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Òåìà: Õî÷ó âàøå ÈÌÕÎ î ìîåì òåêñòå, åñëè íå â ëîì.
Âðåìÿ: 27.02.2005 17:21 |
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Earthward idol “Trusting deeply, praying hard, Learning someone’s truth by heart, Has no spine and has no mind”, This is how your kind is defined. Your religion is resignation - Everything is in HIS hands, Your religion is salvation - You reject the bitter end. Blindness is the worst sin, Growing stronger in your within. Hypocrisy does sell – “All is for the best”, you tell. Your religion is resignation - Everything is in HIS hands, Your religion is salvation - You reject the bitter end. Wars just pass you faraway – The most that you will do is to pray… Someone dies and once again – “All is for the best”, you say. Your religion is resignation - Everything is in HIS hands, Your religion is salvation - You just hide inside your shell. Ïåðâàÿ ïðîáà ïåðà. Õî÷ó çíàòü, ÷òî ïðàâèòü. Çàðàíèå ñïàñèáî! |
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Òåìà: Re: Õî÷ó âàøå ÈÌÕÎ î ìîåì òåêñòå, åñëè íå â ëîì.
Âðåìÿ: 27.02.2005 17:37 |
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Ìîñêâà Yamaha CPX 700  
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Åñëè íàéäó ïàðó ìèíóò äëÿ ïåðåâîäà - îöåíþ. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Õî÷ó âàøå ÈÌÕÎ î ìîåì òåêñòå, åñëè íå â ëîì.
Âðåìÿ: 27.02.2005 20:24 |
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Òû áû íà ðóññêîì ïðîáó ïåðà äåëàë. Èëè íà èâðèòå. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Õî÷ó âàøå ÈÌÕÎ î ìîåì òåêñòå, åñëè íå â ëîì.
Âðåìÿ: 27.02.2005 20:42 |
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Ìíå óäîáíåé íà àíãëèéñêîì... | |
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Òåìà: Re: Õî÷ó âàøå ÈÌÕÎ î ìîåì òåêñòå, åñëè íå â ëîì.
Âðåìÿ: 27.02.2005 20:46 |
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Ïîíÿòíî, ÷òî íè÷å íå ïîíÿòíî... Îíî ïîíÿòíî, ÷òî íåêîòîðûì ïîíÿòíî, ÷òî íà ðîäíîì ÿçûêå òîêà ìàòû çâó÷àò, íî âîáùåì íè÷åãî íå ïîíÿòíî... %) |
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Òåìà: Re: Õî÷ó âàøå ÈÌÕÎ î ìîåì òåêñòå, åñëè íå â ëîì.
Âðåìÿ: 27.02.2005 23:04 |
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Ýò òèïî íèêòî àíãëèéñêèé íå çíàåò? Íó-íó... |
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Òåìà: Re: Õî÷ó âàøå ÈÌÕÎ î ìîåì òåêñòå, åñëè íå â ëîì.
Âðåìÿ: 28.02.2005 00:39 |
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Çíàåì, çíàåì. Ñðàçó âèäíî, ÷òî ÏÅÐÂÀß ïðîáà ïåðà. À ó íàñ òóò âñå ïðîäâèíóòûå. Èíîãäà äàæå äóìàþò, ÇÀ×ÅÌ ïèøóò. | |
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åñëè åñòü æåëàíèå ñåðüåçíî ó÷èòüñÿ âîêàëó è ïîëó÷èòü âûñøåå îáðàçîâàíèå âîêàëèñòà - ïèøèòå â ëè÷êó
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Òåìà: Re: Õî÷ó âàøå ÈÌÕÎ î ìîåì òåêñòå, åñëè íå â ëîì.
Âðåìÿ: 28.02.2005 02:07 |
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åíòî âñå ê çëûì áëýêàðÿì èç "òÿæåëîé ìóçûêè"  à âîîáùå-òî íåïëîõî. |
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Òåìà: Re: Õî÷ó âàøå ÈÌÕÎ î ìîåì òåêñòå, åñëè íå â ëîì.
Âðåìÿ: 28.02.2005 06:50 |
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È ïðàâäà íåïëîõî! Ðàçìåð òîëüêî õðîìàåò êîå-ãäå, íî ýòî ìåëî÷è, ëåãêî èñïðàâëÿåìûå (The most that you will do is to pray… - ìàëåíüêî âûáèëîñü èç ðèòìà, íî òû æå ìîæåøü that âûêèíóòü áåç âñÿêîé ïîòåðè, íó è ò.ä.) À òàê âîîáùå êà÷åñòâåííûé òåêñò, ÷òî íå÷àñòî áûâàåò... |
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