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Òåìà: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 09.11.2010 12:07 |
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 ñâÿçè ñ òåì, ÷òî íàøà âîêàëèñòêà òåêñòû íå ïèøåò, èùåì õîðîøåãî ðóññêîÿçû÷íîãî òåêñòîâèêà. Äåíåã ïîêà íå ïðåäëàãàåì, õîòÿ îáñóæäàåìî, íî ãîòîâû âçÿòü â äîëþ ñ êîíöåðòîâ. Íàïðàâëåíèå - ñìåñü ýëåêòðîíèêè ñ ðîêîì è ôàíêîì. Ïîñëóøàòü: Ïèøèòå â ëè÷êó, ïî÷òó. |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 00:51 |
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 ñâÿçè ñ òåì, ÷òî íàøà âîêàëèñòêà íå çàíèìàåòñÿ ñî ìíîé ñåêñîì, èùó áàáó, ïðîñòóþ ñèñÿñòóþ áàáó. Ïî÷åìó ýòî âîêàëèñòû äîëæíû ïèñàòü òåêñòû? Ïî÷åìó íå áàðàáàíùèêè? Âîîáùå, ñâÿçè íå âèæó. Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ. |
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Ñêàçàòü íå÷åãî, ÿ óìåþ òîëüêî ïåòü...
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 01:10 |
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ïîñëóøàë.Ñêàæèòå, à çà÷åì Âàì âîîáùå òåêñòîâèê?Ðàñöâåòèòå ýòî ïðîñòî õîðîøèì ñèëüíûì âîêàëîì áåç ñëîâ è âñ¸ ïîëó÷èòñÿ. | |
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"È âîçäåíóò ëþäè ðóêè ê íåáó è âîçîïÿò: -«Ñïàñè íàñ!». À ÿ ïðîøåï÷ó â îòâåò:.-Íåò." |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 10:51 |
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SPb programmin’, effectin’, beatmakin’, brainf#ckin’ 
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>Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ. > Îñîáåííî Øèíåä Î'Êîííîð, Áåò Ãèááîíñ è Ïàòòè Ñìèò. 
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We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 12:13 |
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>>Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ. >> > >Îñîáåííî Øèíåä Î'Êîííîð, Áåò Ãèááîíñ è Ïàòòè Ñìèò. À ó íèõ ñèëüíûå òåêñòû? Ìîæíî ïåðåâîä ãëÿíóòü?) |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 12:15 |
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>À ó íèõ ñèëüíûå òåêñòû? Ìîæíî ïåðåâîä ãëÿíóòü?) èíòåðåñóþò ñèëüíûå òåêñòû èëè ñèëüíûå ïåðåâîäû?) |
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Äîáðî äîëæíî áûòü ñ êóëàêàìè
Äîáðî ñóðîâûì áûòü äîëæíî, ×òîáû ëåòåëà øåðñòü êëîêàìè Ñî âñåõ, êòî ëåçåò íà äîáðî… |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
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>>À ó íèõ ñèëüíûå òåêñòû? Ìîæíî ïåðåâîä ãëÿíóòü?) >èíòåðåñóþò ñèëüíûå òåêñòû èëè ñèëüíûå ïåðåâîäû?) ß íå íàñòîëüêî âëàäåþ àíãëèöêèì, ÷òî îöåíèòü êà÷åñòâî îðèãèíàëà. À ïî ïåðåâîäó, õîòÿ á òåìó ôêóðþ. Òîêà ñäà¸òñÿ ìíå è òàì òèïà êðîôüëþáîôü... |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 12:46 |
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Òðó ìåòàëüíûé òåêñò áàñèñòà: When I was small You took me by the hand Father you should know I finally understand You taught me wrong from right And how to live You gave the greatest gift That one could give You never let me down You made me strong When I made mistakes When I was wrong Some days we'd laugh And some days we'd fight Somehow you knew one day I'd say you were right You're with me In every word I say In every hour Of every single day In all I do I'm just a part of you You lived your life for us That was your plan Those hands that never take They worked the land Hands that never take Can only give And because of you I know how to live You're with me In every word I say In every hour Of every single day In all I do I'm just a part of you Father just one thing You always knew Every word you said to me was true |
