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Âðåìÿ: 07.07.2005 16:48 |
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Ñàì çíàþ, ÷òî íè÷åì íå áëåùåò, íî èíòåðåñíî ìíå âàøå ìíåíèå.... Ãîâîðÿò, òàêèå ïåñíè ñïàñàåò ëèøü ìóçûêà: I see the fear in your eyes But don't be scared,I'm just a friend. I'm waiting here for the sunrise. Do you live in this land,don't you know its' legend? 1 ðàç ïðîèãðûøà The dead people do dead things And dead hope will die in'em later. Their plans became cold winds, And may be the sun won't rise for them, so what am i waiting for? Òèøå: Am You're crying.... C Em Fm Don't....I'll show you what to do Am The fog.... C Em Fm Went down. He's trying to get through in you. The scy.... Cry!!!! It's trembling, sowing the crystal tears. They lied.... How! Live until the soul lives.... Ïðèïåâ: How dare you trust the lies. Wake up!!!!Your dream is the true. Keep walking. The great Hope dies. Believe me, who believes in you.... So i can't wait, look inside See the true things, not false Catch every moment you're alive and bright See the dirty eyes, touch the lost souls. Never try to swim against the river Never look for dead end he'll find you Be ready for smth. good,smth better Instead of being late, being found dead.... You're smiling don't....I'll show you why to cry. The fog.... Got out....He's been in your live The scy.... Try be the rain, be the one of tears They lied.... How....Live until soul lives Ïðèïåâ: How dare you trust the lies. Wake up!!!!Your dream is the true. Keep walking. The great Hope dies. Believe me, who believes in you.... 2 ðàçà ïðîèãðûøà They wanted to be the gods They falled, when the lighting smiled Everything they wanted to have Killed'em all when the World was tired. Angry with their humor sence Left them no independence. So what did you wait to hear There was only evil and fear. ------------------------------------- ---- --------------------------------- Íåò!!!! È áîëè íå óíÿòü.... Ñêîøåíûå äâåðè, ðàçáèòûå îêíà, Ìûñëè íà ïåïëå, íà ñîðâàíûõ äóøàõ Ðîæä¸ííûõ óáèâàòü.... Íåò!!!! È æèçíè ðàçáèâàòü.... Ïðîò¸ðòûå äæèíñû, ðîâíûé âçãëÿä âîëêà, ßðêèé îãîí¸ê....Îõîòíèê ïîäîëãó Íå õî÷åò ïîíèìàòü ×òî êðàñíîå ñ ÷¸ðíûì ñîëü¸òñÿ Ñâåòëîå ñãèíåò íàâåêè è âîëü¸òñÿ  êðîâü!!!! Áóäòî çâåðü....Êðîâüþ âçãëÿä íàëü¸òñÿ.... È âíîâü ïîòÿíåò, ïîòÿíåò óáèâàòü... È âíîâü Òû áóäåøü âîçâðàùàòüñÿ ñþäà Ãëÿäåòü èì â ãëàçà Âîïðîøàòü íèêîãî è ñåáÿ.... Òåðïåòü îáðàçû âåçäåñóùåãî çëà.... Áðåä!!!! Ñ îñêîëêàìè äóøè Âçîðâàâøèñü ëåòÿò îøì¸òêè íàäåæäû, Ñåðäöå óíÿëîñü, ñì¸ðçëî ïîä îäåæäîé Øåï÷à ëèøü: "ïîðåøè!" Ãðåõ! Ïðîêëÿòüå, êàê ïå÷àòü, Íà äîêóìåíòå ÷èñòîé áóìàãè Ñ ðîñïèñüþ "Òüìà" êîíñòàíòà îòâàãè.... È íå÷åãî êðè÷àòü.... ×òî êðàñíîå ñ ÷¸ðíûì ñîëü¸òñÿ Ñâåòëîå ñãèíåò íàâåêè è âîëü¸òñÿ  êðîâü!!!! Áóäòî çâåðü....Êðîâüþ âçãëÿä íàëü¸òñÿ.... È âíîâü ïîòÿíåò, ïîòÿíåò óáèâàòü... È âíîâü Òû áóäåøü âîçâðàùàòüñÿ ñþäà Ãëÿäåòü èì â ãëàçà Âîïðîøàòü íèêîãî è ñåáÿ.... Òåðïåòü îáðàçû âåçäåñóùåãî çëà.... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíè....
