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Òåìà: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 14:40 |
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verse 1 I don't want the death like this This is bad day to die, how can you be so cruel, is there joke, is there lie ch. never believe in heart - it's whimming never believe in God - he will not tell you truth never believe in words there's something works much better never believe in crowd that is screaming "Hail!!!" try to disbelieve verse 2 give me one second chance give me one second day there're the reasons to live I don't want to decay bridge this is the end of your line how can lose your time throw out all illusions there is a second and, you know, the next turn is mine! ch. |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 14:46 |
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Äàæå åñëè ïåðåâåñòè, íå ñëûøó âíóòðåííþþ ìåëîäèþ ñòèõà. ðóññêîì ÿçûêå ñëûøó èíòîíàöèþ ïî òåêñòó, íà èíîñòðàííîì-íåò, ê ñîæàëåíèþ | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 14:58 |
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èçâèíè, ìóçûêó âûëîæèòü íå ìîãó, íî íà íåå ëîæèòñÿ íåïëîõî. â îáùåì-òî - ýäàêèé ìåëîäè÷íûé òðýø â ñòèëå Savatage. | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 15:25 |
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ß íå âëàäåþ èíÿçîì íàñòîëüêî, ÷òîáû ïèñàòü-íå ñìîãó ïåðåäàòü íþàíñîâ.À òîãäà íå âèæó ñìûñëà.Ïðèÿòåëü ðàáîòàë â àðìèè íà ïåðåõâàòå ðàäèîãðàìì-òîò íà ñëóõ ëþáóþ ôðàçó.Çàâèäóþ, íå äàíî. | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 15:39 |
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òàê êàê ó ìåíÿ òîæå óðîâåíü âëàäåíèÿ íåâûñîê, ÿ ñòàðàþñü ïåðåäàòü íþàíñû òåì, ÷òî åñòü, íå îòêëîíÿÿñü îò ñóòè è èäåè. åñëè íå ìîãó - çàáèâàþ íà ïîòîì, ñèæó ñî ñëîâàðÿìè, êîíñóëüòèðóþñü ñî çíàêîìûìè èíúÿçîâöàìè è ò.ä. êñòàòè, åñëè ïî ïåðâîé ñõåìå, äîâîëüíî èíòåðåñíàÿ âåùü ïîëó÷àåòñÿ - òåêñò ñòàíîâèòñÿ ïðîùå äëÿ ïîíèìàíèÿ, íå òåðÿÿ ñìûñëà. | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 15:55 |
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À çà÷åì òåáå âîîáùå ïèñàòü íà íåðîäíîì ÿçûêå, êðóã ïîíèìàþùèõ åùå óæå, à â àíãëèè òâîé òåêñò âîîáùå íèêîìó.Òèõî ñàì ñ ñîáîþ... | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 16:08 |
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åñòü âåùè, êîòîðûå íà ðóññêîì çâó÷àò "íå òàê": èíîãäà äâîÿêî, èíîãäà ïðîñòî íåêðàñèâî, à ÷òîáû áûëî êðàñèâî, íàäî âñóíóòü ìåòàôîðó, íå âëåçàþùóþ â ðàçìåð, èíîãäà - ñòðîêà ñ íåõèëûì ñìûñëîì çâó÷èò ãëóïî, à âäóìûâàòüñÿ â íåå íèêòî íå áóäåò ñòî ïóäîâ,... Íî ýòî âñå îòìàçêè, íà ñàìîì äåëå - ïðîñòî íðàâèòñÿ, êîãäà òî, ÷òî äåëàåøü, ïîëó÷àåòñÿ è ïîëó÷àåòñÿ êðàñèâî - òû, êàæåòñÿ î ÷åì-òî ïîäîáíîì ãäå-òî ïèñàë. Íå ëþáëþ ñåáÿ îãðàíè÷èâàòü. | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 16:24 |
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Êîãäà â êàéô, íàäî äåëàòü, è âñå | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 16:32 |
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èìåííî. | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 16:32 |
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Êðîó, ãëÿíü òîï -äëÿ ëåíòÿé-ãóðó, ÿ òàì ïîïðèêàëûâàëñÿ | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 15.08.2004 20:38 |
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Íà ìîé âçãëÿä ñðåäíåíüêî. Òî åñòü èäåÿ õîðîøàÿ, íî íåìíîãî íå õâàòàåò ñèëû â ñëîâàõ, áûòü ìîæåò îíà â ìóçûêå. | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 16.08.2004 14:51 |
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íå õîòåë ÿ ïèñàòü ñëîæíî. ïèñàëîñü íà ìóçûêó, à ìóçûêà - ñïèä-òðýø â ñòèëå ïîñëåäíèõ Savatage. | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 18.08.2004 00:14 |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 18.08.2004 00:35 |
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ìîé òåáå ñîâåò - ïîîáñ÷àéñÿ ñî çíàêîìûìè èíúÿçîâöàìè èáî åñëè óæ âçÿëñÿ çà àíãëèéñêèé òåêñò òî íàäî ïèñàòü åãî ïðàâèëüíî (õîòÿ áû ëåêñè÷åñêè). Íàïð. "how can lose your time" íó íèçÿ òàê... "How can YOU lose your time", åùå ïðîêàòèò, âîáùåì ïîãîâîðè, îíè òå ïîïðàâÿò òå ìåëî÷è ãäå íå ïðàâèëüíî, íó è íà ìîé âçãëÿä ÷ðåç÷óð ïðîñòàÿ ðèôìà â êóïëåòàõ, à âîò â áðèäæå ÿ íàïðèìåð â êîíöå íå âðóáèëñÿ â ðèòì íó ñîâñåì. Ìîæ ó òÿ ýò ïîä ìóçûêó è ëîæèööà, à òàê íå ÿôíî... Âîáùåì ïðîâåðü ïðàâèëüíîñòü è ñìûñë òîãî ÷òî õîòåë ñêàçàòü, à òàê âîáùåì òî åñëè ïðåò òî íàäî ïèñàòü ïî ëþáîìó, íå ìîë÷àòü æå |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 18.08.2004 16:14 |
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you - ýòî ïðîñòî îïå÷àòêà, ïðîïóñòèë ñëó÷àéíî, êîãäà ïîñòèë. à ðèôìà ïðîñòàÿ, ïîòîìó ÷òî ÿ íå Øåêñïèð è íå õîòåë ïèñàòü ñëîæíî. ðèòì ìåíÿåòñÿ îò êóïëåòà ê ïðèïåâó, à â áðèäæå îí âîîáùå äðóãîé - íà òî îí è áðèäæ. | |
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Òåìà: Re: äèàëîã ãëóïöà ñî ñìåðòüþ. êðèòèêà ïðèâåòñòâóåòñÿ.
Âðåìÿ: 20.08.2004 16:46 |
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