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Äîáðî äîëæíî áûòü ñ êóëàêàìè
Äîáðî ñóðîâûì áûòü äîëæíî, ×òîáû ëåòåëà øåðñòü êëîêàìè Ñî âñåõ, êòî ëåçåò íà äîáðî… |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
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Ïîëîâèíó ïåðåâ¸ë - ïàòåòè÷åñêàÿ êóéíÿ. Î òîì êàêîé ó Ëà çäîðîâñêèé ïàïêà, êîòîðûé íàó÷èë åãî íå óíûâàòü è áûòü ñèëüíûì... | |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 13:29 |
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SPb programmin’, effectin’, beatmakin’, brainf#ckin’
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>À ó íèõ ñèëüíûå òåêñòû? Ñèëüíûå, íî ïåðåâîäîâ ÿ íå âèäåë. Ñàì íå ïåðåâîæó. |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 13:32 |
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SPb programmin’, effectin’, beatmakin’, brainf#ckin’
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We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 13:35 |
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>>À ó íèõ ñèëüíûå òåêñòû? > >Ñèëüíûå, íî ïåðåâîäîâ ÿ íå âèäåë. Ñàì íå ïåðåâîæó. À â ÷¸ì èõ ñèëà, áðàò?) (ñ) |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 13:55 |
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Ìîæåò ýòî èñêëþ÷åíèå? Âîïðîñ "ïî÷åìó âîêàëèñò äîëæåí"? Ó Áóëàòà Îêóäæàâû õîðîøèå ñòèõè, íî êàê Âîêàëèñò îí íå î÷åíü. Ó Ïàâàðîòòè îòëè÷íûé ãîëîñ, íî íå óâåðåí â õîðîøåñòè ñòèõîâ. Ïðîñòî ãîëîñ è óìåíèå ïèñàòü ñòèõè ýòî íó êàê òî õîòü âñå è â ãîëîâå ãäå-òî, íî âñå òàêè ðàçíûå âåùè. Ìåíÿ òîæå óïðåêàþò ÷òî ÿ íå ïèøó ñòèõè, íî ÿ íå ïîíèìàþ, ïî÷åìó æåëàíèå è óìåíèå ïåòü îáÿçûâàåò òåáÿ ïèñàòü ñòèõè. Ýòî æ ãëóïîñòü - ïðîñòî ãëóïîñòü. Âñå ðàâíî ÷òî åñëè òû áàáà - òî íàäî ðîæàòü, åñëè ìóæèê, òî çàáèâàòü ãâîçäè è ïèëèòü. ×òî çà íåâåñòü îòêóäà âçÿòûå øàáëîíû? |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:09 |
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Chernov , ÿ ñþäà ïðèøåë íå ñîôèñòèêîé çàíèìàòüñÿ, à òåêñòîâèêà èñêàòü.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:10 |
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>>Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ. >> > >Îñîáåííî Øèíåä Î'Êîííîð, Áåò Ãèááîíñ è Ïàòòè Ñìèò. Íó, åñòü åùå Øàèíñêèé. Îí êàê çàïîåò - äåòè ñåäåþò... |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:10 |
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À âîîáùå ñóòü â òîì, ÷òî ñîáñòâåííûå ñòèõè âîêàëèñò ëó÷øå ÷óâñòâóåò è ñîîòâåòñâåííî ëó÷øå ïîåò. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:17 |
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Ëåòíèé êàííèáàëèçì (ïåðåâîä Psychea) i I was down in Georgia Nothing was as real As the street beneath my feet Descending into air The cauldron was a-bubbling The flesh was lean And the women moved forward Like piranhas in a stream They spread themselves before me An offering so sweet And they beckoned and they beckoned Come on darling eat Eat the summer cannibals Eat eat eat You eat the summer cannibals Eat eat eat They circled around me Natives in a ring And I saw their souls a-withering Like snakes in chains And they wrapped themselves around me Ummm what a treat And they rattled their tales hissin' Come on let's eat Eat the summer cannibals Eat eat eat You eat the summer cannibals Eat eat eat I felt a rising in my throat The girls a-saying grace And the air the viscous air Pressed against my face And it all got too damn much for me Just got too damn rough And I pushed away my plate And said boys i've had enough And I laid upon the table