Âðåìÿ: 07.07.2005 17:20 |
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Íó, íà àíãëîÿçû÷íûé êîìåíòû äàâàòü íå áóäó, ÿ â ýòîì íè "áå" íè "ìå". 2-îé - ÿâíî íå ïåðåâîä ïåðâîãî, ñïàñèáî, ÷òî ïî-íàøåíñêîìó, ïî-ðóññêè. Âîò åãî òî è ïîêðèòèêóþ  Âî-ïåðâûõ, âçãëÿä ÍÅ ÌÎÆÅÒ ÁÛÒÜ ðîâíûì!!! Ìîãëè áû è äðóãîé ýðèòåò ïîäîáðàòü. "ßðêèé îãîíåê" - êàê ìèëî Íà ôèãà çäåñü ñóôôèêñ "åê"? Âèäåëè ìû òàêèå "îãîíüêè". Íóæíî ÷òî-òî áîëåå æåñòêîå ê òàêèì ìîìåíòàì." êðîâü", "êðîâüþ âçãëÿä íàëüåòñÿ", îäíî è òî æå "ëüåòñÿ" ñ ðàçíûìè ïðèñòàâêàìè.... ×òî-òî ó Âàñ ñî ñëîâàðíûì çàïàñîì, áàòåëüêà. Ðàñøèðÿòü, ðàñøèðÿòü íàäî Îøìåòêè íàäåæäû - êàòàñòðîôà. Íó åùå ïîíèìàþ, åñëè áû âåñü òåêñò áûë òàêèìè îáðàçàìè óñåÿí, à òàê ìåíÿ àæ îò íåîæèäàííîñòè ïåðåäåðíóëî. È ÷òî çíà÷èò "äîêóìåíò ÷èñòîé áóìàãè"? Ýòî êàê, ïðîñòèòå? Åñëè íå çíàåòå, ÷òî åñòü "äîêóìåíò", ïîñìîòðèòå â ëþáîì ñëîâàðå è íå ïèøèòå âñÿêîé ÷åïóõè. Èç âñåãî ìíå òîëüêî "êîíñòàíòà îòâàãè" ïîíðàâèëàñü. Îñòàëüíîå - áèòîå çåðêàëî, âîññòàíîâëåíèþ â åäèíóþ ñîñòàâëÿþùóþ íå ïîäëåæèò 
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Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíè....
Âðåìÿ: 07.07.2005 18:29 |
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%) öèòàòàìè: "íè÷åì íå áëåùåò"(ïðî òåêñò) "Âàñ ñî ñëîâàðíûì çàïàñîì, áàòåëüêà" - %) "È ÷òî çíà÷èò "äîêóìåíò ÷èñòîé áóìàãè"? Ýòî êàê, ïðîñòèòå? Åñëè íå çíàåòå, ÷òî åñòü "äîêóìåíò", ïîñìîòðèòå â ëþáîì ñëîâàðå è íå ïèøèòå âñÿêîé ÷åïóõè. " à âîò-òóò ËÎË....îñòàëüíîå ïðàâäà-ïðàâäþùàÿ,îïðàâäûâàþùàÿñÿ áûñòðûì íàïèñàíèåì òåêñòà è íåïîâòîðèìî çàìå÷àòåëüíûì èñïîëíåíèåì ïåñíè(à ÿ óæå ãîâîðèë ïðî êàâåð ïëîõîãî õîðîøèì) íî âîò òóò ËÎË.Äîêóìåíò ÷èñòîé áóìàãè(à íå áóäó ðàñøèôðîâûâàòü(íåóæåëü òàê ñëîæíî?)) ñèìâîëèçì âñ¸-òàêè....Ïðè áîëåå ïðèñòàëüíîì ðàññìîòðåíèè ýòîé "æóòêî-íåïîíÿòíîé" ôðàçû îòêðîåòñÿ,îäíàêî æå, èñòèíà.... "ñî ñëîâàðíûì çàïàñîì" - óæå ñêàçàë:õàðàêòåð íàïèñàíèÿ - ñêîðûé. "Íà ôèãà çäåñü ñóôôèêñ "åê"? Âèäåëè ìû òàêèå "îãîíüêè". " - àôôòàðñêè, íà ëþáèòåëÿ.Ïðèìåíèìî. "" êðîâü", "êðîâüþ âçãëÿä íàëüåòñÿ", îäíî è òî æå "ëüåòñÿ" - èñïîëíåíèå. Ê ñîæàëåíèþ íå ìîãó äåìîíñòðèðîâàòü ñåãî ôàéëîì â è-íåòå, íî ïðîñëóøàâ ìíîãîå áûëî áû ïåðåñìîòðåíî, ÿ óâåðåí â ýòîì. "Èç âñåãî ìíå òîëüêî "êîíñòàíòà îòâàãè" ïîíðàâèëàñü" - à âîò çà ýòî ñïàñèáî%) |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíè....
