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Òåìà: ïîñëóøàé áðàò òóò íå æäóò ÷óäåñ
Âðåìÿ: 05.11.2025 20:05 
Âàëüïàðàèñî, ×èëè
óäàðíûå, êëàâèøíûå, áàíñóðè

Ïîïðîáîâàë SUNO. Íó, ïî¸ò... è êîñÿ÷èò ðåæå ÷åì UDIO. Ýòîò ðåìèêñ - ñàìûé ïðîñòåöêèé, êëàññè÷åñêèé "classic heavy metal", áåç ïðèêðàñ, íèêàêîé åçîòåðèêè.



õîëîäíàÿ íî÷ü è îïÿòü áåç ñíà
êîëþ÷èì ñíåãîì áðîñàåò âîéíà
è âåòåð ðåâ¸ò ïðèãëàøàÿ â àä
âïåð¸ä, íàì íåëüçÿ íàçàä

çà äàëüíèì õîëìîì íîâûé ðàññâåò
ìû âñòðåòèì ñ òîáîþ à ìîæåò íåò
âïåð¸ä, è êàæäûé øàã çâó÷èò
ãëóõèì óäàðîì â íî÷è́

ïîñëóøàé áðàò òóò íå æäóò ÷óäåñ
òóò òîëüêî ñìåðòü ïîñûëàþò ñ íåáåñ
çåìëÿ ãîðèò ó íàñ íà ïóòè
âïåð¸ä, íàì íàäî ïðîéòè

äåðæàòüñÿ íå ïàäàòü è íå óíûâàòü
ìû áóäåì æèòü ìû áóäåì ñòîÿòü
íàïåðåêîð âñåì àäñêèì âåòðàì
ñóäüáå ÷åðòÿì è áîãàì

èç ïðåèñïîäíåé âåòðà ïîðûâ
íî òû è䏸ü à çíà÷èò òû æèâ
ïóëüñèðóåò íî÷ü ñòóêîì íàøèõ ñåðäåö
íàì òîëüêî âïåð¸ä áîåö

åù¸ ëèøü ìèã åù¸ ëèøü øàã
è ïóñòü âïåðåäè îãîíü è ìðàê
ñêâîçü ïëàìÿ è äûì ñêâîçü ãîðå÷ü óòðàò
âïåð¸ä, íàì íåëüçÿ íàçàä
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Òåìà: Re: ïîñëóøàé áðàò òóò íå æäóò ÷óäåñ
Âðåìÿ: 05.11.2025 23:18 



Êîðî÷å, òóò òåìà òàêàÿ. Suno - îõðåíåííî êëàññíàÿ âåñ÷ü, áàçàðà íîëü. Íî... Áåäà â òîì, ÷òî ëþäè âîñïðèíèìàþò òâîð÷åñòâî íå êàê ñïîñîá ñàìîðåàëèçàöèè, âíóòðåííåãî ñàìîâûðàæåíèÿ, à â ïåðâóþ î÷åðåäü êàê ñïîñîá ïîëó÷èòü ïðèçíàíèå îêðóæàþùèõ. È ñ ýòîé òî÷êè çðåíèÿ ñóíî - îáåññìûñëèâàåò äëÿ òàêèõ ëþäåé ñàìóþ ñóòü òâîð÷åñòâà. Ó íèõ ïðîïàäàåò ìîòèâàöèÿ òâîðèòü, çíàÿ ÷òî ýòî íå âûäåëÿåò èõ èõ ÷èñëà îñòàëüíûõ. Ïîýòîìó... suno - ýòî äëÿ òåõ íåìíîãèõ, êîìó íðàâèòñÿ ñàì ïðîöåññ òâîð÷åñòâà, à íå åãî ðåçóëüòàò.
Óëüòðàëåâûé îðòîäîêñàëüíûé ïðàâîñëàâíûé äîìèíàíòíûé âàõòîâèê-äîìîõîçÿéêà
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Òåìà: Re: ïîñëóøàé áðàò òóò íå æäóò ÷óäåñ
Âðåìÿ: 05.11.2025 23:30 



êàê ñëåäñòâèå, ðàçóìååòñÿ, ýòî ïðèâîäèò ê òîìó, ÷òî ÷óæîå òâîð÷åñòâî - ñòàíîâèòñÿ íåèíòåðåñíûì ïî óìîë÷àíèþ (
Óëüòðàëåâûé îðòîäîêñàëüíûé ïðàâîñëàâíûé äîìèíàíòíûé âàõòîâèê-äîìîõîçÿéêà
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Òåìà: Re: ïîñëóøàé áðàò òóò íå æäóò ÷óäåñ
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2025 11:54 
Ìàëàõîâêà
ìîçã

Äà íå,.. ìû ïðîñòî ïèøåì íå òî è íå òàê...Òî, ÷òî íå îòçûâàåòñÿ âíóòðåííèì íàñòðîåì îêðóæàþùèõ )
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Òåìà: Re: ïîñëóøàé áðàò òóò íå æäóò ÷óäåñ
Âðåìÿ: 11.11.2025 20:16 
Âàëüïàðàèñî, ×èëè
óäàðíûå, êëàâèøíûå, áàíñóðè

Íó, ðåøèë ÿ ïîáàëîâàòüñÿ ñ TUNEE, è âîò ñêàçàë: ìîë äàâàé, ÷òî íèáóäü ñ ýòèì âîò ñäåëàé.

Íî ñäóðó ñêàçàë-òî ÿ ïî àíãëèéñêè. À îíà, òèïà, äóìàåò ÷òî ìíå íàäî è òåêñò (ïî àíãëèéñêè, òî åñòü).

È âîò îíà âûäàåò (óæ íå çíàþ êòî åé ïîìîãàåò, ÿ ÷èòàë åå FAQ) âîò òàêîå âîò ïðîèçâåäåíüèöå, ïî-ìîåìó â äóõå ñàáàòîíà.

Ïî êðàéíåé ìåðå â ÿçûêå ÿ ÿâíûõ êîñÿêîâ íå âèæó. Íî àíãëîÿçû÷íûå òîâàðèùè íàâåðíî åùå êàê âèäÿò... Âîò òàêîå âîò ÷óäî ïðèðîäû:



[Verse 1]
Frost bites the skin, eyes wide with no sleep
War hurls its shards while the world runs deep
The gale howls low, dragging souls to the pit
But we march! There’s no turning from it!

[Chorus]
Beyond the ridge, light cracks the black!
We’ll greet that dawn—or never come back!
Every footfall booms like war-drum sound
In this hollow night, no saints are found!

[Verse 2]
No miracles wait in this scorched terrain
Only ash and thunder, only blood and pain
The ground still burns where our path must go
We press ahead—there’s nowhere to slow!

[Chorus]
Beyond the ridge, light cracks the black!
We’ll greet that dawn—or never come back!
Every footfall booms like war-drum sound
In this hollow night, no saints are found!

[Guitar Solo: Soaring melodic leads over driving rhythm section]

[Bridge]
Hold your breath, don’t let it break
Hearts still pound for courage’s sake
Through hell’s own wind, you walk alone—
But walking means you’re not yet gone!

[Chorus]
Beyond the ridge, light cracks the black!
We’ll greet that dawn—or never come back!
Every footfall booms like war-drum sound
In this hollow night, no saints are found!

[Outro: Full band with layered harmonies fading into distant guitar echo]
One more step… one final spark…
Through smoke and loss, into the dark…
FORWARD! WE WON’T TURN BACK!
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!