Another piece of meat And I opened up my veins to them And said come on eat Eat the summer cannibals Eat eat eat You eat the summer cannibals Eat eat eat You eat the summer cannibals Eat eat eat You eat the summer cannibals Eat eat eat Cause I was down in Georgia Nothing was as real As the street beneath my feet Descending into hell So eat eat eat You eat eat eat You eat eat eat Eat eat eat ß áûëà â Äæîðäæèè... Íè÷òî íå áûëî ðåàëüíî, Íè÷òî íå áûëî òàê ðåàëüíî, êàê Ðàññòèëàâøàÿñÿ ïåðåäî ìíîé äîðîãà, ÷òî âåëà â ïóñòîòó... Âàðåâî â êîòëå ïóçûðèëîñü, Ïëîòü áûëà ñêóäíà. Æåíùèíû - Ïèðàíüè â ðåêå, - Ïîäîøëè, è ðàññûïàëèñü ïåðåäî ìíîé, è (Ñòîëü çàìàí÷èâîå ïðåäëîæåíèå!) ...È - çâàëè ìåíÿ, çâàëè ìåíÿ: - Ïîäîéäè, ìèëàÿ, ïîïðîáóé! - Åøü! - ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû, - Åøü, åøü, åøü, Åøü, - ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû! - Åøü, åøü, åøü... Äèêàðè ñòîëïèëèñü ïåðåäî ìíîé, Îêðóæèëè ìåíÿ, È ÿ âèäåëà èõ äóøè, Óâÿäàþùèå, ñëîâíî çìåè â öåïÿõ. È... - îíè îêðóæèëè ìåíÿ... - Ì-ì, ÷òî çà óäîâîëüñòâèå! - Øèïÿ, ïîâòîðÿëè îíè, - Äàâàé, ïîïðîáóé, âêóñè! - Åøü! - ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû, - Åøü, åøü, åøü, Åøü, - ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû! - Åøü, åøü, åøü...  ãîðëå ó ìåíÿ âñòàë êîì... Äåâóøêè ñ èõ ñëàäêèìè ðå÷àìè, Âîçäóõ, âÿçêèé âîçäóõ, ñãóñòèâøèéñÿ âîçäóõ, - Ïåðåä ìîèì ëèöîì... Ìíå ïîêàçàëîñü, ÷òî ýòî óæå ñëèøêîì, Ñëèøêîì ãðóáî äëÿ ìåíÿ. È ÿ âñòàëà, è îòîäâèíóëà òàðåëêó, È ïðîìîëâèëà: "Ðåáÿòà, ñ ìåíÿ äîñòàòî÷íî". È áðîñèëà íà ñòîë Åù¸ îäèí êóñîê ìÿñà, ß âñêðûëà âåíû äëÿ íèõ, È ïðèãëàñèëà: "Äàâàéòå, ïåéòå, åøüòå!" Åøüòå, ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû, Åøüòå, åøüòå, åøüòå, Åøüòå, âû, ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû, Åøüòå, åøüòå, åøüòå, Åøüòå, âû, ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû, Åøüòå, åøüòå, åøüòå, Åøüòå, âû, ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû, Åøüòå, åøüòå, åøüòå... ...Ïîòîìó ÷òî ÿ áûëà â Äæîðäæèè, È íè÷òî íå áûëî ðåàëüíî, Íè÷òî íå áûëî òàê ðåàëüíî, êàê Ðàññòèëàâøàÿñÿ ïåðåäî ìíîé äîðîãà, ÷òî âåëà ïðÿìèêîì â àä... - Òàê åøüòå! Åøüòå! Åøüòå! Âû, - åøüòå! Åøüòå! Åøüòå! Âû, - åøüòå! Åøüòå! Åøüòå! Åøüòå! Åøüòå! Åøüòå!  ñìûñëå, íàäî òàêóþ õðåíü? |
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Ïîñëå òîãî, êàê àìóð óøåë ïîïèñàòü çà óãîë, íåîáõîäèìîñòü â èãðå ó êëîóíà èñ÷åçëà..ñóõóì
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
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>À âîîáùå ñóòü â òîì, ÷òî ñîáñòâåííûå ñòèõè âîêàëèñò ëó÷øå ÷óâñòâóåò è ñîîòâåòñâåííî ëó÷øå ïîåò. Åññíî  È ïîýòîìó "ÊÑÏ" (íåâàæíî, êàê îáîçâàòü àâòîðñêóþ ïåñíþ) - ñîâñåì íå òàêîé îòñòîé, êàê ìíîãèå çäåñü ïî÷åìó-òî óï¸ðòî ñ÷èòàþò.  âîêàëüíîì ïëàíå òîæå, ìåæäó ïðî÷èì, à óæ ïî óðîâíþ òåêñòîâ è ïîäàâíî. Íå âñå, êîíå÷íî, íî ìíîãèå
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
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>À âîîáùå ñóòü â òîì, ÷òî ñîáñòâåííûå ñòèõè âîêàëèñò ëó÷øå ÷óâñòâóåò è ñîîòâåòñâåííî ëó÷øå ïîåò. Íåïðàâèëüíàÿ ñóòü. Ý.Õèëü íàïðèìåð ñïåë ïåñíþ: Ëà-ëà, ëà-ëà-ëà, ëà-ëà-ëà, ëà-ëà-ëà...Î-î, î-î-î,î-î-î, î-î-î.... èòàê âñÿ ïåñíÿ, íå ïèææó) ß òàê äóìàþ ñàì ñî÷èíèë, ñýêîíîìèë...À ÷¸? ïðåòåíçèé íåò, áåç êîñÿêîâ. Êîãäà îí ïåë, ìíå êàçàëîñü ÷òî ó íåãî íåïðåðûâíûé îðãàçì îò ñâîåãî âîêàëà. ßéöà â íåãî íå êèäàëè - çàñëóæåííûé àðòèñò âñ¸ òàêè. Íî âñ¸ æ îùóùåíèå ó ìåíÿ îñòàëîñü, ÷òî ìåíÿ êàê ñëóøàòåëÿ î÷åíü êðóïíî íàéýáàëè) |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
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ëåíèíãðàäñêàÿ ãèòàðà. 