Âðåìÿ: 07.07.2005 19:10 |
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Ìíå àíãëèéñêàÿ ïåñíÿ î÷åíü ïîíðàâèëàñü! | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíè....
Âðåìÿ: 07.07.2005 19:51 |
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Áðåä!!!! Ñ îñêîëêàìè äóøè Âçîðâàâøèñü ëåòÿò îøì¸òêè íàäåæäû, Ñåðäöå óíÿëîñü, ñì¸ðçëî ïîä îäåæäîé Øåï÷à ëèøü: "ïîðåøè!" Îäíàæäû äðóãà ìîåãî, Êîòîðîãî íåò áëèæå Êàêîé-òî###### Ïî çàòûëêó Óäàðèò ïðîñòî òàê, êîëîì Çà òî, ÷òî òîò áûë âûøå, Çà òî, ÷òî ìóçûêàíòîì áûë, Çà òî, ÷òî ñëûøàë ýòîò ìèð, Êîçëîì, Íåò, #####îì, Íåò, Ñëîâ íåò ýòèõ ñâîëî÷íûõ, ßçûê áåññèëåí, ß ïüÿí, Íó, äðóã ìîé áûë óáèò Êîçëîì. Íåò #####àñîì. Õóæå. Íåò ýòèõ ñëîâ. |
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Ïîñëå òîãî, êàê àìóð óøåë ïîïèñàòü çà óãîë, íåîáõîäèìîñòü â èãðå ó êëîóíà èñ÷åçëà..ñóõóì
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Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíè....
Âðåìÿ: 08.07.2005 18:56 |
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Ïðî îáðàçû íè÷åãî íå ñòàíó ãîâîðèòü,ñêàæó ëèøü îá ýìîöèîíàëüíîì âîñðèÿòèè.Î÷åíü àãðåññèâíîå ïðîèçâåäåíèå,êàê áóäòî òû ñàì èñïûòûâàåøü æàæäó óáèòü è âûëîæèë âñ¸ ýòî íà áóìàãå.Ìîæåò,ÿ è îøèáàþñü. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíè....
Âðåìÿ: 09.07.2005 00:01 |
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Íàñ÷åò òîãî, ÷òî òàêèå ïåñíè âûòàñêèâàåò ìóçûêà - ìíå êàæåòñÿ, ñêîðåå, èñïîëíåíèå, ÷åì ìåëîäèÿ. Íåïîêîëåáèìàÿ âåðà ïåâöà â êàæäîå ñëîâî.  àëüáîì è â êîíöåðòíóþ ïðîãðàììó â òÿæåëîì ñòèëå âïîëíå ìîæíî. Ê òàêîìó ïðèâûêëè, ýòîãî æäóò. Äëÿ ïåñíè, êîòîðàÿ ìîæåò ñòàòü âèçèòíîé êàðòî÷êîé, ìàëî. Äàéòå: 1) ÿðêèé, çàïîìèíàþùèéñÿ îáðàç 2) ñâîþ òåìó 3) ñþæåò, êîòîðûé áóäåò äåðæàòü â íàïðÿæåíèè. Ïñèõîëîãè÷åñêè: ëèðè÷åñêèé ãåðîé ïàññèâåí. À äëÿ âîñòðåáîâàííîé ýñòðàäíîé ìóçûêè íóæåí ëèäåð. Àêòèâíàÿ ëè÷íîñòü - â òîì ÷èñëå è â ñòèõàõ. Ëåêñèêà - "òåðïåòü, ïîòÿíåò, øåï÷à ëèøü" - ýòî íå ñëîâà òîãî, êòî äèêòóåò, êòî ìåíÿåò ìèð. Ñòèëü-òî æåñòêèé, àãðåññèâíûé, ñóäÿ ïî òåìå. Òåðïåòü - âìåñòî: "âåñü ìèð íàñèëüÿ ìû ðàçðóøèì", "ðàñêà÷àåì ýòîò ìèð", "ÿ âñå ñóìåþ, ÿ âñå ñìîãó", "ÿ ïîäàìñÿ â ìåíòû, â ïåäåðàñòû, â ìîíàõè, â ïîýòû - âñå, ÷òî óãîäíî, ëèøü áû íå íðàâèòüñÿ âàì". Íó ÷òî-íèáóäü, ÷òîá âñåì ïî êóìïîëó.Ïîòÿíåò - íåò. "ß ðåøèë, ÿ ñäåëàþ, ÿ õî÷ó, æåëàþ, áóäó" - ýòî àêòèâíàÿ ïîçèöèÿ, ñ ïðèíÿòèåì âñåé îòâåòñòâåííîñòè íà ñåáÿ. |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíè....
