through all and hardly can go on… One time a year I feel alone, One time a month I want to know What I am living for and what will later be… Sometimes I break with all before, Sometimes, because I cannot more! And it not always makes glad me… ÂÅÑÍÀ Íåäàâíî ñèíåå íåáî âäðóã çàêðûëè îáëàêà. Íàâåðíî, òàì â òàêóþ ïîðó æèçíü òîæå íåëåãêà. ß èäó ñâîèì ïóòåì, è íåïðîñò îí âñåãäà, Íî ìå÷òà ìîÿ æèâåò è íå óãàñíåò íèêîãäà. È ïóñòü íåñáûòî÷íà îíà, êàê â ýòîò äåíü ãëîòîê âåñíû – Íî õîòü âî ÷òî-òî â íàøåé æèçíè ìû ïîâåðèòü äîëæíû... ß íå çíàþ èêîí, è ÿ ìîëþñü â íåáåñà: ß òàê õî÷ó ïðîñíóòüñÿ è îòêðûòü îïÿòü ãëàçà. ß íå âñåãäà ïîíèìàë, çà÷åì ìíå íàäî æèòü, Êîãäà áàðäàê â äóøå, áàíàëüíî íåêîãî ëþáèòü, ß âûáèðàë íîâûé ïóòü äîëãî íå äóìàÿ, ëåãêî, Ïåðåõîäÿ êàê áóäòî íà äðóãóþ ñòàíöèþ ìåòðî. È ÿ íå çíàþ, ñêîëüêî åùå áóäåò òàêèõ – Ìíå ãëàâíîå òîëüêî, ÷òîá ïî íèì, à íå íà íèõ. Íåïîíèìàíèå è ëîæü ìîãóò ñëîìèòü ìîé äóõ âíîâü, À ñïàñóò ìåíÿ äâå âåùè: âåðà â Áîãà è ëþáîâü. Ìóäðåö íå òîò, êòî âñå çíàåò, à òîò, êòî âñå ïîçíàë – Ìîãó ñêàçàòü íå áåç ïå÷àëè, ÷òî ïî÷òè òàêèì ñòàë. ß æåã ñâîè ìå÷òû â êîñòðå íåñáûâøèõñÿ ãðåç, È âèäÿ ïëàìÿ îãíÿ, ÿ íå ñäåðæèâàë ñëåç. Áîëüíî âèäåòü, êàê óäà÷à óñêîëüçàåò èç ðóê. Ñîçíàâàòü, ÷òî òåáÿ ïðåäàë òâîé åäèíñòâåííûé äðóã. Íî íàäî êàæäûé ðàç âñòàâàòü è íà÷èíàòü íîâóþ æèçíü – Òîëüêî òîãäà íå ñãèíåò âåðà, òîëüêî òàê íå ðóõíåøü âíèç. Ìíå, íàâåðíî, íå ñåìíàäöàòü ëåò, à ñòîëüêî æå çèì. Íî çàáûòü ñîëíå÷íûé ñâåò íå íàéäåòñÿ âî ìíå ñèë. È ãëÿäÿ â îêíî, ÿ äîæèäàþñü âåñíû… Âåäü êàê ìîæíî ãðóñòèòü â ïîòîêå ýòîé ñèíåâû? (C) JustMe 2005-2006 |
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Òåìà: Re: Äâå ïåñíè, ðàçíûå ïî õàðàêòåðó è ÿçûêó
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2006 19:28 |
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JustMe îáèäíî êîíå÷íî,íî àíãëèéñêèé ÿ ïëîõî çíàþ,à ðóññêèé ãîðàçäî ëó÷øå,÷òî ÿ ìîãó ñêàçàòü ÿ òåáÿ ïîíèìàþ,òîëüêî ìåíÿ íå ïîíèìàþ,òî÷íåå ñêàçàòü, ñòèõè ìîè.Ïîÿñíè ìíå àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò îí î ÷åì? À òàê Âåñíó òû õîðîøà íàïèñàë!! 