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Ïðîñòî òàêàÿ âåùü,êîòîðóþ ñïåë Õèëü íàçûâàåòñÿ âîêàëèç...íîðìàëüíûé æàíð,áåç âñÿêèõ îáìàíîâ, à äæàçîâûå ïåâöû ðàçâå íå ïîþò òàêèå âåùè ? Äëÿ Õèëÿ ýòî êàæåòñÿ ñàì Òàðèâåðäèåâ íàïèñàë ?... | |
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Ìàôèÿ íå ðàáîòàåò çà ÷àåâûå !...
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 15:09 |
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>Â ñìûñëå, íàäî òàêóþ õðåíü? > Âïîëíå, òîëüêî âñå-òàêè ñ íîðìàëüíûì ðèòìîì è ðèôìîé, ïî-ðóññêè. |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
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 èòîãå äàíû ðóññêèé ÿçûê è íàïðàâëåíèå ìóçûêè. À åùå êîíêðåòíåé ìîæíî? + õîðîøî áû áûëî ñêèíóòü ïàðó ÷óæèõ òåêñòîâ äëÿ ïðèìåðà, âåäü ïèñàòü ìîæíî î ÷åì óãîäíî è êàê óãîäíî + íà ðûáó ïèñàòü èëè íå ñòîëü âàæíî? |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
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Äæåéðàí. (Âñå ïåñíè, êðîìå "Èìÿ òâîå"). È âîò òå àíãëîãîâîðÿùèå æåíùèíû, êîòîðûõ ÿ ïðèâîäèë â ïðèìåð (ïîíÿòíî, ÷òî ÿçûê äðóãîé, íî ìåññåäæ ïðàâèëüíûé). Ïîä ðûáîé ïîäðàçóìåâàåòñÿ ìèíóñîâêà? Òîãäà äà. Òî åñòü, âîêàëüíóþ ìåëîäèþ ïðèäóìûâàåò ñàìà âîêàëèñòêà, à ìåòð ñòèõîâ çàäàåò òåêñòîâèê, îðèåíòèðóÿñü íà ìóçûêàëüíóþ òåìó. 
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SPb programmin’, effectin’, beatmakin’, brainf#ckin’
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Èëè âîò åùå ïðèìåð: Âûïàë ñíåã ×òî-òî ìåíÿåòñÿ  âîçäóõå  íàøåé êðîâè Ëóíà Âåðìóò Äîðîãà ê ìåòðî È ÷üè-òî ñëîâà... ÷üè? Ñíåã âûáèâàåò Ðèòì ïî ñòåêëó Âåòåð èãðàåò Íà òðóáàõ Òû ñïèøü Ëåãêî, Òû ñïèøü äàëåêî Çà ñîòíþ êâàðòàëîâ ê þãó. Ïð: Ïðîñíèñü, íà÷èíàåòñÿ òàíåö òåíåé Íûðíè â ëàáèðèíòû òðåâîæíûõ îãíåé Çàáóäü âñå ñîìíåíèÿ è äàé ðóêó ìíå... Èäåì íà òàíåö òåíåé À åñëè òû Íå óñëûøèøü ìåíÿ ß ïîéìó, ß ëåãêî âñå ïðèìó Ïóñòü òâîé ñèëóýò Ðàñòâîðèòñÿ â íî÷è Ëóíà íå äàñò óéòè Íèêîìó Ðàñòàåò ñíåã ×òî-òî îñòàíåòñÿ  âîçäóõå  íàøåé êðîâè Âåøíèå Âîäû Çàìêíóòûé êðóã È ÷üè-òî ñëåçû... ìîè? Ïð. |
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We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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>Ïðîñòî òàêàÿ âåùü,êîòîðóþ ñïåë Õèëü íàçûâàåòñÿ âîêàëèç...íîðìàëüíûé æàíð,áåç âñÿêèõ îáìàíîâ, à äæàçîâûå ïåâöû ðàçâå íå ïîþò òàêèå âåùè ? Äëÿ Õèëÿ ýòî êàæåòñÿ ñàì Òàðèâåðäèåâ íàïèñàë ?... Âîêàëèç...òàêîå, èìõî, ïðèåìëåìî â îïåðàõ, â äæàçå. Êîãäà ãîëîñ âûïîëíÿåò òîëüêî ôóíêöèþ èíñòðóìåíòà. Âîêàëèñò ïî ìàêñèìóìó äåìîíñòðèðóåò îñîáåííîñòè è âîçìîæíîñòè ñâîåãî ãîëîñà. À Õèëü ýñòðàäíûé èñïîëíèòåëü ïîïóëÿðíîé ìóçûêè è ïðè òàêîì ''âîêàëèçå'' àáñîëþòíî íè÷åì íå áëåñíóë. |
