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Òåìà: Îöåíèòå òåêñò äëÿ áëýêîâîé ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 11.08.2005 03:37 |
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Carrouselithic (by Dmitry Plotnikov aka Binary) Verse 1 Verse 2 In this amusement park there’s only one attraction working, And calm prevails on misty paths of this abandoned place. No visitors to loaf along the ways between the shrubberies, But that one dreadful sight makes you feel yourself like a case. You see the crowds of people standing in a queue to ride a turn On carrousel and be trampled down by those who follow them, And every one just wants to make another lap but organ-grinder Keeps an eye and will not tolerate their underhand. Verse 3 The followers believe that they are smarter than forerunners, That they can make it all much better than it was before, But only Mighty grinder knows what makes the wheel still running - That fresh blood of those thinkers and he can’t let this stream stop! In this amusement park there’s only one attraction working, And calm prevails on misty paths of this abandoned place. No visitors to loaf along the ways between the shrubberies, But that one dreadful sight makes you feel yourself like a case. Verse 4 The carrousel runs faster and grinder laughs at them, No pity or compassion, they serve their master well. Their blood will fill his vessels, their flesh is only waste, No pity or compassion, their master got a taste. Verse 5 You try to move your body, but horror-stricken brain Breaks down, and you can feel that you’re half-insane. The grinder’s getting closer, you see blood on his hands And you feel that you want to ride a carrousel. Verse 6 You try to run but all is vain, you see your body move Towards the carrousel of death, your pain it cannot soothe. But suddenly a silent scream is heard in your sick brain And you wake up in your warm bed, you didn’t go insane. In this amusement park there’s only one attraction working, And calm prevails on misty paths of this abandoned place. No visitors to loaf along the ways between the shrubberies, But that one dreadful sight makes you feel yourself like a case. |
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Òåìà: Re: Îöåíèòå òåêñò äëÿ áëýêîâîé ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2005 08:46 |
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Íåóæåëè âñå èñïóãàëèñü àíãëèéñêîãî? Íè îäíîãî êîììåíòàðèÿ... À æàëü, âåäü ýòî ïðàêòè÷åñêè ïåðâîå ìîå òâîðåíèå... | |
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Òåìà: Re: Îöåíèòå òåêñò äëÿ áëýêîâîé ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2005 14:32 |
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×óâàê, ýòî ñîâñåì íåïëîõî. Íå çíàþ êàê ýòî âîñïðèìåò àíãëî-àìåðèêàíåö (òóò âñåòàêè äðóãîå âîñïðèÿòèå), íî äëÿ russian people ýòî âïîëíå. |
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Òåìà: Re: Îöåíèòå òåêñò äëÿ áëýêîâîé ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2005 16:13 |
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Óø¸ë Ñ ÌÔ 
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à íàõåðà íà àÃëèöêîì, åñëè òû â Ðîññèè? | |
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Stand and fight, live by your heart, always one more try!(c) Manowar.
I want it all and i want it now!(c) Queen. Òîëüêî âïåð¸ä!(ñ)  |
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Òåìà: Re: Îöåíèòå òåêñò äëÿ áëýêîâîé ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2005 16:18 |
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à òû, Âåïðü, íà ðóññêèé ýòîò òåêñò ïåðåâåäè, ïîéìåøü ïî÷åìó))) | |
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Òåìà: Re: Îöåíèòå òåêñò äëÿ áëýêîâîé ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2005 17:09 |
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Äåëî íå â ñîäåðæàíèè. Íà ìîé âçãëÿä, àíãëèéñêèé áîëåå ìåëîäè÷åí - ýòî ðàç, à äâà - ïðè ïðîñëóøèâàíèè ïåñíè îñòàåòñÿ ÿçûêîâîé áàðüåð, ÷òî çà÷àñòóþ íå ïëîõî (â ñëó÷àå áðåäîâûõ ïåñåí èëè åñëè õî÷åòñÿ, ÷òîáû áîëüøå âíèìàíèÿ îáðàùàëîñü íà ìåëîäèêó ãîëîñà) | |
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Òåìà: Re: Îöåíèòå òåêñò äëÿ áëýêîâîé ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 12.08.2005 19:39 |
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Îò ìåíÿ Ðåâîëüò ñáåæàë è ìèêðîôîí 
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×åñòíî ãîâîðÿ....Íííííîðìàëüíî | |
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Òåìà: Re: Îöåíèòå òåêñò äëÿ áëýêîâîé ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 19.08.2005 01:48 |
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Èñ÷î ìíåíèÿ? Äàåøü êîíñòðóêòèâíóþ êðèòèêó! | |
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