Âðåìÿ: 09.07.2005 02:51 |
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êàê áóäòî òû ñàì èñïûòûâàåøü æàæäó óáèòü è âûëîæèë âñ¸ ýòî íà áóìàãå.Ìîæåò,ÿ è îøèáàþñü. - ß íàäåþñü%) Äëÿ ïåñíè, êîòîðàÿ ìîæåò ñòàòü âèçèòíîé êàðòî÷êîé, ìàëî. - åñòåññòâåííî.Ïåñíÿ áûëà íàïèñàíà íå î÷åíü ñòàðàòåëüíî "äëÿ ïðîáû", ÷òîá òåêñò áûë. Ìóçûêàíòó ìîÿìó íå òåðïåëîñü ïóñòèòü ñâîé ìåäèàòîð â äåëî.... Ïîòÿæåëåå ïîñòàðàëèñü è âûøëî òàêæå ñúåäîáíî, êàê "All within my hands" èç Ñòàíãåðà Ìåòàëëèêè.... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíè....
Âðåìÿ: 10.07.2005 13:09 |
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Ìäÿ....À òåïåðü ÿ âñåõ óæàñíó%) I've killed my live, I've lost my role, I've broken the sword. I tried to find The way I've lost. So now I'm the lonely ghost.... The only one In perfect crowd Who wants to win Dying loud.... The only one Who laughed at rules In perfect crowd.... Now have to choose.... To be dead for people Or to become damned by their true That they spit at you.... But they miss. It flies through and past.... So be dead for people So become damned by their true That they spit at you....(again and again) But they miss. It flies through and past.... His life's a one Which will be killed, That runs downhill (ðåçêî óõóäøàåòñÿ), That follows the Sun. If i could fly I'd fade away Then back downstairs I'd bring the fire. I was in a gust (ïîðûâ) And laughed at rules, I screamed at fulls. Now have to lose. Íåçàêîí÷åííûé òåêñò.... Íî êóäà óæå çàëåç: http://warcraft.ru/forum/index.php?showtopic=2572 %) |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíè....
Âðåìÿ: 11.07.2005 01:02 |
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Ãû! Ïðèêîëüíî! Ìíå ïîíðàâèëîñü¨! | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíè....
Âðåìÿ: 14.07.2005 09:06 |
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Õî÷ó óçíàòü ñâîè îøèáêè, îñîáåííî â ïîñëåäíåé ÷àñòè....Âàøå ìíåíèå.... I've killed my live, I've lost my role, I've broken the sword. I tried to find The way I've lost. So now I'm the lonely ghost.... The only one In perfect crowd Who wants to win Dying loud.... The only one Who laughed at rules In perfect crowd.... Now have to choose.... To be dead for people Or to become damned by their true That they spit at you.... But they miss. It flies through and past.... So be dead for people So become damned by their true That they spit at you....(again and again) But they miss. It flies through and past.... His life's a one Which will be killed, That runs downhill (ðåçêî óõóäøàåòñÿ), That follows the Sun. If i could fly I'd fade away Then back downstairs I'd bring the fire. I was in a gust (ïîðûâ) And laughed at rules, I screamed at fulls. Now have to lose. To go up In flames Or to play with fire all the life And walk out of the frying -pan into the fire again and again. So go up In flames So play with fire all the life And walk out of the frying -pan into the fire again and again. Take back your only sword Though it's broken. |
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