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Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 16:45 |
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Ìîñêâà âîêàë
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Äà, ÷òî-òî òàêîå åñòü. À íå ïðîùå ëè ïîòðàòèòü âðåìÿ ñàìîìó - ïî÷èòàòü òóò êòî êàêèå ñòèõè ïèøåò è ñîòðóäíè÷àòü ñ êîíêðåòíûì ÷åëîâåêîì. À òî èäè òóäà, íå çíàþ êóäà... |
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Ñêàçàòü íå÷åãî, ÿ óìåþ òîëüêî ïåòü...
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Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 17:49 |
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SPb programmin’, effectin’, beatmakin’, brainf#ckin’
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>À íå ïðîùå ëè ïîòðàòèòü âðåìÿ ñàìîìó - ïî÷èòàòü òóò êòî êàêèå ñòèõè ïèøåò è ñîòðóäíè÷àòü ñ êîíêðåòíûì ÷åëîâåêîì. Íåà, íå ïðîùå. Èáî ìíå âàæåí èíòåðåñ ÷åëîâåêà ê ñîòðóäíè÷åñòâó èìåííî ñ íàìè, à íå òîëüêî åãî ôèíàíñîâûé èíòåðåñ. |
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We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 19:34 |
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> ñìûñëå, íàäî òàêóþ õðåíü? Íå, íó, òóò ïðîñòî íàëèöî òåïëîâîé óäàð. >Èëè âîò åùå ïðèìåð: > >Âûïàë ñíåã >×òî-òî ìåíÿåòñÿ > âîçäóõå > íàøåé êðîâè >Ëóíà >Âåðìóò >Äîðîãà ê ìåòðî >È ÷üè-òî ñëîâà... ÷üè? Îïÿòü âîïðîñ-íó, çà÷åì íîðìàëüíóþ ìóçûêó âóàëèðîâàòü íàáîðîì ñëîâ?Âû ñàìè ìîæåòå îáúÿñíèòü, î ÷¸ì ýòî?Âàì òåêñòû íå íóæíû, èìõî. |
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"È âîçäåíóò ëþäè ðóêè ê íåáó è âîçîïÿò: -«Ñïàñè íàñ!». À ÿ ïðîøåï÷ó â îòâåò:.-Íåò." |
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Ï-ñê
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Äóìàë, äóìàë, öåëàÿ ïîýìà ïîëó÷èëàñü. Ê Òàíöó òåíåé. 8-) ------------ [Ðÿäîì íåò òåáÿ] -> [â ôîíå ïåðåîäè÷åñêè ïðîïåâàòü]  îìóòå íÎ÷è Òåíè òàíöóþò Ïåðåïëåòàÿñü â òóìàíå îñåííåì Çîëîòîì ñåðûì Îêðàøåíû ñáðóè Öåïè èñêðÿòñÿ, áðÿêàþò çâåíüÿ Ãîëîñîì õðèïëûì Âîåò ðàçëóêà Çîâ îò Ëóíû îòðàæàåòñÿ ýõîì Òàíåö òåíåé Çàêîí÷èòñÿ óòðîì Ñòîíàìè ñíîâ, çàãàäî÷íûì ñìåõîì Òàíåö òåíåé Òàíåö òåíåé Ýõî äâèæåíèé Äðîæüþ ïûëàåò Çâóêè çàòèõëè Ñâåò íå ïðîáü¸òñÿ  õðàìå íî÷íîì Òåíè òàíöóþò Ãäå æå òû ãäå Òû íå ïðèõîäèøü Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå Òåíè òâîè Òîëüêî ëèøü áðîäÿò Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå Ãäå æå òû, ãäå Íî÷üþ òóìàííîé Óâèæó â îêíå Òàíåö òåíåé  îáëàêå ðâàíîì Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå Òåíè òàíöóþò Âîññòàëè èç ïðàõà Õðàì ïîëóíî÷íûé òåíßì