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Òåìà: Re: Äâå ïåñíè, ðàçíûå ïî õàðàêòåðó è ÿçûêó
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2006 20:26 |
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Ïåñíÿ íàçûâàåòñÿ One Time, ò. å. "Îäèí ðàç", íà âñåì åå ïðîòÿæåíèè ñêâîçèò èäåÿ î òîì, ÷òî â ìîåé æèçíè ðàçëè÷íûå ñîáûòèÿ ñëó÷àëèñü îäèí ðàç - èíîãäà ýòî áûëî õîðîøî, à èíîãäà ïëîõî. Äà, ÷òîáû ïðåäîòâðàòèòü äàëüíåéøèå äîïðîñû î òîì, ÷òî çíà÷èò òî èëè äðóãîå, âîò ïåðåâîä íåêîòîðûõ ñëîâ è âûðàæåíèé: mind - óì, wine - âèíî, glad - ðàä, strong - ñèëüíûé, joke - øóòêà, someone/somebody - êòî-òî, went through all - ïåðåæèë âñå, go on - ïðîäîëæàòü, anger - ãíåâ, crowd - òîëïà, I had uplifts, went through decay - ó ìåíÿ áûëè âçëåòû è ïàäåíèÿ, go aside - èäòè â ñòîðîíå, resembled a horse-ride - íàïîìèíàëà ñêà÷êè, though - õîòÿ, it was... out of pride - ýòèì íåëüçÿ áûëî ãîðäèòüñÿ, feel alone - ÷óâñòâîâàòü ñåáÿ îäèíîêî, sometimes - èíîãäà. À âîîáùå, ìíå á íàéòè, êòî ìîþ ãðàììàòèêó ïðîâåðèò! Õîòÿ çäåñü îíà, ÿ äóìàþ, ïðàâèëüíàÿ... Õîòåë óêàçàòü ñâîé e-mail, íî íå ïîëó÷àåòñÿ: çàðåãèñòðèðîâàëñÿ ðàíüøå, íî íèê íåóäà÷íûé âûáðàë, à òåïåðü, êîãäà îò JustMe ïèøó è åãî óêàçûâàþ, îí ìíå íåñåò, ÷òî "àäðåñ óæå èñïîëüçóåòñÿ"!  Ïðèäåòñÿ æäàòü, ïîêà òîò íèê óäàëèòñÿ çà íåàêòèâíîñòüþ... Êîðî÷å, ìûëî: kash_iv@fastmail.net
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Òåìà: Re: Äâå ïåñíè, ðàçíûå ïî õàðàêòåðó è ÿçûêó
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2006 20:31 |
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Äà, åùå famil'ar = familiar = çíàêîìûé | |
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Òåìà: Re: Äâå ïåñíè, ðàçíûå ïî õàðàêòåðó è ÿçûêó
Âðåìÿ: 28.01.2006 22:25 |
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Àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò âïîëíå íèøòÿê. Äàæå - çàøèáèñü.  È ñ ãðàììàòèêîé âïîëíå âñå â íîðìå. ß äèïëîìèðîâàííûé ó÷èòåëü àíãëèéñêîãî è ñàì ïèøó àíãëîÿçû÷íûå òåêñòû, òàê ÷òî ìîæåøü äîâåðÿòü. Äîñòàòî÷íî âñ¸ ïðîñòî íî íå áàíàëüíî è âñÿêèå îáîðîòû òèïà had uplifts, went through decay îæèâëÿþò ïîâåñòâîâàíèå.  êàêîì ìóçûêàëüíîì âèäå òû ñåáå ýòî ïðåäñòàâëÿåøü? Ïðî ðóññêèé - no comments. 
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Òåìà: Re: Äâå ïåñíè, ðàçíûå ïî õàðàêòåðó è ÿçûêó
Âðåìÿ: 28.01.2006 22:34 |
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Òåìà: Re: Äâå ïåñíè, ðàçíûå ïî õàðàêòåðó è ÿçûêó
Âðåìÿ: 01.02.2006 15:32 |
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Ïàñèáà! Áëèæå, äóìàþ, ê ïîï-ìóçûêå... | |
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Òåìà: Re: Äâå ïåñíè, ðàçíûå ïî õàðàêòåðó è ÿçûêó
Âðåìÿ: 01.02.2006 16:52 |
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Òî÷íî! Áðèò-ïîï! Òèïà Ìóëüòôèëüìîâ èëè Brainstorm... | |
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Òåìà: Re: Äâå ïåñíè, ðàçíûå ïî õàðàêòåðó è ÿçûêó
Âðåìÿ: 01.02.2006 22:56 |
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Óððÿ! Âñå ÿñíî! ß çàðåãèñòðèðîâàí! | |
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