íå ïîìåõà Ïåðåïëåòåíüå Ðàçëóêè è ñòðàõà Ñíîâà çàäàñò âîïðîñ áåç îòâåòà Òåíè óøåäøèõ Íàâåêè çàáûòû  õîëîäå íÎ÷è íàïîìíÿò î ïðîøëîì  òàíöå ñïëåëèñü Íàì¸êè è ñóäüáû Íî âîïëîòèòü ìå÷òó íåâîçìîæíî Ïëàâíîñòü äâèæåíèé Ñîí íàâåâàåò Òàíåö òåíåé Çàâëåêàåò â îáúÿòüÿ Íåêîãäà äóìàòü Êðîòêîñòü çàáûòà Ñêðîìíîñòü óáèòà  òàíöå ïîëíî÷íîì Ãäå æå òû ãäå Òû íå ïðèõîäèøü Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå Òåíè òâîè Òîëüêî ëèøü áðîäÿò Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå Ãäå æå òû, ãäå Íî÷üþ òóìàííîé Óâèæó â îêíå Òàíåö òåíåé  îáëàêå ðâàíîì Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå (ñ) 11.11.2010 bav9 |
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http://home.onego.ru/~bav9/index-mus.html http://www.musicforums.ru/lirics/userpost.php?bn=mfor_lirics&userid=lehavika&forum=mfor_lirics&dt=365&type=1 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãèòàðà, êëàâèøè
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Jack K. , äëÿ íåêîòîðûõ ýòî áóäåò ïîëíîé íåîæèäàííîñòüþ, îòáèâàþùåé îõîòó çàíèìàòüñÿ ìóçûêîé, íî ÿ âñ¸-òàêè ðèñêíó - ñêàæó òåáå âñþ ïðàâäó, êàê îíà åñòü. Ìåëîäèþ ïðèäóìûâàåò êîìïîçèòîð. À âîêàëèñòêà äîëæíà ýòó ìåëîäèþ ñïåòü ñî ñëîâàìè, êîòîðûå ïðèäóìûâàåò ïîýò-ïåñåííèê, êîòîðîãî çäåñü áóäåì íàçûâàòü òåêñòîâèêîì. Ïîñëå ýòîãî äåëàåòñÿ àêêîìïàíåìåíò. Òû âûëîæèë àêêîìïàíåìåíò è õî÷åøü ïîä íåãî ñíà÷àëà ñòèõè, à ïîòîì îò âîêàëèñòêè (?!?) åù¸ è ìåëîäèþ. Ýòî òîæå ñàìîå, ÷òî ñíà÷àëà çàêóïèòü óãîùåíèå äëÿ ñâàäüáû, â ñîîòâåòñòâèè ñ íèì ñøèòü ñâàäåáíîå ïëàòüå, à ê íåìó ïîäáèðàòü íåâåñòó… À ñòèëü àêêîìïàíåìåíòà ìíå íðàâèòñÿ. |
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âàëèäàòîð òðåçâîñòè
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Áàâ, ïîíðàâèëñÿ òåêñò! Ïî÷åìó íå âûëîæèë îòäåëüíî? È âîîáùå... òû ïî õîäó-òî... íó, â ìèðó, äóðàêà âàëÿåøü, ÷òî ëè? 
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âñ¸ ãàâíî áåñïëàòíî
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
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>Áàâ, ïîíðàâèëñÿ òåêñò! >Ïî÷åìó íå âûëîæèë îòäåëüíî? >È âîîáùå... òû ïî õîäó-òî... íó, â ìèðó, äóðàêà âàëÿåøü, ÷òî ëè? Ñïàñèáî. Ñåé÷àñ âûëîæó, äóìàä, Jack K. ïîñìîòðèò, à îí, ïîõîæå, ïðîïàë êóäà-òî 8-( Äóðàêà ÿ íå âàëàþ. Ïðîñòî íàñòðîé ðàçíûé áûâàåò è ñîîòâåòñòâåííî è òåêñòû ðàçíÿòñÿ, ÷àñòî ñèëüíî. 8-) |
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>Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ. *ãðÿçíî âûðóãàëàñü* ïðîñòèòå, íå ñäåðæàëàñü íå... íó îò êàê âñåãäà, óìíûõ ìíîãî, òåêñòîâ íåò |
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ÊÄÌ , êòî êàê õî÷åò, òàê è äðî-÷èò.
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We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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bav9 , õîðîøèé òåêñò. Ïðàâäà, "Òàíåö òåíåé" ó íàñ óæå óêîìïëåêòîâàí ñëîâàìè. ß òðýêè âûëîæèë ÷èñòî äëÿ îçíàêîìëåíèÿ. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåð
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>Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ âàùå òî ïåñíè â îñíîâíîì áîëüøèíñòâå (åñëè áðàòü íå ïîïñó çàêóïî÷íóþ) è ïèøóò âîêàëèñòû (íó èëè ëèäåðû ãðóïï). ó ìíîãèõ íåò æåëàíèÿ è èíîãäà âîçìîæíîñòè äåðæàòü ïðè ãðóïïå ñåáåíàóìåòåêñòîâèêàîòäåëüíîãî |
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http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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>bav9 , õîðîøèé òåêñò. Ïðàâäà, "Òàíåö òåíåé" ó íàñ óæå óêîìïëåêòîâàí ñëîâàìè. ß òðýêè âûëîæèë ÷èñòî äëÿ îçíàêîìëåíèÿ. 8-( À ÿ òàê ñòàðàëñÿ.. òàê ñòàðàëñÿ... 8-( *õíûê,íîñîì øìûðã Äóìàë, ñïîþò ìåíÿ.. â òåëåâèçîðå.. 8-( 8-) |
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Äà, åùå ðàç ïîä÷åðêèâàþ: ìóçûêó âûëîæèë ÷èñòî äëÿ îçíàêîìëåíèÿ ñ íàøèì ñòèëåì , ðàáîòà áóäåò âåñòèñü ïî íîâîìó ìàòåðèàëó. | |
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Åæåëü ïîíðàâèëîñü è èíòåðåñíî, ìîæåøü íà ìûëî íàïèñàòü, â ïðîôèëå åñòü. 8-) | |
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bav9 , ÎÊ. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
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Âîò ìóçûêà, äëÿ êîòîðîé íåò òåêñòà. Ìî÷èòå â ñòèëå Ïàòòè Ñìèò.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2010 12:42 |
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Ññûëêà ãîíèò òîëüêî ðåêëàìó. Ìóçûêà íå ðàáîòàåò. 8-( |
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Êñòàòè, ìóçûêà ïî ññûëêå íà ðóòþá èãðàåò, íî ïîñëå ðåêëàìû. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2010 14:08 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãèòàðà, êëàâèøè
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>ÊÄÌ , êòî êàê õî÷åò, òàê è äðî-÷èò. Ýòî òàê, íî íå âñå äåâ÷îíêè ýòî îäîáðÿþò ß èõ ïîíèìàþ. À òåáÿ - ñ òðóäîì. Jack K. , à òû âûëîæèë áû ÷òî-íèáóäü, ãäå âîêàëèñòêà ñâîè òàëàíòû óæå ïðèëîæåëà, áûëî áû ïîíÿòíåé, ÷òî òåáå íàäî, è íàäî ëè ýòî êîìó-íèáóäü èç ïèøóùåé áðàòâû. |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2010 15:31 |
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SPb programmin’, effectin’, beatmakin’, brainf#ckin’
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>À òåáÿ - ñ òðóäîì. ×óâàê, ÿ ñþäà êàêáý íå çà "ïîíèìàíèåì" ïðèøåë, à ïî äåëó. ß çíàþ ìíîãèõ ëþäåé, êòîðûå ïèøóò ãîòîâóþ ìóçûêó, à ïîòîì íà íåå óæå êëàäåòñÿ òåêñò. È êàêáý ìåíÿòü ñâîþ ìåòîäèêó ðàáîòû ïðîñòî ïîòîìó ÷òî îíà ÒÅÁÅ íå íðàâèòñÿ, íå íàìåðåí. Íà ýòîì ïðåäëàãàþ çàêîí÷èòü ñåé áåññìûñëåííûé ðàçãîâîð. ×òî êàñàåòñÿ çàïèñåé ñ âîêàëîì - ñâåäåíííûõ âåùåé íåò ïîêà. Èíà÷å áû, åñ-ñíî, âûëîæèë. |
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We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2010 17:14 |
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Ï-ñê
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Ãîòîâî. Ñåé÷àñ âûëîæó. 8-) |
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bav9
http://home.onego.ru/~bav9/index-mus.html http://www.musicforums.ru/lirics/userpost.php?bn=mfor_lirics&userid=lehavika&forum=mfor_lirics&dt=365&type=1 |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2010 17:30 |
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ëåíèíãðàäñêàÿ ãèòàðà.
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Åñëè áåññìûñëåííûé íàáîð ñëîâ íàçûâàåòñÿ -"õîðîøèé òåêñò íà ãîòîâóþ ìåëîäèþ", òî òîãäà Áàâ ïðåóñïåë â ýòîì ! (Èëè ýòî êîìï êîìïèëèðîâàë, ïðèçíàéñÿ ?) Îáúÿñíè íåðàçóìíîìó, ÷òî ýòî :"ñòîíàìè ñíîâ", "Ýõî äâèæåíèé Äðîæüþ ïûëàåò" ?... 
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Ìàôèÿ íå ðàáîòàåò çà ÷àåâûå !...
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2010 17:37 |
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Ï-ñê
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>êðèòèê Áåëèíñêè Ñòîíàìè ñíîâ - ýòî êîãäà ñíû ñòîíóò, êîãäà ñíÿòñÿ. Êîãäà òÿæåëî èì ñíèòüñÿ, òðóäíî, âîò è ñòîíóò. Ýõî äâèæåíèé äðîæüþ ïûëàåò - ýòî âîîáùå èç îáëàñòè ôàíòàñòèêè. Ïîñòè÷ü òàêîå - íåâîçìîæíî ! 8-0 8-) Äà ñàì ïðèäóìàë, ñàì. |
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http://home.onego.ru/~bav9/index-mus.html http://www.musicforums.ru/lirics/userpost.php?bn=mfor_lirics&userid=lehavika&forum=mfor_lirics&dt=365&type=1 |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2010 17:39 |
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SPb programmin’, effectin’, beatmakin’, brainf#ckin’
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êðèòèê Áåëèíñêè , ïî÷èòàé Ïàòòè Ñìèò (ññûëêà áûëà âûøå), òàì âñå åùå áîëåå òóìàííî.
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We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2010 17:46 |
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ëåíèíãðàäñêàÿ ãèòàðà.
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Íî ÿ òàê è ïîíÿë, Áàâ,÷òî ïîñòè÷ü ýòî íåâîçìîæíî...Äæåê, ïåðåâîäíûå ñòèõè,ýòî ïåðåâîäíûå ñòèõè...À Áàâ ,âèäèìî, ñ Ìóÿêàíñêîãî ïåðåâîäèë !(åñòü ó íåãî òàêàÿ çåìëÿ)... 
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Ìàôèÿ íå ðàáîòàåò çà ÷àåâûå !...
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2010 17:50 |
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Ï-ñê
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>À Áàâ ,âèäèìî, ñ Ìóÿêàíñêîãî ïåðåâîäèë ! 8-) |
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bav9
http://home.onego.ru/~bav9/index-mus.html http://www.musicforums.ru/lirics/userpost.php?bn=mfor_lirics&userid=lehavika&forum=mfor_lirics&dt=365&type=1 |
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2010 20:01 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãèòàðà, êëàâèøè
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Jack K. , ÷óâàê, ÿ, êàêáý, äàâíî èç ïèîíåðñêîãî âîçðàñòà âûøåë, è, êàêáý, äîãàäûâàþñü, ÷òî ïðèø¸ë òû íå çà "ïîíèìàíèåì", à çà òåêñòîì. È, êàêáý, íå òîëüêî çíàþ ìíîãèõ òàêèõ ëþäåé, íî è ñàì ñïîñîáåí ìóçûêó "ãîòîâóþ" íàïèñàòü, òåêñò íà ìóçûêó ïîëîæèòü è íà ãîòîâóþ ìåëîäèþ òåêñò íàïèñàòü. Íî ÍÀ ÌÅËÎÄÈÞ, à íå íà àêêîìïàíåìåíò. È ÿ äàæå íå ìîãó ïðåäïîëîæèòü, ÷òî õîòü ïðèìåðíî ñïîñîáíà èçîáðåñòè âàøà âîêàëèñòêà. Íèêîãî íå èíòåðåñóåò êà÷åñòâî ñâåäåíèÿ, îòëè÷íî ïîäõîäèò çàïèñü ñ ðåïû íà ìîáèëüíèê. Íî áåç ìåëîäèé ïîíÿòü, ÷òî òåáå íàäî, òðóäíî. Åñëè òû ýòîãî ïîíÿòü íå õî÷åøü, òî ìû áåñåäó ïðåêðàòèëè, åñëè ìíå óäàëîñü ñâîè ìûñëè âûðàçèòü òàê äîõîä÷èâî, ÷òî òû ìåíÿ ïîíÿë ïðàâèëüíî, òî òåáå ðåøàòü, ñòîèò ïðîäîëæàòü èëè íåò. | |
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